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'''Support''' - This is ready to become an FL in my opinion.--''[[User:MaranoFan|<b style="color:purple">N</b>]][[User talk:MaranoFan|<b style="color:teal">Ø</b>]]'' 03:06, 25 March 2021 (UTC)
'''Support''' - This is ready to become an FL in my opinion.--''[[User:MaranoFan|<b style="color:purple">N</b>]][[User talk:MaranoFan|<b style="color:teal">Ø</b>]]'' 03:06, 25 March 2021 (UTC)

Source review passed; promoting. --'''[[User:PresN|<span style="color:green">Pres</span>]][[User talk:PresN|<span style="color:blue">N</span>]]''' 19:05, 28 April 2021 (UTC)

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List of songs recorded by Dua Lipa (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

Nominator(s): LOVI33 20:10, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because I believe it fits the criteria. I first created this article last year but I have spent some time this year fitting it to the criteria. I have used other song lists as references for this article and I have made sure this uses reliable sources. Any comments would be great! LOVI33 20:10, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 21:27, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
;Comments
  • Lead photo caption is not a complete sentence so shouldn't have a full stop
  • Fixed
  • Conversely, captions of images beside the table are complete sentences so need full stops adding
  • Fixed
  • "Prior to this" - prior to just the album's release or prior to everything mentioned in the previous sentence?
  • Reworded
  • "It encompassed dance-pop...." - presumably "it" is the album, but as the last thing mentioned was 21 songs, this reads a bit oddly. Maybe "The album encompassed dance-pop...."
  • Reworded
  • "Lipa featured on Charity singles" - no reason for capital C, it isn't a proper noun
  • Fixed
  • "collaborated with many of the same songwriters and producers on her first album" => "collaborated with many of the same songwriters and producers as on her first album"
  • Reworded
  • "she released a the Blessed Madonna....." - "a the" reads really weirdly, so I suggest re-arranging this sentence completely to avoid this
  • Reworded
  • "Registered on the American Society of Composers, Authors and Publishers" - ASACP is an organisation and you can't register something "on" an organisation, so I suggest "Registered with the American Society of Composers, Authors and Publishers" (this issue occurs more than once)
  • Fixed
  • If "Good Times" was uploaded to her YouTube channel and "Lions & Tigers & Bears" was uploaded to SoundCloud then they aren't unreleased, surely....?
  • YouTube and Soundcloud aren't formal ways of releasing music. They are social media. However I have noticed that songs released this way are given separate sections. Do you think that would be a better way of organizing? LOVI33 20:53, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The Blessed Madonna is written both with and without a capital T
  • Fixed
  • Notes for band members are not complete sentences so shouldn't have full stops
  • Fixed

Comments

  • File:Roskilde Festival Dua Lipa-13.jpg: there is some funky stuff going on in the Deutsch description of the file.
  • I've replaced it. There was some sort of template there that I didn't understand. I hope the new one looks okay.
  • What's the difference between a single and a promotional single? Isn't a single inherently promotional?
  • Promotional singles usually are released to promote sales of another project (usually an official single). For example, "Future Nostalgia" was released to push sales of "Don't Start Now". Not all of song list article differentiate between promo singles and non-singles. Do you think I should remove the key for them?
  • I wouldn't recommend using color-code keys to indicate tracks served as single or promo single; that makes the tables feel overly single-centric, and this isn't supposed to be a singles discography. You'd be better off using keys to highlight whether something was a cover of another person's previous work. SNUGGUMS (talk / edits) 01:53, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • File:J Balvin 2015, Austin (cropped).jpg, File:20161119 블랙핑크 멜론뮤직어워드 (1).jpg, File:The Black Madonna at All Points East Festival 2018 (cropped).jpg, File:Miley Cyrus Primavera19 -226 (48986293772) (cropped).jpg, File:DaBaby - The Know Show.png, File:Martin Garrix @ Web Summit 2017.jpg, File:Chelceegrimes.jpg, File:Calvin Harris - Rock in Rio Madrid 2012 - 09.jpg, File:Tove Lo (1) By Daniel Åhs Karlsson.jpeg, File:Madonna by David Shankbone cropped.jpg, File:Chris-martin.jpg, File:Julia Michaels (cropped).jpg, File:Singer Miguel 2013 2.jpg, File:Kylie Minogue - Summer 2019 - Step Back In Time Tour - Castlefield Bowl - Manchester - 11.07.19 - 236.jpg, File:MNEK Glatsonbury Festival 2014 by neal whitehouse piper cropped.jpg, File:Seanpaul01.jpg, File:Mark-Ronson.jpg, File:Songwriter Emily Warren.png, and File:FKA twigs (16391770926) (cropped).jpg all need Template:Personality rights at the Commons like File:Roskilde Festival Dua Lipa-13.jpg has.
  • Added in.
  • Added.
  • I believe more references are needed generally, for instance there is nowhere mentioned that Sonny Bono wrote "Bang Bang" in the reference provided, unless I'm missing something, which is entirely possible. Therapyisgood (talk) 01:57, 19 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Everything should now be backed up.

Thank you for the comments Therapyisgood. All have been addressed. LOVI33 17:58, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from User:SNUGGUMS
  • I see somebody else has commented on the images, so be sure they're all free of copyright and their file sources are accessible.
  • I have doubled checked every image and I believe they all satisfy those restrictions
  • Only four tracks total are mentioned in the lead? That's not nearly enough! I would also include some non-singles to make it more diverse (don't solely focus on singles when those aren't the only type of songs this page lists).
  • I have added some specific song mentions that I see as notable. Most are collaborations but I have also added ones where the songwriters or producers are notable.
  • See my above comment on why keys shouldn't be used for single/promo single releases.
  • Replaced. I have also added a key on remixes where Lipa doesn't appear on the song's original version.

Mainly due to an inadequate lead, I oppose for now. That could change after the page is revised. SNUGGUMS (talk / edits) 01:53, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the comments SNUGGUMS! I hope I can change that oppose in the future but I have addressed all you comments. I hope everything looks okay now. LOVI33 22:36, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Much better looking now! It's enough for me to support. I made one minor change here since 2014 isn't her first professional endeavor overall, just when the musical part of Lipa's life began (she did some modelling beforehand). SNUGGUMS (talk / edits) 23:01, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from MaranoFan

Resolved
  • "Prior to the album's release, she released a Spotify Sessions EP and The Only EP" --> "Prior to the album's release, she released two extended plays (EP), Spotify Sessions (2016) and The Only (2017)"
  • Reworded
  • "Of the 25 songs included on all editions of Dua Lipa, Lipa co-wrote 21 of them" -- I think this sentence would be just as good without "of them"
  • Reworded
  • "dance-pop, electropop and R&B genres while it mainly used electronic productions" -- Electropop is a sub-genre of electronic music so I think the second part of this sentence is already implied. You could just keep "dance-pop, electropop and R&B genres" or change it to "dance-pop, electropop and R&B genres and electro-funk, synth-pop and tropical house elements" or something in that vein.
  • Reworded
  • "The singer released an EP titled Live Acoustic in 2017, which featured several covers and released a Deezer Sessions EP in 2019" --> "The singer released the EPs Live Acoustic (2017), which featured cover versions of songs by other artists, and Deezer Sessions (2019)"
  • Reworded
  • I think "Don't Start Now" and "Break My Heart" are pretty glaring absences from the lead. Perhaps throw in a sentence like "Lipa's second studio album Future Nostalgia was released in March 2020, preceded by the singles, "Don't Start Now", "Physical" and "Break My Heart"".
  • Reworded
Everything else looks Cool.mp3, Good luck!--NØ 07:21, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for the comments MaranoFan! I have addressed all of them. I hope everything looks okay now. LOVI33 22:11, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Support - This is ready to become an FL in my opinion.--NØ 03:06, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 19:05, 28 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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