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Older nominations[edit]

Articles created/expanded on January 7[edit]

Cirrus (song)

  • ... that "Cirrus" by Bonobo was recently featured in a mobile phone advert?

Created by Launchballer (talk). Self nominated at 13:24, 7 January 2014 (UTC).

  • I'm starting to see some problems. Is there any other info than a critical reception of this song, anything about the song's composition, background? I'm not sure if that is a DYK requirement, though. Also the citation positioning is a little funky, and there are unneccesary ".[citation],"s going on in this article. I'd suggest copyediting if you can. 和DITOREtails 18:17, 7 January 2014 (UTC)
I've fixed the citation positioning and I will fix the content issue when it is shown to be a DYK requirement. The rules are, to my knowledge, that it needs to be 1,500 characters of new words, for DYK purposes they don't need to be your own but of course they have to be in quotes if they're not and quotes of more than 40 words need to be in blockquotes per WP:MOS. Feel free to correct me, though.--Launchballer 20:06, 7 January 2014 (UTC)

Symbol delete vote.svg Excluding the quotations, the article looks like this, and since we don't count quotations as article length this is ineligible for DYK. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 22:07, 7 January 2014 (UTC)

Whoops, I'd always assumed that the quotations did count so long as they weren't above 40 words... I'm going to need a bit to expand it.--Launchballer 23:21, 7 January 2014 (UTC)
Whew! Done. How's it looking now?--Launchballer 00:35, 8 January 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg The sourcing isn't always the best: House of Balloons (the quote from which has just been blockquoted) appears to be a personal music blog and thus not a WP:RS (it should probably be removed entirely, unless there's something about the site that makes it reliable sourcing); the Critical reception section remains almost entirely quoted material, and the new Music video section's second half, another critical reception section, is much the same style. There needs to be far more in your own words summarizing the reviews, and far less directly quoted material from them. BlueMoonset (talk) 06:42, 26 January 2014 (UTC)
Whoops, I had made adjustments, I just hadn't posted here. How is it now?--Launchballer 19:36, 2 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Launchballer, I'll be honest: when I saw you had taken the quote from the dropout site, split it in two, reversed the segments, and retained "the video" but moved it out of the quote, I stopped dead, and I haven't been able to get back to it. What you did is just not okay. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:32, 8 February 2014 (UTC)
It took me a whole ten minutes to see anything wrong with what I had done, I kept rearranging the whole article and must've got lost. Better?--Launchballer 21:50, 8 February 2014 (UTC)
It wasn't the exact original quote, so I've just restored it. There's also this bit about smoking LSD with the Beav—since LSD isn't smoked, there's something wrong. Once you've fixed that, I'm going to call for a new reviewer, as I want another view on the quotes vs. summarizing issue. BlueMoonset (talk) 14:52, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
The source says 'doing acid', I've just reinstated that sentence.--Launchballer 16:25, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
QPQ done, by the way.--Launchballer 17:09, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
Thanks for the QPQ. Although I was going to call for another reviewer at this stage, I really have to point out that two of the reviews you summarized are now back at full-length quotes because your paraphrases either weren't accurate (i.e., smoking LSD) or just split the quote without any summarizing. The same issues affect other summaries, and it's a fundamental flaw here: "aestivate" has the exact opposite meaning of what the quote is trying to convey, the "bodily function" isn't a literal comparison and shouldn't be made to sound so, and Grishkof didn't say it was "best suited" for the rain (which means it would be less so for other things) just that it was (on a day that it was raining) "perfect for the rain". You need to retain the meaning of the text you're paraphrasing, which has not been achieved in this article. Until you can succeed in this, and also reduce your dependence on quotes, I don't see how this nomination can be approved for DYK. BlueMoonset (talk) 18:42, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
The article now has less than 40 words of quotes in the entire article (40 if you count [and]). Having had another look at the sources, I think that's better.--Launchballer 19:05, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg New reviewer needed for full regular DYK review, which should also address the issues noted above. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:07, 11 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg What makes Jack Flynn on Vimeo a reliable source for something we are going to place on the main page? Stonerdays, which proclaims itself as a blog, does not appear to be a reliable source by Wikipedia standards either, and while probably acceptable for providing critical reception on the song, it shouldn't be used to source factual information about the song unless it can be shown to meet WP:RS. Earmilk.com similarly describes itself as a blog, so needs to be shown to meet WP:RS. "Supermanipulated" simply isn't a word, and is thus clearly not encyclopaedic language. In the "Music video" section, the article states "Critical reception for the video has been positive as well.." which appears to follow on from the "Critical reception" section, despite actually appearing earlier in the article. Harrias talk 08:44, 26 March 2014 (UTC)
Leaving a notice half way up my talk page is hardly going to grab my attention. I have attended to all issues.--Launchballer 11:00, 27 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg New reviewer needed to check on issues raised by Harrias above, and to complete the full regular DYK review. BlueMoonset (talk) 20:03, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg The article has been well-formatted and has good citations. My concern would be that I don't really understand some of the text, such as "The results are complicated machines and gigantic robots" in reference to the video, and the two quotes from critics regarding the video. I'm also curious if all the reviews for the song were overwhelmingly positive or if there were actually some critical reviews, as I might expect from any musician. Mvblair (talk) 17:23, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
If you check you will find that all the reviews were positive. I have simply taken out that one offending phrase The other two are simply metaphors, and really I'm not entirely sure what was intended by them either.--Launchballer 17:41, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
I'm not sure this is the most interesting of DYKs, but it would seem to be correctly formatted and meets all other requirements for DYK.Mvblair (talk) 18:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
ALT1: ... that some of the music video for Cirrus is over fifty years old?--Launchballer 20:09, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on February 1[edit]

Amash-Conyers Amendment

  • ... that the Amash-Conyers Amendment, which sought to end bulk data collection, was defeated by a vote of 217 to 205?
  • ALT1: ... that the Amash-Conyers Amendment, opposing NSA data collection, was narrowly defeated in a vote that crossed party lines?

Created by HectorMoffet (talk). Self nominated at 08:51, 1 February 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol delete vote.svg The article is new enough, having been moved into mainspace on the day of DYK nomination. Per rule A2:"The prose portion of the article, which must be 1500 characters, excludes (in addition to categories listed in the rules) block quotes…" Due to the block quote taking up around half the article, I make the prose count just 953. This does not meet the criteria. Otherwise it is neutral and free from copyright concerns. The hook is not especially "hooky" and isn't a clear reflection of the article, lacking context. QPQ is not done, there is a comment asking for more of a review at the associated page. C679 13:31, 7 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Yes, I also had concerns about notability. Most of the content was sourced to a WP:SPS, or otherwise trivial mentions. Added to the fact that the amendment failed. I think the place for this is as a merged article about the legislative efforts to reign in the NSA – perhaps merged to USA Freedom Act or to Global surveillance disclosures (2013–present) or as a spinoff of thereto. -- Ohc ¡digame! 17:56, 7 February 2014 (UTC)
@Cloudz679, article has been expanded to readable prose. Alternate hook text most welcome. Since I have never had an article at DYK, I was told there was no QPQ requirement, although I did my best to attempt a QPQ anyway. --HectorMoffet (talk) 13:40, 8 February 2014 (UTC)
Symbol delete vote.svg You're right, QPQ is not required in this case. I agree with Ohconfucius though, that the topic doesn't seem to be sufficiently notable for a stand-alone article. One of thousands of failed bills. C679 17:16, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
The sources in the article (e.g. [1]) support notability. Of all the bills before U.S. Congress, how many are major news in the UK? For "enduring" news coverage see [2]. For discussion of its overall historical role see [3]. But above all, note that the DYK criteria above say nothing at all about evaluating notability. Wnt (talk) 19:20, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Just the hook then. C679 19:45, 9 February 2014 (UTC)
Perhaps ALT1 ... that the Amash-Conyers Amendment, opposing NSA data collection, was narrowly defeated in a vote that crossed party lines? [I posted this much earlier but forgot to sign -- Wnt (talk) 14:08, 1 March 2014 (UTC)]
The nominator is currently blocked indefinitely, so any rewrite will have to be by someone else. — Maile (talk) 01:06, 16 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination is also still tagged as a stub, and I see three bare-URL references, which must also be fixed before the nomination is passed. From what I can see of the indefinite block, it can be reversed at any time, so long as certain conditions are met. So the nominator could be back doing work soon, or never. It depends entirely on him. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:36, 17 February 2014 (UTC)
Someone else addressed the stub issue, if that is an issue (it's definitely not a stub now), and I've dealt with complaints about the primary source (adding a secondary that said the same thing) and also having a category. Wnt (talk) 14:56, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
I see that the matter I raised has been dealt with satisfactorily. I have no further concerns. -- Ohc ¡digame! 14:23, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg There are still referencing concerns, the statement "We urge the House to reject the Amash amendment and instead move forward with an approach that appropriately takes into account the need for a reasoned review of what tools can best secure the nation" is attributed to a Guardian article, but actually is a user comment on the said article. C679 18:51, 4 March 2014 (UTC)
It was sourced to the Global Post article cited at the end of the preceding sentence. Wnt (talk) 15:57, 7 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg The quoting is still sub-standard, e.g. direct quotes are not immediately followed with inline citations, also citations used have actually quoted the specific content from elsewhere, e.g. fn5 is not the original source of the information. C679 07:18, 16 March 2014 (UTC)
  • I just tidied it up a bit and removed some things. This is utter tosh that doesn't meet notability criteria. But that's not exactly a DYK review so I shall leave the fact that I made a small contribution here. PanydThe muffin is not subtle 19:06, 25 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg requesting new reviewer. C679 10:21, 14 April 2014 (UTC)
Silly question, what for?--Launchballer 19:32, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
Could someone check for it being free of close paraphrasing issues, copyright violations and plagiarism. I have lost count of the number of different people working on this, and the number of times I have managed to find yet another issue. Thanks, C679 18:46, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
I've checked; while I am seeing copyvios, they are all fully annotated with "s. However, given the notability concerns raised I am tempted to send this to AfD to confirm its notability.--Launchballer 21:14, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on February 3[edit]

Travancore Tamil Nadu Congress

Created by Gfosankar (talk). Self nominated at 12:59, 3 February 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Date and size are fine. But there are just too many grammar errors, some sentences are missing a verb, in others the subject is not clear. The hook is probably fine, as the last few sentences mostly seem to support it, but the article needs grammar copyediting. After this is done, I'd like another reviewer to look at this and see if it reads better. Please tell us here when the grammar has been improved. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 14:09, 3 February 2014 (UTC)
  • I will C/e the article. Soham 15:13, 3 February 2014 (UTC)
  • C/e done mate. Soham 15:29, 3 February 2014 (UTC)
I'm afraid your copyedit seems to have made the article more incomprehensible. -- Ohc ¡digame! 15:51, 19 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svgLong enough, new enough. QPQ done. The article doesn't appear to be particularly neutral, with the first line in the body mentioning discrimination without sufficient NPOV or support from the references. The prose is still in need of a copyedit. Regarding the hook, p244 of the cited text doesn't seem to support it. The other reference doesn't support the first part of the hook either. C679 09:52, 13 February 2014 (UTC)
  • I rewrite the section and fixed the refs. --Gfosankar (talk) 05:06, 18 February 2014 (UTC)
Sorry but "pp. 244,135,130" is not acceptable referencing. If there are three different pages supporting three different facts, you should use three separate references. Please address this. C679 11:43, 18 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Separate references added. --Gfosankar (talk) 12:22, 18 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg A marked improvement. However there still seems to be an element of original research to the hook. Article's grammar is still sub-standard. C679 18:49, 18 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Cloudz, the article is not in GAR or FAR process, it is in a DYK. In my humble opinion I think other than the hook original research issue there should not be a problem with grammar. This article uses Indian English which is different from Czech English. So I request you to consider that while reviewing. Soham 14:21, 19 February 2014 (UTC)
  • @Soham: I think you are being [censored(French)] unfair to Cloudz. In my humble opinion, the prose was certainly in a dialect of English – I know that only because none of the words turned red from my browser's built-in spell-checker. And which dialect could only be established from contextual clues. It would have helped if the use of prepositions in whatever [censored(French)] dialect used in the article was in line with more banal codes of English. I have done a copyedit according to my understanding of the article and its sources. Kindly vet to see that I have not made any translation errors in the course of my work. And I fail to see how [censored(French)] Czech English is relevant to the discussion. I believe Piotr is Polish, and probably would have understood Cz English. Pardon my French ;-) Regards, -- Ohc ¡digame! 15:51, 19 February 2014 (UTC)
  • (edit conflict)Ofc, thanks for cooperating, can you be a bit more specific as to where the prose is incomprehensible. I would definitely try to clarify it.

    Oh, Cloudz is Czech (Prague), who took over from Piotrus so I think it does have an impact on the review. Soham 15:58, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

Don't forget the biggest impact on the review is the editor(s) responsible for writing the content. In the future you would do well to Comment on content, not on the contributor. C679 17:12, 20 February 2014 (UTC)
I would apologise for the facetiousness of my remarks above, although I don't believe they were entirely unwarranted. The problems were pointed out to you by two editors, and were manifestly present while you went on to criticise one of them saying that this is in Indian English. There is no longer a need for you to "clarify", except if I have introduced any factual errors. I've now fixed most of the problems. It seems that these may have been introduced in this series of edits, not all provided clarification or an improvement in grammar. Kindly review my changes. As I said above, I suggest that you work on your use of prepositions. -- Ohc ¡digame! 03:23, 20 February 2014 (UTC)
Er, no. Although Cloudz can probably say "Dobry den!" and "Na Skledanou!", I don't believe Cloudz is Czech AFAICT. Regards, -- Ohc ¡digame! 03:34, 20 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Standard English will enable the most viewers around the globe to read the article. Non-standard dialects should be treated with great caution. Tony (talk) 01:56, 20 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Noted, Tony, Ofc I am learning the ropes from Gareth Griffith Jones, I reviewed your edits and it seems as if the problem has been solved. Oh BTW Tony1 you wrote WP:1A right? Soham 14:16, 20 February 2014 (UTC)
  • First line: "The Kingdom of Travancore, a princely state in India consisting of a majority of ethnnic Malayalees and a Tamil minority, which suffered discriminatin in education[1] and employment." no main verb; this is not a sentence. Also contains spelling mistakes. Next sentence: "Their political actions led them to form several political parties" Their used as a pronoun to refer to one of: i) The Kingdom of Travancore, ii) a Tamil minority, iii) something else. No comment on my nationality per WP:PRIVACY. Basic grammar and spelling are not a matter for GA class articles and above. I believe that articles appearing on the main page should conform with basic rules of grammar and spelling. As far as I can tell, sentences without a main verb and the spelling "discriminatin" are not acceptable in any version of English. C679 16:52, 20 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Additionally I think the article is still not sufficiently neutral per Wikipedia:EXCEPTIONAL; the claims of employment based discrimination are sourced to a single personal correspondence. Further, The Hindu doesn't seem to adequately support the claim of education based discrimination against this particular group. If this discrimination was so commonplace, let's see sufficient referencing. Thanks, C679 17:07, 20 February 2014 (UTC)
  • When I last edited the article there were no typos (not a sp. mistake), and it was introduced with Ofc's edit and Ofc being a user who knows what he does I trusted his revision blindly (which if you read through the entire part was my biggest mistake). That is for the typo being labelled as sp. mistake. Now I agree with you that there is was no main verb in the last version I edited, practically due to my habit of losing my spectacles every now and then. The situation got worse when Gfonskar attempted a rewrite, then again after Ofc's c/e. My time in wiki getting shorter by the day I didn't get a chance to scan every other edit like an x-ray which led to this state of the article. Thanks for pointing it out.

    On a different note you should consider reading the policy WP:PA 'cause if I called you a [censored(French)] *****le then it would constitute as a PA not otherwise, again I commented on this review (your work) and not on you as a person. Oh! Above all I should recommend you to WP:PRESERVE and remind you that wp is not a battleground. Soham 18:10, 20 February 2014 (UTC)

  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg NPOV concerns remain. Once those have been addressed I would like an uninvolved editor to make the decision about if it should be promoted. C679 19:10, 20 February 2014 (UTC)
  • I have introduced a ref, this one is from The Hindu too but what to do? Seems like it is the only WP:RS that has written on the topic. There is another Hindu ref and one book cite. Seems to manage the issue. Soham 07:37, 22 February 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on February 8[edit]

book test

Created by Maury Markowitz (talk). Self nominated at 15:21, 9 February 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Meets DYK criteria, but QPQ review required. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:32, 13 February 2014 (UTC)
Love it! Maury Markowitz (talk) 11:56, 20 February 2014 (UTC)
Note: Glad you like it MM. The article reads very well, is long enough, and almost has enough cites. Could you just check that each para has a cite (I can see one now). The main hook fact is reffed but the relevant section is not available to me. As Cwmhiraeth notes the QPQ is required and I'm not sure if we need a third person to approve my hook. I think your tick will do. Victuallers (talk) 21:09, 20 February 2014 (UTC)
It's at the bottom of page 227, that isn't visible to you? I get a pretty complete preview, I guess it depends on your IP? Maury Markowitz (talk) 12:16, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

QPQ on Marquee Moon. Maury Markowitz (talk) 12:13, 21 February 2014 (UTC)

  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Third-person reviewer needed for ALT1 hook. As noted by Victuallers in his review, the second paragraph of the Mnemonic gimmicks section (the one describing "hybrid" systems) needs an inline source citation, so that should be checked by the reviewer. BlueMoonset (talk) 16:47, 21 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg The part about reading a book you have never seen is verified and cited inline. The part about the oldest trick in the book is AGF and cited inline. However, the second paragraph under Mnemonic gimmicks still doesn't have a cite. Yoninah (talk) 22:54, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
  • And if I can jump in with another question--I don't understand the Karmilovich entry in the bibliography: publication information is missing, and the link is to what looks like a sales brochure. Also, see "History", par. starting "Modern variations"--toward the end, there is mention of "both versions", which is unproblematic, but this is followed by "with better-known examples": examples of what? of both versions? I think the article as a whole needs a bit of a scrubbing. (I only came by here because I thought I might be able to deliver a quick reference for the un-footnoted paragraph, but was unable to.) Drmies (talk) 03:47, 25 February 2014 (UTC)

Should all be there now. Drmies, I'm not sure any of this is suitable for discussion here, I think the talk page is more appropriate. Maury Markowitz (talk) 13:17, 25 February 2014 (UTC)

  • Thanks. However, I believe these things are relevant in deciding on front-page coverage. I see that the link to the sales brochure is still there (I don't know what else to call it--it lists positive blurbs, the sales price, and the ordering information. I suppose that brochure is what's cited (" Karmilovich, p. 5.", for instance), but I don't see how the entire last paragraph of the section "Dictionary gimmicks" is verified on page 5 of that brochure. In other words, I wouldn't send it on in its current state, but I'm just passing by. Drmies (talk) 18:49, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
    • Yes, it is a sales brochure. Are you concerned about the suitability of this document to serve as a reference? Or is it something about the formatting or lack of information? Maury Markowitz (talk) 15:05, 27 February 2014 (UTC)
      • It also struck me that the sales brochure is not a reliable source. Yoninah (talk) 23:42, 27 February 2014 (UTC)
        • We use marketing materials from thousands of companies in hundreds of thousands of articles, from Apple to Boeing. Can you be more specific about why you believe this one should not be used, in the manner it is being used? For instance, the first reference simply states that there is a version of the book test with this name. I would think that a brochure for said product with that name is perfectly suitable for proving existence. No? 13:29, 4 March 2014 (UTC)
          • I don't think the brochure is complete enough. I would rather you cite the book it's promoting, not the brochure. If you found a page with a proper excerpt of the book material, it would be more acceptable. Yoninah (talk) 19:28, 4 March 2014 (UTC)
          • What Yoninah said. The claim that so many articles are "verified" by "references" like these can't really be taken seriously, and that one would verify a sales brochure for a book rather than the book itself runs counter to any encyclopedic intuition I've ever had. Drmies (talk) 00:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

So are you both saying this article cannot be passed for DYK in it's current form? Maury Markowitz (talk) 17:46, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

I would say that the ref should be removed from the page, and if it's the only ref for the text, the text should be removed too. Yoninah (talk) 23:40, 19 March 2014 (UTC)
You didn't answer the question. Whatever, I give up. Maury Markowitz (talk) 15:29, 27 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Sorry I wasn't clear enough. I would appreciate your cleaning up this referencing or deleting it and the text in question. Then the article is ready for DYK. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 18:15, 29 March 2014 (UTC)

I did. But it's too late now, April 1 has passed. Maury Markowitz (talk) 13:25, 1 April 2014 (UTC)

  • Thank you. If you could add a cite to the third paragraph under Dictionary gimmicks, we'll be ready to run. Yoninah (talk) 18:06, 1 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on February 11[edit]

List of Olympians and Paralympians from Peel, Ontario

(note that for ALT2, I do have a medal chart that I just need to convert to wikicode and post)
  • Reviewed: Klallam language
  • Comment: I created this article in the draft space on February 1, but didn't release it into the mainspace until February 11.

Created by Zanimum (talk). Self nominated at 01:37, 14 February 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg For the main hook, by "shut out" I think you mean "did not win a medal? Because athletes continued to compete. ALT1 is not sourced in the article (although it is stated). ALT2 is in the article, but the article needs some more references. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:18, 16 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Right, re: the term "shut out". I've modified it. I've added references for both McCredie and Laumann's roads now. Alt2 might be difficult to get done in a short time frame. There are reliable sources for each medal winner, but to try and get it all together before the end of the Olympics (I guess that hook works even better during the Paralympics, technically). -- Zanimum (talk) 20:52, 16 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Struck original hook as being far too long at 225 characters. I was wondering on article's progress; it doesn't make sense to call for a new review if major expansion is ongoing, since significant additions will need to be reviewed even if the other sections have already been reviewed. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:45, 1 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Hi, just wondering how this is doing? Are there remaining issues? -- Zanimum (talk) 16:40, 1 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Zanimum, I just asked the same thing of you right here not an hour ago: are you done with your expansion, or is it still continuing? The review shouldn't resume until you're done with the major work on the article, and you've made extensive changes in the past 48 hours. (I've just now adjusted the template, including the ALT hooks, to reflect the new name of the article. The template itself is fine where it is and should not be moved.) BlueMoonset (talk) 17:59, 1 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Yes, the article is stable for review. -- Zanimum (talk) 12:54, 14 March 2014 (UTC)
Symbol question.svg Long enough, new enough, QPQ done, no copyvios found. Please fix footnote 16 as it is bare.--Launchballer 19:41, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
ALT4: ... that half the medals won by Olympians from Peel, Ontario were won by Jeff Adams and Stephanie Dixon?--Launchballer 19:41, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
Comment only - Launchballer you can't yet claim QPQ for this DYK. Your review does not include a full DYK check. What about sourcing? And which hooks have you checked? And which hook/s are you okaying? A more thorough job is needed here. EagerToddler39 (talk) 03:36, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
ALT1 is uninteresting, ALT2 doesn't make grammatical sense and ALT3 is also uninteresting. I've looked at the sourcing and as far as the listing of names is concerned, I'd like to see at least one reference per name - this can be done by lifting references from other articles.--Launchballer 09:44, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on February 19[edit]

Cranial nerve

Cranial nerves as they pass through the skull base to the brain.

  • ... that cranial nerves (pictured) emerge directly from the brain and supply it with motor and sensory innervation?

5x expanded by CFCF (talk), Lesion (talk). Nominated by CFCF (talk) at 09:42, 21 February 2014 (UTC).

  • As in the article, I think this DYK would read better as 'emerge directly from the brain' rather than 'arise'.Gaia Octavia Agrippa Talk 15:51, 22 February 2014 (UTC)
You're right, fixed. CFCF (talk · contribs · email) 12:34, 23 February 2014 (UTC)

Symbol confirmed.svg This top-importance Anatomy/Neuroscience/Neurology page has, in the last few days, been greatly expanded (>5-fold after excluding per MEDMOS, mnemonics) and improved by three Wikipedians working in close collaboration (see [4]) in a way which, I believe, really deserves recognition. The sourcing is largely based on major textbooks, per WP:MEDRS. The hook appears suitably pithy and striking: without being gimmicky in any way, it evokes a memorable mental picture regarding our brain-body interactions. Despite the presence of a few (comprehensible) sourcing requests I think this would make a really good encyclopedic contribution to DYK. (talk) 19:08, 23 February 2014 (UTC)

Adding: (While I think the hook paints a good picture, I wasn't quite so sure about the effectiveness of image itself, at its present size. But then again, colour blindness means I'm probably not a good judge of this anyway...) (talk) 22:15, 25 February 2014 (UTC) [formerly]

Might this image be better?
--CFCF (talk · contribs · email) 10:13, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
I feel the main image from the article won't do very well in such a small format though. CFCF (talk · contribs · email) 10:14, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
No, because it uses red, one of the colours most commonly affected by colour-blindness, to convey information. Andy Mabbett (Pigsonthewing); Talk to Andy; Andy's edits 15:25, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg While I agree that this would make an excellent DYK hook for the main page, the "citation needed" templates need to be addressed before this can properly be given an approval here. I don't imagine it will take that long to find the appropriate sourcing. I also have a question: in addition to CFCF and Lesion, the initial 23K expansion edit also lists LT910001 as one of the expanders. Shouldn't this user also be receiving credit for this DYK? BlueMoonset (talk) 04:27, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
LT910001 helped organize the structure in the discussion page, but writing was me and Lesion. I don't mind who gets credit, but I didn't see how to add third author?
As for citations, I'm on it. Most of them are gone, have two that need to be fixed, but I'll be done with it today as soon as I get hold of some good evolutionary neurobiology sources (didn't write that portion, even though it seems fully correct). CFCF (talk · contribs · email) 07:03, 25 February 2014 (UTC)
  • CFCF, thanks for your response. I only asked about LT910001 because that user was mentioned in a edit summary; looking at the single talk-page comment, I don't think that is a DYK-credit-worthy contribution in the scheme of things. The nomination is still waiting for the last of the citation issues to be addressed; hope you can get to it soon. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:08, 1 March 2014 (UTC)
I'll have the sources by Monday.CFCF (talk · contribs · email) 11:28, 2 March 2014 (UTC)
Done -- CFCF (talk · contribs · email) 07:59, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Would like to have this looked at by someone better acquainted with DYK rules than the original reviewer. Please check overall sourcing and do a close paraphrase check. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 20:46, 15 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Mostly OK. Article is long enough and new enough. No QPQ required for this contributor. Hook fact is in the article and is supported by citations. Because I can't see the sources, I have to AGF on hook sourcing and questions of copyvio. Image license for the first-proposed image looks OK; it's not clear if OTRS has confirmed the permission for the alternative image of the sheep.
My one reservation is a lack of citation footnotes for some passages in the article that appear to require them. Specifically, I see a need for citations for the "Summary" table entries about nerves III through XII, the "Ganglia" section, the second paragraph (the one with bullets) in "Cranial nerve columns", and the "note" about the facial nerve in the section "Exiting the skull". I recognize that the basis for this content is likely in the other Wikipedia articles that are hyperlinked, but Wikipedia can't cite itself as an authority. --Orlady (talk) 22:40, 15 March 2014 (UTC)
The article has been updated quite a bit recently, and is going for GA status. Maybe we should wait that out, else I have perfect sources for these statements in Moore's clinical anatomy, should I add a citation to each table or is it sufficient to add on in the end of the entire table? -- CFCF (talk · contribs · email) 15:00, 27 March 2014 (UTC)
The Clinical significance header still has several unreferenced paragraphs. The table could be cited with just one reference. But you will have to consider whether more will be added to the table later. The only likely addition would be columns, in which case it could make sense to add the ref tags to the column headers. However some functions are referenced to different places, so probably each other functions should have its own reference. The Course section also has no reference. The Nuclei section does not mention the Terminal Nerve which perhaps connects to septal nuclei (not a DYK issue though). Graeme Bartlett (talk) 08:16, 18 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on February 23[edit]

Road accidents in Tamil Nadu, Violence against women in Tamil Nadu

  • Reviewed: Not a self nom

Created by Ssriram mt (talk). Nominated by Gfosankar (talk) at 05:54, 24 February 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Review of Road accidents in Tamil Nadu: Article is new enough, long enough, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. No QPQ necessary for non-self-nomination. A citation is needed for the 70 percent figure under Causes. I also don't understand the use of the word "ease" in the second paragraph, second line under Causes. The hook doesn't make sense to me (the two party leaders did advocate prohibition) and I don't see the hook fact in the article. Perhaps you can shorten the hook and just focus on the second part? Yoninah (talk) 23:33, 6 March 2014 (UTC)
Hi, thanks a lot for nominating and taking up the review. I have expanded the lead, expanded the causes, trimmed the leader part and added a couple of more references.Ssriram mt (talk) 00:26, 7 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Thank you. The Times of India link is not opening for me. What do you want to do about the hook? BTW, this article is an orphan; no other Wikipedia articles link to it. You might want to do something about that so it doesn't get tagged. Yoninah (talk) 00:44, 7 March 2014 (UTC)
I have linked the article and have also added points for the hook. The TOI link is opening fine for me - may be you would like to open it in a different browser or search against the title.Ssriram mt (talk) 01:27, 7 March 2014 (UTC)
Symbol possible vote.svg I've started working on the violence against women article. I'm finding problems with poor writing quality, including but not limited to excessive borrowing from cited sources. I've identified one issue that I won't be able to resolve without help: There are some references to "UNESCO report 1993", with hyperlinks to the UNESCO article. We need a reference citation the enables a reader to identify the source cited; this citation does not do that. --Orlady (talk) 01:27, 22 March 2014 (UTC)
Hi, book references follow short citation style where the same book is referred is multiple times. UNESCO should be with the # symbol referring to the bottom portion of references - I have corrected it now. Let me know for further updates.Ssriram mt (talk) 02:24, 22 March 2014 (UTC)
Thanks for fixing the linkage. Now that I know that "UNESCO" refers to the document listed with author name "Kosambi", I've edited the citations so they identify the reference as "Kosambi". --Orlady (talk) 05:10, 22 March 2014 (UTC)
Another progress report. I don't find support for the hook fact, with respect to violence against women. The article as I found it said "alcoholism is believed to be one of the major reasons for violence against women in Tamil Nadu," but it turned out that the source for this was the opinion of one activist. After reading the sources, I have revised that statement and another statement about calls for prohibition of alcohol to say: "Some politicians and social activists name alcoholism as a major cause of rape and other forms of violence against women in Tamil Nadu and have cited this as a reason for calling for reinstatement of prohibition in Tamil Nadu." I have learned from sources that the Marumalarchi Dravida Munnetra Kazhagam (MDMK) party is campaigning against alcohol -- and even blames alcohol for 90% of all crime in Tamil Nadu -- but the party's positions are not discussed explicitly in the article, and the party's statements are not specifically focused on violence against women. I will continue examining the article (there are still a lot issues with it), but I suggest restating the hook as follows:
Sure, thanks. I will try to modify the portions as well.Ssriram mt (talk) 01:28, 25 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Ssriram mt, Orlady, where does this stand now? I see a couple of edits over two weeks ago, and nothing since. The nomination is now two months old, and really ought to be completed soon, one way or another. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 00:40, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on February 24[edit]


Eggs on sale in Hong Kong

  • ... that the global poultry industry was expected to produce 65.5 million tonnes of eggs (pictured) in 2013?

5x expanded by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self nominated at 10:47, 1 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Impressively expanded article! Long enough and 5x expanded. Within policy. Hook is OK, supported by a ref and certainly significant enough to be interesting. Having refs in the introductory section would not hurt bat all in all, good to go. Micromesistius (talk) 21:03, 1 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg I am concerned that some of the phrasing in this article is too close to that of its sources. Compare for example "traditional small-scale, family-based poultry systems are important in sustaining livelihoods and supplying poultry products in rural areas" with "Traditional small-scale, rural, family-based poultry systems continue to play a crucial role in sustaining livelihoods in developing countries, supplying poultry products in rural areas". Nikkimaria (talk) 01:35, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
  • I have dealt with that one. Any more problems? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:35, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Yes: a further example is "In rice-producing areas, ducks have traditionally been managed under a traditional herding system. They have been selected for their ability to glean most of their food from their environment of harvested rice fields, canals, swamps and waterways" versus "ducks in the rice producing areas of the Orient have been managed under the traditional herding system. Under this system, native ducks are selected for generations for their ability to glean most of their food from harvested rice fields, levees, swamps and waterways". Please be aware that automated tools like Duplication Detector often return false negatives, so it's helpful (though time-consuming) to review sources manually. Nikkimaria (talk) 15:57, 5 March 2014 (UTC)
  • OK, I have rewritten that to "The ducks are mostly still herded in the traditional way and are selected for their ability to find sufficient food in harvested rice fields and other wet environments." Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:29, 5 March 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on February 27[edit]


  • ... that shadism is a form of discrimination common in Aboriginal, African, Asian, Hispanic and Indian cultures?

5x expanded by Shaina390 (talk). Nominated by Jaobar (talk) at 14:13, 3 March 2014 (UTC).

  • ALT1: ... that Academy-Award winning actress Lupita Nyong'o felt the effects of shadism, as she was teased about her dark skin as a child? at 00:23, 16 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Article: On 27 February 2014, when this article was nominated for DYK, it had been expanded more than five times from the previous version. It also appears to be adequately referenced. However, the difficulty I have is that the references neither appear to use the term shadism at all, nor state clearly that shadism is "common" in the cultures mentioned. For example, the article referred to in footnote 1 uses the term colorism. (The full versions of many of the references – such as those mentioned in footnotes 2 and 3 – are not available.) I therefore fear that the article is the product of synthesis.
  • Hook: Subject to what I said above, the hook is of appropriate length and is supported by offline references which may be accepted in good faith. — Regards, Truth's Out There (speak the truth) 21:57, 12 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Hello, and thank you for your comments. I recognize that the only source I had that explicitly mentioned the term 'Shadism' was my Bim Adewunmi piece from The Guardian. I have added more sources that explicitly name and describe the term 'shadism.' Shadism is different to colorism, as shadism is usually intraraical or internalized and deals with skin tone within race and not race itself, as opposed to colorism, which is usually interracial and deals with discrimination based on race, as opposed to different skin tones within a race. The term shadism is well known and often used in race-based communities, but is still being developed in academic writing. It is a term that certainly exists, and should be recognized apart from colourism or racism, because it is not the same thing. To my article, I added a piece from The Toronto Star in which black high school students discuss spreading awareness of shadism in their school during Black History Month, another in which Indian-Canadian playwright Anita Majumdar discusses her fear of the sun's impact on her skin and in turn her life and success, and a paragraph on the Canadian documentary 'Shadeism', which revolves around the topic and how it affects 5 young women of different ethnicities. I am quite passionate about this subject, and I very much want my page to demonstrate that there is a name for this discriminatory practice that people, particularly people of colour may notice, and that that name is shadism.--Shaina390 (talk) 04:25, 16 March 2014 (UTC)
  • It's laudable that you have put a lot of work into creating this article, but my concern is that other more experienced editors will feel that there is too much original research and, in particular, is the result of synthesis. As that guideline states: "Do not combine material from multiple sources to reach or imply a conclusion not explicitly stated by any of the sources. If one reliable source says A, and another reliable source says B, do not join A and B together to imply a conclusion C that is not mentioned by either of the sources. This would be a synthesis of published material to advance a new position, which is original research." I will leave it to an experienced editor or the DYK administrator to determine whether this is the case. I would suggest that you have a section right at the top of the article defining what shadism is and citing the three sources you mentioned above.
  • I also notice that you have (or someone else has) deleted the original hook and replaced it with a new one. Unfortunately, this hook is currently not acceptable because (1) I don't think external links are accepted in hooks; (2) the information in the hook does not appear anywhere in the article; and (3) even if you included it in the article and provided the YouTube video as a reference, the YouTube video does not mention shadism at all. Furthermore, it appears to be a copyright violation, in that it was uploaded to YouTube by someone other than the copyright holder of the video. Note that "Wikipedia:Did you know/Reviewing guide" states: "The hook fact(s) must be stated in the article, and must be immediately followed by an inline citation to a reliable source." — Regards, Truth's Out There (speak the truth) 15:18, 16 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg I've read through the article and note the page creator's expansive knowledge of the subject of skin-tone discrimination and also the inclusion of lots of sourcing. I don't think this is a question of original research, but of whether Shadism and Colorism should be merged. Both articles use the same definition for the subject: discrimination due to skin tone. If Shaina390 can explain the difference between Shadism and Colorism, and provide reliable sources to back it up, it should be stated clearly in the lead, even with a few sentences or a whole paragraph. Otherwise, as Truth'soutthere noted, most of the sources being used for the Shadism article are referring to Colorism, and since the Colorism article isn't so well-referenced, it would be a good idea to merge the information in Shadism to Colorism. Yoninah (talk) 18:45, 1 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Hello; I would argue that colorism is like racism in that it deals with the color of a person's skin (black, white) but not their shade, or how light or how dark their skin is within their race and the stereotypes that comes with that. While this difference may sound insignificant, it is actually very prevalent and meaningful. Because shadism very often comes from within one's own race (Indian with light skin, Indian with dark skin), it is a different form of discrimination that I would argue warrants it's own page. The 'Discrimination based on skin color' page, in my opinion, is describing a broader form of discrimination, which is racism. Shadism is very often intraracial, and internalized. Please also see my response to your comment on the shadism talk page.--Shaina390 (talk) 03:53, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Now you are giving us a much more fine-tuned definition of shadism, Shaina. But looking through your sources, I can't find that many that verify that point. In fact, the article seems padded with blog pages or chat columns in magazines that really aren't saying the point you're trying to make. Now I understand and accept Truth'soutthere's original point that the article is based on original research. You may very well want to argue that shadism (which, by the way, should probably be spelled Shadeism, as one of your sources has it) is different from colorism, but on Wikipedia, your sources have to state it explicitly and prove it, not you. Yoninah (talk) 22:38, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Also, as regards the ALT1 hook, I think it may be a problem that the source for the hook only mentions that Nyong'o was teased about her dark skin as a child. The fact that she thus felt the effects of shadism is not mentioned in the hook, but is a conclusion drawn by the article's author(s). — Regards, Truth's Out There (speak the truth) 12:00, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg The article now has both "original research" and "merge" templates on it, which basically stops this nomination in its tracks. The former, if not dealt with, is enough to sink the nomination, and needs to be resolved soon. The latter will delay the nomination until the merge is either rejected or completed. BlueMoonset (talk) 00:55, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on March 2[edit]

Chicagoland (TV series)

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nominated at 16:35, 7 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg Article is new enough and nominally long enough. QPQ is done. The hook is interesting (it enticed me to review this nom), but unfortunately it is not actually supported by sourcing. The source is a reviewer's informed opinion regarding the benefits to CNN from doing a series like this one; it is not a factual statement regarding CNN's decision process. --Orlady (talk) 03:31, 17 March 2014 (UTC)
Additionally, I have concerns about article content that appears to be nothing more than uncritical repetition of breezy promotional content. I refer to phrasing like "the award-winning filmmakers", and particularly to the long quotation at the end of the "Background" section (the quotation preceded by the words "According to a May 2013 article in Entertainment Weekly the CNN press release described the show as follows") and the entire "Synopsis" section (which doesn't identify a source, doesn't say anything of substance -- it's actually hard to figure out what it means, and reads like it might have been copied from a press blurb). (Anyway, why does this series need a "synopsis"? It's not a work of fiction that has a plot.) If deductions are made for direct quotations and promotional blather, I believe that the prose content of this article would not meet the 1500-character requirement. Please add some more substance, make sure everything is sourced, and lose the promotional verbiage. As for the hook, either find a solid basis for the hook fact or find a new hook. --Orlady (talk) 03:31, 17 March 2014 (UTC)
IIRC, the synopsis came from this edit by Robert Moore. The series is not really a news show, so presenting a plot synopsis is probably not unlike some reality television shows. The long quote was included to demonstrate the intent of the show before it was actually filmed and produced. It serves a purpose.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:55, 17 March 2014 (UTC)
Well, the "synopsis" was unsourced and promotional in its tone. I removed it. That long (three sentences long, about 350-400 characters) quotation from a CNN public relations blurb also has no place in an encyclopedia article. Short bits from the quotation might be appropriate to quote, but articles should be original content, not strung-together collections of long quotations. The "synopsis" did mention that the series was looking at several current issues in Chicago and at Rahm Emanuel's role and performance in leading the city and addressing its issues. There are now plenty of published reviews that discuss the subject matter of the series, critique its depiction of Emanuel, compare the focus on Emanuel to Brick City's focus on Cory Booker, etc. Those reviews could be cited as sources of information about the show. (Put another way: Some reviews that are now used only as sources for the long direct quotations that make up about one-third of the "Reception" section could also be good sources for factual descriptive information about the series.)
BTW, I've beefed up the statements about the CNN motivation for this series. I think the hook might be supported if you can wedge "24-hour" into the article. The Variety piece may also help to support the hook (although, like the Hollywood Reporter piece, it doesn't specifically say that this is why CNN is doing what it is doing). --Orlady (talk) 14:58, 17 March 2014 (UTC)
Don't the sources for news cycle support 24-hour news cycle. I just changed the link to avoid the redirect.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 22:27, 18 March 2014 (UTC)
I'll accept the hook, now that the article uses the words that appear in the hook. That leaves a need to deal with my other concern (briefly stated): "Please add some more substance, make sure everything is sourced, and lose the promotional verbiage." My concern is related to policy regarding promotional content and an excessive use of quotations that is tantamount to plagiarism. Also see rule 2.d and supplementary rule D7. It shouldn't be hard to add some content in your own words (but based on sources) about the subject matter of the series. It also shouldn't be hard to trim the promotional wording borrowed from sources and the length of direct quotations (not to mention the padding that comes from verbiage like "According to a May 2013 article in Entertainment Weekly the CNN press release described the show as follows"). I've not yet looked for close paraphrasing because I'm hoping that it will be edited out before that review is done. --Orlady (talk) 01:30, 19 March 2014 (UTC)
  • It's been almost two weeks, and no action has been taken on the above. The Reception section is 1190 prose characters of the article's 2574, but 879 of these are in long direct quotes, which is far too much, as Orlady noted. Action is needed soon on the issues she raised to keep this nomination open. BlueMoonset (talk) 14:30, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
  • I took out a bit of the promotional verbiage (per WP:PEA), trimmed the one example of padding noted above, and blockquoted per WP:QUOTE. The article is now 1485 prose characters, too short to qualify. This might be a good time to add the additional substance Orlady requested, and take another look at the other issues she raised; the Reception section was only one issue of the many she touched on. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:59, 3 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Orlady asked for additional substance; the only addition (made after my most recent comment, but not noted here) was to basically copy some production info already in the body to the lede of the article, so it's now repeated. How about some new facts or commentary? And have you addressed all the other issues she raised? That's also needed before she can finish the review. BlueMoonset (talk) 14:44, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Tony, I point you to WP:DYK 2d: In practice, articles longer than 1,500 characters may still be rejected as too short, at the discretion of the selecting reviewers., and also WP:DYKSG#D13, which goes into this issue in greater depth. BlueMoonset (talk) 06:49, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

Jumper (pornographic film)

Moved to mainspace by George Ho (talk). Self nominated at 23:09, 2 March 2014 (UTC).

Symbol confirmed.svg Just barely long enough, history and reference verified. Daniel Case (talk) 03:01, 20 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg There are accuracy problems with both hooks and the article itself, which is why I'm pulling this back. The ALT1 hook, which had been promoted, claims that the reviewer said that the voice resembles the Wizard; in fact, he's complaining about tech issues in the film, where the voice's intermittent reverb is similar to Oz, not that the voice itself is. Indeed, this second Reception sentence (where ALT1 comes from) is a puzzle; there's no sense that both of the Kinnick quotes are about problems with the film (though the first one has to be so). I also think the Reception section is far too reliant on quotes, but when it tries to paraphrase it instead misleads: the original commentary says that the movie was "modeled somewhat" on Heaven Can't Wait, while the article and hook's "somewhat resembles" gives the impression of a closer adherence that the sources don't indicate is warranted. (Is there any similarity beyond that of a dead guy coming back to fix lives in the present?) For a new hook, something could possibly be done with the "well-developed" part of the Escoffier review, possibly in conjunction with his "some degree of acting" quote. It's too bad that Escoffier doesn't actually compliment the actors; if he had, then the hook could mention Yeager's acting (or you could do one just using the Kinnick review), but I think hooks that don't rely on a single commentary carry more weight. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:48, 20 March 2014 (UTC)
  • I did rephrases in article and on hooks. George Ho (talk) 19:40, 20 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg I've just done some editing of the article to improve the phrasing and accuracy of what's being said, so as to increase the fidelity to the sources. That being done, I don't think ALT1 is tenable any more—the so-called resemblance with The Wizard of Oz was describing a problem with Jumper's technical issue, and doesn't mean they actually resemble each other, just that it's a way to explain the problem quickly to the reader. I'm suggesting a different take:
  • ALT2: ... that according to one author, the award-winning 1991 gay pornographic film Jumper had a "well-developed" script that needed "some degree of acting in addition to skills as an adult performer"?
I'm still not happy with the original hook as modified, even though I've added a "was" to it to improve the grammar. I'll leave it to another reviewer to decide which of the hooks are reasonable, or George could propose a new ALT altogether if he isn't happy with ALT2. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:12, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Reiterating icon noting need for new reviewer; please see above. Many thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:17, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on March 5[edit]

The World's Billionaires

Bill Gates in 2013

  • Reviewed: Rajani Pandit, Keith Brown (pole vaulter)
  • Comment: I am working on creating articles for each year's list. Given a little more time, I will continue to add years to the hook with the goal of getting it listed here. So, feel free to be slow in reviewing this. :) Alternatively, I can break it up and pick more diverse facts. More QPQs will be added to the list soon.

The World's Billionaires 5x expanded, all others new articles, by ThaddeusB (talk). Self nominated at 00:16, 11 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg This is not a full review, just a comment. The 2014, 2013, and 2012 lists do not qualify as new because they were spun-off of an existing article. For those three to be eligible, they have to be expanded fivefold from the initial version that was copied from the main article. (See 1a) Altamel (talk) 00:35, 9 April 2014 (UTC)
  • A common sense exception should apply here. I wrote the text at the main article originally in the five day time frame, realized there would be too much text at the main article once I was done, then moved it to the individual articles. All of the text is new (or was when I nominated it originally, now a couple weeks old) and was written by me. --ThaddeusB (talk) 02:36, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
  • I'm not quite sure I can agree with that. The way I interpret the guidelines (and I'm new to reviewing, so I may be wrong) is that text cannot be double counted, since DYK recognizes new content. Even if I were to apply your exception and count 2014, 2013, and 2012 as "new" articles, then their text would have to be excluded from the 5x calculation for the main article, and the main article, in turn, would not have been expanded five times. This is a complicated situation, and you might want to ask a DYK regular for a second opinion. Altamel (talk) 18:15, 11 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Second opinion: As Altamel notes, the same material from the main article was subsequently moved to the individual articles and expanded there, and can't be counted as new for both. So a new 1500-character year section in the main article cannot count toward the expansion total in the main article and also as part of a new 2500-character year article. The only way all the articles could be used is if the individual years were 5x expanded after they were spun off. I think it could be argued either to use the original article and not the various years, or the individual years but not the main article, given that all the work was done within the five days. In both cases, the same hook could be used, but the bolded articles would vary. BlueMoonset (talk) 16:18, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
  • If I only get one or the other, naturally I would prefer to get credit for the multiple yearly articles instead of the one main article. I would, however like to point out that the main article was 1052 characters before my first edit. It is now 11059 characters. Excluding the 2014/2013/2012 text (which is actually not 100% duplicate), it would still be 6262 characters, a 6X expansion. Anyway, I am OK with not bolding the main article if that is the only way to get credit for the yearly articles. --ThaddeusB (talk) 20:35, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
  • ThaddeusB, thanks. I've unbolded the main article in the hook since it was the only way to handle this to give you credit for the (now five) year articles. That's even more true now that you've added text from the pre-existing 2010 and 2011 articles to the main article—the 3232 new prose characters from them would have had to be increased five-fold, which isn't feasible. At the moment, you have two QPQs; you'll need to supply three more to cover all five year articles. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:20, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

I'm Gonna Get You (Bizarre Inc song)

Created by Launchballer (talk). Self nominated at 13:51, 5 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol delete vote.svg The article was of sufficient length as of 8 March 2014 (work on it began on 4 March), and appears sufficiently referenced. The hook is of appropriate length, but I don't think the article clearly states that the song which is its subject "inspired" The Black Eyed Peas' song. The article merely says that the song was one of will.i.am's "favourite songs" and that he "played [the] song for the power" in the bridge part of "Boom Boom Pow". — SMUconlaw (talk) 21:47, 23 March 2014 (UTC)
What are you talking about - this revision, which was the state it was in when I nominated it in, had 1,684 characters according to DYK check?--Launchballer 22:29, 23 March 2014 (UTC)
There isn't any problem with the length of the article – as I said, "[t]he article was of sufficient length". However, either the issue concerning the referencing of the hook needs to be addressed, or the hook should be reworded so that it is in line with the text of the article. — SMUconlaw (talk) 09:03, 24 March 2014 (UTC)
Then why use that icon... anyway, I've fixed the article.--Launchballer 09:42, 24 March 2014 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg (for ALT1): Because, as far as I am aware, that icon indicates the hook is not ready for DYK. Anyway, I have had a look at the references you added, and note that they indicate that "I'm Gonna Get You" inspired part of "Boom Boom Pow", not the whole song, so I've done a minor edit to the article and think that the following alternative hook would be fine for DYK:
ALT1: ... that part of The Black Eyed Peas' song "Boom Boom Pow" was inspired by Bizarre Inc's "I'm Gonna Get You"?
Also, I just completed a general copyedit of the article and noticed that there are two references which are citations of other Wikipedia articles. This goes against WP:CIRCULAR, so please visit those articles, retrieve the reliable third-party references supporting the information in question, and insert the references into this article. — SMUconlaw (talk) 10:57, 24 March 2014 (UTC)
My logic for including those references was that it was cleaner than copying several references over, but seeing how many more hit records sample the song, I've removed it and at a later date will expand that article. I should point out that you are mistaken with the use of icons:
  • Symbol confirmed.svg should be used when the article is ready to go.
  • Symbol voting keep.svg should be used where there are offline references and the reviewer takes them in good faith. As I have cited inlay notes, this should be used here when it is approved.
  • Symbol question.svg should be used when there are minor fixes.
  • Symbol possible vote.svg should be used when there are more serious errors.
  • Symbol delete vote.svg should be used when there isn't a snowball's chance of hell of it making it to the front page.
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg should be used when a new reviewer is called for. As you have suggested an ALT, this one is currently necessary.--Launchballer 13:47, 24 March 2014 (UTC)

──────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────── Symbol redirect vote 4.svg OK, thanks for pointing out the correct use of the icons. Just highlighting here that the ALT1 hook needs review by a second reviewer, as you mentioned. — SMUconlaw (talk) 14:25, 24 March 2014 (UTC)

  • Comment - a QPQ is also required as Launchballer has far in excess of five DYK credits. SagaciousPhil - Chat 13:08, 3 April 2014 (UTC)
Yes check.svg Done.--Launchballer 13:26, 3 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg ALT1 still needs reviewing by an independent reviewer. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:27, 12 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on March 6[edit]

Boschetto v. Hansing

Created/expanded by Anshulmwiki (talk). Nominated by Malikepolat (talk) at 04:50, 7 March 2014 (UTC).

  • I got the hook into a proper DYK format. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 18:06, 7 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg This article is new enough and long enough. The hook is sourced to reliable sources and I have detected no policy issues. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:39, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg There are a number of policy issues with this article that have caused the hook to be removed from prep: all of the sources are primary—the information is exclusively taken directly from court decisions, with no use of the secondary sources that are Wikipedia's mainstay. In violation of DYK norms, there is no sourcing whatever for the very large Background section or for the Appellate Court's holding section that follows. There's also an external link in the final paragraph of the Interactive websites subsection. Finally, as has been noted in WT:DYK#"that you are safe and just a contract is not enough to make you suable?" discussion, "you are safe" isn't explained at all in the article, and is not supported: who is supposed to be safe and why? BlueMoonset (talk) 13:44, 4 April 2014 (UTC)

Sutton tube

A Sutton tube with its cavity removed

Created by Maury Markowitz (talk). Self nominated at 20:16, 6 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Date, size, all fine. The article has three unreferenced paragraphs - please fix (marked in the article). Also, please clarify in the article what Rotterdam Gerät is. I read the article, and the one about H2S radar, and I think the term means a copy of the radar captured by the Germans - but if som this should be clarified in both articles, and possibly in the hook. If I am right, the following hook may be better. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:48, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Simply removing the redundant "radar". Maury Markowitz (talk) 13:41, 7 March 2014 (UTC)
Why is "captured" part of the link? The link is to "H2S radar", not to an article or section involving a capture. Sᴠᴇɴ Mᴀɴɢᴜᴀʀᴅ Wha? 20:36, 7 March 2014 (UTC)
I was trying to explain what the Rotterdam Gerät is, as the article(s) I read don't seem to do it clearly. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:15, 8 March 2014 (UTC)
I wonder if perhaps that single unit is famous enough to deserve it's own article? It certainly meets any definition of NOTE/GNG, but would the reader be better served by a section in the main H2S or a separate article entirely? Maury Markowitz (talk) 16:37, 8 March 2014 (UTC)
If it's notable and we can write 250+ words on it, I'd say make it a new article. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:34, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

Note: It seems that the creator doesn't understand, or does not want to understand, my request: please see User_talk:Maury_Markowitz#Template:Fact and User_talk:Piotrus/Archive_48#Please.2C_be_specific.21. Perhaps another reviewer can help him out? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:05, 20 March 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on March 7[edit]


Created by Nmillerche (talk). Self nominated at 01:19, 8 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Comment I'm preparing to review, but would like to suggest an alternate hook, as support for the current one is vague.— alf laylah wa laylah (talk) 18:53, 13 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg The article is long enough, free of close paraphrasing concerns per DD, new when nominated, cites sources according to rules, is neutral in tone, and so on. I'm worried about notability, though, since none of the sources seem to be secondary and independent. I can't find anything in the news about this organization other than a few letters to the editor. There's nothing in the DYK reviewing rules that forbids this, as far as I can see, though, so I'm not sure what to recommend. Perhaps a more experienced reviewer than I could take a look at things or offer advice?— alf laylah wa laylah (talk) 19:09, 13 March 2014 (UTC)
  • DYK rules require an article to meet all the core policies, including notability. I share your concerns about this article; it's sourced to blogs, podcasts, government websites, YouTube, and Penny4NASA.org, and I can't find any better sources online. I don't think it's notable enough right now to sustain a stand-alone article, although some of this information could be merged into Neil deGrasse Tyson. If User:Nmillerche disagrees, the easiest way to settle the matter would be to AfD the article and see if it survives. DoctorKubla (talk) 17:37, 23 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg Some of the information is stated in the Neil deGrasse Tyson article, but perhaps some of that could be expanded upon, provided due weight is applied. I do not disagree with your concerns. Sometimes the best way to gauge whether or not an article meets the required guidelines, especially if it has been in progress for quite a while, is to gain feedback from other editors. Nmillerche (talk) 18:52, 23 March 2014 (UTC)
  • I cannot judge the notability of this article very easily from the sources currently used. Several are to the campaign website itself, which is fine for information (per WP:SPS) but of no value for determining notability. Others are to Youtube, giving me concerns that these violate WP:LINKVIO. Others are to podcasts such as Science for the People. I don't really see anything that immediately strikes me as a reliable, independent source. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:20, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on March 9[edit]

Nick Dupree

Dupree in 2004

  • ... that Nick Dupree (pictured) created the campaign "Nick's Crusade", which resulted in a special program for up to 30 ventilator-dependent Alabamians to continue home care after they turn 21 years old?

Created by Newyorkadam (talk). Self nominated at 22:07, 9 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Looks good - sufficient length and recent enough. Hook is interesting and cited. We're good. Go Phightins! 02:04, 14 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg What's with citing his Wikipedia user page? For him editing Wikipedia, sure, but what about his disease? Wikipedia is not a reliable source for that. Nowhere close. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:19, 16 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Pinging Wizardman and Secret to weigh in on the matter. We discussed this; I cannot remember, however, whether we agreed that it should only be for the fact that the edits, or for other items. Personally, I have no problem with it being used for everything, except for perhaps this: Dupree has an unknown muscular disorder believed to be related to the metabolic cycle and Carnitine.[9]. Go Phightins! 00:34, 16 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Considering this is related to medical diagnosis, and central to the reason for his activism (and thus notability) something more solid is needed. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:00, 16 March 2014 (UTC)
Here's a different source regarding his medical diagnosis: http://www.businessweek.com/news/2012-10-31/invalid-new-yorker-s-pals-keep-life-saving-gear-running --Orlady (talk) 03:13, 16 March 2014 (UTC)
  • He himself wrote the content on his userpage, and evidence from other sources proves that he wrote the userpage. I believe WP:IAR applies. -Newyorkadam (talk) 02:28, 16 March 2014 (UTC)Newyorkadam
  • Orlady's source is much more reliable. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 03:38, 16 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg The article is weak; it only minimally qualifies for DYK. There's more content out there that can be used to craft a better article. Moreover, sources like this one lead me to think that he did not campaign for a special program for up to a certain limited number of people, as the article and hook currently imply. Rather, the combination of his advocacy and a lawsuit he filed led to a change in the state's rules that was expect to result in benefits for about 25 to 30 people. --Orlady (talk) 03:06, 16 March 2014 (UTC)
  • @Orlady: The hook does not imply that he campaigned for a limited number of people, it says that it resulted in it for a limited number of people. And I'll work on adding moar content. -Newyorkadam (talk) 03:39, 16 March 2014 (UTC)Newyorkadam
  • Newyorkadam: The hook says that his actions led to a "special program" for "up to 30 people". That wording implies that enrollment in the "program" was capped. You may not have intended the words to be read that way, but that's what they imply. In fact, it appears that about 25 to 30 people were estimated to be eligible for the program, and the number was not capped. --Orlady (talk) 04:51, 16 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Hadn't looked at it that way, but you're not wrong. How about "... for around 30 people ..." or "... for about 30 people (at the time) ... ". Go Phightins! 12:30, 16 March 2014 (UTC)

Frane Selak

  • ... that Frane Selak claims to have been almost drowned twice, blown up, set on fire, fallen into a gorge, as well as been sucked through an open airplane door, hit by a bus, and has won the lottery?

Created by Ktr101 (talk). Self nominated at 22:02, 9 March 2014 (UTC).

Symbol delete vote.svg As far as I can see from the article history, this is not new. Thanks, Matty.007 17:15, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

  • If you bothered to look at the article history, you would be able to see that there was a PROD tag added in 2009 and a magical page creation in 2014 that involves new text and nothing of the old one. Long story short, someone restored the page's history. Kevin Rutherford (talk) 21:51, 13 March 2014 (UTC)
    • Symbol possible vote.svg Please don't be rude, I looked at the history, as my statement above shows. What I saw was a PROD added, then staying there until your expansion of the page. In addition, you would do well to discuss the editor who added it what he wants doing for the tag to be removed. Actually, looking at the logs, when the article was re-created, it was restored. I think this qualifies as creation, given that you changed the content though. Thanks, Matty.007 18:01, 14 March 2014 (UTC)
      • I wasn't meaning to, but I figured it might have shown up as suspicious enough to check out. Regardless, let me know what you think about the whole possible falsification of these events part, as we could refactor it into the fact that he has become an urban legend based on what are likely tall tales. Kevin Rutherford (talk) 05:08, 15 March 2014 (UTC)
        • I think you should discuss the tag with the editor who added it, then I will review the article. Thanks, Matty.007 19:53, 21 March 2014 (UTC)

──────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────── Please rephrase the following:

  • jumped the tracks and plunged
  • because of a faulty fuel pump,and he escaped just before the fuel tank exploded (car accident 1): nothing is mentioned about a fuel pump malfunction in this accident. Thanks, Matty.007 18:21, 26 March 2014 (UTC)
    • The fuel pump was mentioned in the Cracked article. Kevin Rutherford (talk) 21:16, 30 March 2014 (UTC)
      • It doesn't say it was faulty, merely that it was about to explode. Matty.007 09:55, 31 March 2014 (UTC)
        • Fixed. Kevin Rutherford (talk) 11:10, 31 March 2014 (UTC)
          • No, I don't think it says about the fuel pump malfunctioning in any ref. Matty.007 11:15, 31 March 2014 (UTC)
            • Oh yeah, I fixed this yesterday, so it should be good now. Kevin Rutherford (talk) 23:10, 1 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Doing a bit of a review: the article is large enough, and has not detectable copyright problems. Given that it is new enough and referenced and no obvious non-neutrality problems, the article itself is OK. QPQ is good. However the alt1 hook is not in the article, as the article does not call him the world's luckiest man, even if references do. Otherwise I agree that Alt1 sounds much better. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 21:22, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

Purnendu Dastidar

Created by Soman (talk). Self nominated at 16:22, 9 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Review comments: Article appears to meet length, newness, inline citation, and hook requirements, however, all but one of the sources are not online and so must be taken AGF. You'll need to fix the link to Ayub Kahn as it links to a disambiguation page.
A problem with the article that you should be able to fix is that any reader unfamiliar with history may have a great deal of difficulty determining why Mr. Dastidar spent so long in prison, because the article does not clearly explain this man's legal problems — why he was jailed for so long is unclear — one can infer it given the political maelstrom of the times, but reader shouldn't have to infer it. For any reader familiar with history, the struggle for independence from colonial rule was obviously a strife-ridden, perilous time, and the likely reason for Dastidar's troubles, however, that fact is not spelled out in the article, thus the article gives Dastidar's experience no explicit context. Stating the context of his life and the charges on which he was held and/or convicted (rightly or wrongly), with accessible cites, would go a long away to making the article paint a better picture of the pathos of his experience, and give the hook a fish to catch. A lesser issue is the staccato nature of the sentences. Another editor should re-review once the main issue is addressed. Sctechlaw (talk) 09:33, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
The link to Ayub Khan is fixed now. However, I think the article outlines well the reasons for the imprisonment, "He was a member of the Chittagong Jugantar Party, and took part in guerrilla actions against British targets together with Surya Sen, Kalpana Dutta and Pritilata Waddedar.[4][5] In 1931, during his student years in Calcutta, he was imprisoned.[1] The British authorities charged him with being an associate of Surya Sen.", "Following the declaration of Martial Law in 1958, Dastidar was once again jailed.", "Along with other communist leaders, Dastidar was jailed at the time of the September 1965 Indo-Pakistan war. He was released in 1969, in connection with the ongoing mass protests which forced Ayub Khan to release all political prisoners." --Soman (talk) 18:24, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
I'm afraid I must disagree. Restating here what the article says does nothing to rectify what the article doesn't say: for (one) example, why was it considered an arrestable offense to be an associate of Surya Sen? This is the sort of thing that makes explicit that which is currently implicit — the difference makes all the difference. Consider that you have knowledge that a general reader may not have — you ask the reader to make inferences rather than giving the reader specific facts about why Dastidar (is it Dastidar or Dastigar?) spent so long imprisoned. The general reader needs explicit context and explicit explanations for extraordinary claims (that he spent a great deal of his life imprisoned). For every time he was arrested and imprisoned, you need to give a reason, with citation, and the reader also needs context: nowhere does the article mention that his life was lived against the backdrop of the national struggle for independence from colonial rule. Sctechlaw (talk) 19:18, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
But it is said that "took part in guerrilla actions against British targets together with Surya Sen, Kalpana Dutta and Pritilata Waddedar". It is quite clear from context wherein the legal problem would have risen. In the second case, it is said that the arrest followed after Martial Law (whereby the government could cook up any excuse to arrest him), and in the last case it was in connection with arrests of other communist leaders at the time of the war. All the instances have references. --Soman (talk) 22:00, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on March 13[edit]

Newark mayoral election, 2014

Created/expanded by Djflem (talk). Self nominated at 19:12, 16 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg First, you shouldn't take it for granted that the readers of the hook (who will see it at the main page) will know who is Cory Booker. Provide some context in it. Second, "will be the first" may sound noteworthy if that means the first of a series; but it is the only election that will be ever referred as the election after his resignation. And third, the second paragraph in the lead may be borderline with NPOV, because it reads as if wikipedia was endorsing those opinions. Cambalachero (talk) 03:24, 20 March 2014 (UTC)
    • Thank you for your comments. I see you have used them as your QPQ for Template:Did you know nominations/Guapas, but you have not assessed the above article on the criteria for a review. Please do that and if you would like to suggest an ALT please do that, too. Djflem (talk) 15:24, 22 March 2014 (UTC)
      • Neutrality and an appropiate hook are part of the criteria. I will complete the review when those points are fixed Cambalachero (talk) 20:39, 22 March 2014 (UTC)
The hook fact is accurate and cited with an inline citation in the article and is neutral and does not focus unduly on negative aspects of living people.Djflem (talk) 22:16, 22 March 2014 (UTC)
Please see Talk:Newark mayoral election, 2014 w/ regard to what "may be borderline".Djflem (talk) 06:59, 9 April 2014 (UTC)
Symbol redirect vote 4.svg I do not agree with the nomination as it currently stands. I request someone else to review it. Cambalachero (talk) 13:30, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

Henry Percy, 3rd Earl of Northumberland

  • Reviewed: Put here

Improved to Good Article status by Matty.007 (talk). Self nominated at 17:42, 13 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Promoted to GA on 13 March. Hook length is fine. I've added a link for attainted; you might want to add one for the Tower of London too. Google Books won't me see p. 770 of the source for the congratulations part of the hook, so I can't check that. I also can't see the Oxford Dictionary of National Biography for the attainted or Tower part. I can take the hook on good faith, or perhaps you can offer alternative sources. SlimVirgin (talk) 18:34, 14 March 2014 (UTC)
  • I've found a link to the ODNB that will let me read it. I can see where it says he was posthumously attainted. I can't see where it says his son was taken to the Tower. SlimVirgin (talk) 18:40, 14 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol delete vote.svg There's some word-for-word from the ODNB:
  • WP: On 30 May 1460 he was nominated to a wide-ranging commission of oyer and terminer ... to deal with all treasons and insurrections in Northumberland; a few days later, on 3 July, he was granted Salisbury's Yorkshire, Derbyshire, and Cambridgeshire lands on a twelve year lease.
  • ODBN: "On 30 May 1460 he was nominated to a wide-ranging commission of oyer and terminer to deal with all treasons and insurrections in Northumberland; a few days later he secured a twelve-year lease of Salisbury's estates in Yorkshire, Derbyshire, and Cambridgeshire."
  • I know it's hard to rephrase things like that, but that's too close; it needs a rewrite or in-text attribution, perhaps both. It would make sense to go through the article to check for anything else like that, then perhaps you can resubmit. SlimVirgin (talk) 18:55, 14 March 2014 (UTC)
  • OK, thanks for the review. Let me have a look at things: first, I have found a source. I will have a look at paraphrasing either today or in the next couple of days. Thanks, Matty.007 19:01, 14 March 2014 (UTC)
  • I have attempted to fix the wording, but there are some issues with referencing which I am attempting to resolve. Thanks, Matty.007 20:02, 21 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Just to note, discussion is ongoing at the article talk. Thanks, Matty.007 19:36, 28 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg No reply from the editor who raised the issues on the talk page, so good for another review I think. QPQ done: Annette Winkler. Thanks, Matty.007 11:29, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Now there is an issue with the number of the baron, is it 2 3 4 or 5? This needs to be sorted. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 07:07, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
  • 3, but I think his father (and son?) were also called Henry Percy, so a bit confusing. I am just sorting out some referencing issues at the minute. Thanks, Matty.007 11:28, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Review needed. Thanks, Matty.007 16:40, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on March 14[edit]

1949 Sun Bowl controversy, David Showell

Aerial view of Sun Bowl Stadium on the campus of the University of Texas at El Paso (UTEP)

Created by Jaironerao (talk), Alant1337 (talk), Kmgarb8 (talk), and Dodger67 (talk). Nominated by I am One of Many (talk) at 23:34, 14 March 2014 (UTC).

  • I don't think I should be credited for this, all I did was to review the AfC submission, approve it, do some minor cleanup and then I split out the David Showell biography. My contribution was minimal and basically just technicalities. Thanks Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 11:42, 15 March 2014 (UTC)
  • I thought about it and my view is that the article would not exist if you had not made that decision, so I thought you should be included as an author. I can remove you if you think that it is the right thing to do. --I am One of Many (talk) 15:14, 15 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Full review of both articles and the proposed hook needed. BlueMoonset (talk) 06:14, 6 April 2014 (UTC)


  • ... that triclocarban, an antimicrobial commonly used in soaps and plastic, is 100 to 1,000 times more effective in killing algae, crustaceans, and fish than it is in killing microbes?

5x expanded by Row131er (talk), Brichr1520 (talk), EDDendocrinelover1 (talk). Nominated by Row131er (talk) at 02:54, 14 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg Though the hook is very interesting, and is supported by a citation within the article and by the source material, there is a dispute template on the article that must be resolved before this article can be considered for a DYK. Coretheapple (talk) 17:02, 16 March 2014 (UTC)
  • This article appears to be the subject of educational assignment. In the recent past there have been problems with chemistry articles expanded as part of class projects in which much of the added content was inaccurate, unbalanced, confusing, or otherwise problematic. I'm not saying that is necessarily the case here, but I would recommend waiting until the assignment is over and then getting input from Wikipedia:WikiProject Chemistry or Wikipedia:WikiProject Chemicals participants before this page is featured on the main page. -- Ed (Edgar181) 19:35, 31 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Full review needed. The dispute template has been removed by nominator—see discussion on Talk:Triclocarban—so any reviewer should carefully check for neutrality; there doesn't seem to have been amelioration of the issues raised initially, and the template removal may well be premature. BlueMoonset (talk) 14:09, 5 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on March 15[edit]

Uprising in Montenegro

Created by Antidiskriminator (talk), Rosiestep (talk), Peacemaker67 (talk). Self nominated at 09:21, 17 March 2014 (UTC).

  • G'day, I'm afraid that this article has two significant issues for DYK. Firstly it doesn't meet NPOV, as the sources appear to have been cherrypicked to put the communists in a bad light, and in one case the source doesn't support the material. At least two very good examples of this jumped out at me on a quick read, both of which I have explained on the article talkpage. Secondly, the grammar and spelling is quite poor. Regards, Peacemaker67 (send... over) 10:54, 17 March 2014 (UTC)
  • The spelling and grammar has been addressed through a c/e, and my objection on those grounds is withdrawn. The source/text problem identified on my first look has also been addressed. But there are a number of NPOV issues remaining, which I am attempting to work through. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 21:17, 22 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Peacemaker67 did not prove his NPOV violation accusations. --Antidiskriminator (talk) 09:28, 24 March 2014 (UTC)
  • On the contrary, I have had to start addressing them, as Ad refused to accept there were any issues at all. One of those that needed addressing was that Ad used one local Tito-era source to place the "communist terror" in the lead and main body, but it was (and remains) the only source he has provided for that placement. His placement of that information in the lead and the chronology of the main body made it appear that the "communist terror" occurred before the Italian counter-offensive, not after it. Even on his reading of the academic consensus (highly dubious in my view), this was wrong. He claims it does not matter. This type of approach to reliable sourcing and NPOV is not appropriate for a DYK article, and I recommend against it being used until it can be fully addressed. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 09:43, 24 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Peacemaker67 failed to present a single source that directly support his opinion that communist terror in Montenegro began only after the Partisan defeat at Pljevlja in December 1941, nor there is anything particularly POV if the "communist terror" occurred before the Italian counter-offensive, not after it. --Antidiskriminator (talk) 11:20, 24 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Your failure to understand why an article should be accurate and NPOV is part of the problem with this article, and underlines the reason it really is not up-to-speed for DYK. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 11:24, 24 March 2014 (UTC)
The burden is on you and you failed to present a single source for your position. Additionally, it is incorrect that I "refused to accept there were any issues at all". I asked another editor to copy edit the article and corrected the mistake in page. --Antidiskriminator (talk) 11:32, 24 March 2014 (UTC)

────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────I encourage anyone reviewing this nomination to read the article talk page, and not take Ad's word for it. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 11:40, 24 March 2014 (UTC)

  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Full review needed by new reviewer, with close attention paid to neutrality, given the above review and talk page discussion. (Peacemaker67 is now included as a significant editor, so someone new is needed.) BlueMoonset (talk) 14:16, 5 April 2014 (UTC)

Balloonfest '86

Created by Ktr101 (talk), Varnent (talk). Nominated by Ktr101 (talk) at 14:09, 15 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Length and date checks out. But the hook is a bit problematic. The article itself doesn't use the term 'indirectly caused'. And as per the deaths, none of the refs establish that the balloons led to death, just that the balloons impeded a rescue operation that might have been able to save the two men. Also, not sure if 'viralforest' is WP:RS. --Soman (talk) 01:37, 17 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Varnent, could you address the last one? In terms of the hook, feel free to replace it, as I thought that would be the best way to address them. Kevin Rutherford (talk) 05:22, 17 March 2014 (UTC)
  • I do not feel strongly about that source, and will find some alternatives. Also, I think it is worth including the two deaths in some way. --Varnent (talk)(COI) 06:47, 17 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg It's been over three weeks since the above, and I don't see any alternative sourcing or action to deal with the issues raised. I've adjusted this template to reflect that the article has been moved to Balloonfest '86, and struck the original hook due to the objections noted above; a new ALT hook needs to be created in addition to work on the other issues for this to proceed. BlueMoonset (talk) 22:28, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Greg and I were in Berlin this weekend, and I brought this up to him in person on Saturday. @Varnent:, care to finish off this giant task? Kevin Rutherford (talk) 01:47, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg ALT1 ok. --Soman (talk) 07:24, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg ALT1 appears to be fundamentally inaccurate and a bit sensationalist. The boaters went out on Friday, and were reported missing by their families on Saturday after they failed to return. The Coast Guard began their search just after the start of the Balloonfest, at a point when it is highly likely that the boaters had long since drowned, especially given the theory of what happened to them as reported in the story. To refer to them as "drowning"—that is, still alive but about to die—at the point that the Coast Guard helicopter got to the area is not adequately backed up by the sources. I've struck it, and unless the hook points out that the boaters went missing the day before, or is more generic (interfered with a Coast Guard search), I don't think this fact is usable. (I should also mention that the use of the second source in the second Consequences paragraph, to support the hook fact that the Coast Guard couldn't distinguish between balloons and boaters upon arriving at the scene, is highly misleading: that source doesn't talk about the Coast Guard at all.) There is plenty in the article that has potential for an interesting hook, so I'm looking forward to seeing an ALT2. BlueMoonset (talk) 18:41, 20 April 2014 (UTC)
The idea that air crews rescue people during the 10 minutes or so that it requires to drown is ridiculous and I think perverse that that meaning is being assigned as unsourced. The core of the hook is that they could not find anything because the sea was full of balloons. I suggest that changing "drowned boaters" to "boaters who drowned" is the kind of change that is required. I object to the idea that hooks can be withdrawn without being replaced. Minor changes are sufficient here and I worry that we will soon have a scoring system for the meta reviewers to work out who has disrupted the process more. Can you please repair rather than demolish. The process of creating Wikipedia has errors. The only way to stop the errors is to stop the process. The way to assist the process is to repair and improve. Victuallers (talk) 19:09, 20 April 2014 (UTC)
Okay, let's try this again: ALT2: ... that the release of 1.5 million balloons as part of Balloonfest '86 made it impossible for United States Coast Guard aircrews to find two boaters who were reported missing? @Victuallers: Feel free to review this if you want, as I agree in the part that it is rather disruptive to just strike hooks without offering any sort of compromise. Kevin Rutherford (talk) 15:11, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on March 17[edit]

Samuel Wear

Created/expanded by Jwear21 (talk), GenQuest (talk). Nominated by GenQuest (talk) at 22:28, 20 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg New enough, big enough (4100+ characters), and inline citations on every paragraph, except lead paragraph. The claim in the lead paragraph, that Wear was a co-founder of the State of Franklin, is not found in the main article text, so it needs a citation. AGF offline sources. One external link was broken, but attached to a statement supported by another citation, so I commented it out. No plagiarism detected.
  • hook 1: Symbol possible vote.svg This claim does not have a citation attached to it.
  • comment: this is cited in the body of article, but not in the lead (per wp:lede). I can add one if necessary. GenQuest "Talk to Me" 01:55, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
  • alt 1: Symbol possible vote.svg This claim is in the lead paragraph, but no citation is given.
  • comment: this is cited in the body of article, but not in the lead (per wp:lede). I can add one if necessary. GenQuest "Talk to Me" 01:55, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
  • alt 2: Symbol question.svg The claim has a citation, but I do not see anything in it about holding the position for 32 years.
  • comment: Withdrawn due to loss of the reference link (now a {{dead link}}); see the new, re-worded ALT3. GenQuest "Talk to Me" 01:55, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
Cmprince (talk) 03:05, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

I Got U

  • ... that Annie Mac replayed Duke Dumont's "I Got U" halfway through because she couldn't get enough of it?

Created by Launchballer (talk). Self nominated at 15:03, 17 March 2014 (UTC).

  • * (alt1)... that half way through playing Duke Dumont's "I Got U", DJ Annie Mac restarted the song because she couldn't get enough of it?
I found the first hook tricky to understand - this may be better Victuallers (talk) 15:09, 22 March 2014 (UTC)
Fine by me.--Launchballer 09:44, 3 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Full review needed. BlueMoonset (talk) 06:24, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
    • Symbol confirmed.svg Date and length fine. I was initially unsure of Earmilk as an RS but since it is used on other pages, I am satisfied that it is. Alt1 is better. QPQ not needed as creator only has 1 credit. Alt1 Good to go. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 10:21, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
Symbol question.svg No, Launchballer has well in excess of 30 DYKs, so a QPQ is definitely required. SagaciousPhil - Chat 10:55, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
Someone better fix the QPQ check tool then. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 15:52, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
As that tool is getting more and more reliable a manual check of archives is in order. I have 37 credits. My QPQ for this is Yes check.svg done.--Launchballer 19:45, 18 April 2014 (UTC)

Symbol question.svg - Launchballer you can't yet claim QPQ for Template:Did you know nominations/List of Olympians and Paralympians from Peel. First, you did not sign to indicate which review is yours. Second, your review (I'm assuming it's yours) does not include a full DYK check. What about sourcing? And who is it that proposed ALT4? Which hooks have you checked? And which hook/s are you okaying? A more thorough job is needed there. EagerToddler39 (talk) 03:28, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on March 18[edit]

SpaceX reusable launch system development program

  • ... that SpaceX is working on bringing back orbital rockets to the launchpad and landing them on landing legs?
  • ALT1:... that SpaceX is working on bringing back orbital rocket stages to the launchpad and landing them on landing legs – just like Buck Rogers thought they should back in the 1950s?
  • ALT2:(if soon after a recent test flight [see below for dates, etc.] ): ... that SpaceX just completed a (hopefully) successful test flight bringing a 43-meter (141 ft) tall orbital rocket stage moving at Mach 10 down through the atmosphere for a simulated landing over the ocean?
  • Comment: This DYK would be best if it ran a few days after a SpaceX flight test where a first stage decelleration from Mach 10 and controlled-descent test through the atmosphere over the ocean is done. The first such test occurred in Sept. 2013; the next one is scheduled for 30 March 2014 or 2 April 2014 (launches can be delayed due to weather and various other reasons; the flight test of the new booster return technology can only be tested after the main launch—paid for by a customer with big bucks, $60 to $120 million for the primary payload to orbit—gets off the ground). There will be others throughout this year. I (User:N2e) would be happy to answer any questions. Just ping me on my Talk page.

Improved to Good Article status by N2e (talk). Self nominated at 03:03, 24 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Comment: added comment on 28 March 2014: there was a fire in one of the radar facilities of the USAF Eastern Range on about 26 March, so all orbital launches from Cape Canaveral and/or Kennedy Space Center are on hold for now: the SpaceX CRS-3 flight, on which the next controlled-descent flight test was to occur following the first-stage ascent, is now postponed and won't happen on 30 March; new date has not been rescheduled. I will try to get back here and update when the launch is rescheduled. N2e (talk) 11:25, 28 March 2014 (UTC)
The radar is fixed; launch is rescheduled for "no earlier than" 14 April, and that depends on weather, plus some other US national security launches going off successfully before the range is even available to SpaceX. N2e (talk) 04:04, 9 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Comment: I switched the main and the ALT1 hooks. This is my first nomination for DYK and I didn't know what I was doing. So I wrote an interesting hook, and it is one that is associated with vertical landing rockets (and is sourced): Buck Rogers vertical landing rocket, but the article doesn't currently have a source to the Buck Rogers locution in the GA version of the article. It would be possible to source this in the article, since one of the two sources at the Buck Rogers vertical landing rocket page is to use of the term about SpaceX' reusable rocket development program, but I am quite uncertain if it is okay to go in and change the GA article with this info now, after it has been nominated for DYK. In short, I'm a bit confused on the process, and so want to be careful not to break a bunch of rules. N2e (talk) 21:11, 29 March 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on March 19[edit]

Natalia Poklonskaya

Natalia Poklonskaya

Created/expanded by Moscow Connection (talk), Dainomite (talk), Aldnonymous (talk), Starship.paint (talk), Tktru (talk), Benlisquare (talk), Adelgado1313 (talk), RonaldDuncan (talk), Ging287 (talk). Nominated by Moscow Connection (talk) at 20:11, 23 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Comment - regarding content: 1) Definitely don't link to Internet meme. Link to List of Internet phenomena. 2) I don't like "sensation" either, perhaps a rephrase is needed. 3) It's sourced that it's not only in Japan, but also China. I'm looking for a source that says "worldwide". starship.paint (talk | ctrb) 09:10, 24 March 2014 (UTC)
  • I've made a few amendments. "Japan" will do for now, unless you can find another source for it. Currently the sources we have say Japan. --benlisquareTCE 09:19, 24 March 2014 (UTC)
  • There are sources for China I previously added. See references 13 abd 15, IBT and Guangming Online. starship.paint (talk | ctrb) 09:29, 24 March 2014 (UTC)
  • If you can't find a ref, we could just make the hook say "became an Internet phenomenon in Japan and China". We will need to make do with what is available. --benlisquareTCE 09:40, 24 March 2014 (UTC)
Thank you for the amendments! --Moscow Connection (talk) 12:34, 24 March 2014 (UTC)
Eh, since you thanked me for the amendments, I am going to make the China amendment as well. starship.paint (talk | ctrb) 05:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC)
I think "China" makes it longer and harder to read. Also, look at the views. She's not that viral in China. --Moscow Connection (talk) 05:38, 27 March 2014 (UTC)
Views? What do you mean? --benlisquareTCE 05:40, 27 March 2014 (UTC)
English (59,514 on 24th), Russian (just look, 72,998 yesterday), Japanese (10,459 on 25th), Chinese (1,662 yesterday), Spanish (7,473 on 25th). --Moscow Connection (talk) 05:46, 27 March 2014 (UTC)
If you're talking about the Chinese Wikipedia, Chinese people don't use it, only Taiwanese and Hongkongers do. Wikipedia was blocked by the Chinese government for many years, and Chinese people don't use Wikipedia nowadays, the large majority use Baidu Baike. It's also a nationalism thing, think of how Russians use Vkontakte instead of Facebook - it's a national pride thing in China to prefer domestic sites over foreign ones, hence why Tudou and Youku have more Chinese users than YouTube.

Natalia is trending on Chinese social networks such as Tencent QQ and Sina Weibo, and plenty of the art on Pixiv is created by Chinese artists (I've had to communicate in Chinese for many of my OTRS attempts). --benlisquareTCE 05:59, 27 March 2014 (UTC)

Moscow Connection, you can play the page view card, but I can play the reference 13, 14 and 15 card? But anyway, how about my new comment at the bottom of the DYK. starship.paint (talk | ctrb) 06:10, 27 March 2014 (UTC)
Benlisquare, okay. :) --Moscow Connection (talk) 06:17, 27 March 2014 (UTC)

Natalia Poklonskaya

  • As of 2014-03-25 20:09 (UTC+11), the following images have officially been OTRS verified: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6. --benlisquareTCE 09:12, 25 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Let's maybe upload a different version of it, a version cropped to a square. (A special version to use for the DYK, under a different file name, cause now it is too small as a thumbnail.) --Moscow Connection (talk) 17:25, 25 March 2014 (UTC)
  • OK. There's plenty of whitespace that can be removed from the sides. --benlisquareTCE 21:32, 25 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Thank you! (That was clever, I would never guessed to upload it like this.) --Moscow Connection (talk) 15:22, 26 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Maybe "moe fan art" instead of "moe-style fan art"? (Easier to read.)
    By the way, can someone maybe come up with a crazy play on words for the hook? The crazier it is, the more views the article will get. The current one is okay (the words "Prosecutor of Crimea" and "Internet phenomenon" draw attention), but still a bit boring. Now we only have one version, we should come up with something completely different to choose from. --Moscow Connection (talk) 15:06, 25 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Putting into use of this citation, how does this sound?

    ALT 2: ... that the Prosecutor of Crimea, Natalia Poklonskaya, relies on her daughter to keep track of anime-style fan art of her (example pictured) on the internet?

    ...or something along those lines. "Anime" and "moe" can be interchangable, I picked anime in this case because our article on moe isn't really that great or easy for readers to understand. --benlisquareTCE 19:20, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

  • I don't like ALT2... I think the current one is better cause "internet phenomenon" looks much more interesting. And she doesn't say in the source what ALT2 says. She actually says that she personally doesn't have time to care about what's happening cause she comes home late and doesn't have time at all. So it's like she knows but she doesn't even say she actually looks at anything. --Moscow Connection (talk) 19:37, 26 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Comment - maybe change to worldwide instead of Japan and China? See new sources describing as... Gulf News: has become a sensation around the world. IBT: Her popularity appears to be growing in the West too. Maybe change the text of the DYK to "has become a worldwide Internet phenomenon"? starship.paint (talk | ctrb) 05:56, 27 March 2014 (UTC)
    "Worldwide" looks good. --Moscow Connection (talk) 06:17, 27 March 2014 (UTC)
    • Yeah, that's probably for the best. If we do keep Japan/China in there maybe something along the lines of "originated in..." but yeah. "worldwide" sounds good to me. —  dainomite   09:19, 27 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Hey guys, I've thought of something. April 1 is coming up soon, right? And DYK on Wikipedia is usually silly on April 1, right? Why not make a silly and awkward pun? Something like ALT3: ... that the prose-cute-or of the Republic of Crimea, Natalia Poklonskaya, annexed the hearts of countless Japanese internet users, in defiance of the threat of international sanctions? --benlisquareTCE 14:17, 27 March 2014 (UTC)
    I like it very much. There isn't much time left until April 1, but it doesn't have to be April 1. If we go with this hook, we should add a couple of sourced statements about Japanese people falling in love with her and about a threat of sanctions. --Moscow Connection (talk) 22:09, 27 March 2014 (UTC)
    I beg you not to go for April 1 on this. There are just so many waiting and this seems lovely enough to go at any time. PanydThe muffin is not subtle 11:43, 28 March 2014 (UTC)
    Yes, thank you! You are right, it was a bad idea to go for April 1. Too much competition, it would be published wihout a picture and go unnoticed. (Also, I think an April 1 hook must be misleading, and this one isn't.) --Moscow Connection (talk) 22:10, 28 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Oppose. This is a BLP about a female public official in a geopolitically sensitive area, with a majority of the article currently devoted to anime focused on this woman's physical appearance. Mainpaging the article in its current state and with the current hook is not in the best interest of the reputation of the project. Newyorkbrad (talk) 02:56, 30 March 2014 (UTC)
Is this man an authoritarian ruler? Wikipedia seems to say so. He is a living person, but we follow the word of third-party sources.
This scenery is beautiful, however it does not have any sexual implications. The abstract concept of beauty can refer to admiration of aesthetic or non-aesthetic qualities, and is not concretely affixed on human sexuality.
  • Yes, it is a BLP, but does that mean we should censor things that are well-covered in third-party reliable sources simply because some might find it objectable? On Wikipedia, we call many people dictators, even though they might personally object to such statements. We continue to call these people dictators, because the majority of third-party reliable sources refer to them as so.

    Furthermore, nowhere in the article does it mention anything about physical appearance. Quote: "She soon caught attention on the Internet because of her particular attractiveness amongst Japanese internet users", with a piped link to kawaii. She is adorned by people because of her mannerisms, behaviour, facial expressions and patterns of speech, in addition to her strong and important political position and ability to firmly speak her opinion, which provide a sense of moe and beauty in the eyes of these people. Whilst the article uses the word "beauty" (the original Japanese word is "美人すぎ"), this term is open, vague and flexible - the countryside of Tibet is beautiful, however I am not sexually attracted to grass fields, snow peaks and rock cliffs. You're making assumptions on things that aren't implicated in the article. --benlisquareTCE 04:27, 30 March 2014 (UTC)

It's pretty clear to me that the biography section currently takes up the majority of the article, not the Internet popularity section. Why does gender or "geopolitically sensitive area" matter? I don't understand. starship.paint (talk | ctrb) 06:36, 1 April 2014 (UTC)
Now that you mention it, I don't understand this "geopolitically sensitive area" reasoning here as well. Recently 1954 transfer of Crimea was passed through DYK and displayed on the front page, despite the current shenanigans in Crimea. In my opinion, I don't believe that these arguments are grounded in policy, logic or reason. --benlisquareTCE 09:04, 1 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Comment - I've never had any experience with DYK, so can I check how does this DYK process work exactly? We've had a lot of discussion on how to improve content, and one oppose vote. How far are we from getting this passed as a DYK? I say this because I might not have much time to contribute to this article any longer. There's a ban on my future edits on BLPs being discussed. starship.paint (talk | ctrb) 04:04, 3 April 2014 (UTC)
    We need a reviewer, someone will eventually come. The reviewer will read the article and check it against the requirements. The requirements we must remember when editing the article now are:
    1. The article must have minimum of one citation per paragraph, possibly excluding the introduction, plot summaries, and paragraphs which summarize information that's cited elsewhere.
    2. The hook fact(s) must be stated in the article, and must be immediately followed by an inline citation to a reliable source.
    Read all the rules here: Wikipedia:Did you know/Reviewing guide.
    There's nothing to worry about. The vote doesn't really matter as long as the article is okay. But I would still make the internet popularity section more encyclopedic and the gallery less conspicuous. --Moscow Connection (talk) 04:34, 3 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Full review needed. The bulk of the above discussion is by the creators; there are BLP concerns expressed, so the reviewer should keep that in mind, along with the usual length, newness, sourcing, neutrality, close paraphrasing, hook requirements, and other DYK review points. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:48, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
    • Symbol confirmed.svg for ALT1. Length, date and hook checks out. Image is on Commons. Bloomberg, definitely RS, is the main source for the hook and checks out well. Not sure what the BLP issue would be, there is nothing derogatory in ALT1. --Soman (talk) 18:32, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
      • Just a note: I swapped out the picture that was originally submitted for another one that's also in the gallery. There is some rumbling in the Commons community about whether the fan art that is directly based off of the press conference is considered derivative work, and therefore, non-free. I replaced the image that was there, since it copied the pose and microphone setup of the press confrence, with one that still captured the 'press conference-ness', but wasn't based off of the video itself. TLDR: I swapped the image out in case Commons zaps the one that was there before. Sven Manguard Wha? 20:37, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
        • I've swapped the image back cause we chose this one as the best. I think your reasoning is incorrect. --Moscow Connection (talk) 10:57, 8 April 2014 (UTC)
          • Symbol question.svg Since the image swapped back has not been approved, I'm putting a temporary hold on this until Sven Manguard can comment. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:20, 8 April 2014 (UTC)
            • I don't see any problem with the image. It has not been tageed for deletion at Commons. --Soman (talk) 18:28, 8 April 2014 (UTC)
              • BlueMoonset - The relevant discussion is at Commons:Categories for discussion/2014/04/Category:Natalia Poklonskaya, and until that is resolved, I won't personally push any image substantially similar to the press conference into a prep area (other people can if they want to), becuase I am concerned that the image might end up getting zapped. Sven Manguard Wha? 04:15, 9 April 2014 (UTC)
                • It won't get zapped that fast, even though there is discussion ongoing (and it's disputed as to whether they are derivatives, but let's not go that deep in right now). Discussions on Commons seem to happen very slowly, and Categories for Discussion on Commons take damn forever, I started this CfD at Commons on 27 September 2013, and it still hasn't closed; hence, I don't see the likelihood of anything being done for the duration where the DYK is taking place. That said, what is being discussed on Commons are allegations, and are not actually proven yet, so it would be unfair to assume that they are correct.

                  If we really do need to use a different image, then so be it. We've had previous community discussion on the talk page regarding which one everyone found preferable, though. --benlisquareTCE 06:28, 9 April 2014 (UTC)

                • It's been days, are we really having a deadlock over an image? The current CfD discussion on Commons is already leaning towards the idea that nothing is going to happen to the commonscat as a whole. That said, for the sake of getting this DYK nom out of limbo, if we really need to change an image at the last minute, File:Natalia Poklonskaya by Saramoka.jpg, File:Natalia Poklonskaya by As109.jpg, File:Natalia Poklonskaya by Haiashi.jpg, File:Natalia Poklonskaya by Kriss Sison.png and File:Natalia Poklonskaya by phanc002.jpg are unaffected by the discussion. That said, worrying over the present DYK image isn't necessary, and we shouldn't leave this nom hanging like this. --benlisquareTCE 13:26, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
                • Yeah, this is really taking a bit too long. Could some other reviewers help? Thank you! starship.paint "YES!" 10:05, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

Oppose. This is a BLP about a female public official in a geopolitically sensitive area, with a majority of the article currently devoted to anime focused on this woman's physical appearance. Mainpaging the article in its current state and with the current hook is not in the best interest of the reputation of the project. Newyorkbrad (talk) 02:56, 30 March 2014 (UTC)

  • The TOC shows the article's emphasis:
  • Biography
  • Internet popularity
  • References
  • External links
  1. ^ 2014-03-27, Прокурора Крыма Поклонскую повысили в звании до старшего советника юстиции, Росбалт.RU

Is this a higher position (a promotion) than that of Prosecutor General of the Republic of Crimea? What is the meaning of this. The lead doesn't even mention the fanart stuff, yet roughly half of the article (including the many fanart images) focuses on this issue.

  • The 4 citations to a BBC article[5] are very questionable as a reliable source for a BLP. The article written by "as found by BBC Monitoring" and is sourced to a youtube video in Russian with no translation,[6] and to an article in RocketNews called "Japanese netizens put reality on hold for a moment, fall in love with new attorney general of Crimea" containing attractive pictures of Poklonskaya gathered from personal websites.[7]

Parabolooidal (talk) 18:11, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

  • In regards to the youtube inline cite, if I recall correctly the person who added it wrote in the edit summary that the purpose of the cite was only to cite the date the video was uploaded, and nothing else.

    "Senior Counsellor of Justice" refers to her rank, "Prosecutor" refers to her occupational position. Rank and position are not the same thing, so please don't get them confused. A tank commander can also be a sergeant, but a sergeant is not necessarily a tank commander.

    Now, when you refer to Newyorkbrad's comment, I don't find it particularly convincing, because it is not grounded in Wikipedia policy, and is largely based on subjective personal feelings and "I don't like it" sentiments. If he would like to clarify his comments, he is more than welcome to do so, but at this stage I don't believe that his words are to be taken much heed to. The statement that the article is about a female BLP in a contentious geographic region doesn't hold much ground policy wise (would it be any different if she was a man?), and it's nothing strange to have some coverage over internet phenomenon that's widely reported on. This article definitely can be expanded so that more biographical information is included (if you take a look at the Russian Wikipedia article, there is much more content).

    You mention that there are no images of her real life appearance, however this is definitely beyond our control: There have been numerous discussions regarding a non-free fair use image of her in real life, and such an image that was previously uploaded has since been deleted. It's an unfortunate case that there is no free-license photographic imagery of her available, however this is a sad truth that we can't really solve at this stage. Artists who draw cartoons of her are more willing to release their works under free licenses than media photographers working for Russian agencies (apparently on the Russian Wikipedia, people have attempted to contact various media agencies, but these attempts have yet to bear any results), most likely because these photographers rely on such photographs to make money. Good faith donations are more likely to occur when people are creating works voluntarily, as opposed to it being part of their daily employment, and I don't blame them for that. --benlisquareTCE 12:27, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

The lack of free-license photographic imagery of her is not an excuse to include a gallery of five cartoon kawaii images of her plus a link to some 20 more. Also you chose the most kawaii of the images, instead of this one on the right.
Natalia Poklonskaya by drsmolev (42294411).png

Newyorkbrad is the senior member of WP:ArbCom, a member for some five years or so, has had input and contributed to existing policy guidelines, so I find it hard to take your word that his comments are not based on policy. Also, ArbCom has made binding decision on BLPs and WMF has made policy regarding what is appropriate content for BLPs.
Another editor has commented on the article talk page: "The citations are clearly not enough for WP:BLP, and the obvious WP:BLP1E violation and therefore lack of WP:FUTUREPROOF has been pointed out."
Have you complied with Wikipedia:Biographies of living persons?
Your explanation about Tank commander which redirects to Tank and sergeant do nothing to clarify what her job actually is or that she is notable per General notability guideline and Wikipedia:Notability (people).
Remember, you are trying to get a controversial article on a very recent event to DYK so that it will appear on Wikipedia's Main page. Do you think it follows WP:BLP1E?

Parabolooidal (talk) 14:07, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

I'm quite certain that the status of a user on Wikipedia has nothing to do with the validity or merit of their arguments. Being a member of ArbCom doesn't make his opinion any higher than anyone else's, and we don't take Jimbo's word as holy gospel either. If he wants to convince me, he is going to have to clarify his position based on Wikipedia policy, because his current position is left rather vague and unfulfilling. In fact, one might even say that his comment is rather sexist, as he indirectly implies that men cannot be idolised or made into popular cultural symbols. In my original response to his claims, I have referred to Wikipedia policy, phrase definitions and logical reasoning in my arguments. On the other hand, he has only mentioned his feelings, and provided his opinion on what he believes to be the best interests of the project. So in other words, he just doesn't like it. What is in the best interests of the project is subjective, and varies from person to person.

You asked a question about what "Senior Counsellor of Justice" means, and I explained it to you, I don't understand why you need to bite back for it like that. You originally mentioned nothing about notability, and made a statement which seemed to confuse what a rank was. When you say that I have failed to address WP:GNG when explaining what her rank is, this is known as moving the goalposts, as this was not in your original question. As for what her job is, her job is not her rank; I've explained this clearly, and if you still don't understand, then the problem is not on my side. Furthermore, tank commander redirects to a very useful section which I actually intended for you to read, it doesn't just "redirect to Tank".

I personally can't make the call for WP:BLP1E, but based on an earlier AfD, it appears that community consensus is leaning towards the article meeting notability requirements at least. Finally, I'm pretty sure the choice of images is the least of concerns at the moment; these images can be changed at any time, and the current selection is purely arbitrary. Let's keep the primary focus on the reliability of sources, which is more pressing, and concern ourselves with the triviality of images after that is done. The present state of the article can be fixed and our priority at the moment is sourcing, let's not lose our focus here. --benlisquareTCE 14:30, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

  • Do you think it would be perfectly fine if there were a Commons category called [[Category:Barack Obama]] with subcategories [[Category:Presidents of the United States]] and [[Category:People of the United States]] and [[Category:1961 births]] etc. that was filled exclusively with kawaii type anime images showing how "cute" Barack Obama is? Would such images be OK for a gallery of images in the BLP of Barack Obama?
    See: Wikipedia:File copyright tags/Non-free. Which tag would justify illustrating Barack Obama solely with "cute" cartoon images of him?
    Is it that the situation in the Republic of Crimea is not serious, and that its current officials are not serious people worthy of serious coverage? And that cartoons are the best wikipedia can do for this article, if Natalia Poklonskaya is notable enough to have an article per Wikipedia:Notability (people) and the article is not a WP:BLP1E violation?

Parabolooidal (talk) 22:59, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

  • I've already explained to you my position regarding BLP1E, stop drilling it in like a broken record. If you believe that this fails BLP1E, nominate it for AfD, it's as simple as that. Your Barack Obama example is also moot, as there is already Commons consensus to move the category, and artworks of Obama are hardly covered in mainstream media. I also have no idea why you're linking to Wikipedia:File copyright tags/Non-free, as it has already been explained to you that we have earlier had problems with using non-free photographic imagery of Natalia. Consider reading WP:NFCC - we are not free to use any non-free image whenever we want, because we "feel like it". Wikipedia is a free encyclopedia, free as in freedom and not free beer, which is why WP:NFCC exists - if you don't like NFCC, don't complain to me, complain at WP:Village pump. Furthermore, none of this Commons business has anything to do with this current DYK nom on enwiki; if you want to discuss this, do it on the article talk page, and not here. There is no clause within the DYK rules regarding the titles of Commons categories, and you're essentially forum sliding here and distracting away from the main topic: address the DYK, and nothing else. Also consider reading Commons:Project scope/Neutral point of view, which states, very clearly: "Commons is not Wikipedia". --benlisquareTCE 07:31, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on March 20[edit]

Malcolm (Macbeth)

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nominated at 07:32, 21 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg New enough and long enough. Hook is fine, and whilst I know the hook accurately reflects the events in the play, there is no reference to support it. There are not enough references generally - even some links to the relevant sections of a free online version of the text would help. Edwardx (talk) 00:14, 25 March 2014 (UTC)
  • You have added a free online version of the play as your second External link (by the way, the first links returns a 404 error). Alas, this version does not include line numbers. DYK rule 3b is clear - "The hook fact must be cited in the article with an inline citation to a reliable source". Edwardx (talk) 23:38, 25 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg Sorry Tony - IMO this article extends the scope of DYK. The article offers only one source apart from the play itself. This is like an article about a film where the only content is sourced plot summary. In this case its not even a complete plot, its just the bits where one character appears. More 3rd party analysis required to supply sources. IMO. thanks Victuallers (talk) 18:54, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg From what I see the sources also include the notes written by three other sources, so there is more than 1 primary source + 1 other. So I will say sourcing overall is OK. QPQ is OK. confirming new and long enough. Also plagiarism check can only find the quotes, which are OK. However the last paragraph has no inline citations. A second issue with the hook is that this article does not state that Macbeth killed Duncan. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 10:43, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on March 21[edit]

José María Pinedo

Colonel José María Pinedo

  • Reviewed: Hilda Rix Nicholas, Chain boat .

Created by Wee Curry Monster (talk), DagosNavy (talk). Nominated by Wee Curry Monster (talk) at 22:08, 21 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg nice article - where does it say he was "best known"? Victuallers (talk) 19:08, 15 April 2014 (UTC) Maybe
I see that hook fact is well sourced including this ref in the article. Article has enough refs. Image is not at commons and should not be used. Age is OK. Is someone can improve the hook quickly then we can move this one along. Victuallers (talk) 19:22, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
Any particular reaspon for changing the hook, personally I'd prefer to keep it as is. In addition, I prefer to keep the images I upload local. After having numerous GFDL images deleted for various reasons I am not willing to risk having perfectly good images removed from articles. WCMemail 21:09, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
The first hook includes numerous facts including "best known" which is unreferenced. (see comment above). I'm happy to hear your views on images, however I do not believe we use local images on the main page - the image used had no source (I have added one). If you want to use the first hook then can you make sure that is is easily clear where each aspect of the hook is sourced - although I do not believe that users are more like to click because he served at other places before the Falklands. Happy for you to put a new reviewer required symbol if you would prefer another view. Victuallers (talk) 10:18, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
OK I've changed the hook slightly, removing the phrase you object to. The suggestion that only the Falklands are relevant is somewhat Anglocentric, South American history is of interest to other readers. Could you confirm whether the use of Commons images is your preference please as I can't find anything in policy that indicates this is a requirement. As I said I've lost confidence in putting my images on Commons as I've seen too many deleted, hence, I now (like many others) request they're kept local. WCMemail 08:42, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
You may be right and lots of people are going to click because of his involvement in the War of Independence etc ... in which case "If you want to use the first hook then can you make sure that is is easily clear where each aspect of the hook is sourced ". I cannot see which ref is meant to indicate his involvement in the war of independance and I have not looked at the other bits of your hook. I'm not used to using images from local storage as you are - can you supply some support for your view? As the person who supplied the missing sourcing for the image it is not appropriate that I approve it. I know this is complex but it is not a simple hook. Victuallers (talk) 09:57, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
Actually you didn't supply the "missing" source of the original image, it was from Commons as I originally stated and I've corrected the link. You googled and guessed it seems. How do I flag this for another reviewer please, every aspect is sourced in the article. WCMemail 16:58, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Request a different reviewer please, every aspect of the hook is sourced in the article. I have asked politely where in policy images have to be on commons and I can't find it anywhere, hence, I would like a separate opinion. Although Victuallers states above he provided the source of the image, he did not, the original image is on Commons where I found it. I modified it to a head and shoulders shot to remove a blog's watermark. WCMemail 17:07, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

Good luck with the article. Commons is not a source. this is Victuallers (talk) 20:03, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
No, again the image on Commons was drawn to my attention. I've been open about where I got it from, it certainly wasn't from a blog I'd never read. So at this point I would appreciate you clarifying that comment. WCMemail 11:46, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Victuallers (talk) 17:21, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on March 22[edit]

The Origins of Political Order

5x expanded by DanielDemaret (talk). Self nominated at 11:39, 27 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg Length OK, hook potentially interesting and referenced, expansion criteria met. I would suggest changing the wording to "wrote a" rather than "has written a", shorter and in the active voice. From a style point of view, each review does not need it's own section and you should address that. ► Philg88 ◄ talk 14:52, 28 March 2014 (UTC)
I have now, by your kind suggestion 1) changed Hook to "wrote". 2) removed subsections and also 3) attempted to review another DYK. Star Lord - 星王 (talk) 15:11, 28 March 2014 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg Minor issues fixed up. Good to go. ► Philg88 ◄ talk 07:01, 29 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg In addition to the use of absolutely huge blockquotes, this article includes some material taken near-verbatim from sources that is not quoted - for example, "it is refreshing to find a scholar prepared to tackle big questions in this way", or "Although the future trajectory of China is a question lurking in the background, Fukuyama is concerned mainly with the sense of political stasis haunting many liberal democracies". Nikkimaria (talk) 14:38, 1 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Thank you Nikkimaria. I have revised the Reception section and tried to eliminate near-verbatims and huge block-quote, mostly by shortening them. Star Lord - 星王 (talk) 16:18, 1 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Thanks for your work so far, DanielDemaret (and when a quote has been shortened to less than about 40 words, it can be presented inline rather than blockquoted). However, while Reception had the greatest number of long quotes, I don't believe it is the only section with issues of unquoted near-verbatim material - compare for example "This enmeshed states in networks of accountability to non-state actors, in this case to the clergy and to the pope, who historically frequently objected to wars, similarly to what had happened in India, but it also left states strong enough to function" to "This enmeshed states in networks of accountability to non-state actors, just as had happened in India, but it also left states strong enough to function" from here. Nikkimaria (talk) 02:59, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Thank you Nikkimaria. I have now worked on the text before "reception", chasing copied texts, and improved references. Do you think I should change quotes with fewer than 40 words to inline? Star Lord - 星王 (talk) 13:51, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
  • "creating stable, peaceful, prosperous, inclusive, and honest societies" and "seemed genuinely surprised when the Iraqi state itself collapsed in an orgy of looting and civil conflict" are further examples of non-quoted copying; at this point, it would probably be worthwhile for you to go through the article line by line to check for further issues. Nikkimaria (talk) 01:50, 3 April 2014 (UTC)

Leftist errors

Created by Antidiskriminator (talk). Self nominated at 17:50, 26 March 2014 (UTC).

  • There are serious problems with this article, including its title and sourcing, as well as with the way the info there has been summarised into the line deployed above about the "policy" and its name. The self-nominator here – who is the very recent creator of, and so far the only substantive contributor to, the page – is well aware of those issues. Please review the talk page before even thinking about approving this one for the front page. N-HH (talk) 09:50, 27 March 2014 (UTC)

The Annihilation of Caste

Created by Gfosankar (talk). Self nominated at 15:01, 23 March 2014 (UTC).

  • I think the hook is too vague. What was the subject of his speech? The organisers of which event? Mindmatrix 20:45, 23 March 2014 (UTC)
  • I've just made an additional edit to fix the DYKmake template, but there's still something wrong with the hook—Gfosankar, please don't edit hooks in place, but add ALT hooks if you wish to make new versions—and it needs further revising. I'd actually recommend fitting the title of the book, which is very strong, in the hook, rather than obscuring the link. Perhaps something like:
I would like to suggest that the article be given a copyedit. —BlueMoonset (talk) 16:09, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg It's been nearly two weeks without action, so I'm going to upgrade my suggestion to a requirement: given the current state of the article's prose, I do not believe it can be considered for the main page. If a copyedit is done, then I'm happy to call for a full DYK review, but not until then. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:01, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
  • I did some copy edits. --Gfosankar (talk) 08:34, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

List of All India Forward Bloc candidates in the Indian general election, 2014, Pancham Lal

Created by Soman (talk). Self nominated at 22:08, 22 March 2014 (UTC).

Articles created/expanded on March 24[edit]

DNA base flipping

Moved to mainspace by Magladem96 (talk), Amontei2 (talk). Nominated by Graeme Bartlett (talk) at 11:03, 31 March 2014 (UTC).

  • The article
  • New? Symbol delete vote.svg This was moved to mainspace 22 days ago.
  • Long enough? Symbol confirmed.svg
  • Appropriate citations? Symbol delete vote.svg Both of the sentences (yes, there are two) where the fact is mentioned aren't cited.
  • Dispute templates? Symbol delete vote.svg
  • Plagiarism? Symbol delete vote.svg
  • Neutral? Symbol confirmed.svg
  • The hook
  • Properly formatted? Symbol confirmed.svg
  • Short enough? Symbol confirmed.svg
  • Neutral? Symbol confirmed.svg
  • "Hooky"? Symbol delete vote.svg This hook has the form "... that X is Y?".
  • Final verdict: Symbol possible vote.svg The article was moved to mainspace more than 5 days ago, and the sentences where the nom got the facts from aren't cited. Please nom, cite those sentences.
  • By the way, I'm a new reviewer, so if I did something wrong, please inform me. Philroc 22:20, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
Hi Philroc, it was moved to article space on 24 March and I nominated on the 31 March, you must be getting the time period from today's date or something. However it is over 5 days, but I was nominating the class's work that could meet the standard and I was hoping they could get some leniency. What is the cross against dispute templates for? Does it mean failure or that there are no templates? Currently there are no dispute templates ( like citation needed). The hooks is in the lead paragraph, and the sentence has three references on it. Did you find plagiarism? Since the hook is not hooky enough how about:
  • The crosses in dispute templates and plagiarism are good. I am trying to say it as if you were telling someone in real life. Like... "Dispute templates? No. Plagarism? No.". I'll review the alt hook. Philroc 14:52, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Also, the article is supposed to have been created within the past 5 days. Philroc 14:54, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Philroc's Hook-Only Checklist
  • Properly formatted? Symbol delete vote.svg I fixed the problem myself so now it's Symbol confirmed.svg.
  • Short enough? Symbol confirmed.svg
  • Neutral? Symbol confirmed.svg
  • "Hooky"? Symbol confirmed.svg
  • Final verdict: Symbol confirmed.svg This meets all the hook criteria (except for the formatting which I fixed myself). Good job! Philroc 15:26, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Actually, it doesn't meet all the criteria. Even though it wasn't mentioned in the checklist, the two sentences where you got the fact from still aren't cited. Please cite them. Philroc 15:30, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
  • @User:Philroc I have added the citation to two other sentences that mentioned the fact. It was referenced in the lead already, but now also individual sentences now have their own reference too. So I hope these are the sentences you want to see ref tags on! Thanks for the speedy alt1 review. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 21:18, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
  • You did it for one, but not for the other. The uncited sentence looks like this: "DNA methylation is the process in which a methyl group is added to either a cytosine or adenine." After you cite that sentence, I will review the article again. Philroc 22:37, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
  • OK I have added another reference for that particular sentence. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 22:26, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Actually, you did cite the right sentences. I was going a bit fast and made a mistake. Sorry. Anyway, I actually won't be reviewing again since this article was moved more than 5 days ago. You could try improving the article to Good Article status within the next 5 days. Until then, see you later! (Note: No, I am not failing this. I am just waiting 5 days until the article gets promoted to Good Article status.) Philroc 22:11, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Calling for a new reviewer. Removing the X Rejection symbol, since Philroc says he is not failing the nomination. FYI - if it were nominated as a GA, it would have to be nominated on a new template. Full review needed by new reviewer with more experience on DYK. To clarify, as noted by the timeline of Graeme Bartlett above, this article was 7 days old when nominated. The article history verifies it was moved from draft on March 24. Not a big deal in the long run.
D9 "Five days old" limit should be strictly enforced only if there is a large backlog of hooks. Otherwise nominated article may still be approved if it were created or expanded after the oldest date listed in Template talk:Did you know#Older nominations.
Also, all those green ticks and red Xs next to every item might be confusing our housekeeping bot. This looks like a really interesting, intelligent article that would be good for the main page. — Maile (talk) 23:54, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
My mind can't take this. Please give me some resources so I can know DYK some more. Philroc 12:24, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
We're all in the "my mind can't take this" club at times. DYK rules are in more than one place, and we generally don't know them all until we come across each scenario and find a solution (or get corrected by another editor). That's what I meant by a more experienced editor. As for the ticks, of all colors from the template, the housekeeping bot responds to those (I think, anyway) when it updates the Queue. If I got that incorrect, another editor here will correct me. The purple ones can be used on individual items. The others are generally whether the entire nomination has passed, didn't pass, or needs a new reviewer. We've got the Rules page, Supplementary guidelines and Reviewing guide for the basics. Don't worry about absorbing it all at once. We are all on a learning curve, and issues are posted on the Talk page. Personally, trial and error have taught me to stay away from subjects or sources I don't understand. Because things come up like another editing saying "in the article, such and such doesn't mean that...." But that's just me. — Maile (talk) 15:46, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
Actually I think it is humans that read these DYK nomination pages and look for approved ones to build into the prep areas. The humans will be looking for the words "good to go", and the tick, at least that the last statement has a tick after all problems are fixed. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 04:10, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
Maile is absolutely correct: the list of approved hooks on the queue page is generated by a bot that looks at the icons and bases the current status on the final icon found. That's why icons should only be used once in a review entry as the summary status—it's best put at the beginning, with the explanation following—rather than for each item in the check: it's easy to determine the current status of the review by looking for the icon. When I assemble a prep set I frankly dread seeing the words "good to go" because it's usually attached to a substandard review that doesn't explain most or any of what was checked. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:14, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Reiterating call for new reviewer to do a full review. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:24, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

I Am a Ukrainian

A still from I am a Ukrainian

Created by Piotrus (talk), Zeddocument (talk). Nominated by Piotrus (talk) at 07:07, 25 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Note: I just moved the page from I am a Ukrainian to I Am a Ukrainian and changed the hook to reflect this. 97198 (talk) 10:29, 25 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Note: I am in the process of obtaining a freely licensed image (OTRS), so if this is reviewed before I add image and pictured, please delay any featuring until this process is completed. PS. Picture now added, OTRS permission still pending. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:22, 26 March 2014 (UTC)

* Symbol possible vote.svg Interesting enough. Enough characters. Hook is sourced. Will recheck this article soon, since I see that there may be work in progress regarding the image. Star Lord - 星王 (talk) 18:35, 28 March 2014 (UTC)
  • No, 1500 characters are required, purposely designed not to be too hard to meet. Thanks, Matty.007 19:54, 28 March 2014 (UTC)
Thank you, Matty. I have modified my text above.Star Lord - 星王 (talk) 20:02, 28 March 2014 (UTC)
Thanks. Still waiting for the update on OTRS. Interested editors may want to speed the matter by asking for an update at Facebook if this takes too long; I last asked on March 30. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:33, 3 April 2014 (UTC)

D. Balakrishna

Created by Regstuff (talk). Self nominated at 03:45, 25 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Heh. I like this one. Well-formatted and phrased. Tezero (talk) 01:27, 27 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg There is currently a cleanup tag at the top of the article regarding reference reliability, with specific tags regarding refs 3, 5 and 6 - two of which are blogs and one of which seems to be a self-published site. 97198 (talk) 12:52, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

Johnnie Boden

  • Reviewed: Put here

Created by Matty.007 (talk). Self nominated at 20:25, 24 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg The article is new (created 25 March 2014), barely long enough (1,600 characters, excluding headers, references etc) and relies on three main newspaper articles as it's cited references. There are a number of close paraphrasings of those references contained in the article. The grammar in the article is also 'clunky" (i.e. Boden had been robbed, hired a dishonest worker, leading his inheritence (sic) to be gone in three years).
The hook is short enough and properly cited. It is however misleading in stating that he "takes a sprout to work once a week", as Sprout is the name of his dog (correct wording would be "takes Sprout to work once a week" or "takes his dog, Sprout, to work once a week" - neither or which are particularly "hooky"). Needs work. Dan arndt (talk) 09:19, 26 March 2014 (UTC)
Sorry, forgot to mention that this is for April Fools. Which parts are close paraphrasing? Wording changed. Thanks, Matty.007 18:24, 26 March 2014 (UTC)
As Boden's dog is called Sprout it is incorrect to state he "take a sprout" it may be better worded to say "takes his Sprout" or "takes Sprout" - I understand that the intention is for April Fools but it still has to make some sort of grammatical sense and be factually correct.Dan arndt (talk) 01:13, 28 March 2014 (UTC)
Have provided feedback on the article talkpage.Dan arndt (talk) 01:38, 28 March 2014 (UTC)
Attempted fix of all issues. Thanks, Matty.007 12:27, 29 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Since the original hook wasn't approved in time for April Fools Day, a new ALT1 hook should be supplied for regular DYK use that works in a normal context. Once that's in place, then the review can recommence. BlueMoonset (talk) 17:09, 1 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Can we not just keep it for next fools'? Thanks, Matty.007 17:14, 1 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Not according to the rules on the April Fools Day page, unless you now do a 5x expansion or turn it into a Good Article. There's nothing about holding over for next year. Can't you come up with something worthwhile on this guy that isn't an AFD joke? BlueMoonset (talk) 18:51, 1 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Not sure what you mean by AFD joke, but I can think of Alts. Thanks, Matty.007 18:56, 1 April 2014 (UTC)
  • In this context, AFD = April Fools Day, so AFD joke is April Fools Day joke. Waiting for the ALT hook or hooks. BlueMoonset (talk) 17:52, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

──────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────── Thanks for explaining that, I thought there was some major issue with the article regarding Articles for Deletion.

Thanks, Matty.007 17:56, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Review needed of ALT1 hook, and also to check whether the issues raised above and on the article's talk page have been fully addressed. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:22, 3 April 2014 (UTC)
  • There is no reference in the article to Johnnie Boden being worth £215M and no cited reference for that.Dan arndt (talk) 03:28, 3 April 2014 (UTC)
    • In the infobox, cited to BBC: ref says But 52-year-old founder Johnnie Boden, worth £215m according to The Sunday Times Rich List, is not a man prone to extravagance. Thanks, Matty.007 08:39, 3 April 2014 (UTC)
      • A hook "should refer to established facts that are unlikely to change" and the "fact must be mentioned in the article" - which potentially excludes it only being mentioned in the infobox of the article. Also the hook should be "short, punchy, catchy, and likely to draw the readers in to wanting to read the article" unfortunately whilst Alt 1 is certainly short it isn't very 'catchy'.Dan arndt (talk) 09:30, 3 April 2014 (UTC)
        • Symbol possible vote.svg Using a more appropriate icon—the orange X means the nomination probably can't be saved, and this just needs a new hook. A source in the article gives Boden's 2012 wealth at £320 million, so the latest 2013 number of £215 million is a major change, and it is probably old news by now (depending on the company's performance in the stock market, if it's a public company). As Dan notes, hook facts should be in the article proper, not just in the infobox. BlueMoonset (talk) 13:14, 3 April 2014 (UTC)
          • Catchy depends on the person, I find someone being worth hundreds of million interesting and want to find out how. The Sunday Times richlist (see User_talk:Matty.007#Johnnie Boden) is a tad confusing, so I am just clarifying (will add to article when clear). Thanks, Matty.007 13:30, 3 April 2014 (UTC)
            • Matty.007, your reviewer has said it isn't catchy. I agree. (The guy was 255th on the Sunday Times list in 2012, not very high up, before his wealth dropped by a third.) Adding clarification won't help that; it's time to come up with a different hook if you want this nomination to succeed. BlueMoonset (talk) 14:41, 3 April 2014 (UTC)
              • OK. Alt 2: ... that Johnnie Boden, founder of Boden, was previously a teacher, a publican, a stockbroker and a businessman?
              • Alt 3: ... that Johnnie Boden, founder of Boden, "loathed" being a stockbroker? That's all I can think of for now, I know it's not great. Thanks, Matty.007 18:41, 3 April 2014 (UTC)
    • Out of those suggested Alt 3 probably is getting closer to be a 'catchy' hook - still needs work.Dan arndt (talk) 05:51, 4 April 2014 (UTC)
      • Any alts are welcome. Thanks, Matty.007 08:12, 8 April 2014 (UTC)
        • Alt 4: ... that when Johnnie Boden, founder of clothing retailer Boden first edited a menswear magazine, his father called it a "stupid job"? Matty.007 16:04, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

Australian Renewable Energy Agency

Created by Chriswaterguy (talk). Nominated by John Vandenberg (talk) at 17:24, 24 March 2014 (UTC).

  • One issue with that hook is that they are not the sole funder. The article needs to give more detail about the funding structure, with sources, in order that the hook doesnt imply a mistruth. John Vandenberg (chat) 15:17, 25 March 2014 (UTC)
Symbol possible vote.svg John, it's up to you to provide a workable hook as nominator, or to fix the article yourself so the hook you proposed is valid, if you wish this to run as a DYK entry. It's been over three and a half weeks with no action; you need to do something soon if this is going to proceed. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:26, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

──────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────── Fixed with ALT1 (and article conforms to this):

Note that while this is specifically a photovoltaic plant, it is the largest solar plant of any kind in the S.H. Thus the facial text of ALT1 is correct but its final link is somewhat overspecific. However, I don't see any better link choice, without overcomplicating the statement of the hook ("construction of a photovoltaic power station which will be the southern hemisphere's largest solar power station" -- yechh). EEng (talk) 23:10, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Now that a valid hook has been supplied, a full review of the nomination is needed. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:27, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
OK I'll do it (he said grudgingly). EEng (talk) 04:19, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on March 25[edit]

Incidents of Necrophilia

Created by OccultZone (talk), Self nominated at 21:13, 25 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Herodotus' reliability on Egypt has been questioned as has whether he ever went there. Regardless of the quality of the reporting, what he noted in The Histories were the precautions adopted because of a fear of necrophilia engendered by the rumour of an incident. That might have been called "evident necrophilia" by the source but I would suggest it is quite flimsy. Bellemora (talk) 16:27, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
Cannot be a rumor, flimsy? Yes, but probably because of the given period, situation, etc. OccultZone (Talk) 16:56, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
My point is the subclause is on shaky ground. We don't know the date that Herodotus was in Egypt (it's probably slightly earlier than 450) and there are even suggestions that he was never in Egypt because of the inventive nature of some of his reports on Egyptian culture. He didn't note "evident necrophilia" while visiting, he noted that the Egyptians took precautions against the risk of necrophilia because of a report of an embalmer committing an act of necrophilia. Herodotus himself never claimed to have witnessed or heard of necrophilia in Egypt and did not research the veracity of the report concerning the embalmer. I would take a more circumspect approach to the whole of the history section; reports of atrocities by one's enemies are useful as propaganda and victors tend not to report any vile acts they committed before their victory.Bellemora (talk) 08:41, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on March 26[edit]

Tripedalia cystophora

Created by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self nominated at 20:07, 28 March 2014 (UTC).

  • I can't see in the source where it says it can see mangrove roots. Can you provide a sentence or page and paragraph? Also, is this a single experimental study? Maybe there is a secondary source where it says this that is not in the article? Also, does not "inhabit" edge of lagoons, title of article is big clue to inaccuracy of that statement. Please correct article before putting on main page. --(AfadsBad (talk) 04:28, 29 March 2014 (UTC))
  • The title's "opposite patterns" (I assume that's what's being pointed at) refers to the "opposite patterns of diurnal activity" of the two species discussed, and that the critter is found "on the muddy bottom of the mangrove lagoon" at night is in the first paragraph. In the day, they "were found swimming close to the surface in between the prop roots" "in the mangroves near La Parguera, Puerto Rico". So, this colony lives there and feeds there, day and night. I have tweaked the article a bit: the valid points got snowed under by the accusations. Drmies (talk) 17:10, 31 March 2014 (UTC)
  • The valid points are ignored, and Cwmhiraeth scolds me then reverts me without the accusations, or ignores the bad science. Yes, the title was a big clue, as was the title of the CAM photosynthesis article. Thanks for the accuracy edit. --(AfadsBad (talk) 18:27, 31 March 2014 (UTC))
  • More failed verifications. I have not even checked the article. Please read the sources you use, I cannot find a single accurately attributed sentence. I have only reviewed half a dozen, but every one failed. --(AfadsBad (talk) 21:28, 29 March 2014 (UTC))
@AfadsBad:, can you confirm that you accessed [8] and determined that there are no statements in it about obstacle avoidance? @Cwmhiraeth: can you post some Fair Use quotes here to support obstacle avoidance? The cubomedusan eye is a fascinating window into early animal evolution and I would welcome a hook that can showcase its abilities. Thank you for writing these articles! Wnt (talk) 13:45, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
  • ALT1 ... that the box jellyfish Tripedalia cystophora feeds on the copepod Dioithona oculata which swarms in sunlit patches of water among mangrove roots? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 04:49, 30 March 2014 (UTC)
    Would you not just pick phrases, omit quotes, and rearrange them to write Wikipedia articles? These three sentences that support the hook are now a copyvio, "dense swarms," "shafts of sunlight," "illuminated /patches areas" from the one source. Copepods swarm in areas of the mangrove prop roots where the sunlight penetrates the canopy. Rewriting in your own words, plainly, would also make it easier to understand. --(AfadsBad (talk) 05:07, 30 March 2014 (UTC))
The sentence with the three things listed is "Dense swarms of these copepods form in the illuminated patches of water where shafts of sunlight shine through the mangrove canopy." The abstract says "The cubozoan medusa Tripedalia cystophora preys on dense swarms of the copepod Dioithona oculata in the mangrove prop-root habitat of Puerto Rico. The copepod swarms form in shafts of sunlight that penetrate the mangrove canopy during the day. T. cystophora are found primarily within the same illuminated areas, feeding heavily on the dense swarms of copepods." It is clear that there is no copyright violation here. Whether there is any stylistic criticism to be offered is another question - but in previous DYKs, after highlighting specific quotes and soliciting comments, I have passed considerably closer paraphrasing than this. While someone could have taken more time to be original, I see nothing actionable here. Wnt (talk) 14:04, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
  • I have now written a new article for the copepod and added it to this nomination, which is now a joint hook. What a fascinating relationship! Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:48, 30 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Failed verification for both articles. Pleased don't just pick a random, old fact, then inaccurately add it to an article. --(AfadsBad (talk) 03:41, 31 March 2014 (UTC))
If your comment was a little less cryptic, I might understand and respond to whatever point you are trying to make. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:08, 31 March 2014 (UTC)
Your writing is so inaccurate, it is overwhelming. You picked one piece of information from a 1963 source and made it the single prominent means of differentiating this species? OR, indue weight, random misinformation. It's lenses, by the way. And is it the structure? This source does not say. Less cryptic? There is almost no relationship between the sources you cite and what you attach it to, undue weight, random fact, you change precise colors to avoid plagiarism, then plagiarize poetic writing, you misquote, you get the facts wrong. Use the source correctly, don't randomly weight the information in it, be accurate, write in a logical order, and I might have something from which to be less cryptic. Your article is an inaccurate badly joined assortment of misinformation from all over the place. Every sentence should be carefully checked. Rewrite in a readable or organized fashion, include accurate information, and I might be able to be less cryptic. --(AfadsBad (talk) 05:23, 31 March 2014 (UTC))
What is this 1963 source you keep mentioning? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:18, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
I looked at the history of this DYK discussion - where is anything presented as the "single prominent means" of anything? It is clear from [9] (2012) that there is a relationship with the copepod. Wnt (talk) 13:53, 15 April 2014 (UTC)

Symbol redirect vote 4.svg ok - I am rechecking this now. First up, in the Description section, I think we need to reword the third sentence - at first, I mistook it for having 3 tentacles in all. I would reword to, "From a single point on each of the four corners of the bell arise three tentacles, each on a pedalium or stalk." or somesuch. The velarium information about it constricting the bell actually comes from this page and should be noted as such. How did the distribution come from ref 2? I can't see and the map won't load. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 03:19, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for taking this on! I have made the wording change and added extra citations as suggested. With regard to the distribution, this has been changed by other editors since I originally stated in this version that "The range of Tripedalia cystophora includes the southern Atlantic Ocean[2] and Puerto Rica in the Caribbean Sea where its typical habitat is the mangrove-fringed edge of lagoons.[3]" I think that distribution was quite satisfactory, based on the MSOP including the species in its "Zooplankton of the South Atlantic Ocean", but AfadsBad disputed this and it was subsequently altered. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:37, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
Where is "Tripedalia cystophora is a diurnal species and swims by expanding and contracting the bell vigorously." from? I can't find it in the source at the end of the para.
It is diurnal in that it feeds in sunlit areas and sinks to near the bottom at night. This is supported by #5 (Garm). The swimming is one way in which box jellyfish are different from other jellyfish. I could provide a reference for this in general and it is mentioned obliquely in #5 where it talks of swimming and "pulse rates" but not of contractions of the bell, or the sentence could be completely removed. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:27, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
Ah ok, well I think it best to remove it or if you want add a general sentence like "All box jellyfish swim by expanding and contracting the bell vigorously" and supply a reference for that. Either is ok. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 19:57, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
Ok, regarding this, does the Ruppert ref on that page mention this species? If not, then the sentence needs to read "All box jellyfish swim by expanding and contracting the bell vigorously" and can't mention Tripedalia. If it does then no change needed. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:28, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
I did this - I think your edit was probably not incorrect but cannot guarantee it with certainty, so aligned it better with the source.
Tripedalia cystophora forages by allowing itself to sink slowly towards the bottom with its tentacles spread out around it to snare its prey - I couldn't see this in ref 5 either.
It is there, just above Figure 4, - "When foraging, the medusae lower their swim-pulse frequency for some seconds and sink through the water column with their tentacles stretched out." Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:27, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
Aah ok. got it. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 19:57, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Now rechecking Dioithona oculata - err, "Dioithona oculata has a translucent pear-shaped form" - I'd say "body" for "form" here as the latter sounds weird....furthermore is that sentence supported by ref 2? Any reason for leaving some of the places out from the ref here? Also that ref has the exact length ranges of F 0,62-0,90; M: 0,60-0,79, so why not put them in? In this sentence " Swarms were denser in June than in January and consisted of adult copepods and late-stage copepodid larvae." - why do we need to mention "copepod" - why not just say, " Swarms were denser in June than in January and consisted of adults and late-stage larvae." Otherwise material correlates to source. Interesting article. Size, hook and age check out. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 20:35, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

I think I have dealt with all the points you mention above apart from the range. I don't like reeling off long lists of locations parrot-fashion and my present list already includes 21 locations. I don't think that I have missed any major ones. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:34, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
I agree the list is long. I think it is pretty hard to assume which are major and which are minor, especially given we're talking about bodies of water. Could be grouped by oceans at least, but I think hard to just leave some out. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:28, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
Also, does the Ruppert page ref mention this species - if not we just need to make it copepods... etc. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:28, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

The Sun Also Rises (ballet), The Select (The Sun Also Rises), The Sun Also Rises (1984 film)

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nominated at 02:28, 28 March 2014 (UTC).

Ernest Hemingway

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Created by TonyTheTiger on March 26, 2014 with 1,640 characters of readable prose as of now. Supported by inline citations throughout, with hook from dancetabs.com. Classified as a stub which needs to be fixed. Good to go. Consider ALT1 below for clarity: per source, novel in not en pointe, the ballet adaptation is. Thanks, Poeticbent talk 15:24, 28 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Comment: The ALT2 below is not part of my review, neither the hook, nor the new article. Poeticbent talk 14:49, 31 March 2014 (UTC)

"of sound" in the second alternative is redundant. Cacophony is of sound by its nature. Bellemora (talk) 16:40, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on March 27[edit]

Nancy Eriksson

  • ... that Swedish politician Nancy Eriksson as a leader of the Diabetic society for twenty years, wrote motions so that people suffering from diabetes could get jobs with the state?

Created by BabbaQ (talk), Werldwayd (talk), Ohconfucius (talk), GoingBatty (talk), Launchballer (talk). Nominated by BabbaQ (talk) at 10:31, 30 March 2014 (UTC).

Done.--BabbaQ (talk) 14:12, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Prose looks a little fluffed up in places (i.e. written in such a way that characters are added without conveying information). — Crisco 1492 (talk) 03:40, 12 April 2014 (UTC)

List of Billy Graham's crusades

Evangelist Billy Graham, at a Crusade in Cleveland Ohio, on June 11, 1994

Created by Leszek Jańczuk (talk). Self nominated at 03:34, 27 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Long enough, new enough, sources check out fine, hook cited, good to go. ZappaOMati 03:29, 8 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg I am puzzled by the passage of this hook with the clear error of a lowercase abbreviated "rev."—which is also in the article—and note that the image, neutrality, and close paraphrasing have not been mentioned in the review. (I think the image is very hard to make out.) However, looking at the article, I think it is not ready for DYK. The text needs a copyedit—the opening sentence of the article is a fragment, which is a bad sign, and misspellings are rife, including months (e.g., "Mai" rather than "May"). There are a number of extraordinary claims in the opening paragraph that need citations. The list of 417 crusades is virtually unsourced, which appears to be original research, and thus problematic for Wikipedia and DYK in particular. The dates are mostly missing in the list, too, which is a problem, as is the inconsistent spelling and sometime abbreviation. This simply isn't ready for a main page link in its current condition. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:54, 8 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Glad to see "Mai" corrected, though it was a minor part of a large whole; "rev." was fixed in the hook but not in the article. This needs a great deal of work to the text and sourced completion for the table, not tiny cosmetic touches to the latter. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:34, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

Byculla to Bangkok

Created by Ethically Yours (talk). Self nominated at 16:19, 27 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Hook short enough and appropriate, at approximately 1870 characters, article is long enough, neutral and hook is cited.
  • Symbol question.svg However, the "Critical reviews" section is almost entirely direct quotations; (see here) they ARE properly cited and attributed, (yay!) but at 550 characters, it is nearly 1/3 of the article. I am unsure how marginal this makes the nom and will consult some folks on the matter. Montanabw(talk) 18:17, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg Generally, reviews should be paraphrased rather than quoted extensively, with perhaps a short phrase quoted if it can't be expressed in any other way. There was one very long quote that I have put in a blockquote per WP:Blockquote; since such long quotes do not count as original prose for DYK purposes, the article is too short at 1355 prose characters, and will need expansion. I was also wondering about the sourcing: mpositive.in looks like a blog (if the story is copied from bangaloremirror.com, then that's the source that should be used), and mumbaiboss.com talks about user submission and how they may be untrustworthy, which makes we wonder whether it can be considered a reliable source. The Critical reviews section makes two upfront assertions: that the the book "received fairly average to negative reviews" and that the prequel was a better story. Neither of those assertions are backed up by the two sources in the section, which is a problem. BlueMoonset (talk) 23:37, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
  • If the source meets the criteria of WP:NEWSBLOG it can be a RS, just saying. But if BlueMoonset is correct that extensive quotes don't count toward the character total, making the article too short, then that is another concern. I'm striking my character count for now. My suggestion is that you can go in and expand/improve this article and then ping me to come back and look it over again. I believe the nomination will stay "live" and remain DYK eligible for awhile, so long as there appears to be active work on the article. Good luck! Montanabw(talk) 18:47, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Yes check.svg Done Article now has more than 1500 characters. EthicallyYours! 03:56, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg By javascript I'm getting 1507, excluding all the headers, foonotes, refs, etc. So technically that is OK. However, the issues raised by Blue Moonset about sourcing, above, still need to be addressed. Montanabw(talk) 06:36, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on March 29[edit]

P50 (neuroscience)

Created by Staticshakedown (talk). Self nominated at 14:54, 30 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Article is new and big enough. Citations throughout. Listed user did the work. QPQ OK. However some writing is too jargony and I did not understand it. Terms like proband and endophenotype are not needed or need a clear explanation. So this applies to the hook, and people reading the hook will have no idea what it is talking about. It's fair enough to leave P50 as the mystery, but the rest of the hook should be comprehensible. So I suggest another hook. Perhaps use the term biological marker, it does not seem to be related to genetics. The reference provided does not confirm that P50 is an indication of schizophrenia, but that P300 is. The reference says that P50 is an ERP. And that ERPs have been used in the drug development. Perhaps there is another reference that makes a more clear statement. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 12:02, 10 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on March 30[edit]


Created by Agne27 (talk). Self nominated at 22:46, 30 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg The most important thing for any hook, including those for April Fools' Day, is that they be true. This simply is not. The article says that the name is "similar to" or "derived from" the term used in the local dialect to denote cats' testicles. That is a long way from saying that these grapes are or ever were referred to as "cats' testicles". The article was also created before the date allowed by the rules for April Fools' Day 2015; there might have been some leeway if it was a great hook which was actually true, but that's not the case here. A regular hook should be used instead. It can still get the quirky slot by mentioning the testicles, but in a way which is true. Perhaps something like:
  • ALT1: ... that grapes whose name may be derived from the local term for cats' testicles are used to make a Piedmont wine which may have an aroma similar to that of a cat's litter box? MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 19:18, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
Perhaps I was being too cautious in trying to avoid close paraphrasing by rewriting it in my own words but if you look at this "online source it says "The name means for a local dialect "cats testicles" and probably refers to the berries or grapes form." And the exact line from the Wine Grapes book says "Its strange name supposedly comes from the local dialect meaning 'cat's testicles'." Not knowing the Piedmontese language, and again wanting to avoid close paraphrasing, I used the phrase "similar to" and "derived from" to take a more cautious approach.
That said, I have no issue with the Alt and moving it back to the regular queue. AgneCheese/Wine 23:38, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Since I suggested the ALT, I can't do the review, so someone else should take care of it. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 01:06, 13 April 2014 (UTC)

Dead baby jokes

Created by Plot Spoiler (talk). Self nominated at 02:16, 4 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg Currently the article is not long enough for DYK - including the example jokes it is only ~1,400 characters and when the examples are excluded (as I believe they should be) it is only ~1,100. It will have to be expanded a bit more to be eligible. 97198 (talk) 10:47, 4 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg The proposed hook is a nice example of how an offensive subject can be presented in DYK without making an offensive hook. However, as the article is too insubstantial for DYK in its present form -- not merely too short in terms of character count, but too light on the kind of information that ought to be in an encyclopedia article. --Orlady (talk) 15:18, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Thank you for the feedback from both of you. Will work to expand the article -- though as you can imagine it's challenging to find reliable sources on this subject! Plot Spoiler (talk) 17:42, 7 April 2014 (UTC)


Killiechassie estate on the banks of the Tay

Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk), Andrew Davidson (talk). Nominated by Andrew Davidson (talk) at 20:19, 30 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Not a review, but I am opposed to using this image in the DYK. As the caption in the article states, the subject of the article isn't actually in the picture. This is a picture of the general area, which while not entirely useless, isn't particularly useful either. Sven Manguard Wha? 05:05, 31 March 2014 (UTC)
  • The topic is not just the house but also the surrounding estate, and the picture seems to show some part of that. Granted, it's rather misty and vague but it gives a feel for the nature of the land there. Andrew (talk) 05:20, 31 March 2014 (UTC)
Yes I'd say that the land on the other side of the river is part of the estate, especially as she bought more land. If you look at the OS map on geograph though I think the house is just off the picture to the left. Image isn't great, but the nearest free photo I could find.♦ Dr. Blofeld 12:19, 31 March 2014 (UTC)

The first article on this subject made Wikipedia look like it had accidentally linked to some cheap celebrity magazine. Now it looks like gossip trivia trying to camouflage itself in an encyclopedic entry. Some estates are too obscure for an encyclopedia, some are valued. Given time, Wikipedia will no doubt find where it draws the line with regards to Killiechassie. In the meantime, as established by reasoned debate - notability is not inherited: why has this article not removed the JK Rowling references?


The JK Rowling references are trivial gossip more suited to Hello magazine – not notable. I suggest these references are removed for this reason and also to respect the privacy of her family. I find it remarkable that Wikipedia goes to such lengths to protect the privacy of its own members and yet appears to have no respect for the privacy of Ms Rowling's family. The house itself is nothing special and most of the historical references concerning it are archaic and trivial. This article only ever appeared because of JK Rowling's link to the house. Angela MacLean (talk) 18:36, 31 March 2014 (UTC)

We're not censored, so there really is no point in removing things to "respect the privacy" of anyone: the information is already widely available in the public domain, so it's hardly private. As the majority of the information in the article is unconnected with the writer, this is quite a long way from "gossip trivia". - SchroCat (talk) 18:41, 31 March 2014 (UTC)
Nobody's trying to 'censor' Wikipedia here. Privacy is respected to different degrees in different media - it's a grey area. I'm simply giving my own input here as to where I think privacy should sit in matters such as this. In fact I'm not the only person to have discussed the matter of privacy with regards to this celebrity. The fact that personal information is in the public domain does not mean to say that Wikipedia has the moral right to link to, or copy that information just because it happens to be there. The gossip trivia is supported by 'citations' which at my last count made up a third 'supporting' the article, one of which is nothing more than a tourist business website with an unreferenced list: even a passing reference to the estate's current owner hardly requires 5 citations. Someone's clearly desperate to link the estate to JKR because without her it wouldn't amount to much of an article.
More like - Did you know JKR bought a big house in the country some years ago? - Yeah probably did mate, so what? BTW what's this boring rubbish doing in your 'encyclopedia'? Angela MacLean (talk) 01:09, 1 April 2014 (UTC)
I can't see a "tourist business website": could you let me know which that is, please? As to the JKR citations, that information appears to be supported by citations 2, 11 and 12, which isn't quite 5, or a third of the 16 on offer. If you feel so strongly about this article, can I suggest you offer it up for AfD once again? I suspect it will receive a different reception this time round. - SchroCat (talk) 05:21, 1 April 2014 (UTC)
Britain TV citation has now been removed. However I looked in the last half hour and the article had 5 JKR orientated citations: 2, 7, 11, 12 and 15. 5 times 3 = 15. That's just one off a third. A third of the citational 'value' of this article is devoted to nothing more than a celebrity who happened to buy the house. That's cheap, pathetic and an embarrassment to Wikipedia. I'd suggest she has enough vacuous creeps turning up at her estate with cameras without Wikipedia encouraging any more. New idea for a Did You Know title:
Did you know that most Wikipedians are insecure people who hide behind a moniker? And yet, some will actually use this annonymity to argue that someone else shouldn't be afforded privacy on the very same website with regards to their private home? The hypocracy behind this is disgusting, immature and cowardly. Wikipedia grow up. Perhaps the most telling obvious ommision so far to this sad affair - not one of you has mentioned either her children or the sad fate of John Lennon. Angela MacLean (talk) 11:47, 1 April 2014 (UTC)
No Angela: as per the above, the JKR material is supported by only three citations: 2, 11 and 12. Citations 7 and 15 have no information about her, only about the house. The information about her is minimal in the article, which is probably correct. I'm not sure that your attack on other editors is needed here (or anywhere else on Wikipedia, to be honest) and I think that you should probably drop such an aggressive stance. I have no idea what Rowling's children or John Lennon have to do with the history of this house and estate: i presume they've been left out of the article because there is no connection? - SchroCat (talk) 11:58, 1 April 2014 (UTC)

" I find it remarkable that Wikipedia goes to such lengths to protect the privacy of its own members and yet appears to have no respect for the privacy of Ms Rowling's family. " LOL Angela you called me childish on your talk page for suggesting that protecting Rowling had anything to do with your reasons. The only embarrassing thing I see here is your gross overreaction to this and inappropriate rambling. It's a legitimate article on a notable country estate which happened to be bought by a famous writer. Had it been a house with no other sources than being Rowling's house then you'd have a point. What's more disgusting here is that you think we should blast perfectly fine encyclopedic content just because your favourite writer might not like it. "it looks like gossip trivia", um no, it looks like your typical encyclopedic entry on a country house/listed building with a brief mentioning of its purchase by a writer.♦ Dr. Blofeld 12:36, 1 April 2014 (UTC)

5 citations not 3. No aggressive language was used. I stick to the comment about hypocracy. Children should be afforded privacy from having their parents' houses listed in Did You Knows? on Wikipedia if their parent/s are celebrities. God knows it's not much to ask. Listing it on the Did You Know section will simply lead to a further flow of idiots to her property. I take it the subject of children has been left out of the discussion because there are fewer women involved in Wikipedia. Lennon and other celebrities were harrassed by people who thought they had some right to invade their privacy. As for JKR she's not my favourite author. That's my last comment here - as both sides are now repeating themselves - rainy days will see me editing elsewhere if time permits. Angela MacLean (talk) 18:15, 1 April 2014 (UTC)

I see you don't understand citations: there are three that support the information about JKR, not five, despite your protestations to the contrary (if you think it's five, what information about Rowling do citations 7 and 15 support?). Just to correct you on a different point: JKR's children have been left out because they have nothing to do with an article about the house and estate, not because of anything to do with women editors (and I say that as a father of two). JKR's ownership of the property is of public record: we are reflecting those reliable sources, just as we strive to do in all our articles. Again I note your rather uncivil language about others: there is absolutely no call for it, so please do stop. - SchroCat (talk) 18:23, 1 April 2014 (UTC)

Shall we delete The Tower House too because Jimmy Page happens to live there and worry that a legion of fruit n nut cakes will start marching their way to his house after seeing it on wikipedia? Ludicrous.♦ Dr. Blofeld 19:05, 1 April 2014 (UTC)

Honestly, that's a very real fear of mine. There is a lot of creepy material on Tower House on the internet. We should try to hold discretion paramount in these cases. The pseudonymous nature of our project does seem to blunt our reputation with regards to BLP's, I believe. Gareth E Kegg (talk) 00:04, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
Very real fear or not, we wouldn't delete it would we? If a celebrity purchases a very notable house there's little we can do about it. We don't bow down to people like that. If they don't want their house documented on the Internet don't buy a listed building.♦ Dr. Blofeld 06:31, 2 April 2014 (UTC)
  • This is all covered by the Streisand effect which arose from the similar case of a celebrity trying to suppress details of their residence. Andrew (talk) 06:56, 2 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on March 31[edit]

Genetics and the Origin of Species

  • ... that Dobzhansky explains in his book, Genetics and the Origin of Species that all life evolved through natural selection, and this revolutionary theory became critical knowledge not only for the scientific progress of genetics, but for humanity as a whole?
  • ALT1: ... that Genetics and the Origin of Species is a 1937 book by the evolutionary biologist Theodosius Dobzhansky which novelized the theory that mutations of genes lead to rapid evolution within a species?
  • ALT2: ... that Genetics and the Origin of Species by Theodosius Dobzhansky united genetics with Darwin's theory of evolution?
  • Comment: This article has been expanded in depth with a deeper focus on mutations, speciation and also recognizing its historical impact during this time.

5x expanded by Jcf028 (talk) and RockMagnetist (talk). Nominated by Jcf028 (talk) at 01:21, 7 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg Prose portion was expanded fivefold between March 31 and April 4, and it far exceeds the length requirement. QPQ check fine: no previous DYKs. However, the first hook exceeds the 200-character limit and could just as well apply to Darwin. In the second hook, I don't know what is meant by "novelized". There are plenty of similar obscurities in the article. I think this article can qualify for DYK, but first needs a thorough going over by someone with a native command of English. I'll see what I can do. RockMagnetist (talk) 06:13, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg I am going to recuse myself from reviewing this further because I have made extensive changes to the article. I think that I will need a few more days to fix all the problems - I hope that reviewers can wait. RockMagnetist (talk) 23:39, 15 April 2014 (UTC)

Carthage Treasure

Silver bowl

Created by Jononmac46 (talk), Victuallers (talk). Nominated by Victuallers (talk) at 10:44, 4 April 2014 (UTC).

Symbol question.svg interesting treasure, thank you for the find. The hook is interesting, but I couldn't find the Serbia ref, also found the bowl there that is not pictured above. I actually find that bowl picture more attractive in small size, how about a hook around it? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:08, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
Sorry. You need to click on "related objects" on the page to find this bowl. I thought the url took you directly there. Victuallers (talk) 09:46, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
  • (alt1) ... that the 4th century silver bowl in the Carthage Treasure (pictured) was found in Tunisia, but it is thought to have been made in Serbia?
  • (alt2) ... that the 4th century silver bowl in the Carthage Treasure (pictured) is thought to have been made near the Danube?
I found the entry now, but think it's a bit tricky to understand, the Danube is long, and the term Serbia had many meanings in history, - a link to today's Serbia is probably not helpful. If that line, I would reword, but feel free to say something interesting about the objects rather than their provenance.
ALT3: ... that the 4th century covered silver bowl (pictured) in the Carthage Treasure was found in Tunisia but is thought to have been made in today's Serbia? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:16, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
I'm happy with alt3 if you are OK with everything else. I think the most interesting thing about the bowl is its appearance - which is tricky to describe. It looks to me as if it was made 200 years ago not nearly 2000 Victuallers (talk) 15:05, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg ALT3 preferred, please with the stunning licensed image, which illustrates beyond words, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:48, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
If someone would like to take over this nomination then please feel free to offer a hook Victuallers (talk) 16:26, 8 April 2014 (UTC)
I offer the hook as in the discussion (which in my simple thinking could have replaced ALT3) and pray that a reviewer will come along:
ALT4: ...that the 4th-century covered silver bowl (pictured) in the Carthage Treasure is similar to objects made in today's Serbia? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:39, 8 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg As I noted on that very discussion, "to me, 'today's Serbia' means modern Serbia, not the ancient land that is currently located within the boundaries of modern Serbia, so Gerda's ALT proposal is confusing to this reader". This remains true now that it's been renamed ALT4. Even more important is that the article still contains the claim that the bowl is thought to have been made in Kostolac, which does not accurately reflect the source (which is at the link Fram gives). I'm also curious why the text refers to "a silver hemispherical lidded bowl", but the (uncited) caption of the picture of the bowl (the one used for this DYK) refers to it being "one of the hemispherical covered bowls". Was there one of these, or several? The article needs to be fixed and a new hook suggested for this to proceed. BlueMoonset (talk) 20:25, 8 April 2014 (UTC)
  • I changed the article and show a quote. I am not the author and say what I understand: The treasure contains two lidded (covered) bowls, one of them is held by the British Museum. What can we say for a hook: that the bowl is similar to some found across the Mediterranean Sea? Help? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:55, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

Silver bowl

ALT5: ...that a silver bowl (pictured) from the 4th-century Carthage Treasure shows chased and hammered pastoral scenes in relief around the edge?
Symbol redirect vote 4.svg --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:53, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on April 1[edit]


Kolomna pastila

Created by Ghirlandajo (talk). Self nominated at 05:12, 5 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol delete vote.svg This is a bit too short. DYK check shows only 1456 characters and it needs to be at least 1500. Valfontis (talk) 00:39, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg That shouldn't be too difficult to take care of. I've left a note for the nominator. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 00:41, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
Thank you. I assumed the nominator would watch the page. Valfontis (talk) 17:41, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
Expanded a bit. --Ghirla-трёп- 19:28, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Full review needed now that article is above minimum DYK length. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:32, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg This article is new enough and also now long enough. The image is appropriately licensed and the pastila looks delicious. I have added Off-shell to the DYK credits as that editor seems to have made significant additions to the article. The problem with the nomination is that there is not an inline citation for the hook fact and in fact that particular paragraph has no references at all. Also, have you previously had five or more DYKs? If so, you need to do a QPQ review of another article. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:43, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Bertie Reed

  • ... that Bertie Reed placed second in the 1982/83 BOC Challenge round the world yacht race, sailing the 14yr old yacht Voortrekker, beating a number of much newer yachts?

Created by Gbawden (talk). Self nominated at 07:07, 2 April 2014 (UTC).

  • ... welcome - I fixed the hook - bit too small - add a paragraph - we need 1500 chars of new pure text Victuallers (talk) 08:14, 3 April 2014 (UTC)
Symbol possible vote.svg In case in wasn't clear, Victuallers is asking you to expand the article. It is currently 1026 characters of prose, while the minimum size for DYK to feature an article is 1500 characters. --ThaddeusB (talk) 20:59, 15 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on April 2[edit]

Valls Cabinet

  • ... that the Valls Cabinet is the first French cabinet with a foreign-born prime minister?

Created by Iselilja (talk). Self nominated at 21:52, 7 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg There appears to be a conflict between the hook and the article. The article says "Valls is the first immigrant French prime minister after 1790", but not being versed in French history, I have no idea if that means "first ever", or if there were cabinets of some form before the French Revolution that did have foreign-born prime ministers. Iselilja, could you clarify this for me? Sven Manguard Wha? 20:16, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
Right. I see there are multiple problems with the hook. My source said "first prime minister born abroad"; someone else has added 1790 without giving a source (and changed wording to "first immigrant". However, it turns out my first source wasn't fully correct in asserting Valls was the first foreign born prime minister. The title prime minister was introduced in 1958; so before that the head of government had other names, but they may be referred to as prime ministers in English sources. At least one of them was not born as a French citizen: Robert Schuman (German, due to Lorraine being German area when he grew up). Even after 1958, two other prime ministers have been born abroad, but with French parents so they were French citizens at birth. So, either I have to narrow the hook, to saying something like "first prime minister in the fifth republic who was not born a French citizen" or find another hook. I'll think a little about it; it may not be so easy to find something that is catchy. (And I'll adjust the article of course). Regards, Iselilja (talk) 20:51, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
I don't think we should be focusing on whether or not someone was born a broad -- I think we should respect how the person wants to be known now. We don't want a rehash of the Chelsea Manning thing. EEng (talk) 01:47, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

Nader Kadhim

Nader Kadhim in the 2014 Bahrain book fair

Moved to mainspace by Mohamed CJ (talk). Self nominated at 16:37, 2 April 2014 (UTC).

Conditional Review All of the sourcing is in Arabic. This is going to be tough to review, unless we have an Arabic reader as a reviewer. Can't review for copy violations or that the sourcing supports the tag line. Subject is notable enough, with 9 books to his credit as laid out in the tables. But absent a language competent reviewer, I would WP:AGF for the article creator, and would take their word for it. Long enough and new enough. The image appears to be free. I could find no English language sources on line, other than Twitter.7&6=thirteen () 13:50, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

  • All sourcing is in Arabic. I don't think this is a problem; in the past I have reviewed and approved articles that were either fully or mainly supported by a foreign language without any problems. You could post in the talk page for more input. Mohamed CJ (talk) 18:45, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
I was not complaining. It just creates an obvious problem for those of us who are not Arabic literate. 18:50, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
Ah. I can definitely see that. Google doesn't help much either. Thanks for taking a look I guess. Mohamed CJ (talk) 18:51, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
I should have taken Arabic instead of French. My late uncle was fluent in it; he learned it decades ago at the army language school in Monterey, California, and had a perfect accent. But unless I get a Ouija board he'll be no help now. Sorry. 7&6=thirteen () 19:02, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
User:Mohamed CJ. Is it possible that you could provide interpretive quotations from the sources that support the hook line? This might get us past the roadblock? 7&6=thirteen () 12:38, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Jack and Ed Biddle

  • ... that warden's wife Kate Soffel, who fled with condemned brothers Jack and Ed Biddle after supplying guns and saws for their 1902 escape from the Allegheny County Jail, later took up dressmaking?

5x expanded by CasimirCrazyHorse (talk). Nominated by EEng (talk) at 01:16, 5 April 2014 (UTC).

  • I should have mentioned when making the nomination: Kate Soffel is a redirect to Jack and Ed Biddle, so there's no point in linking both in the hook, and in fact it would annoy readers to follow both links and find they go the same place. Since the hook is really about Soffel, I think it is she that should be "emboldened" (so to speak), rather than they. EEng (talk) 14:17, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
Thanks for explaining. — Maile (talk) 14:25, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
  • The link to the DYK article should be directly to the actual article rather than a redirect. Yes, they should definitely not both be linked. Since you want the bold link to be on "Kate Soffel", I changed [[Kate Soffel]] to [[Jack and Ed Biddle|Kate Soffel]]. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 00:58, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
I don't see why I should care one way or another, but my curiosity is getting the best of me... why does this matter? EEng (talk) 03:33, 10 April 2014 (UTC)
Some reasons: The bot would complain that it was unable to find the hook corresponding to article. The DYK notifications placed on the user and article talk pages would not include the text of the hook. And those notifications include a link for seeing the number of page views, but that link would be for the number of hits the actual article title got, and would not include the hits generated by people clicking on the redirect in the DYK, which are tabulated separately.

Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Note to potential reviewers: this nomination has not received any kind of review yet. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 01:07, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

OK, just so long as you're not one of those idiots saying that redirects are inefficient. EEng (talk) 04:07, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on April 3[edit]


ZunZuneo logo

Created by Designate (talk), GJL1960 (talk), Bogdangiusca (talk), and Muboshgu (talk). Nominated by Muboshgu (talk) at 15:23, 8 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg I believe the hook (which anyway has no inline citation) is not borne out by the sources. Though USAID admitted to funding the service, its objectives in doing so is alleged rather than admitted. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:26, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Covert ops are not going to be confirmed by the government carrying them out, at least not before they're declassified after a long period of time. We can add words like "alleged" or whatever to the hook. – Muboshgu (talk) 13:47, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

Christopher Senyonjo

Created/expanded by Wnt (talk). Self nominated at 01:03, 5 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Note: we go by prose characters, not file size. It started at 777 characters, and it's currently 15,269, which is about a 19.7x expansion. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 00:14, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg While I don't personally disagree with the descriptor, I'm not sure that the use of the word "draconian" reflects WP:NPOV... Thoughts? 97198 (talk) 07:53, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
Well, the situation as described involves people being thrown out of housing and jobs because the landlords or employers could be charged, and the possibility of 14-year jail terms. But for much of the time when Senyonjo was active in opposing it, it was even worse -- initially the proponents were pushing for a death penalty. Per Draco (lawgiver) the assignment of death penalties for minor offenses is the literal etymology of "draconian". Also, it's not clear to me what you would find acceptable. Would you regard "harsh", "severe", "unusual", "punitive" to be NPOV? Wnt (talk) 08:39, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
I've provided an ALT1 which should clearly be NPOV, as the term "Kill the gays bill" is a bolded synonym for the article link, having been widely used in the media. I had preferred the first as more... temperate, but temper does have its limits. Wnt (talk) 12:42, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
"Draconian" is entirely appropriate, and I'd prefer ALT0 (so to speak). EEng (talk) 12:45, 5 April 2014 (UTC)
How about just saying "Uganda's anti-homosexuality legislation"? Avoids the NPOV issue around Wikipedia endorsing the term "draconian" (even though I think most fair minded people would consider it pretty damn draconian) and also avoids the similarly POV-ish "kill the gays" construction. —Tom Morris (talk) 15:23, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
Yeah, I think you're right. Let's drop draconian. EEng (talk) 16:35, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
The problem with this is that unadorned "anti-gay legislation" sounds like a big nothing. People use a term like that to refer to not getting a partner's Social Security benefits. This is in a very different class, and so far as I recall literally all sources went out of the way to comment about the severity of it. Wnt (talk) 18:08, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
It's just that on reflection I just think draconian and kill the gays are just trying a bit too hard to sell the product, as it were. How about "harsh anti-gay" or something? Or is there some quote, like "Ugandan anti-gay legislation (termed 'medeival' by Person X)" or something?
Well, I actually already have a quote from the California legislature which calls the anti-gay proposal "draconian".[12] The Associated Press also used "draconian" in reference to the bill in the direct context of Senyonjo.[13] Because I already have the cite for the legislature quote, I think it would be overkill (sort of a sign of Wikipedia dispute damage) to insert "draconian" in the lead paragraph and put a bunch of citations after it, but I could. [14][15][16] I mean, it's sort of like saying that it's POV to call a BLP subject a Nazi - sure, usually it is, unless he actually is one. It is widely accepted the bill is draconian, it meets the English language definition of draconian, and I don't think it's a stretch to call it that. Wnt (talk) 22:28, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
How about
ALT3: ... that Christopher Senyonjo, a retired bishop of the Church of Uganda who opposed "draconian" anti-gay legislation, was honored by former US president Bill Clinton?
ALT4: ... that Christopher Senyonjo, a retired bishop of the Church of Uganda, was honored by former US president Bill Clinton for opposing "draconian" anti-gay legislation?
(I don't know if ALT4 fits the facts.) Wait, wait... I gotta run, but here's a thought -- surely Clinton would have used some choice word(s) we can quote? Maybe look into that. EEng (talk) 01:59, 8 April 2014 (UTC)
I looked before and didn't locate the award ceremony itself, nor have any of the sources about it listed quotes that I could search. I don't think the scare quotes are necessary - I've given sufficient sources to document draconian as simply another fact from the hook that is sourced inline. Wnt (talk) 15:10, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

A.V. Thamarakshan

Created by Soman (talk). Self nominated at 20:16, 4 April 2014 (UTC).

Stephen W. Doran

Created by Hirolovesswords (talk). Self nominated at 19:57, 3 April 2014 (UTC).

Articles created/expanded on April 5[edit]

Pineau de Re, Leighton Aspell

Leighton Aspell riding Many Clouds

  • Reviewed: Put here
  • Comment: Aspell is being expanded at the minute, I have only done one QPQ as I haven't done any work on Pineau de Re, but I have worked on Leighton Aspell, and have adjusted the credits as such.

Created by Tigerboy1966 (talk), Matty.007 (talk). Nominated by Matty.007 (talk) at 13:35, 7 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Hook - might it be worth saying '2014 Grand National winner', to make more of a contrast in the hook with Aspell retiring in 2007? --Bcp67 (talk) 23:04, 11 April 2014 (UTC)

I Gave You Power

Created by Launchballer (talk). Self nominated at 23:51, 5 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Length and date are fine. Referencing is good. However, the article uses an inappropriately informal style including slang that will be unclear to many readers. It also uses long strings of pronouns which make it unclear who "he" is at points. These issues will need fixed before the article can be featured. --ThaddeusB (talk) 04:08, 9 April 2014 (UTC)
Also, a QPQ is required. --ThaddeusB (talk) 04:10, 9 April 2014 (UTC)
I like to leave my QPQs until last. I am not sure how 'nicked' classifies as slang - it's in the dictionary - but I've taken it out nonetheless and tweaked a few bits so it is clearer.--Launchballer 23:48, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

Nirmala (novel)

  • ... that The Second Wife is the English translated title for the Hindi novel Nirmala meaning virtuous?

Created by The Herald (talk). Self nominated at 15:34, 5 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg Removed the image, as non-free files are not allowed in DYK. Also, please rewrite the hook to comply with the format requirements. (Note to future commentators: I did not review the article itself).— Preceding unsigned comment added by Sven Manguard (talkcontribs) 16:!0 6 April 2014
Made the change..The Herald 16:37, 5 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on April 6[edit]

Daramyn Tömör-Ochir

Created by Crispulop (talk). Self nominated at 23:22, 10 April 2014 (UTC).

White band disease

5x expanded by Bantol13795 (talk). Self nominated at 22:53, 6 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg While a nice job of expansion and updating, this article has not been expanded 5x within the required timeframe (or, according to DYKcheck, since it was created), and there are a number of wholly unreferenced paragraphs. - The Bushranger One ping only 23:04, 6 April 2014 (UTC)
  • More specifically, it was 2045 prose characters before expansion, and it's now 9164, so another 1061 characters would be required for a 5× expansion. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 01:46, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Update: it's now 9749 prose characters, which is a 4.767× expansion. It's still 476 characters short of a 5× expansion. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 00:58, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

Taylor Gold

  • ... that American snowboarder Taylor Gold was the first athlete with the surname "Gold" to compete at an Olympics?

5x expanded by Epeefleche (talk). Self nominated at 18:12, 6 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Size and date check out. DD spotchecks show no apparent CP/CV concerns. Hook fact cited and checked. Good to go. - The Bushranger One ping only 00:49, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Per that discussion, I suggest changing the hook to "... that American snowboarder Taylor Gold was one of the first two athletes with the surname "Gold" to compete at an Olympics?" Epeefleche (talk) 20:11, 9 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Better would be "... that American snowboarder Taylor Gold and his sister were the first two athletes with the surname "Gold" to compete at an Olympics?" - The Bushranger One ping only 21:03, 9 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Hi Bush. Would love that for it's conciseness; if only it were true. The refs confused me (and apparently at least one other). Here are the facts, as best I can tell. He competed. His sister, another "Gold," was slated to compete but injured herself directly before competing. And yet a third "Gold competed a couple of days prior to him.Epeefleche (talk) 21:11, 9 April 2014 (UTC)

Content copied from Wikipedia talk:Did you know
Let's change the hook to "... that American snowboarder Taylor Gold was one of the first two athletes with the surname "Gold" to compete at an Olympics?".— Preceding unsigned comment added by Epeefleche (talkcontribs) 14:25, April 9, 2014 (UTC)

Why don't we scrap the whole surname idea and instead craft something about him being part of a brother/sister pair that were both selected for Sochi and both derailed by injury? That seems more interesting hook-wise. Sven Manguard Wha? 22:12, 9 April 2014 (UTC)
I'm fine with that. How about ... that American snowboarders Taylor Gold and his sister Arielle both went to Sochi to compete in the 2014 Winter Olympics, but both saw their efforts derailed by falls? Epeefleche (talk) 22:26, 9 April 2014 (UTC)

End of content copied from Wikipedia talk:Did you know

Symbol redirect vote 4.svg I've copied over an alt from Epeefleche (22:26, 9 April 2014 comment). Marking it for review. Sven Manguard Wha? 05:42, 10 April 2014 (UTC)

Drupad Borgohain

Created by Soman (talk). Self nominated at 13:06, 6 April 2014 (UTC).

Articles created/expanded on April 7[edit]

Mountains on Io

Hi'iaka Patera with nearby mountains with the 11 km high peak of Hi'iaka Montes to the north

Moved to mainspace by Lsuanli (talk). Nominated by Graeme Bartlett (talk) at 21:36, 10 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol delete vote.svg The article fails on a simple test: that within five days of the date of nomination (April 10th), the character count (in my WP) was just under 11,000, while the most recent April 4th edit was just over 10,000. Lsuanli certainly did an impressive amount of work on this, both before and after the nomination, but. Ravenswing 11:45, 20 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg @Ravenswing:: As per criteria 1d, articles that have been worked upon exclusively in a user subpage and then moved to the article mainspace are considered new as of the date they reach the mainspace. This article was moved from a user subpage to the article mainspace at 16:11, April 7, 2014 (UTC) and nominated 3 days later. It thus passes the newness test and needs a full review. --Allen3 talk 19:52, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

1996 in NASCAR, Chris Raudman, Kelly Tanner

5x expanded by The Bushranger (talk). Self nominated at 00:45, 7 April 2014 (UTC).

  • I suggested ALT1 to keep the hook short and interesting, rather than just a list of names. 97198 (talk) 01:21, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

Massimo Tamburini

1994 Ducati 916

5x expanded by Dennis Bratland (talk), Brianhe (talk). Nominated by Dennis Bratland (talk) at 15:44, 11 April 2014 (UTC).

Ko Ko Gyi

Created/expanded by Phyo WP (talk). Nominated by Hybernator (talk) at 00:16, 12 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg The aricle was created on 7 April 2014, qualifying as new (5 days old or less) per the date of this nomination. It exceeds 1,500 characters. The hook is sourced in the lead of the article and in the Political career section of the article. Spot checking for copyvio reveals no problems. It may be functional to specify that the 17 years he spend in prison was not consecutive, as suggested in ALT1 below. NorthAmerica1000 00:40, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
ALT1: ... that Ko Ko Gyi, a prominent Burmese democracy activist who spent over 17 years in prison on multiple occasions between 1989 and 2012, may run in the next Burmese election?
  • Symbol possible vote.svg I am troubled by the extremely close paraphrasing in the final paragraph—the phrase "he and his colleagues are best suited to steer the country’s political landscape" is a direct copy, and the "It is believed" construction that starts the paragraph is not only unencyclopedic but needs explanation: who believes this and from what evidence? (Under the circumstances, a full check for close paraphrasing is needed.) Irawaddy is described in the article as an "exile-run news organization"; as such, there have to be neutrality concerns. The "over 17 years" hook fact is in the article's intro, but does not have a specific reference (the note doesn't count, since it isn't referenced); if this is done by adding up individual jail terms, then each one needs to have its own reference by the end of the sentence in the article which gives the length of that particular term. There's also a bare URL (FN6), which isn't allowed by DYK rules, and something odd with the FN8 entry that needs fixing. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:51, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on April 8[edit]

2014 IPC Powerlifting World Championships

Created by FruitMonkey (talk). Nominated by Matty.007 (talk) at 18:41, 13 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Looking at the provided source, it appears to me that 15, not 14, records were set/equaled. Please verify I'm not crazy and adjust the article + blurb if you agree. --ThaddeusB (talk) 20:25, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
  • I think you're right, and have changed it as such. Thanks for raising it, Matty.007 11:15, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

Joseph D. Bryant

Dr. Joseph D. Bryant

5x expanded by Jet Jaguar (talk). Self nominated at 02:09, 10 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg No QPQ but it appears that nominator has not had any DYKs before so that's OK. Article is five-folded expanded within the last five days. Sources are mainly contemporary obituaries; I don't think such dated sources are optimal, but probably within policy as most of the article is pretty basic CV like stuff and doesn't include controversies or other things that needs contemporary judgements. There are some direct copying from the sources, but as they date back to 1914, I believe the sources are out of copyright. The fact in the hook is interesting, but not sourced! It needs an inline citation. It is mentioned and sourced in the Grover Cleveland, so maybe you could use the source there. The lede should probably incude something about the professorships he held. Regards, Iselilja (talk) 17:24, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
I've added the academic credentials to the lede and an inline reference for the surgery on Cleveland. Any more suggestions are appreciated, this is the first time I've substantially expanded an article. Some of the text is copied from the sources, I basically stitched together two contemporary obituaries. I believed this was acceptable because, like you say, it's basic CV stuff from a 100-year-old source. Jet Jaguar (talk) 00:45, 15 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on April 9[edit]

Borderlands: The Pre-Sequel

Created by ViperSnake151 (talk). Self nominated at 03:03, 11 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg New (9th), long enough, "within policy", no copyvio found via spotcheck (no tool), QPQ done. There is a bit of excessive quoting here—stuff that is better off paraphrased (just a note since it's outside the scope of my review). Also the end-paragraph multiple footnotes make it very hard to verify the content. That aside, the stuff in the hook needs to have immediate refs in article (see 3b). Please ping me if I don't respond. czar  18:07, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
  • The required fixes have been performed. Please review again. ViperSnake151  Talk  00:10, 14 April 2014 (UTC)
Verifying the hook, the source says Mad Max and not Mad Max 2, so not sure where that's from. Also the "predominantly" part needs a cite (unless you remove that one word). Rephrased ALT2 czar  00:32, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

Community Based Program Design

  • Comment: This passed AfC on April 9, 2014.

Moved to mainspace by Philroc (talk). Self nominated at 00:25, 11 April 2014 (UTC).

Child soldiers in the Democratic Republic of Congo

Created/expanded by Darkness Shines (talk). Self nominated at 14:29, 9 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg New enough, long enough, neutral and well-cited. Hook is succinct and cited. QPQ done.
  • Outstanding issues: 1) The title of the article is not bold. 2) More pressingly, the lead of the article reads like a series of disjointed facts rather than a narrative or introduction. 3) The body of the article also appears as a description of issues peripheral to the subject without any real core on the subject itself, but this is not as problematic. Perhaps I am nit-picking, but I would be happy to approve this nomination once the first two issues are addressed. Oreo Priest talk 04:25, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

Allan du Toit

  • ALT1:... that Allan du Toit was 15 years old when he wrote his published book?
  • ALT2:... that Allan du Toit was the first non-United States officer to command multinational naval forces enforcing United Nations sanctions against Iraq?
  • Comment: I've included both facts I thought were interesting from the article and a hook which is just within the 200 character limit which includes both facts.

Created by Callanecc (talk). Self nominated at 00:36, 9 April 2014 (UTC).

Articles created/expanded on April 10[edit]

Peder Kolstad

  • Reviewed: To come

5x expanded by Iselilja (talk). Self nominated at 21:40, 15 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg Dates and lengths both good. Hook fact and most of the article is referenced to off line sources, so AGF. Foreign language sources used for portions of article with online sourcing. Was limited by online translation but spotted no problems with copyright or plagiarism. Once the required QPQ review is completed this nomination will be good to go. --Allen3 talk 17:47, 18 April 2014 (UTC)

Lilpop, Rau i Loewenstein

A 1860 Lilpop & Rau advertisement; Loewenstein joined the company a decade later.

Created by Halibutt (talk). Self nominated at 08:29, 14 April 2014 (UTC).

The Last Arrow

  • ... that The Last Arrow was praised for its inventive re-imagining of the Robin Hood legend, though one reviewer felt that its "sadistic sexual torture may offend some"?
  • Reviewed: Pending

Created by Ruby2010 (talk). Self nominated at 16:32, 13 April 2014 (UTC).

Chu Teh-Chun

Chu Teh-Chun

  • ... that Chu Teh-Chun's (pictured) art sold for US$65 million in 2013?

Created by Zanhe (talk). Self nominated at 05:39, 12 April 2014 (UTC).

Saving Hope (book)

Moved to mainspace by Mohamed CJ (talk). Self nominated at 07:16, 11 April 2014 (UTC).

Jerzy Zakulski

Jerzy Zakulski (1911-1947)

Created by Poeticbent (talk). Self nominated at 00:30, 11 April 2014 (UTC).

Symbol question.svg moving story on good sources, pic free. I suggest to tighten the hook a bit:
ALT1: ... that World War II resistance fighter Jerzy Zakulski (pictured), who rescued a Jewish mother and child from the Kraków Ghetto, was executed by Poland after the war? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:48, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on April 11[edit]

Mount St Mary's Church, Leeds

Mount St Mary's Church, Leeds

  • Comment: The source of the hook can be found in the Repairs section

Created by Pjposullivan (talk). Self nominated at 18:26, 11 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg No QPQ, but it seems the user has not nominated articles to DYK previously so that's OK. Article is new and long enough. It is in-line sourced to several online-sources. The main source as well as some others are to homepages etc. and not the typical independent reliable sources, but I believe we can accept this kind of sources for these kind of articles (churches). The article focuses relatively heavy on the parish as opposed to church architecture, but again I think this is within policy. The paragraph on Corpus Christi Church maybe strays a bit from the topic and could be shortened. I found a small tendency to close paraphrasing, like in this sentence "lectern and credence table to allow mass to be said facing the people" (Post-Vatican sectin), so that should be rewritten. The last paragraph could have more inline-citations. The hook is short enough and interesting, but I think the latter part the mine shaft could be accessed through the sacristy? is somewhat misleading as the rest of the sentence in the article says it was blocked off during the church's construction. Maybe it should rather just say "built on top of a coal mine"? And the only source is the homepage of the Oblates, which most probably is reliable, but it's not the kind of sources we normally refer to as "reliable sources" at Wikipedia. Regards, Iselilja (talk) 16:47, 12 April 2014 (UTC)

List of Interstate Highways in Michigan

Interstate 73 shield

  • Reviewed: Centennial Broadcasting
  • Comment: 2545 B of readable prose after expansion, 0 B before (only contained tables, infobox and references pre-expansion)

5x expanded by Imzadi1979 (talk). Self nominated at 03:44, 11 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg This article is an expansion of an article that had previously only consisted of tables. It is new enough and long enough but the image is not included in the article and therefore cannot be used at DYK. I don't think the hook is acceptable as you cannot really call a road that has not been built a new road. How about (if you add the image to the article): Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:28, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
  • ALT1 ... that Interstate 73 (marker pictured), though designated in 1991 and 1995 as part of the Interstate Highways in Michigan, has never been built?
    • @Cwmhiraeth: actually, the image is in the article in the table in the "Proposed Interstate Highways" section. I disagree that you can't call it the newest designation, since it is. No other Interstate designation applied to Michigan is newer. (All of the extant designations were approved in 1959, and all of the other proposed numbers were denied or changed in the late 1950s or 1960s.) I think you're confusing the designation (the name, legally assigned to the current corridor in Michigan by §1105(c)(5) of the National Highway Designation Act of 1995) with a physical road. I prefer the original hook. Imzadi 1979  11:28, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Well, I disagree on both counts. You state "No other Interstate designation applied to Michigan is newer" and I don't dispute this, but its not what it says in the hook. I know nothing about interstate highways but I do know that the word "new" implies that something exists and is not merely designated. The image is not suitable for use because it is a non-clickable logo and there is no information on its copyright status. If you were to include it in the top right corner of the page, like Highway 94, that would be acceptable. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:41, 19 April 2014 (UTC)
    • @Cwmhiraeth: which "Highway 94"? Do you mean "Interstate 94"? As for copyright status, all Interstate Highway shields are public domain as works of the Federal Highway Administration published in in the Manual on Uniform Traffic Control Devices, which can be confirmed by clicking on the image as it appears here. There should be no need to explicitly repeat the I-73 shield in the infobox when the five markers chosen there (in numerical order) were picked to show the original 1957 and the current (1971/73) designs of the existing mainline and business route markers (plus the one-off marker for the Capitol Loop). The image is in use in the article, but because of its size, per WP:ALT, it has had |alt=|link= used because it is of a more decorative nature.
    • As for the hook, "Interstate 73" is the newest Interstate Highway designation in the state, and the necessary upgrades to US 127 and US 223 in Michigan have not been built to allow the designation to be signed. The state will have to build a new freeway to replace US 223, build another section of freeway to connect that to the southern end of the US 127 freeway near Jackson, and build a freeway along US 127 to connect the ends of freeway at St. Johns and Ithaca.

      The hook is accurate as written. Imzadi 1979  23:54, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

Symbol redirect vote 4.svg I think it would be better if someone else reviews this article and hook. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:51, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg The original hook will not fly: I-73 does not exist as a highway in Michigan, and until it does, the enabling legislation is not worth the paper it's printed on or the money that's authorized, of which there's precious little. I've struck it. As WP:CRYSTAL says, Individual scheduled or expected future events should be included only if the event is notable and almost certain to take place. In this case, there's no guarantee that I-73 will ever be built, and to call it "the newest Interstate Highway in Michigan" means that it exists now in the state. It doesn't, and that's a couple of decades after the federal legislation. I'm also wondering why the intro says the last highway was completed in 1989 if the history gives a final segment date of 1992. The marker is indeed in the article; I'm not sure of the rules when a smaller-sized version is used in the article but a larger one is used for DYK, and whether the article's needs to be wikilinked. I know that the opposite—cropped versions of article images—is allowed for DYK. BlueMoonset (talk) 20:44, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
  • ALT2: ... that the newest Interstate Highway designation in Michigan is Interstate 73 (marker pictured), but it has never been built?
    • @BlueMoonset: does adding the explicit word "designation" clear up the ambiguity? It is still the newest designation, and a lobbyist group (the National I-73/I-74/I-75 Corridor Association) as well as the local economic development corporation are lobbying for it. As for your opinions of the legislation: the designation still exists until it is modified or repealed. As for the lead of the article, the typo has been fixed. Imzadi 1979  20:57, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on April 12[edit]

Vaginal transplantation

Created by ThaddeusB (talk). Self nominated at 23:50, 16 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg New enough, long enough. Well cited, including the good hook. Comparing with the sources (all free online), no close paraphrasing or copyvios found. All good. Edwardx (talk) 21:40, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg I pulled the hook from the queue due to misgivings about some of the medical content in the article. The hook is interesting and verified, and the if the article were about a nonmedical topic, I'd be happy to push this to the main page. The problem is that we need to apply higher standards to articles with medical information before they go on the main page (see WP:MEDRS). Concerns I have with this article (in the order that they appear in the article):
  • The lead sentence introduces the article as being about lab-grown vaginal transplantation, but then there is a one-sentence section about a vaginal wall implant of donor tissue. The lead and the article need to be consistent.
  • That sentence about the girl who got the vaginal wall implant from her mother is sourced to a 1993 article in a medical journal. The article appropriately describes it as a single case, but if Wikipedia is going to describe this case, we should not be relying on a single 21-year-old research report. Hasn't somebody discussed this case -- and possibly others -- in a review article?
  • The sources regarding the recent findings are news media articles. Can these be supplemented by something from a medically credible source (such as an editorial in a medical journal)?
  • Solid medical sourcing (ideally, a review article in a medical journal) is needed for the statements about "current techniques" that "rely on tissue harvested from other regions of the body" and that "can lead to unsatisfactory results or complications." Additionally, more context is needed for those statements -- it's not clear if the statement refers to current techniques for vaginal transplants (probably not) or current techniques for reconstruction of body parts in general (what I think it refers to). --Orlady (talk) 21:41, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Orlady, I'll see what I can do about the traditional transplant case. It was a case study, so is unlikely to be subject to commentary, but has been cited a few times. I believe this source would be an acceptable for the new procedure. Please confirm. I will correct/better source the lead and info about current techniques (actually refers to vaginoplasty, though it isn't clear as you say). --ThaddeusB (talk) 17:01, 20 April 2014 (UTC)
    That NHS source that you identify would be a very good supplement to the existing sourcing in this article, both for the new procedure and for statements about previous attempts that were not so successful. The NHS is not a medical journal, but it is more credible as a medical source than the news outlets cited earlier. --Orlady (talk) 23:20, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

Viktor Dyk

his name on the memorial

  • ALT1:... that Viktor Dyk's memorial bust just carries his name (pictured)?
  • Reviewed: QPQ=Marina Mohnen
  • Comment: he played chess and wrote about being Czech - and Slakr suggested the expansion was done - pic is from the memorial pic in the article. Fixed faults and Alts welcome.

5x expanded by C679 (talk), Victuallers (talk), Slakr (talk). Nominated by Victuallers (talk) at 08:56, 15 April 2014 (UTC).

Gabor B. Racz

Created by Atsme (talk). Nominated by Alf.laylah.wa.laylah (talk) at 22:04, 13 April 2014 (UTC).

Mihail Lozanov

Created by TodorBozhinov (talk). Self nominated at 14:26, 13 April 2014 (UTC).

Rembrandt toothpaste

  • ... that after Rembrandt toothpaste discontinued its canker sore toothpaste, the 3 oz (85 g) tube that had formerly sold for $6.99 instead sold for approximately $50, on eBay?

Created by Epeefleche (talk). Self nominated at 00:23, 13 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Sources spotchecked, creation date good, prose meets length requirement, hook checks out, section layout good. Question: do we need to say "USD xx.xx" in a DYK hoook instead of just "$xx.xx"?— Brianhe (talk) 21:31, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

Teaching Assistants Association

The Teaching Assistants Association on strike in 1970

Moved to mainspace by Czar (talk). Self nominated at 17:57, 12 April 2014 (UTC).

Pappa Umanath

5x expanded by Gfosankar (talk). Self nominated at 14:19, 12 April 2014 (UTC).

100th anniversary of the Armenian Genocide

Created by Yerevantsi (talk). Self nominated at 02:45, 12 April 2014 (UTC).

NOTICE: I want this article to appear on April 24, 2014, which is the Armenian Genocide remembrance day.

Child sexual abuse in Australia

Created by OccultZone (talk). Self nominated at 18:44, 12 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg At 1228 bytes, this one is too short too. Note that the Notable offenders section doesn't count towards the total (because it's a list). Sven Manguard Wha? 04:58, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
@Sven Manguard:, I had added a new section, named 'other studies', it is about 650 characters. OccultZone (Talk) 14:02, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on April 13[edit]

Jens Hundseid

  • ... that (to come) ?
  • Reviewed: To come

5x expanded by Iselilja (talk). Self nominated at 22:43, 18 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg As this nomination still lacks a hook a week after it has been made, a note has been left on the nominator's talk page asking for this nomination to be completed. --Allen3 talk 00:34, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

2014 Coppa Italia Final

Created by The Almightey Drill (talk). Self nominated at 15:46, 14 April 2014 (UTC).

André Furtado de Mendonça

André Furtado

Created by AntanO (talk). Self nominated at 18:12, 13 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg I would love to vote this forward, but there are a couple problems.
1) The article is long enough, it was created April 13, and nominated the same day.
2) The article is 2319 characters (381 words) according to DYKcheck
3) The hook statement does not appear in the article and is not cited.
4) Hook is 106 characters, well below the 200 usually allowed.
5) I am concerned that the citations need work. Illustration File:André_Furtado_de_Mendonça.jpg is fine. I uploaded a cleaner version to Wikimedia Commons because the original uploader hasn't been active since 2012 and the book was available in digital version. The image could be added to this DYK.
6) I do not see a QPQ at present, but I do not know if the nominator has more than five DYKs.
7) There are typos (e.g. Caption for Captain as above).
I think the article has potential, the subject is certainly interesting, but at this time, the article is not ready for DYK. Ellin Beltz (talk) 16:26, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

Yes check.svg Done Could you have a look on hook again? It appears on 3rd paragraph in the article. I added the image in DYK. If it is not nice, you may remove. Nominator has less than 5 DYKs. Typos are corrected. --AntonTalk 17:09, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

  • Symbol question.svg Yes, the hook is now good and the typos fixed. Good job on adding the image to the nomination. There are only few things left I don't understand, one is this sentence "Portuguese initiation in Jaffna Kingdom was created freedom to Catholic Christian missions" and the other is that the quote in citation 8 just trails off and doesn't finish. I put some of the references into template form and linked them through to Internet Archive, please click all the links to be sure. Should the title of the church of his burial perhaps be capitalized? Otherwise, good changes! Ellin Beltz (talk) 17:54, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
You are right. I've rewritten the sentences and corrected the quote in citation. I've capitalized the name of church as well placed the Portuguese name of the church. Remove it if it not appropriate. Do think that mentioning Portuguese vs. Ceylon words in the hook would interesting? Something like this - Portuguese Captain André Furtado killed Puvirasa Pandaram, the king of Jaffna Kingdom in 1591. Ignore the idea if it not nice. --AntonTalk 06:04, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Good fixes! I have one more question. I'm so sorry, but every time I read one of my own articles I find more things to fix. Sometimes in the article you call the subject "Andre" and other times "Andre Furtado", you might wish to standardize that at "Furtado" since the only other one mentioned is his father and that's done with in the first paragraph only. Ellin Beltz (talk) 14:53, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Charles Rondony, Léon Amédée François Raffenel

General Charles Rondony

Moved to mainspace by Dumelow (talk). Self nominated at 17:23, 13 April 2014 (UTC).

Marcel Hug

Marcel Hug at the 2014 Paris Marathon

  • ... that in his nine year career, wheelchair athlete Marcel Hug (pictured) has won 19 international medals, but never a Paralympic gold?
  • Comment: Alts are welcome, I am not too keen on the hook
  • ALT1: ... that The Silver Bullet (pictured) has won the Paris, Berlin, New York and London wheelchair marathons?

5x expanded by FruitMonkey (talk). Nominated by Matty.007 (talk) at 16:52, 13 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Length and time of 5x expansion check out. Found no copyvios. QPQ not strictly required. Enough refs in general, but not for the hook facts. Image looks OK to me (although I don't have much experience in reviewing hooks with images, so it wouldn't hurt if someone double-checked it). I can't approve either hook yet; the original hook isn't cited or even directly mentioned (only implied by the medal table), and in addition the reference to a "nine year career" is strange since he took up the sport much longer than nine years ago and has been competing internationally since at least 2004 (when he won Paralympic medals). The ALT hook comes closer, but I'd prefer it saying "Marcel Hug" rather than "The Silver Bullet" and his victory in the Paris wheelchair marathon is as far as I can see not cited. (My ALT2 suggestion, below, will also need the Paris cite.)
  • ALT2: ... that Marcel Hug (pictured) has won the Paris, Berlin, New York and London wheelchair marathons? Sideways713 (talk) 11:53, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
  • In cite 10, the second paragraph of the BBC article, it opens with: "Hug, 28, who won last weekend's Paris Marathon" FruitMonkey (talk) 12:38, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Thanks. I replaced the previous reference 9 with that one so it's close enough to the hook fact; it's a better ref anyway. Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Now we just need someone to approve ALT2 (or ALT1 if they like that better), and double-check the image if possible. Sideways713 (talk) 13:36, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on April 14[edit]

Rolf Hauge (officer)

Created by Oceanh (talk), Manxruler (talk), Geschichte (talk). Nominated by Manxruler (talk) at 00:57, 20 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Here's something that might draw some eyes:
Alt: ... that having defended a heavy water factory in the 1940 Norwegian Campaign, Captain Rolf Hauge led No. 5 Norwegian Troop of the No. 10 (Inter-Allied) Commando in the 1944 assault landings at Walcheren? Manxruler (talk) 22:28, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

Praxis Pietatis Melica

title page

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nominated at 22:54, 19 April 2014 (UTC).

Josef Frederiks II, Adolf Lüderitz

Created (Josef Frederiks II), expanded (Adolf Lüderitz) by Pgallert (talk). Self nominated at 11:43, 16 April 2014 (UTC).

Hedwig Bollhagen

butter dish

  • ... that Hedwig Bollhagen took over her workshops to make pots (example pictured) in "unusual circumstances" during the Nazi era?

Created by Victuallers (talk). Self nominated at 23:20, 14 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Article created by Victuallers on April 14, 2014 with 3,548 characters of readable prose. Well supported by external sources throughout, some in German. The two English sources suggest that the hook could be made clearer. Please take a look my ALT1 (below) for possible alternative. Good to go as is. Poeticbent talk 17:54, 20 April 2014 (UTC)
  • ALT1: ... that during the Nazi era, Hedwig Bollhagen took over a Jewish workshop in "unusual circumstances" to make quality ceramics (example pictured)?
Thanks for the review. Alt1 is much clearer. Victuallers (talk) 20:56, 20 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg The quote used in the article, which also seems to be a more accurate translation for "fragwürdigen Umständen", is "questionable circumstances", not the softened "unusual circumstances" in the hooks; the hook has to properly represent the article and the source when quoting. Suggesting ALT1a as a rewording of ALT1 with the correct quote, since Victuallers prefers it over the original hook, and striking the earlier hooks:
  • ALT1a: ... that during the Nazi era, Hedwig Bollhagen took over a Jewish workshop under "questionable circumstances" to make quality ceramics (example pictured)?
A new reviewer should confirm the new facts in the ALT hooks (Jewish workshop, quality ceramics) added by Poeticbent. —BlueMoonset (talk) 16:18, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
Looks like we have managed to convert another approved hook into a confused review. This will just deter editors and reviewers considering proposing new articles. I have lost interest in this one too. I do thank @Poeticbent for their review and maybe someone else has the drive to push this through. I find that this process requires too high an investment of effort once it gets itself involved in finding 4th and 5th reviewers. Hopefully we will fix this process. Victuallers (talk) 07:23, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
  • First you complain when I don't suggest a new hook when finding errors, now you complain when I do. Either way, you seem to think that misstating an article quote in the hook isn't an issue to begin with, but it is. BlueMoonset (talk) 13:15, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Wop (song), Don't Drop That Thun Thun

Created by ViperSnake151 (talk). Self nominated at 04:46, 14 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg There are now two DYKs. Since I don't feel comfortable with the idea of reviewing something for a user that is concurrently reviewing something of mine, I'll just mark this as in need of another review. Sven Manguard Wha? 05:43, 18 April 2014 (UTC)

Field hockey pitch

  • ... that on a field hockey pitch the penalty circle is not a circle? (See improved hook by ViperSnake151)
  • ALT1:... that from 1975 a field hockey pitch required an artificial turf? (Struck by nom, 11:45, 15 April 2014 (UTC))
  • Comment: Article developed from scratch in user space.

Created by Rambo's Revenge (talk). Self nominated at 01:47, 14 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg The hook disagrees with article on the year: "However, in 1976, the International Hockey Federation (FIH) made artificial pitches mandatory at all major competitions." I'll also note that the line I quoted is awfully similar to the line from the source, and that if it were not 4:30 AM, I would be going over the article very carefully for additional close paraphrasing, something that whomever moves this to prep should probably do. Sven Manguard Wha? 08:23, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Two points. Sven, feel free to comb the article; it was 1976, the Montreal Olympics, the International Hockey Federation and only for "major competitions" (limited hockey is still played on grass as lower levels today) – there are only so many sentence permeatations of these facts! Although, you are correct in the hook should have read 1976 (the first competition on artificial was an Olympic trial in 1975 but mandatory in 1976) – I've struck anyway as I prefer the first hook. Secondly, thanks to ViperSnake151 for c-editing this hook. Rambo's Revenge (talk) 11:45, 15 April 2014 (UTC)

Kidnapping in the United States

  • ... that kidnapping in the United States remains one of the most common crimes in the country; in 2010, the US Department of Justice reported 200,000 cases of parental kidnapping?

Created by OccultZone (talk). Self nominated at 18:53, 14 April 2014 (UTC).

  • "most common" is mentioned in the lede of the article but it is unreferenced. I'm intrigued to see how this crime compares with shop lifting or speeding. Victuallers (talk) 14:10, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
@Victuallers:, it is easy to find sources for that, I've just added one. OccultZone (Talk) 20:10, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
  •  :-) OK - you found a list of common crimes and kidnapping is in the list. But can you find a ref to show that it is "most common" .... bit trickier I think. Can I suggest you rephrase your lede? Victuallers (talk) 20:34, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

Rape in Germany

  • ... that according to national report, the conviction rate of Rape in Germany has declined, it was 20% in the 1980s, by 2000 it was 13%.

Created by OccultZone (talk). Self nominated at 18:58, 14 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg At 1415 bytes (after I removed an inappropriate section that wouldn't have counted towards the total anyways), this is slightly below the minimum size for DYKs. Please expand the article a bit, so that' it's over 1500 bytes in readable prose. Sven Manguard Wha? 20:29, 14 April 2014 (UTC)
Yes check.svg Done OccultZone (Talk) 20:53, 14 April 2014 (UTC)
Let's be clear here, this is an increase in reported cases. It doesn't necessarily mean the number of rapes have gone up. --Soman (talk) 14:02, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
@Soman: Source say that Germany is having rise, at least from the period of 1995 to 2009. OccultZone (Talk) 20:25, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
Symbol possible vote.svg - that hook definitely needs replacing. There's no way to definitively say that rapes have gone up or down. Prosecutions and conviction rates are available though. PanydThe muffin is not subtle 18:15, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
@Panyd:, changed. OccultZone (Talk) 06:43, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

June 4th Museum

June 4 Memorial Museum

Created by Sdee (talk). Self nominated at 20:45, 14 April 2014 (UTC).

Articles created/expanded on April 15[edit]

Albert Levy (soldier)

  • ... that Bert "Yank" Levy, who taught the British Home Guard and coauthored one of the first books on Guerrilla Warfare, said you could use a cheese cutter as a weapon?
  • QPQ: I owe you.

5x expanded by 7&6=thirteen (talk). Self nominated at 23:58, 20 April 2014‎ (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg Fixed up the template: next time, please use the form near the top of T:TDYK to create it. DYKcheck gives the current size of the article at 10376 prose characters, about 3.5x over the 2892 prose characters the article contained just before expansion began on April 16. The article will need to be increased to 14460 prose characters to achieve the required 5x expansion. Given that 4084 additional characters are needed, it doesn't make sense to continue the review until this has been done, and the required QPQ supplied. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:17, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
Fixed. I self nominated based on a 5X expansion. By my rough count, excluding citations, block quotes, footnotes and tables, etc. prose characters were 2496 on April 15, and are 15394 currently. The article went from 5729 to 42,004 total characters. 7&6=thirteen () 15:16, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
Comment: Even with the standard DYK check tool, the article is now 5x expanded. --Pgallert (talk) 08:53, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Jason Healey

Jason Healey speaking at the Security & Defense Agenda

Created by I JethroBT (talk). Self nominated at 04:54, 17 April 2014 (UTC).

Adore You

  • ... that the music video for the song "Adore You" appears to simulate a sex tape?
  • Comment: One of my more risque hooks...

Improved to Good Article status by WikiRedactor (talk). Nominated by Matty.007 (talk) at 16:31, 16 April 2014 (UTC).

The Flick

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nominated at 00:54, 16 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Review New enough. Long enough. Several references support the hook. I would suggest that the word "ushers" might be a more descriptive word than "employees". Play sounds like Clerks in a movie house. Clear for plagiarism and copy violation concerns. QPQ was done. Nicely done. 7&6=thirteen () 14:33, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
  • (ALT1)... that 2014 Pulitzer Prize for Drama-winning play, The Flick, was about three movie theater ushers?--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 22:54, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Review (ALT1) checks out. Good citations to multiple WP:RS. here #1 here #2 here #3 and here #4 I would only note that the New York Times review ought to have a permalink, ideally. I just got the dreaded "subscription needed" notice when I went there for the second time. (My free subscription had reached its max for the month.) 7&6=thirteen () 23:17, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg 7&6=thirteen () 23:07, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg This article makes excessive use of non-free materials - well over half of the prose is direct quotes, and some quotes represent significant proportions of the cited works. Nikkimaria (talk) 18:31, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Comment I understand Nikkimaria's concerns. That is a matter of style and interpretation, and his comments are not untoward. Nevertheless, they were all identified as quotes and sourced, so there was no question (IMO) of copyrighit violation or close paraphrasing. Even if the block quotes (the article was not properly formatted for those, but that is now corrected) are extracted from the count, there are more than 1500 characters, so it still qualifies for WP:DYK. 7&6=thirteen () 19:16, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
  • The point Nikkimaria makes is as much a WP:FAIRUSE one as pointing out the excessive use of long quotes: some quotes represent significant proportions of the cited works is against fair use guidelines that govern all Wikipedia articles: "acceptable use" is "brief quotations", and what appears in the article is hardly that. The article needs to be far less reliant on quotes. BlueMoonset (talk) 23:56, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
  • I understand and respect your point.
Please understand mine.
However, when one is addressing the nuanced opinions of professional theatre critics, an extended quote may be quire reasonable so as to properly catch the tenor and flavor of a complicated review. Reducing these down to simple movie poster phrases— e.g., 'a thrill a minute' or '2 thumbs up' — may be unintentionally misleading for our readers. It has to do with the message, the subject matter, and the available content. Any a priori rule is inherently suspect in that regard, as this is inherently a factual and fact specific determination. And reasonable minds could therefore differ as to what is "fair use" for a particular review and a particular play.
This article was created by a highly experienced Wikipedian, and he made his good faith judgment.
What you are doing here is creating and enforcing a rule without prior notice of its scope or of the consequences. This is just an ex post facto disagreement, and it surely could be subject to both reasoned debate and informed correction if necessary. 7&6=thirteen () 03:59, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
  • How is it now?--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:55, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Comment Prose section is about 2100 characters (which includes some short quotes within it), and the additionial block quotes are about 1250. While I think this was a carefully morphed article, I suggest that BlueMoonset and Nikkimaria are the ones who had serious issues, and I would invite their review and comment. I would not presume to speak for them. 7&6=thirteen () 12:04, 23 April 2014 (UTC)


AN/APN-4 LORAN receiver for aircraft

Created by Maury Markowitz (talk). Self nominated at 17:20, 15 April 2014 (UTC).

  • I can never figure out how to add images after-the-fact, so if someone knows how to do this, do you mind?
  • I got it for you, Maury Markowitz. Whenever I run up against a problem like this, I just go to a page where the markup is working and shamelessly steal said working markup. That's what I did here. Sven Manguard Wha? 18:31, 15 April 2014 (UTC)

Haley Farm State Park

Created/expanded by ChrisGualtieri (talk). Self nominated at 16:38, 15 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg} Date, size, hook, refs are fine. But I'd suggest a bit longer and more interesting hook below. The alt 1 will need to be ok'ed by another reviewer, but that's just a formality. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:56, 16 April 2014 (UTC)

Yeah, I like that. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 20:01, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on April 16[edit]

Meldon Viaduct

Meldon Viaduct, Devon

Created by Tabletop (talk), Welsh (talk), Dumelow (talk), and HJ Mitchell (talk). Nominated by HJ Mitchell (talk) at 20:14, 22 April 2014 (UTC).

Sanur, Jenin, Jarrar, Throne village

Sanur, circa 1908

Reviewed: Transgender History, Johnny Maconie, Jammu and Kashmir Awami League

Created/expanded by Al Ameer son (talk), Huldra (talk). Nominated by Al Ameer son (talk) at 14:00, 21 April 2014 (UTC).

Seta Dadoyan

  • ... that the lectures of medieval historian Seta Dadoyan have been described as an "intellectual feast"?

Created by EtienneDolet (talk). Self nominated at 23:05, 16 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg OK--it's new enough, and (after tweakage) just about long enough. The hook is verified, but there lies a bit of a rub: the references are hardly as strong as they should be: we're talking newsletters and such here, and the reference for the hook is a newsletter from her own (at the time?) university. In fact, and I hate to say it, there aren't that many strong references and some malevolent editor might even consider slapping a notability tag on the article: her books, for instance, could do with references to scholarly reviews to prove such notability per WP:PROF--a few testimonies reported in the AUB bulletin can't do that. I'm going to ask some experts, User:Randykitty and User:Crisco 1492, to have a look: if they think that these references provide notability they can tick this off. Drmies (talk) 03:59, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
  • I'm getting 1477 characters. There are two reviews of The Fatimid Armenians on Jstor, 1 and 2. Sadly I don't have Jstor access to help with the writing. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:04, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the quick response, Chris. I brought the two reviews in and I would assume there might be more of the other books. As far as I'm concerned it squeaks by in terms of notability and it's a bit longer now. What do you think of the reference for the hook? Drmies (talk) 04:28, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
  • We need something independent. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:30, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Drmies, thank you for the review. There's numerous sources regarding her work and academic career. I ran into many that describe and assess her writing style and scholarly work. My references used in this article are more geared towards expanding her biography. Therefore, I have been selective in picking my sources in that regard. I mostly chose sources that elaborated on her biography. Unfortunately, there's not much on her early and personal life. I haven't even run into a birth date for her. There's loads of sources assessing her work though which, might I add, will be overwhelming for the average Wikipedia user if added to the article. Étienne Dolet (talk) 04:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Etienne, I hope you understand the problem with the reference for the hook. If you add a review or two, even just as a footnote to the entry in the "Works" section, notability is not a problem anymore, in my opinion. You could consider proposing a different hook--it's just that, for an evaluative claim like this, which is to be the attraction for the reader, we really need a rock-solid source. Thank you, Drmies (talk) 04:50, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Yes that's understandable. I found a few reviews but I have don't have access to them ([17][18][19]) Étienne Dolet (talk) 05:09, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
Update: I added some reviews that I was able to access. Étienne Dolet (talk) 05:55, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
As far as I can see, notability under WP:ACADEMIC is near-absent (very meager citation record in both WoS and GS), however, for her field is a low-citation field, so this is not to be construed as evidence of a lack of notability. I'm a bit less familiar with WP:AUTHOR and cannot access most of the reviews linked above and in the article. Perhaps those will make her squeak by. As for the hook, I would never use such a non-independent source for such lavish paise in an article (as opposed to using it to source some neutral and non-controversial stuff, which would be perfectly acceptable), let alone use it to source a hook. I think you should find a better reference for that or change the hook. --Randykitty (talk) 14:51, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

ALT1 ... that medieval historian Seta Dadoyan was awarded the David Anhaght medal for her contributions to Armenian philosophical studies? Étienne Dolet (talk) 16:45, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

  • EtienneDolet, that seems like a fine idea, but I can't find much useful in the David article. Who awards that medal? Can you provide an online reference to her getting it? Ideally, the David article would have a section on it... Sorry for giving you such a hard time. Thanks,

Anti-Zionist League in Iraq

  • ... that after it was banned, members of the Iraqi Anti-Zionist League were arrested and charged with the crime of Zionism?

Created by Soman (talk). Self nominated at 22:32, 16 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg I'm not sure whether to trust that all the sources I can't see online are not plagiarised, due to close paraphrasing in one place: "It blamed British and American imperialism for the rise in sectarian violence and nationalism." is supported by a citation whose source has the sentence "The league's newspaper published articles blaming British and American imperialism for the growth of nationalism and sectarian violence." The article is new, however, and sufficiently long, seems neutral to me, and has inline citations. The hook is interesting, well supported and short. If the close paraphrasing is fixed or considered acceptable, I support this DYK. --Slashme (talk) 13:05, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

Black genocide

Angela Davis in 1972

Created by Binksternet (talk). Self nominated at 06:57, 16 April 2014 (UTC).

The Music of Grand Theft Auto V

Improved to Good Article status by CR4ZE (talk), Rhain1999 (talk). Nominated by CR4ZE (talk) at 06:27, 16 April 2014 (UTC).

Articles created/expanded on April 17[edit]

Home Run Baker

Home Run Baker or Home Run Baker

  • ALT1:... that Home Run Baker (pictured) only hit 96 home runs, and never more than 12 in a season?
  • Reviewed: IOU
  • Comment: Pre-expansion was 2316. Right now, it says its at 11672, which according to my handy dandy Windows calculator, is 5.03972x expanded. – Muboshgu (talk) 20:13, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

5x expanded by Muboshgu (talk), EricEnfermero (talk). Nominated by Muboshgu (talk) at 19:23, 22 April 2014 (UTC).

Billy Boys

  • ... that Rangers football fans were warned not to sing the Billy Boys despite UEFA previously saying they were unable to do anything about it because it was a tolerated historical and social song?
  • Reviewed: Pike's Lane
  • Comment: For 3 May (Rangers' last game of the season)

5x expanded by The C of E (talk), Jmorrison230582 (talk). Nominated by The C of E (talk) at 11:46, 20 April 2014 (UTC).


  • ... that four-eyed harvestmen known as Tetrophthalmi once roamed the Earth?
  • Reviewed: Wing-assisted incline running
  • Comment: Hook is (intentionally) quirky, but I believe within the community's acceptable range. If another hook if preferred, let me know.

Created by ThaddeusB (talk). Self nominated at 20:50, 19 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Interesting and sure to generate clicks, although not really cited as a specific fact... A less silly, but still interesting, hook might cite the fact that "H. argus is named for the Greek monster Argos, who had 100 eyes and served the goddess Hera." (From this source) Length of article, etc, all checks out, except for "not a specific fact" as mentioned above. -- Brainy J ~~ (talk) 21:30, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

Naked Jungle

  • ... that readers of the Radio Times voted the nudist gameshow Naked Jungle as the worst British television programme ever?

5x expanded by The Almightey Drill (talk). Self nominated at 23:51, 17 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Not ready. The citation this hinges upon is to ukgameshows.com which is like Wikipedia and lacks the editorial control to be considered a reliable source, especially something controversial. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 18:05, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
    • The Radio Times citation is from The Guardian. '''tAD''' (talk) 19:00, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
      • Just so we are clear, I see "The programme was made by the same producers as CITV's children's gameshow Jungle Run, and used the same set as well as following the same format, apart from having individual winners instead of a winning team." is cited to UKGameshows.com and the page uses the cite a total of 5 times.[20] Now. I do see the Radio Times comment, but the actual line using the "same set" is not cited to it. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 19:18, 18 April 2014 (UTC)
        • I've removed that ALT now. '''tAD''' (talk) 22:19, 18 April 2014 (UTC)

Al-Qaidah (newspaper)

  • ... that although it was banned the communist newspaper al-Qaidah was probably one of the most read publications in Iraq at the time?

Created by Soman (talk). Self nominated at 14:18, 17 April 2014 (UTC).

  • A less ambiguous version: ALT 1: ... that although it was banned at the time, the communist newspaper al-Qaidah was probably one of the most read publications in Iraq in 1947? Sven Manguard Wha? 21:48, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

Idhuvum Kadandhu Pogum

Created/expanded by Sriram Vikram (talk). Self nominated at 11:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC).

Articles created/expanded on April 18[edit]

Jack Charlton

Improved to Good Article status by EchetusXe (talk). Nominated by Casliber (talk) at 15:15, 21 April 2014 (UTC).

The Downward Spiral

Improved to Good Article status by Mr. Gonna Change My Name Forever (talk). Nominated by Casliber (talk) at 14:57, 21 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Support DYK nomination as I improved this article. (=D) }IMr*|(60nna)I{ 20:32, 21 April 2014 (UTC) Sorry, can't be you who supports but someone else uninvolved has to assess and pass it for the DYK spot on the main page. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 20:42, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
Agree; I'm happy with you! (=D) }IMr*|(60nna)I{ 00:06, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Marking as in need of a review. Sven Manguard Wha? 23:01, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

The Widow's Son, London

The Widow's Son, London

  • ... that The Widow's Son pub (pictured) is named for the story of a widow who every Good Friday baked a hot cross bun for her only son, in the hope that he was not lost at sea and would one day return?

Created by Edwardx (talk), Philafrenzy (talk). Nominated by Edwardx (talk) at 09:43, 21 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg The story of the widow and her son may be apocryphal and this needs to be reflected in the hook. The fact will also need an inline citation. In other ways the article is fine. It is new enough and long enough, the image is appropriately licensed, and I ran a duplicate detector test without finding any problems. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:30, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Thanks. I've added extra citations after each of the sentences in the article that form the basis of the hook. I've also added "the story of" to the hook. Hope that that's enough! Edwardx (talk) 13:04, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Priddy Nine Barrows and Ashen Hill Barrow Cemeteries

Created by Rodw (talk). Self nominated at 09:54, 18 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg age and size ok. Interesting article. no paraphrasing seen. I can't see in ref 4 where 450 metres south is mentioned (I was skimming so might have missed it....). With the Priddy Nine Barrows, when I scrolled through the source I thought the smallest was 12 m not 10 m (?). I'd give the date of the excavations (1815) as sounds more interesting than early 19th century and more exact too. The mention of the three extra barrows needs a reference. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 14:36, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Thanks for your comments. As suggested I have changed early 19th C in the lead to 1815 (which was given later in the article) & 10m -> 12m. Ashen Hill Barrows are about 450m south of the Priddy Circles however I have changed this to 750m as given for the 2 seperate barrows which is approximately the middle of the field (it's a big field). The source for the possible extra 3 barrows is this one which is given directly after the claim "A geophysical magnetometry survey investigated the area between the existing seven and the outliers which make up Priddy Nine Barrows suggesting that there may have been three further barrows, however the work was inconclusive". Are you saying another source is needed?— Rod talk 17:27, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Sorry, my bad - it was late and I was tired. Symbol confirmed.svg all good to go. It's like watching a Time Team episode....Cheers, Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 21:21, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

Harijan Mandal

Created by Soman (talk). Self nominated at 19:14, 18 April 2014 (UTC).

Berkshire No. 7, Elmer S. Dailey, Priscilla Dailey

Created by ChrisGualtieri (talk). Self nominated at 18:10, 18 April 2014 (UTC).

Wally Pipp

Wally Pipp

  • ... that in 1925, Wally Pipp (pictured) "took the two most expensive aspirin in history"?
  • ALT1:... that Wally Pipp's (pictured) benching in favor of Lou Gehrig has inspired numerous tales?
  • Reviewed: Pastila
  • Comment: ALT 1 isn't great, but presented anyway. I prefer going with Pipp's quote.

5x expanded by Muboshgu (talk). Self nominated at 18:02, 18 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg This is a newly promoted GA. It is long enough and nominated in the correct time frame. I made no attempt to consider close paraphrasing issues except in the references associated with the hook, which is accurate and cited. Going with the original hook which is more interesting. The image seems to be in the public domain. You had not done a QPQ Muboshgu, so I donated you one. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:21, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Kidnapping in the United Kingdom

  • ... that statistics for kidnapping in the United Kingdom are often hard to discover due to the country's policies around the crime, but an estimated 500 cases of parental kidnapping are reported annually?

Created by OccultZone (talk). Self nominated at 07:24, 18 April 2014 (UTC).

Current nominations[edit]

Articles created/expanded on April 19[edit]

Wacław Kopisto

Wacław Kopisto

Created by Poeticbent (talk). Self nominated at 05:33, 22 April 2014 (UTC).

Gird by-election, 1972

Created by Soman (talk). Self nominated at 14:58, 19 April 2014 (UTC).

Blown Away (song)

5x expanded by Sauloviegas (talk). Self nominated at 22:23, 19 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol delete vote.svg Article has only been expanded threefold not fivefold. Hook verified against online source. ALT hook also verified. No QPQ required for editor with only two noms. sad Hawkeye7 (talk) 01:10, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on April 20[edit]

Malin Byström

  • ... that Swedish soprano Malin Byström was called "a svelte blonde beauty with the figure of a dancer" when singing the title role in Thaïs in 2012?

5x expanded by Edwardx (talk). Self nominated at 12:27, 24 April 2014 (UTC).

Urodacus yaschenkoi

Urodacus yaschenkoi

  • ... that the inland robust scorpion (pictured) can move 200–400 times its own weight in sand when building its burrow?

Created by Casliber (talk). Self nominated at 14:49, 23 April 2014 (UTC).

  • I tried to copy edit this, but without access to the sources I could not do a very good job, so I will have to leave it to you to clarify. It wasn't clear to me whether the family or just the species were native to central Australia. I plumped for the species which can't be wrong but might be too restrictive. Do scorpions have arms and hands? Should this read legs and claws? Is the male's tail exceptionally long and the female's exceptionally short? Otherwise it would only be worth mentioning the exceptional example or that the male's tail is longer than the female's. You say that the depth of the burrow is related to the instar of the scorpion, but you do not tell us how. Are older scorpions deeper burrowers? "It is found...in habitat such as sand dunes". What habitats are like sand dunes? Bellemora (talk) 15:42, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Ok all good copyedits but I did revert a "to" to an "and" - nw NSW and sw Queensland are adjacent areas at the east of its range, which can be pictured stretching horizontally across a swathe of central Australia. It does live in other desert-like habitats that don't have sand dunes. You're right - younger ones have smaller burrows - I will fetch the reference and add added. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 21:05, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
Also - this diagram is of a related creature but illustrates what the arms and hands are. i.e the arms are the things that go up to the claws as opposed to the eight legs. This was the terminology used in the source, but I note people use pedipalp much more widely (if google images is anything to go by, so "arm and hand" --> "pedipalp" Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 21:37, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
That's better. Hands and arms just sounds weird. I rephrased the range again because the mention of the town of Birdsville sounded odd among the states until you see its location straddling the border when it becomes clearer that it is a marker for the easternmost extent of the range. Bellemora (talk) 23:00, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
The article Urodacidae is a red link. Wonder if that was created too and became a DYK article. }IMr*|(60nna)I{ 00:46, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
I need to read up on that....changes look ok. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 01:04, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Dieter Bortfeldt

Created by Philafrenzy (talk), Edwardx (talk). Nominated by Edwardx (talk) at 22:35, 22 April 2014 (UTC).

Przevalski's Nuthatch

Przevalski's Nuthatch

5x expanded by Fuhghettaboutit (talk), Totodu74 (talk). Nominated by Fuhghettaboutit (talk) at 02:33, 22 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Because I worked this up in a subpage and after I moved it to the mainspace over the existing article I did a history merge, assessing the date expansion is to be judged from is masked. As seen, the move was on January 20, 2014, and the article only had seven edits at that time i.e., this is the version before my 22 × expansion.--Fuhghettaboutit (talk) 02:58, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

Ernest Psichari

Ernest Psichari

Created by Dumelow (talk). Self nominated at 22:07, 20 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg Everything looks good. Long enough. New enough. But I think a slight change needs to be made for the original hook. I provided the ALT below.
ALT2 ... that writer Ernest Psichari (pictured), grandson of liberal philosopher Ernest Renan, became an idol for right-wing French nationalists?
Also, I highly suggest you do Harv refs for this article. See an example of one of my articles here: Clarence Ussher. See how there's a bibliography section? Also, notice how the citations just point to the page number of the bibliography reference. It's very helpful and organized and makes it easier to navigate around the article. See Wikipedia:HARV for more information. Ping me on my TP once you're done. Étienne Dolet (talk) 01:24, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
@EtienneDolet: Your ALT is fine with me. I usually use template:harvnb for GA and FA length articles but don't tend to bother with shorter articles (in some instances it seems awkward to me to have almost as many reference sections as article text sections). In this case I have made the switch to Harvard referencing. Cheers - Dumelow (talk) 19:34, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg Okay, great! As aforementioned, the article is long enough. New enough. Hook is reliably sourced. I approve ALT2 hook. W'ere good to go! Étienne Dolet (talk) 19:56, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

Michael Wesely

Created by Aschmidt (talk). Self nominated at 19:15, 20 April 2014 (UTC).

Symbol question.svg Interesting article on interesting person and technique, based on good sources. Do you hate infoboxes? - I am not yet happy with the hook, as a bit dry. How about mentioning "commentary on time's passage", and/or Potsdamer Platz "at once strikingly energetic and ghostly and uninhabited". You word it (or I can't review it). --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:01, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
Which infobox would you suggest to add to the article? I'm sceptical whether an infobox would really make it any better, but I'm open for comments. I'm not quite sure whether to use the quotation in the hook because it might be hard to understand as a hook for quick readers? Hm.--Aschmidt (talk) 22:09, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

Murray Buchan

  • ... that Olympian Murray Buchan originally wanted to work in mountain rescues?
  • Reviewed: Put here

Moved to mainspace by Fort esc (talk), Matty.007 (talk). Nominated by Matty.007 (talk) at 18:14, 20 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg Multiple issues. Text is mere 1516 letters. It seems that some info is repeated in article to reach 1500+. I can not find reliable source/citation which prove the info in the hook. If article is copyedited, it may result in a stub having 1000 lettets. Please expand the article and have citation clearly stating the info in hook. Regards and Keep contributing. -Nizil (talk) 16:57, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Hook is in [21], my dad has always been a skier and from a young age worked in the mountain rescue team at Glenshee ski centre, so naturally I wanted to do what my father did, used as source in article, so no issue there. The lead summarises the article, which is what it is meant to do. Therefore, the information is sourced in the article, then summarised in the lead. Thanks, Matty.007 15:59, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
Ok, I found the citation but you cited in article incorrectly. Anyways ::: Murray Buchan (born 2 December 1991), nicknamed Mutley, Muesli, and Muzza, is a freestyle skier who competes in the discipline of halfpipe, his first Olympics was the 2014 Winter Olympics in Sochi.[2]
Buchan's Olympic debut was at the 2014 Winter Olympics in Sochi, he competed on 18 February 2014 in the halfpipe, a freestyle skiing event, finishing in 17 place in the qualification round.
This lead speaks of his 2014 Olympic debut twice. And if we remove it. Article falls short of 1500 letters. It is also mentioned twice that he won British Championship. Lead summarizes but in main text. This is mentioned twice. And it looks like If someone copyedits it, it will be even more short. So please add more info rather than stretching what is already there. Regards -Nizil (talk) 19:30, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

Carlos G. Vallés

Created by Nizil Shah (talk). Self nominated at 17:25, 20 April 2014 (UTC).

Ernest Radcliffe Bond

  • ... that upon his being hired by the police, Commander X was hailed in the press as a "mystery supremo", yet journalists have claimed to know his identity?
  • Reviewed: The Boat Race 2004
  • Comment: Hook is a bit wordsy, but I think something about his being 'Commander X' would be interesting.

Moved to mainspace by Matty.007 (talk). Self nominated at 15:40, 20 April 2014 (UTC).

Penalty stroke, Penalty shoot-out (field hockey)

Created by Rambo's Revenge (talk). Self nominated at 15:18, 20 April 2014 (UTC).

Joe Puryear

  • Reviewed: Holcim
  • Comment: "Six" is not explicitly stated but there are six peaks listed together as first ascents.

Created by 97198 (talk). Self nominated at 13:45, 20 April 2014 (UTC).

Fred Stanfield

Created/expanded by Ravenswing (talk). Self nominated at 11:46, 20 April 2014 (UTC).

Twomile Run

  • ... that the average pH at the mouth of Twomile Run in 2007 was 3.52?

Moved to mainspace by Jakec (talk). Self nominated at 01:57, 20 April 2014 (UTC).

List of bishops of Macau

José Lai is the actual bishop of Macau

Created by Sdee (talk). Self nominated at 16:37, 20 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg This list is long enough and has been created on the indicated day. The picture has a suitable license for placement on the main page. There are a couple of issues here, however:
    1. The nominator already has 5 DYK credits and thus needs to review someone else's nomination.
    2. The hook, IMHO, is not suitable. Not only is it ungrammatical, but it is not a fact from the article. Maybe someone wants to suggest something?
    3. If a picture should accompany this nomination, then the hook should say what/who is pictured here.
    4. The article needs a review for English grammar, style, and flow of prose. It also needs to be wikified by a friendly gnome; the remarks for instance should be in the table, not in an 'appendix', and the dates should have the recommended formatting. The table is currently hard to read. --Pgallert (talk) 19:44, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
    • I hope someone can assist me with more in details as i am new to write in english articles.--TINHO (talk) 16:02, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

Hsinbyushin Medaw

Created by Hybernator (talk). Self nominated at 00:26, 21 April 2014 (UTC).

Articles created/expanded on April 21[edit]

Gemma Wilde

Moved to mainspace by JuneGloom07 (talk). Self nominated at 00:22, 24 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg The source for the hook fact only mentions "a hospital" - is there another source you can add to verify that it was Whipps Cross? 97198 (talk) 08:36, 24 April 2014 (UTC)


5x expanded by Doug Coldwell (talk). Self nominated at 12:01, 22 April 2014 (UTC).

E. Gail de Planque

  • Reviewed: pending

Created by Rosiestep (talk). Self nominated at 01:38, 23 April 2014 (UTC).

Raymond House (Vassar College)

Raymond House, pictured in 2013

  • Reviewed: new user

Created by Misaugstad (talk). Self nominated at 22:23, 21 April 2014 (UTC).

Israeli Communist Opposition

Created by Soman (talk). Self nominated at 22:05, 21 April 2014 (UTC).

Paul Blart: Mall Cop 2

The Wynn building where the entire film is being shot

  • ALT1:... that Paul Blart: Mall Cop 2 is the first film ever to receive Nevada's new film tax credit?
  • Comment: Both news are big, but I would suggest/prefer first hook most.

Moved to mainspace by Captain Assassin! (talk). Self nominated at 20:06, 21 April 2014 (UTC).

DeCSS haiku

Created by Piotrus (talk). Self nominated at 09:09, 21 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg Awkward hook IMO. Should be more succinctly. -- P 1 9 9   13:59, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Nancy Kelsey

Nancy Kelsey

5x expanded by Ellin Beltz (talk). Self nominated at 16:45, 21 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg A pleasure to review – nice article Ellin! Sufficient prose length; timing proper; hook under 200 characters; reads as neutral; reliable sourcing and hook cited; spot check found no infringement; in short, ready to go.--Fuhghettaboutit (talk) 03:47, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on April 22[edit]

Daniel Suarez (racing driver)

  • ... that Daniel Suarez won the first three races he competed in in 2014, across two different racing series?

Created by IgnacioR96 (talk), The Bushranger (talk). Nominated by The Bushranger (talk) at 22:17, 23 April 2014 (UTC).

Eleanor Elkins Widener

Rice Yacht Alberta full.png

Created by EEng (talk), Hertz1888 (talk). Nominated by EEng (talk) at 02:47, 23 April 2014 (UTC).



Created by Northamerica1000 (talk). Self nominated at 00:46, 23 April 2014 (UTC).

Josephus Nelson Larned

Josephus Nelson Larned

Created/expanded by Gamaliel (talk). Self nominated at 22:11, 22 April 2014 (UTC).

Vukosav Nikolić

Created by Zoupan (talk). Self nominated at 21:44, 22 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg The article is good enough. Long enough. AGF on the foreign language citation for hook. However, I highly suggest this ALT hook:

Not too many people know who Miroslav of Hum is. Therefore, giving him some character in the hook may make it more appealing. Let me know what you think. Please ping me on my TP. Étienne Dolet (talk) 03:39, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Intercrater plains on Mercury

Moved to mainspace by Rfox8 (talk). Nominated by Graeme Bartlett (talk) at 21:30, 22 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Under review. AshLin (talk) 02:10, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Long enough, New enough, moved to mainspace within last 5 days.

Church of St John the Divine, Calder Grove

Scissor-truss openwork timber church roof

Moved to mainspace by Storye book (talk). Self nominated at 19:41, 22 April 2014 (UTC).

The Boat Race 2000

  • ... that The 2000 Boat Race had both the tallest ever competitor and the youngest ever victor?
  • Reviewed: Put here

Created by Matty.007 (talk). Self nominated at 19:23, 22 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Few issues.......
  • "Oxford won the race by three lengths, breaking a seven year spell of Cambridge dominance, though the result was a "shock triumph", and lost in 2001. " too many run-on clauses and no need to mention 2001 in the lead.
  • Fixed
  • " triumped" typo.
  • Fixed
  • "completing a clean sweep for the year." not clear what the sweep constitutes. Especially when you say "Oxford also won the women's lightweight, but Cambridge won the women's reserves, men's lightweight, and men's lightweight reserves"
  • Changed
  • Use en-dash for scores, e.g. 76-69 should be 76–69.
  • Changed, though see note at bottom of this page
  • " in 9 years" MOSNUM -> nine.
  • Changed
  • Refs 3, 8 & 10 have same publisher, but not represented the same here.
  • Changed
  • No attribution given anywhere on the talk page for the article you copied, some of it verbatim.]
  • Sorry about that, as I say below, I used one of your GAs as a guide, and forgot to credit the copied section.
  • As for the hook, the 2013 race featured a 6 ft 10 inch rower (Paul Bennett).
  • The competitor here was joint tallest, but I will probably propose an alt anyway due to half the hook being invalid
  • Also, the youngest winning participant was in 1873, not 2000, so not sure about the hook at all right now.
  • Apologies, my mistake. I will propose an alt on Sunday (when I will also do a QPQ), as I am away with work tomorrow until Sunday

Symbol possible vote.svg The Rambling Man (talk) 20:31, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

  • I used your GA The Boat Race 2003 as a guide, and the scores did not use en dashes, should they? Will propose alt and QPQ on Sunday, see above. Thanks, Matty.007 17:47, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
  • If they didn't use en-dashes, I'll eat my hat... Yes, they should. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:56, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

Gelobt sei Gott im höchsten Thron

  • Reviewed: Michael Wesely
  • Comment: as soon as possible ;) - I would like to include the Halleluja - fa-la-la similarity but don't know how.

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nominated at 14:09, 22 April 2014 (UTC).

Antigua Barracuda FC

Created by TheBigJagielka (talk). Self nominated at 12:52, 22 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol delete vote.svg Article is interesting but not new, no recent expansion or GA status and nothing moved into mainspace. The prose is currently 2737 bytes, so either 13,685 bytes of text or a GA award would be necessary to fulfil the criteria for posting as a DYK in the future. C679 18:12, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

INS Sindhukirti (S61)

  • ... that as of 2009, the Indian submarine Sindhukirti had spent 10 out of her 30 years of service in refits?

5x expanded by Strike Eagle (talk). Self nominated at 09:08, 22 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Size and date check out. DD check shows no apparent CP/CV concerns: there is one lengthy match, but it is an approprately cited, and appropriate, quotation. Hook fact checked and verified to source. Should be good to go. Suggest wording change to "ten out of her thirty years of service". - The Bushranger One ping only 22:12, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
Yes check.svg Done Thanks for the review! ƬheStrikeΣagle sorties 05:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Vera Popova (now Vera Bogdanovskaia)

Vera Bogdanovskaia

5x expanded by Aciram and Victuallers (talk). Self nominated at 08:40, 22 April 2014 (UTC).

Symbol delete vote.svg According to DYK check, the article is 342 characters short of being a x5 expansion. It's a shame because, in my opinion, this is exactly the kind of article that needs to be expanded and DYK should feature, so I hope you can get this one on the front page.
  • The Ogilvie and Rayner-Canham sources has a different transliteration of her name. Perhaps adding alternate transliterations or her name in cyrillic could boost the character count.
  • The wording of the hook is awkward. Why not something simple like "chemist Vera Popova (pictured) was the first woman to die conducting scientific research?"
  • Hook source and picture check out.
  • Your hook source cites this article as its source for that info. I've uploaded it to dropbox in case it can help you add a few extra characters to the article.
  • Your primary sources, Ogilvie and Rayner-Canham, list her under her maiden name. Should not the title of the Wikipedia article do so as well?

Gamaliel (talk) 21:36, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for your help. The article you sent and the mods you made to the article were very useful. I think the size has now grown and the quality has increased.
I will add some different transliterations - good idea.
Your hook is a good alt. although maybe not so intriguing?
Maiden name? - could do.
I think this addresses the major point. I'll look at the rest later. Cheers Victuallers (talk) 23:46, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
  • I've just noticed there are a couple minor factual errors in the paragraph about her schooling. When you make the discussed changes and fact-check the article, and I'll review it again. Let me know if I can be of any help. Gamaliel (talk) 04:25, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
Hi thanks for the review and the offer of help. Can you identify or correct the errors you have found please. I do value your suggestions but these are not part of the DYK review. I think you will find that it is compliant with the rules. Cheers Victuallers (talk) 16:34, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
That's reasonable. Let me know when you feel the article is in compliance with the rules. Gamaliel (talk) 19:03, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
I think you will find that it is compliant with the rules. Coincidentally I too your suggestion and created "Vera Bogdanovskaia" as main title. Cheers Victuallers (talk) 08:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Articles created/expanded on April 23[edit]

Carling Campus

Created by P199 (talk). Self nominated at 13:49, 24 April 2014 (UTC).

Nimdoma Sherpa

Created by 97198 (talk). Self nominated at 10:49, 24 April 2014 (UTC).

Armen Dorian

An amateur sketch of Armen Dorian

  • ... that during the Armenian Genocide, poet Armen Dorian (pictured) was arrested in the middle of the night and ultimately murdered when just 23 years old?

Created by EtienneDolet (talk). Self nominated at 03:48, 24 April 2014 (UTC).

Vika Lusibaea

Created by Aridd (talk). Self nominated at 17:30, 23 April 2014 (UTC).

Premio Lo Nuestro 2013

Created by Jaespinoza (talk). Self nominated at 18:24, 23 April 2014 (UTC).

Otter fishing

An otter retrieving a fish for its master, depicted in the Carta marina (1539).

  • Comment: QPQ pending

Created by AshLin (talk). Self nominated at 14:59, 23 April 2014 (UTC).

  • The section on the technique used by Chinese fisherman is cited to a source that doesn't contain that information (I was unsure of the meaning of "on a share", so I checked). Bellemora (talk) 10:08, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Corrected ref. Please reconfirm & thanks for detecting/pointing out. My bad! That should have been "shore". Deleted it. :) AshLin (talk) 12:46, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Thank you, I thought maybe the fisherman was on a shared boat. (I was only copy editing, but for the nomination checker: if you want to trust me, it is fine as regards point 3 of the article criteria that appear when you edit this section.) Bellemora (talk) 13:28, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
  • That picture looks more like a cat. An otter has a stout tail among other things. Shyamal (talk) 12:37, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Oh, those medieval artists! Sigh! :) Ref 4 from University of Minnesota confirms it.AshLin (talk) 12:46, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Geoff LaTulippe

Created by 97198 (talk). Self nominated at 13:33, 23 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg All good: article length just passed 1500, date created Apr. 23, and properly sourced. -- P 1 9 9   14:11, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Hideaway (Kiesza song)

  • ... that Kiesza had a broken rib while filming her music video "Hideaway"?

Created by Thivierr (talk), Djunbalanced (talk), Greenock125 (talk), and Launchballer (talk). Nominated by Launchballer (talk) at 10:20, 23 April 2014 (UTC).

Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band

Improved to Good Article status by GabeMc (talk). Nominated by Acalycine (talk) at 01:54, 23 April 2014 (UTC).

Articles created/expanded on April 24[edit]

Liberec Region

Ještěd Tower

Created/expanded by Cloudz679 (talk). Self nominated at 13:10, 24 April 2014 (UTC).

Choo Seng Quee

Created/expanded by LRD NO (talk). Self nominated at 10:12, 24 April 2014 (UTC).

Eleanor Owen

Moved to mainspace by Cindamuse (talk). Nominated by Sven Manguard (talk) at 02:50, 24 April 2014 (UTC).

Cody Rhodes and Goldust

Cody Rhodes and Goldust

Improved to Good Article status by FairyTailRocks (talk). Self nominated at 01:14, 24 April 2014 (UTC).

Chihiro number

  • ... that the Chihiro numbers form a sequence that grows faster than any conventional mathematical function?
  • ALT1: ... that recursively finding Chihiro numbers can quickly produce some of the largest numbers in mathematics?

Created by Wjxb (talk). Self nominated at 03:45, 24 April 2014 (UTC).

Special occasion holding area[edit]

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April 26 - William Shakespeare's 450th birthday/baptism[edit]

Romeo and Juliet (Pastor)

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nominated at 18:36, 22 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg New enough, long enough, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. I came across your note on the DYK talk page about running this on April 26 in commemoration of Shakespeare's baptism. The hook seems very busy and the part about Shakespeare and Romeo and Juliet is a bit lost in it. What do you think about writing a different hook about the unique setting of the ballet in the 3 Italian political eras? Yoninah (talk) 12:48, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Well, I think it is big news in certain high class circles that after 30 years the Joffrey Ballet had changed which choreography it performs to Prokofiev score. However, if that upsets the "rhythm" of DYK, I'll have to make a change. I'll see what I can do. I also think there may be a policy against using plots for hooks. However, keep in mind that it is actually somewhat unusual for plots to be sourced. I only do so in some cases when I am producing a plot for a work I have never seen myself and want other wikipedians to be able to correct my text.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 13:25, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg OK, no problem. ALT1 reads best. Hook ref verified and cited inline. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 17:55, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Moving to April 26 holding area. Yoninah (talk) 17:55, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

Titus Andronicus (character)

  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Sanur, Jenin, Jarrar, Throne village (2nd of 3 QPQs)

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk), Jguin096 (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 07:30, 24 April 2014 (UTC).

I removed the claim that it is a Senecan tragedy, though you might make something of the inspiration from Seneca, as this is a bit of a dud article at the moment; aside from the emasculated plot summary it's two lines. Bellemora (talk) 09:14, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg New and large enough, is referenced and not written in a biased way. Correct people are credited. Hook links to article, Hook is in article, referenced and confirmed by source. [22] Hook is 177 characters is short enough. I am going to remove the stub rating as this would disqualify it, really it's a start class. Good to go. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 09:18, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

May 11[edit]

Wilfred T. Webb

Wilfred Taft "W. T." Webb (c.1913)

  • ... that Wilfred T. Webb (pictured) delivered Arizona's official 1912 electoral vote certificate a day late because he stopped en route to Washington D.C. to court his future wife?

Created by Allen3 (talk). Self nominated at 00:00, 11 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg QPQ done. Article new and long enough, inline-sourced. I didn't notice any copyvio/close paraphrasing problems. Several of the sources are dated and out of copyright, the most contemporary I coulnd't access, so assuming good faith regarding copyvio/close paraphrasing for them. The fact in the hook is interesting, backed up by a 1914 news article; within the 200 character limit. Photo is in public domain due to age. Good to go on the requested date May 11. Regards, Iselilja (talk) 18:39, 12 April 2014 (UTC)

May 17[edit]

2014 FA Cup Final