Talk:Sadie O. Horton

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Sadie O. Horton

• ... that Sadie O. Horton (pictured), who was the first recorded female United States Merchant Marine veteran of World War II, filled various roles?
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SL93 (talk) 04:36, 21 May 2024 (UTC).

• Comment only (not a review): cumbersome hook, the part "filled various roles" is pointless and superfluous to the more-than-notable statement preceding it. Just simplify the hook:

ALT1: ... that Sadie O. Horton (pictured) was the first recorded female United States Merchant Marine veteran of World War II?

-- P 1 9 9  ✉ 16:36, 28 May 2024 (UTC)

I'm fine with that. SL93 (talk) 21:36, 28 May 2024 (UTC)