Talk:Wei-Ling Gallery

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This article contains content that is written like an advertisement. (September 2023)
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Alice2901 (talk) 04:45, 19 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  • weiling-gallery.com is a wp:Primary source and is not considered a wp:reliable source. e.g. ...is a prominent art gallery in Malaysia is sourced by weiling-gallery.com They call themselves "prominent"? Rather self-serving?
  • Does the article meet wp:GNG? Much content is sourced by weiling-gallery.com
  • wp:puffery including
    • Located in a pre-war building in the distinctive suburb of Brickfields
    • ...is a prominent art gallery in Malaysia again "Prominent"
    • The Malaysian maestros of the arts scene that are represented by the gallery are... not encyclopedic, unsourced "maestros"
  • Adakiko (talk) 11:24, 19 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    Adakiko! Thanks for your feedback. Will look into the rewriting. Appreciate that! Alice2901 (talk) 12:17, 19 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
You might peruse some of the art gallery articles in the USA for some examples. Not all are guaranteed to be written according to policy. The way the article is written at the moment archive link is closer to how it should read than before.. (Encyclopedic, dry, boring...) Needs many primary / weiling-gallery.com links replaced with secondary links. Primary/self-serving citations are higher priority than something like the Philanthropy and corporate collaboration section.
Section headers should use sentence case: MOS:HEADINGS.
The citation for the CORUM bowls does not indicate where they came from nor that the gallery worked with CORUM. Example: The source could written the same if the bowls were found in a trash dump. It would be better if there was a link to a news site about this and the other collaborations.
I would recommend asking at the wp:Teahouse. You should get more accurate answers than my babblings here! Cheers Adakiko (talk) 17:44, 19 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]