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A fact from Thomas Peel Dunhill appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 4 August 2022 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Sir Thomas Peel Dunhill used to milk the goats at St Vincent's Hospital?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2022/August. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Thomas Peel Dunhill.

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The result was: promoted by Evrik (talk) 18:50, 30 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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... that Sir Thomas Peel Dunhill used to milk the goats at St Vincent's Hospital? Source: https://trove.nla.gov.au/newspaper/article/205544798
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Royce Williams

5x expanded by Hawkeye7 (talk). Self-nominated at 08:46, 21 July 2022 (UTC).[reply]

Hi Hawkeye7, review follows: article more than 5x expanded from 18 to 21 July; article is well written and cited inline to reliable sources throughout; I didn't pick up any overly close paraphrasing from the sources; hook fact is interesting, mentioned in the article and checks out to the source cited; a QPQ has been carried out. I just had a couple of very minor queries that I wonder if you could look at - Dumelow (talk) 10:24, 21 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox states he commanded the 1st General Hospital but this isn't explicitly mentioned in the main text, was it when he was appointed lieutenant-colonel?
An error. Removed. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 11:23, 21 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Service in Egypt is stated in the lead and infobox but I couldn't see this in the main text? Presumably this was where he was first sent on the Kyarra before he was hospitalised and evacuated?
It was there at one point. Restored. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 11:23, 21 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Hawkeye7, looks good - Dumelow (talk) 11:33, 21 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]