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Matthew Charles Johnson
- ... that Matthew Charles Johnson killed Victoria's most high-profile prisoner, Carl Williams, while in the state's highest security prison unit? Source: paras 3, 249 - [1] and para 1 - [2]
- ALT1: ... that during the "trial from hell" Matthew Charles Johnson and his co-accused hurled abuse at the judge and even threw human excrement at a member of the jury? Source: https://www.theage.com.au/national/inside-the-trial-from-hell-20021214-gduxig.html
- Reviewed:
Moved to mainspace by GMH Melbourne (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.GMH Melbourne (talk) 05:04, 18 April 2024 (UTC).
- You need to remedy that {{no lead}} tag before this can go anywhere.--Launchballer 05:12, 18 April 2024 (UTC)
- Launchballer: I completely forgot about that, I'll get on to it now. GMH Melbourne (talk) 05:19, 18 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer:
Done GMH Melbourne (talk) 06:41, 18 April 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: Matthew Charles Johnson's middle name can be removed from the hooks if need be. GMH Melbourne (talk) 05:19, 18 April 2024 (UTC)
Article is new and long enough. Sourcing looks good though Earwig found a handful of word-for-word similarities with "theage.com.au" source. A minor issue with each of the proposed hooks: ALT0 says that Williams was Victoria's most high-profile prisoner - the body of the article supports that but the sources seem to claim he was just a high-profile prisoner. ALT1 says they threw feces at a member of the jury but the article and sources only say "excrement". Both hooks are interesting however. QPQ is not required so just need hooks fixed and that should be all. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 15:31, 20 April 2024 (UTC)
- @PCN02WPS: Thank you for taking the time to review! I have reworded the article in most cases where Earwig's Copyvio Detector identified an issue but I think a lot of it falls under WP:LIMITED, or are quotes. Let me know if this needs to be addressed further. In paragraph 249 of that source, it mentions Williams as the "highest profile prisoner in Victoria". I have changed the wording of ALT1 from 'feces' to 'excrement' — GMH Melbourne (talk) 03:12, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
