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==Mention?==
Maybe someone should mention how The Great Escape was referenced in the opening chapter of Metal Gear Solid 3? [[User:129.110.199.169|129.110.199.169]] 19:54, 26 September 2006 (UTC)

Done and done. [[User:Ynos|Ynos]] 16:05, 17 October 2006 (UTC)

==Rowing to Sweden==
I corrected:

''*Ivan (Charles Bronson) and his friend Willie ([[John Leyton]]), after some trouble getting Danny out in the tunnel due to him being claustrophobic, manage to get on a boat and row to [[Sweden]].''

They board a neutral Swedish ship in port, presumably to stow away or seek help. If they had already reached Sweden, why would they be boarding the ship from their rowing boat?. [[User:Dainamo|Dainamo]] 08:52, 9 December 2005 (UTC)

:Maybe they were on their way back to England? I cant remember, its been a while since I saw it. ---- [[User:Astrokey44|Astrokey44]]<small>|[[User talk:Astrokey44|talk]]</small> 12:48, 9 December 2005 (UTC)

Nobody "rows" to Sweden through the Baltic Sea. Swden was a neutral who had Germany as a commercial trading partner during the war. The port was one controlled by the Germans, as it was in the real event--Buckboard 09:45, 3 April 2006 (UTC)

==Story==

The story of The Great Escape is in too much detail. I am gonna edit it to readable limits later (if others agree).[[User:Sbohra|Sbohra]] 12:25, 12 February 2006 (UTC)

:It was just expanded by another editor. I notice this sort of thing happens all the time with movie summaries - one editor expands it, another cuts it down, it gets expanded again etc. -- [[User:Astrokey44|Astrokey44]]<small>|[[User talk:Astrokey44|talk]]</small> 14:27, 12 February 2006 (UTC)

:It's a three-hour film with many sub-plots and many stars. I think the full detail of the plot is appropriate. Besides, [[WP:NOT|Wikipedia is not paper]]. It's just the right length. [[User:Raggaga|Raggaga]] 16:14, 26 February 2006 (UTC)

::Wikipedia is not a paper, but we have to make allowances for readers' attention spans- at least break it up into subsections. [[User:Borisblue|Borisblue]] 23:37, 24 March 2006 (UTC)
:::I agree, even though I desire film pages to be more than just commercial plot blurbs, this is basically far too much detail, and needs to have some things removed to save space. [[User:Cybertooth85|Cybertooth85]] 04:48, 14 April 2006 (UTC)

::::As other pages have done [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_120_Days_of_Sodom], I have added a short synopsis for people who want a brief overview. I propose that if the absurdly long "Film plot" section is to be left intact that it be moved to another page. I'm not sure who would want to read a play by play of a movie rather than just watch it; the length of the section make the article unwieldy.--[[User:Bantosh|Bantosh]] 21:21, 13 July 2006 (UTC)

Except for the dialogue, we have a full script. I love the film but it's length is annoying overkill. Like somebody in a bar telling you about a movie who won't shut up.--Buckboard 09:40, 16 July 2006 (UTC)
*Agreed; cut. [[User:Dan100|Dan100]] ([[User talk:Dan100|Talk]]) 23:24, 1 January 2007 (UTC)

: I agree that a full blow-by-blow description of the movie seems unnecessary. If you've seen the film, you know all this, if you haven't, it's too much of a spoiler. I would suggest it would be better cut down to a quarter to a third of its current length. Until then though I have divided the section into what (to me) seem reasonably sized and logical sub-sections. <tt>[[User:Dawkeye|dawkeye]] 13:14, 20 July 2006 (UTC)<tt>

::I've expanded the synopsis a bit. That should be enough; it's consistent with the length and detail of the many other movies I've seen and edited. The overly detailed film plot should either be deleted or helped to "escape" to its own page. [[User:Clarityfiend|Clarityfiend]] 05:55, 21 July 2006 (UTC)

== Number of Escapees Not Explained ==

In the film, it is stated that 76 men escaped the prison camp.

Later in the film, Col. von Luger tells RAF Group Captain Rupert Ramsey, the Senior British Officer, that 50 men where shot (dead) and 11 would be returning to the prison camp. (Whether or not the 11 returning men included the American, Captain Virgil Hilts, played by Steve McQueen, who was returned to the camp in a separate car may be an open question.)

We know that 3 men escaped (Danny and Wille by row boat to a ship), Sedgwick through France to Spain.

So here is my question: What happened to the other 11 or 12 men?

{|table class="wikitable"
|-
|align=right|76||escaped from the camp
|-
|align=right|-50||shot dead
|-
|align=right|-11||returned to camp
|-
|align=right|-3||made it out of Germany
|-
|align=right|'''12'''||'''unaccounted for*'''
|}
<small>* 11 if you considered Hiltz return not to be one of the 11 men Col. von Luger was speaking a about.</small>

A little too literal aren't we? Presume. They were re-captured, since only three made it back to Allied control and "only" fifty were shot. There were never any mess hall shots but one presumes they ate something during all those months of captivity.

In the real Great Escape, most of the others who were recaptured (and not murdered) were sent to other POW camps. Four ("Jimmy" James, "Wings" Day, John Dodge [cousin of Winston Churchill], and Sydney Dowse) were sent to the infamous [[Sachsenhausen Concentration Camp]], near Berlin. After a short stay there, they managed to escape once again! The whole story may be found in James' book, "Moonless Night". [[User:Mhstevens|Mhstevens]] 21:29, 26 August 2006 (UTC)

== Video games ==

Is there a particular reason why there needs to be two separate articles about Great Escape video games (see [[The Great Escape (video game)]] and [[The Great Escape (2003 video game)]])? The articles are merely stubs and both seem quite inconsequential. Why not just collapse them into this article? -- [[User:Padjet1|Padjet1]] 13:51, 8 August 2006 (UTC)

:Because they are completely different games. Sorry, but this is like demanding that two films of the same name from different decades be merged under the same article. Different games with wildly different gameplay require different articles -- [[User:Zagrebo|Zagrebo]] 23:04, 8 August 2006 (UTC)

::Whether they are different games is not the issue. Why are the games sufficiently important to warrant their own separate articles? Not every video game in existence requires its own article in Wikipedia, particularly those which are minor derivatives of a much more well-known subject. Without more evidence of notability, their existence can more than adequately documented in the [[The Great Escape|main article]]. -- [[User:Padjet1|Padjet1]] 23:51, 8 August 2006 (UTC)

::: Just becuase theirs stubs dosn't mean they shouln't have their own articles. In time both articles will be greater in length. Then what, still keep them in the same page? No. Their two different games and they should have to different articles. Anyways every video game could have its own article.--[[User:Coasttocoast|Coasttocoast]] 04:10, 9 August 2006 (UTC)

:::: I can't speak for the PS2/Xbox title, but the old 8-bit game needs its own article because a)It is related to the film only by theme, and b)It was (at the time) critically acclaimed.[[User:Marasmusine|Marasmusine]] 07:16, 11 August 2006 (UTC)


:::: I'm sure both games are capable of having good, detailed and informative articles. Lumping them together would be confusing, suggests a real link between them (there isn't one really) and probably limit the detail that can be gone into. As I've said, these two games share a name and an influence and very little else. Ocean's ''Great Escape'' is an isometric arcade-adventure with a great deal of innovations and originality for its time. The console game I can't speak for but it's probably a first-person game with the emphasis on stealth. They simply don't have anything in common. -- [[User:Zagrebo|Zagrebo]] 20:11, 16 August 2006 (UTC)

::::: They need their own seperate articles. If just one name was different we wouldn't be talking about merging them together--[[User:Coasttocoast|Coasttocoast]] 04:34, 20 August 2006 (UTC)

== Kommandant ==

Shouldn't ''Commandant'' be '' '''K'''ommandant''? <small>—The preceding [[Wikipedia:Sign your posts on talk pages|unsigned]] comment was added by [[User:Microchip08|Microchip08]] ([[User talk:Microchip08|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Microchip08|contribs]]) 20:07, 25 April 2007 (UTC).</small><!-- HagermanBot Auto-Unsigned -->

==Did MacQueen also play...?==
*Did MacQueen also play the ambushed German motorcylist ambushed by "Hilts" {MacQueen}?

:He does play one of the Germans on motorcycle chasing Hilts, but I'm not sure if it is the one ambushed by Hilts. [[User:GCD1|GCD1]] 19:00, 6 August 2007 (UTC)

Yes - I saw a docu on the telly in which they reported that McQueen had one of the rare opportunities in movie history (this side of Python) to play both characters in a scene - the escaped prisoner, and the motorcyclist he downs...

[[User:Mark Sublette|Mark Sublette]] 01:30, 8 August 2007 (UTC)Mark Sublette[[User:Mark Sublette|Mark Sublette]] 01:30, 8 August 2007 (UTC)

Didnt he play more than one??? <small>—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Johnnycash316|Johnnycash316]] ([[User talk:Johnnycash316|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Johnnycash316|contribs]]) 05:57, August 25, 2007 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

== Romualdas Marcinkus Citation Request ==

Recent edits include a request for citation on a statement about Romualdas Marcinkus and his absence from the film (with the character of Virgil Hilts being included). What specific part of these statements needs a citation? I'm not trying to 'dispute' the citation request, but simply wondering what part needs cited: that Marcinkus was in the camp at all, whether he was involved in the escape, whether his character was excluded from the film, whether Hilts' character was added to replace him, etc.? If the person who initiated the request for citaton, and/or those supporting it, could provide some clarification, I'm sure it would make the process easier. Thanks! [[User:GCD1|GCD1]] 14:32, 21 September 2007 (UTC)

==Book==

Shouldn't there be an atricle for ''The Great Escape'' book by Paul Brickhill? [[User:Emperor001|Emperor001]] ([[User talk:Emperor001|talk]]) 13:01, 17 December 2007 (UTC)
:There could be, if someone would like to write it. Would you like to volunteer? &mdash; [[User:Val42|Val42]] ([[User talk:Val42|talk]]) 01:37, 18 December 2007 (UTC)
::Just created the article. [[User:Emperor001|Emperor001]] ([[User talk:Emperor001|talk]]) 18:14, 18 December 2007 (UTC)

==Rename article==
{{moved|The Great Escape|The Great Escape (film)}}
{{Polltop}} - '''Move as no objections.''' [[User:Keith D|Keith D]] ([[User talk:Keith D|talk]]) 00:00, 6 January 2008 (UTC)

There are several other things called [[The Great Escape (disambiguation)|The Great Escape]]. Shouldn't this article be [[The Great Escape (film)]]? &mdash; [[User:Val42|Val42]] ([[User talk:Val42|talk]]) 01:42, 18 December 2007 (UTC)
:I'm about to create an article for the book, and since the book came before the movie, I would say yes. [[User:Emperor001|Emperor001]] ([[User talk:Emperor001|talk]]) 17:59, 18 December 2007 (UTC)
I just tried moving the article, but for some reason, I can't. It tried the name suggested, but it says that an article with that name already exists or that it's an invalid name. A little help here? [[User:Emperor001|Emperor001]] ([[User talk:Emperor001|talk]]) 18:17, 18 December 2007 (UTC)
:I tried too, which is why I proposed the rename here. We should wait a week for discussion here before we bring in an administrator, just in case someone objects. &mdash; [[User:Val42|Val42]] ([[User talk:Val42|talk]]) 18:38, 18 December 2007 (UTC)
{{Pollbottom}}

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==Spelling==

I was correcting another minor problem and noticed that there is a lot of British spelling. I know that in the real prisoner of war camp portrayed, the prisoners were mostly British and Canadians, so the British spelling would be appropriate. However, this is an American movie (so the sacrificed accuracy to get the American audience) and there are a lot of Americans in the movie. I'm not declaring that American spelling should be used, but since I don't see a prior discussion on this page, we should discuss this issue. &mdash; [[User:Val42|Val42]] ([[User talk:Val42|talk]]) 03:25, 20 May 2008 (UTC)
:[[WP:ENGVAR|policy on English language variations]] says (IIRC) that where there is no overriding cultural difference (as here), the prevailing usage should be that with which the article was created, unless there is a compulsive reason to change it. British POW's (mainly); American film production- you pays your money and you takes your choice. I see no reason to deviate from the original majority spelling, but that's only an opinion. --[[User:Rodhullandemu|<span style="font-family:Verdana;color:#0000FF">Rodhull</span>]][[User_talk:Rodhullandemu|<span style="font-family:Verdana;color:#FF0000">andemu</span>]] 22:56, 3 October 2008 (UTC)

==Blyth's blindness==
This is not going to be sorted out by posting massive amounts of text from the [[Geneva Convention]]; it is impermissible [[WP:OR|original research]]. A [[WP:RS|reliable third-party source]] saying this is fine; anything else, er, isn't. We do not [[WP:SYN|draw conclusions]] from multiple sources here. --[[User:Rodhullandemu|<span style="font-family:Verdana;color:#0000FF">Rodhull</span>]][[User_talk:Rodhullandemu|<span style="font-family:Verdana;color:#FF0000">andemu</span>]] 23:58, 3 October 2008 (UTC)

:You can't label something "original research" simply because you don't like it, and have then been proven wrong. There were very well documented [[prisoner exchange]] programmes established during both World Wars by the [[International Red Cross]]. It is not original research to note this. If I can't post it, please read [http://www.icrc.org/ihl.nsf/FULL/305?OpenDocument Geneva Convention of 1929, articles 68-74 plus Annex I], which specifically mentions blindness as an illness that if serious enough, should lead to repatriation]. The detaining power has no ability to refuse a genuine request. And as stated previously, the Germans did generally follow the Geneva Convention when it came to Western PoWs. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/86.166.234.158|86.166.234.158]] ([[User talk:86.166.234.158|talk]]) 11:06, 4 October 2008 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

::This entire conversation is irrelevant, as Blyth's blindness came on '''''just before the escape''''' (as clearly shown in the film) so the question of whether he should be exchanged or not would never have come up in the timeframe covered by the film. <b><i>[[User:Ed Fitzgerald|Ed Fitzgerald]]</i> <sup>[[User talk:Ed Fitzgerald|t]] / [[Special:Contributions/Ed Fitzgerald|c]]</sup></b> 17:10, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
:::
::: That is irrelevant. The character of Blythe could have simply requested an eye test at any time during his captivity through the elected liaison officer, and if when failed it, would be transferred via the Red Cross. All this is in Articles 68 to 74.

::All that is being said here, Anon, is that regardless of how strongly you believe this, we cannot talk about it in relation to ''this article'' unless you find a third-party reliable source which talks about the Geneva Convention as it would have applied in the context of this film. Any "proof" which you yourself could write up does not qualify for inclusion as it is [[WP:SYN|original research]]. »[[User:Jc-S0CO|<font color="black"><b>S0CO</b></font>]]<small><sup>([[User_talk:Jc-S0CO|<font color="red">talk</font>]]|[[Special:Contributions/Jc-S0CO|<font color="blue">contribs</font>]])</sup></small> 17:11, 4 October 2008 (UTC)

::: That is also irrelevant. We have established that (1) blind PoWs were required to be repatriated if they so requested, per the Geneva Convention; this was originally claimed to be "original research". Clearly it is not, as the evidence is not hard to find. Blythe is blind - this is not original research either. What is now being labelled as "original research" is the tiny link between the two, which is not even explicitly made. Some people here decided ages ago that this should not be included, presumably on the basis of their own profound ignorance, and when presented with [[Geneva Convention (1929)|valid evidence which is impossible to argue with]], you are then using the "original research" label politically to try to prove a point. Please consider acting a bit more sensibly.
::::You are entirely correct in citing what the Geneva Convention says, and what would have happened in Blythe's case. What would be incorrect is us, as authors, drawing the inference from the two things, because this is [[WP:SYN|a synthesis]] of sources and not permitted by policy. We are an encyclopedia, a tertiary source, and can only rely upon what others have written as secondary sources, or to a very limited extent, upon primary sources such as film and television programmes. There is nothing political about it; what you say is fully accepted. It's just that unless a [[WP:RS|reliable third party source]] has drawn the conclusion you say we should be able to draw, we cannot do it ourselves, and that's the beginning and end of it. Please take it up at the Talk page for [[WP:SYN]] if you think the policy is incorrect. --[[User:Rodhullandemu|<span style="font-family:Verdana;color:#0000FF">Rodhull</span>]][[User_talk:Rodhullandemu|<span style="font-family:Verdana;color:#FF0000">andemu</span>]] 21:51, 4 October 2008 (UTC)

== Citations and style ==

Over the past few days I've flagged this article a couple times for assistance in providing [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] for the great number of [[WP:CITE|uncited]] copy and factoids. Those [[WP:TM|maintenance tags]] have been removed, cited as "ridiculous", "unwarranted", and "repetitive". Not sure how so, unless the repetitive refers to the Refimprove tag that was buried at the bottom of the page (initially relegated to a "tags" section!). Since the original maintenance tag was "hidden" at the page bottom, I can understand the "repetitive" claim, but information pointing to its existence could've been included in the edit summary. I've relocated the tag to the traditional -- and more noticeable -- page-top spot. As for "ridiculous" and "warrantless", I think an article in which 90% of its "facts" are missing supporting reliable sources can be characterized as warranting more citations. The works listed in the bibliography may be supportive, but inline cites are preferred.

Also, unsure what the [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=The_Great_Escape_(film)&oldid=249138999 addition] of the {{tl|Prose}} and {{tl|fictionrefs}} in the Production and Pop culture sections being characterized as "tagging" rather than "editing" means, but [[Wikipedia:WikiProject Films/Style guidelines#Background/Production|Films Style Guidelines]] specifically states that these sections "should be transformed into prose" and [[Wikipedia:WikiProject Films/Style guidelines#Background/Production|Trivia sections should be merged into standard Film sections]]. As for "tagging" not being "editing", I [[WP:AGF|respectfully]] disagree: this article has been flagged for lack of reliable sources since May; the purpose of maintenance tags is to alert ''editors'' to the need for article improvement. Maintenance tags are part of the [[Wikipedia:Citing sources#Unsourced material|WP editing process]].

In relocating the Refimprove tag to the top, I am also reverting its date back to the original May 2008. Interested editors are invited to begin adding suitable cites to enhance the quality and value of the article. Much of the article has been unsupported for over a year, and even with a tag in place since May, nothing has been done to improve it in this area (although the incorrect location of the tags may have contributed to this). If reliable sources are not added to the article soon, much of its content is at risk of deletion.

Also, it would be a good idea to merge the "historical inaccuracies" into Production and be [[WP:Verifiability|verified]]. They aren't really "inaccuracies" since this is a work of fiction, and the [[Wikipedia:WikiProject Films/Style guidelines##Adaptations|significance of the departure from fact]] needs a [[WP:RS|reliable source]] to be included in the article.<br /><span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:15px; color:#000000;"><b>[[User:JimDunning|Jim Dunning]]</b> | [[User talk:JimDunning|<small>talk</small>]]</span> 06:46, 2 November 2008 (UTC)

:Don't tag it, fix it, you're the one who thinks it's broken. <b><i>[[User:Ed Fitzgerald|Ed Fitzgerald]]</i> <sub>[[User talk:Ed Fitzgerald|t]] / [[Special:Contributions/Ed Fitzgerald|c]]</sub></b> 08:39, 2 November 2008 (UTC)

::Actually, it's [[Wikipedia:WikiProject Films/Style guidelines#Background/Production|Wikipedia's MoS]] that says its "broken". In reality, we're talking about improving the article by making it more readable and the Production section more cohesive and focused on the film itself. Compare this article with the Production sections of such films as ''[[The Prestige (film)|The Prestige]]'' and ''[[Children of Men]]'' and see how the Production section can become the heart of the article. For instance, the Production notes have seven entries which could be improved upon if a focus on a prose format was employed: the ''Magnificent Seven''/''Man from U.N.C.L.E.'' connections provide no significant context for relevance (or proof that a [[WP:RS|reliable source]] thought it of cinematic significance); the Messemer, Pleasence, and Clavell POW experiences should be expanded &mdash; and combined &mdash; to highlight relevance to the film (Pleasence is quoted as saying something about a prison camp being realistic, but since there is no inline citation to direct back to a possible source, I can't rewrite it to say whether he is talking about his own experience or the set); the videogame and awards bullets are misplaced, something that would be immediately evident if an effort to transform the bullet-point format to unified and organized paragraphs were made.

::If you want me to fix it right now, the first thing I would do is delete most of the Lede, since two of its three paragraphs are not supported in the Body (per [[WP:Lead|MoS]]). However, since WP is a collaborative effort, and I may not have the expertise, resources, or time to fix the section on my own quickly, I will just Tag it, letting other editors know about the issues and opportunities for quality improvement (also, the Lede should contain more information about the film). Similarly, I tagged the Production and Pop culture sections individually because of (1) Production's potential for becoming a key part of the article, and (2) Pop culture because of its potential for dragging the article down if it remains a [[Wikipedia:NOT#Wikipedia is not an indiscriminate collection of information|collection of indiscriminate factoids]] (Inaccuracies is in the same boat). Along the same lines, most of the article should be gutted since the entries in the References lists likely don't support many of the article's assertions &mdash; and given the time it's been tagged as such. However, since I'm interested in fixing it, I'm "tagging" it instead of just doing something about it (like deleting entries). Unfortunately, the Refimprove tag placed on the article in May was hidden and even placed in an article section strangely called "tags", which may have delayed improvement work on it.

::My proposal is to call attention to these areas for improvement to alert interested editors to the need for their assistance. We should also look at expanding Production out to include: Adaptation (the "Inaccuracies" material would make great fodder for this); Casting (how were all those stars enticed to work on it?); and Locations (this should be a rich section since they apparently built a complete Stalag!). Also, I would think a Reception section would be a nice addition, given the popularity of the film and story.<br /><span style="font-family:Monotype Corsiva; font-size:15px; color:#000000;"><b>[[User:JimDunning|Jim Dunning]]</b> | [[User talk:JimDunning|<small>talk</small>]]</span> 15:49, 2 November 2008 (UTC)


== Historical inaccuracies ==
== Historical inaccuracies ==

Revision as of 05:52, 25 June 2009

Historical inaccuracies

The Historical inaccuracies section could be rife with original research, since the majority of the entries lack citations to reliable sources. If accurate and verifiable, items in this section could add much to a more mature Production section; we should start merging vetted material in Production as soon as possible. This would also address the misnomer "inaccuracies", since they really aren't: the changes are part of the creative adaptation process.

Also, such a move would eliminate the IMDb look to this article (at this point it's difficult to say whether this article copied the Trivia section of IMDb or vice versa; either way, it doesn't say much for either).
Jim Dunning | talk 16:41, 2 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

A number of the entries don't actually appear to have anything to do with the film itself and may be better suited for placement in the article about the Escape (Stalag Luft III). I've copied them here for possible future use there or here.
Jim Dunning | talk 00:48, 5 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • The Gestapo killed 50 of the recaptured POWs, in breach of the Geneva Convention. Such actions constituted a war crime. Most of the victims were driven to isolated spots in small groups and shot through the back of the head with pistols, rather than being machine-gunned en masse as depicted in the film. After the allied victory in May 1945, a war crimes investigation led to the arrest, imprisonment and in some cases execution of those responsible for the killings. Even before the end of the hostilities, the British Government was aware that 50 recaptured POWs had been killed: Herbert Massey (senior officer at Stalag Luft III) was repatriated to the UK during the war due to serious ill-health. After arriving back in the UK, he immediately informed his fellow officers what had happened. The actual murders, and the manhunt for the perpetrators after the war, is outlined in the book Exemplary Justice.
  • There is also the fact that the figure of 50 was a compromise between Hitler and the German High Command. Hitler wanted all the recaptured POWs shot, but the High Command was afraid of what would happen to German POWs held by the Allies, especially if the Red Cross withdrew its support for German POWs.
  • No members of the American armed forces actually escaped. While many had worked on the construction of both Tom and Harry, by the time of the escape through Harry the American prisoners had all been moved to a separate compound. However, John Dodge, an American in the British Army, was one of the escapees.
  • The stealing of personal possessions such as boats and bicycles was not recommended since escapers could face criminal charges if recaptured.[1]
  • POWs who came up with plans to escape needed permission to proceed from the Escape Committee. This was in order to avoid conflicting escape plans from canceling each other: an escaping prisoner being caught by the guards could cause the alarm to be raised and ruin another escape attempt — thus the scene where Hilts and Ives need Bartlett's permission before proceeding with their plan.
  • Paul Brickhill, who didn't go through the tunnel, claimed that, due to a miscalculation, the tunnel ended short of the tree line. According to Alan Burgess, in The Longest Tunnel (1990, Grove Press), the tunnel did reach the forest, yet it was so sparse it provided insufficient cover. The escape had to proceed or the forged identity and travel papers would become invalid.
  • Blythe's blindness would have probably been serious enough that he would have been eligible for the repatriation through the International Red Cross under Articles 68 to 74 of the Geneva Convention of 1929, and thus he would have had no need to escape.

WP:OR and WP:V concerns

While attempting to locate support for some of the numerous uncited "facts" in this article, I came across something that may underscore the importance of locating reliable sources for copy before adding it to the article (as well as journalistic integrity).

No members of the American armed forces actually escaped. While many had worked on the construction of both Tom and Harry, by the time of the escape through Harry the American prisoners had all been moved to a separate compound. However, John Dodge, an American in the British Army, was one of the escapees.

This passage was in the "Historical inaccuracies" section up until a few days ago when I relocated it to the Talk page because it was unsupported and was not about the film. In trying to vet it I found an article in the Daily Express, "The Truth About the Great Escape". It contains this passage—

However, perhaps one of the greatest liberties taken is the suggestion that members of the American armed forces were among the 76 escapees, of whom 73 were recaptured by the Gestapo. In reality, while American officers had worked on the construction of the tunnels, by the time of the escape all the American prisoners had been moved to a separate compound. The only American to make it out was John Dodge, a soldier in the British Army.

Initially, I thought the WP passage was an uncited reference to the Daily Express article until I checked the dates and found the WP entry pre-dates the newspaper article – significantly. I then looked into when the WP entry first appeared and found the original form was cited to an online "encyclopedia" whose editors are the general public and provides no citations. This the material was added to the WP article from an unreliable source and, in turn, creates the possibility that the WP passage made it into a newspaper article. Now it's certainly possible that the Express journalist found the information elsewhere and the similarity between the two passages is coincidence. It's also possible the two passages share a common provenance I've been unable to find. However, if the journalist did use WP as a source, then this highlights the importance of relying on solid sources and the unforeseen consequences of not being careful when adding information to an article.
Jim Dunning | talk 02:11, 6 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I suspect the Express article was sourced from Wikipedia. You are absolutely correct in your conclusion that articles must be referenced more thoroughly and more carefully, and in three or four years you will have been proved right. But for now you are swimming against the tide. "In the battle between you and the world, bet on the world". -Ashley Pomeroy (talk) 13:40, 18 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Oblique Reference to "Great Escape"

  • In 2/12 Hogan's Heros "Will the real Adolf Please Stand Up?" Klink remarks about how escapes from two other POW camps must be part of a master Plan to create Kaos by a mass POW Escape all at once..............
OK, but there were load of POW camps (or Stalags), and escape plans were commonplace, mass or otherwise. In the absence of a reliable source that makes the comparison you seek to make, this is original research and impermissible here. Sorry. --Rodhullandemu 21:30, 25 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Purpose of Notes section?

What is the purpose of the Notes section containing dialogue from the film?
Jim Dunning | talk 14:37, 2 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I removed it, but if it is of some importance, its text is still maintained in History.
Jim Dunning | talk 19:03, 3 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Apparently an editor was translating German and French dialog in the film and documenting it here for readers' benefits. Unusual. Too bad there was no explanation in the article section or on this page. I still don't see how it fits into the format of a film article. If anyone has some thoughts they should feel free to discuss it here. The hard work is impressive, but unusual.
Jim Dunning | talk 00:19, 6 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Fact vs fiction

A separate article — The Great Escape (film) fact versus fiction — has recently been created. Besides concerns with WP:NOR, WP:SYN, and WP:RS, and that much of it introduces problems with Film Style Guidelines regarding treatment of adaptations and inclusion of real-world perspective, why isn't this effort being done in this article whose Production section is in such sad shape? Properly done, this material would significantly improve the film article.
Jim Dunning | talk 14:44, 2 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

  1. ^ Timespan — Escapes by Tim Healey, published by Macdonald Phoebus, 1979