Talk:Three Californias Trilogy

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Can't parse (and can't fix) sentence[edit]

The sentence:

"Jim McPherson, who finds himself in the middle between terrorism against the weapons industry; drugs, parties and casual sex; as well as literary and academic interests."

doesn't parse very clearly. "in the middle between terrorism against" really doesn't make sense. -- Finlay McWalter | Talk 18:58, 25 October 2005 (UTC)[reply]

I think (I hope) it's fixed now. — Athaenara ✉ 07:40, 6 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

 Still needs work I was going to attempt a re-write of it, but I'm not sure how to group the items in the list. Someone with knowledge of the story is needed. Senator2029 leave me a message 00:39, 17 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I just re-read this a year ago, so I went ahead and changed it up slightly; in the novel, Jim is just being pulled in a lot of different directions as he struggles with adulthood, I don't think the "in the middle" was really necessary. AlbinoFlea (talk) 04:31, 31 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Several minor spelling/grammar mistakes. Some major.[edit]

This article needs a major cleanup and some areas need a rewrite (as the sentence structure is broken to the extent that the content is unparseable). I'll submit what corrections I can. 174.78.9.244 (talk) 20:09, 18 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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