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==Fair use rationale for Image:JLENN01.jpg==
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[[User:BetacommandBot|BetacommandBot]] 18:44, 13 November 2007 (UTC)

==Political Associations==
Lennon was known to have, later in life, some association with the radical left (his lines "imagine no possessions... imagine all the people, sharing all the world" clearly show idealistic communist sympathies, as well). The Socialist Workers Party in England courted him, though he never actually joined. I wish I knew it well enough to add a section. But if anyone else does, I encourage you to add it. --[[User:Mqduck|MQDuck]] 03:41, 14 November 2007 (UTC)
:Maybe under "Political activism"? I think that if you can cite (reliably) the instance of the courting by the SWP of Liverpool, and Lennon's reaction, then it would be usable. If you cannot cite it, you cannot include it. - [[User:Arcayne|<span style="color:black">'''Arcayne'''</span>]] [[User talk:Arcayne|<small><span style="color:gray">(<sup>'''cast a spell'''</sup>)</span></small>]] 03:54, 14 November 2007 (UTC)

==Archiving==
I've again re-archived the tendentious discussion. It started out being about the provenance of a citation since replaced in the article, and evolved (or rather devolved) somewhat after that. As well, the quote from Ono released to the public has some sources as being through Geffen and others non-attributed. In order to avoid ruffling any firther feathers, the attribution to Geffen was removed. I think that fairly sums up the discussion was archived (those parts that actually dealt with the article, that is). Let's move on. I offer my apologies to the others outside the discussion for allowing the argument to escalate. - [[User:Arcayne|<span style="color:black">'''Arcayne'''</span>]] [[User talk:Arcayne|<small><span style="color:gray">(<sup>'''cast a spell'''</sup>)</span></small>]] 18:38, 20 November 2007 (UTC)

==Lennon is B-class==
This is a big article that needs quite a few references. How long has this article been B-class? It's a scandal. Look at the big picture and think about elevating John to '''GA'''. [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_The_Beatles#Status_board The Beatles, McCartney, Epstein, Martin, The Beatles' assistants and family members are already there] ([http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Good_article_candidates#Music two more are up for a GA right now]) - ''so why not him''? --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 18:25, 20 November 2007 (UTC)
:The article clearly meats the B-Class criteria. As for GA, why don't you nominate it? &mdash;[[User:Viriditas|Viriditas]] | [[User talk:Viriditas|Talk]] 22:25, 20 November 2007 (UTC)

::Because it needs quite a few references, and is over 101,202 bytes. I would go through it, but I'm not going to get into any wars about it. --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 14:22, 21 November 2007 (UTC)

== Death ==

Cleaned up this section a little bit. Got thoroughly disgusted doing so, I might add. [[User:Hotcop2|Hotcop2]] ([[User talk:Hotcop2|talk]]) 00:22, 21 November 2007 (UTC)
:I know what you mean - a while ago I was working on this page and re-read the NYTimes articles that ran after the murder to get the details right - I said then that I would never read those again, as it was just as painful 25+ years after the fact as it had been the first time I read them, in 1980. <strong>[[User:Tvoz|Tvoz]] </strong>|<small>[[User talk:Tvoz|talk]]</small> 04:56, 21 November 2007 (UTC)

I even changed the ending for a bit. [[User:Hotcop2|Hotcop2]] ([[User talk:Hotcop2|talk]]) 11:34, 21 November 2007 (UTC)

A minor detail: The article says six shots were fired. The Charter Arms revolver used (the Undercover model) holds five rounds. [[User:Percy Smogg|Percy Smogg]] ([[User talk:Percy Smogg|talk]]) 04:55, 24 November 2007 (UTC)
Perdomo and Pedermo are both given as the door-man's name. <small>—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/81.158.207.0|81.158.207.0]] ([[User talk:81.158.207.0|talk]]) 12:49, 8 December 2007 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
Perdomo seems to be the commonest. <small>—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/87.194.4.21|87.194.4.21]] ([[User talk:87.194.4.21|talk]]) 10:07, 11 December 2007 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

:Why don't you change it? Sign in, and you can... --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 19:17, 11 December 2007 (UTC)

==Order of the British Empire==
Surely his receipt of a MBE membership to the Order merits some coverage? [[Special:Contributions/121.210.212.4|121.210.212.4]] [[User:Rotovia|Rotovia]] ([[User talk:Rotovia|talk]])

Should MBE be takin off of his name because he returned it to the queen? <small>—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/70.179.73.201|70.179.73.201]] ([[User talk:70.179.73.201|talk]]) 16:37, 9 December 2007 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

:I kind of agree with this, but one would have to ask an expert like [[User:Vera, Chuck &amp; Dave|Vera, Chuck &amp; Dave]], as he was given The [[George Medal]]. --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 18:05, 10 December 2007 (UTC)

==Early years==
These years should be drastically cut back, as lots of the information is now in the [[Mimi Smith ]] and [[Julia Lennon]] articles. I will now cut a little, and wait for the avalanche... :) --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 19:24, 7 December 2007 (UTC)

I have done some work on the early years. --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 20:00, 7 December 2007 (UTC)

No [[Dick Lester]] and the film in Spain? ¿Qué está sucediendo? --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 21:04, 7 December 2007 (UTC)

== Introduction ==

The introduction doesn't read well. I suggest a rewrite, especially for:

"Lennon revealed his rebellious nature and irreverent wit on television, in films such as A Hard Day's Night (1964), in books such as In His Own Write, and in press conferences and interviews. He channelled his fame and penchant for controversy into his work as a peace activist, artist, and author."

I will attempt one later and I encourage others to do the same.

[[User:The freddinator|The freddinator]] ([[User talk:The freddinator|talk]]) 16:07, 8 December 2007 (UTC)


==GA (again)==
Take a look [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_The_Beatles#Status_board at this]]. John should be next, but it will take a team effort. McCartney got a GA by the same method. Is anybody willing to come on board for references and copy-editing? --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 16:21, 8 December 2007 (UTC)

:J.L.'s article is a very touchy situation. McCartney's would be easier to get a GA because he's still alive (I think...) therefore, Paul will be a constant work in progress until that time. This article needs a small team to do the final touch-ups and then it should be locked down. [[User:Mister ricochet|Mister ricochet]] ([[User talk:Mister ricochet|talk]]) 05:46, 9 December 2007 (UTC)

::McCartney's article is already a GA. --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 13:24, 10 December 2007 (UTC)

I know Paul has a GA. I think you didn't understand my wording. That's what I get for growing up in Brooklyn, NY. [[User:Mister ricochet|Mister ricochet]] ([[User talk:Mister ricochet|talk]]) 14:05, 10 December 2007 (UTC)

:I like your humour :) Ask [[User:Tvoz|Tvoz]] - she's a "[[New York|Nu Yoiker]]" as well. My answer was probably a result of me coming from [[Yorkshire|The land where men are men, and so are the women]]. :)--[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 17:56, 10 December 2007 (UTC)

LOL. The land where men are men, and so are the women. Must be great to be a [[homosexual]] there! [[User:Mister ricochet|Mister ricochet]] ([[User talk:Mister ricochet|talk]]) 18:38, 10 December 2007 (UTC)

:It gets worse, believe me. It's also the land where [[Yorkshire|men are men, and sheep are scared...]], if you know what I mean. :) --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 18:25, 11 December 2007 (UTC)

I do not know how to do citations, but I can certainly find sources for the info in question. [[User:Hotcop2|Hotcop2]] ([[User talk:Hotcop2|talk]]) 17:19, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

::I agree of course that this article should be a GA. But forget about "locked down" Ricochet, if you mean full protection - ain't gonna happen, nor should it. If you meant something else - well, I'm from the Bronx, so I don't speak your language. And Andrew, please let's keep the sheep in the meadow....<strong>[[User:Tvoz|Tvoz]] </strong>|<small>[[User talk:Tvoz|talk]]</small> 06:50, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

==Back to business, or busy nests==
From '''1970-1975: Solo career''' until '''Recreational drug use''' sections need work, and '''Yoko Ono''' (but she could always do with a bit of work on her). If references are put in, or stuff chopped out, this will be close to a GA. Then it's just a bit of [[French polish|elbow grease]], and [[ Wikipedia:Good articles|Bob's your Uncle]], as they say. --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 18:36, 11 December 2007 (UTC)

== john lennon photo AGAIN ==

All of a sudden, Wikicommons is questioning the Gruen NYC photo which I obtained persmission for and submitted the permission to Wiki. <small>—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Hotcop2|Hotcop2]] ([[User talk:Hotcop2|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Hotcop2|contribs]]) 23:47, 12 December 2007 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

I wouldn't worry about Fconaway. He's not an administrator. He's frustrated because they delete all of his pictures. [[User:Mister ricochet|Mister ricochet]] ([[User talk:Mister ricochet|talk]]) 02:57, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

:LOL, "''He's frustrated because they delete all of his pictures''" - isn't life a bowl of cornflakes? Poor guy, one almost feels sorry for him... :)) --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 06:42, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
::Yeah, that post and image had no place on this page. Uncool, very, very uncool. Next time it shows up, you will almost certainly get blocked, Ricochet. - [[User:Arcayne|<span style="color:black">'''Arcayne'''</span>]] [[User talk:Arcayne|<small><span style="color:gray">(<sup>'''cast a spell'''</sup>)</span></small>]] 06:03, 15 December 2007 (UTC)
:::Now that I think about it Shankbone is one of the guys you should be talking to about helping your image move quickly through commons. He's taken a lot of pictures of relatively famous folk, and probably knows the process pretty well. It might not hurt to get his assistance in the matter. - [[User:Arcayne|<span style="color:black">'''Arcayne'''</span>]] [[User talk:Arcayne|<small><span style="color:gray">(<sup>'''cast a spell'''</sup>)</span></small>]] 06:03, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

Arcayne, That picture is a Wikicommons picture. It's also from your buddy Shankbone. So who are you threatening to have blocked? me or Shankbone? [[User:Mister ricochet|Mister ricochet]] ([[User talk:Mister ricochet|talk]]) 06:11, 15 December 2007 (UTC)
:Think carefully about who I would be talking about, Ricochet. While you do so, please explain precisely how that image served ''any'' other purpose but to personally attack an established editor of Wikipedia? I don't care if its a picture of the cock of the Queen Herself, posting it here is utterly unacceptable, and breeds an atmosphere of contention and unprofessionalism that is unacceptable. By pulling your post, I ''may'' have saved you from getting blocked for NPA. You don't need to thanks me, but I am telling you like Jesus told John. if you add personal attacks like that again, they will be responded to, and quite severely. Do us all a favor, and keep your ire at other editors to professionally accepted venues. - [[User:Arcayne|<span style="color:black">'''Arcayne'''</span>]] [[User talk:Arcayne|<small><span style="color:gray">(<sup>'''cast a spell'''</sup>)</span></small>]] 06:19, 15 December 2007 (UTC)
::This is a discussion page. Whatever direction it goes in is fair. This isn't a vandalization. I would be careful about insulting the Queen of England. We have some people on here that may take offense. And you didn't save me from anything. I might be saving you by warning you about the Queen and how people look up to her. Did Jesus tell John he would get blocked for [[NPA]]? I'll just go to his talk page then. Maybe I'll get some answers. [[User:Mister ricochet|Mister ricochet]] ([[User talk:Mister ricochet|talk]]) 06:39, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

::"''This is a discussion page. Whatever direction it goes in is fair.''"
:::Um, no, that's incorrect. Perhaps you might want to brush up on several policies, like [[WP:TALK]], [[WP:CIVIL]], [[WP:DISRUPTIVE]] and [[WP:NPA]]. We tend to follow these. As you are a newbie, perhaps you weren't as well-versed in them. This isn't a blog; you don't get to personally attack other editors with impunity. Consider what I am doing as reading you the riot act.
::"''This isn't a vandalization.''"
:::Wrong again. When it can be classified as not germane to the specific article (perhaps you missed that great big yellow box at the top of the page, hmm?) can be classified as disruptive and/or vandalism. What you thought was being considered vandalism was in fact seen as disruptive and a personal attack.
::"''I would be careful about insulting the Queen of England. We have some people on here that may take offense.''"
:::I'm not really worried, as i am guessing that she doesn't edit in Wikipedia, and this isn't her article. Anyway, she's fairly proud of her prod. :)
::"''And you didn't save me from anything. I might be saving you by warning you about the Queen and how people look up to her.''"
:::No, they pretty much know she has a big tool, as well. And if you think i didn't save you from anything, go ahead and reinstate the post. Ask anyone - your editorial life will shortly thereafter become a tragic series of unfortunate misunderstandings. Then again, Yoko Ono may send you flowers, and David Shankbone might ask you out to the prom. Guess which scenario my money's on?
::"''Did Jesus tell John he would get blocked for [[NPA]]?''"
:::Actually, it's an expression expressing something quite clear. But in answer to your question, i do believe that no one warned John of NPA. Look how it turned out for him...
::"''I'll just go to his talk page then. Maybe I'll get some answers.''"
:::To Shankbone's page? That's about the smartest thing you've said on this page thus far. Good on ya. :) [[User:Arcayne|<span style="color:black">'''Arcayne'''</span>]] [[User talk:Arcayne|<small><span style="color:gray">(<sup>'''cast a spell'''</sup>)</span></small>]] 07:03, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

:So let me get this straight... You won't discuss this on your page but you'll start a "cock block" thread on my page right? And this is no place to discuss Shankbone's dick. Looks like you hate to be wrong. And you are. [[User:Mister ricochet|Mister ricochet]] ([[User talk:Mister ricochet|talk]]) 06:45, 15 December 2007 (UTC)
::I posted to your talk page so as to not kick you around the curb for being a prat in this discussion page, shining a big ol' light on your mistake. You are right that I hate to be wrong, but ''anyone'' else here will tell you that when I am, I apologize, and immediately.You will note that such an apology hasn't been tendered here. that should tell you something rather important.
::Are we done, or do you still wanna chit-chat about this? - [[User:Arcayne|<span style="color:black">'''Arcayne'''</span>]] [[User talk:Arcayne|<small><span style="color:gray">(<sup>'''cast a spell'''</sup>)</span></small>]] 07:03, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

:::Sorry, Ricochet, but you're way out of line here - David Shankbone's photograph has nothing at all to do with this article, or even with the discussion about the Gruen photo, so Arcayne was completely right to remove it and he probably did do you a favor by doing so. You're actually quite wrong that anything goes on a talk page - "whatever direction it goes in is fair" - I think you know very well that talk pages are not forums even for discussing our opinions of the subject of the page, let alone peripheral chatter about anyone's opinion of an editor. It's completely inappropriate and against policy, and offensive to boot. We're here to discuss edits to the article about Lennon, that's all. We kid around on the Beatles' article talk pages, but it's done in good humor and we don't attack other editors, plain and simple. No one is saying we can't have a laugh, but you crossed a line with that gratuitous post, so let's just move on and work on getting this article in better shape. <strong>[[User:Tvoz|Tvoz]] </strong>|<small>[[User talk:Tvoz|talk]]</small> 07:10, 15 December 2007 (UTC)


Listen, Kepp in mind that I didn't upload my dick to Commons nor did I post the picture file in it's open form here. You would have to click on the link to see it. Unfortunately, The very guy you are defending is to blame for the removal of the J.L. picture. You should be on his case. Not mine. Now all that we have is a Commons picture of his dick instead of a picture of John Lennon. Think about it. [[User:Mister ricochet|Mister ricochet]] ([[User talk:Mister ricochet|talk]]) 07:56, 15 December 2007 (UTC)
:So, you actually think I am bothered by seeing a picture of some guy's cock? I'm not (while I don't have pix of my penis, rest assured that, as a man, I know what one looks like), and if you think that's why I gave you a virtual smacking, you might need to address some issues outside of the capabilities of Wikipedia to assist; WP is [[WP:NOT|not a therapist]]. I will ask you two simple questions:
::1. What does the picture of the penis have to do with the article, ''John Lennon''?
::2. How does adding the wiki commons picture of Shankbone add to the article?
:Knowing that you cannot adequately answer either of these questions without admitting to a personal attack, I am going to let you simply apologize and be quiet for a while, making constructive edits and fervently hoping that this stunning breach of of civility is eventually forgotten. I am not even going to ask you to say thank you for saving your sorry carcass. Had an admin come by and seen it, you'd be sitting out either a block or a ban.
:Your call, Rico. - [[User:Arcayne|<span style="color:black">'''Arcayne'''</span>]] [[User talk:Arcayne|<small><span style="color:gray">(<sup>'''cast a spell'''</sup>)</span></small>]] 10:57, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

Okay, let's cool down. I see you have zero self control. I don't want you to say something to get you blocked or banned. I'm not into that scene. I would much rather you add to the article than harp on cocks. I see you haven't added anything to Lennon for lord knows how long. So maybe you should go back to the fantasy articles that you frequent. And as for the questions you ask, I'll answer them (since you jumped the gun and said I couldn't)
:: 1. The penis picture is Shankbone's. He started the whole NYC Lennon pic problem. He should worry about his cock picture instead.

:: 2. I was making a point of what a pervert he is and how people like you look up to him (see User:Arcayne) and how he can single hadedly ruin the picture that Hoptcop2 was kind enough to track down and get permission for.

So there you go. Now behave yourself and make constructive edits to Batman and the 300 movie. [[User:Mister ricochet|Mister ricochet]] ([[User talk:Mister ricochet|talk]]) 17:39, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

Mister ricochet, you are now in block-able territory and I suggest you stop stamping your feet and acting like a child. By file size I am one of the top 50 loaders of images to Commons and out of 2,500 articles my photos illustrate, there are perhaps 20 articles that a model friend (not me) posed for because I tired of seeing every dude and bro take a camera phone picture of his cock and slap it up there. So yes, my photos of a model's body illustrate many of the body articles, from [[teeth]] to [[armpit]] to [[glans penis]] to [[chest]] - ''get over it''. Aside from the fact you are making personal attacks against respected contributors, such as myself and Arcayne, you are doing so on a Talk page that has nothing to do with the issue at hand. The main issue with it is that the Lennon photo needs an OTRS ticket saying that it has been released GFDL. HotCop2 said it was released for Wikipedia to use, but because of our licensing structure with Wikipedia's copyright, they don't allow for non-GFDL images unless it strictly falls within the boundaries of that license. There are very few exceptions made. However, I was not the one who removed it, and I don't have a problem with it being used "Fair use" but the copyright that was listed by HotCop2 said it was released GFDL and the copyright of Bob Gruen was released to the general public. Basically, the way HotCop put that license on perhaps one of the most famous photos of Lennon, he said that Bob Gruen has released his copyright to the entire public to use the photo for commercial and non-commercial use. I question if that is really what Gruen intended. Copyrighting it that way--unless it is true--opens up the site to legal problems. However, I simply raised the question. Other user spotted it immediately. If it had not been me, it would have been someone else. Now, something I *disagree* with to a degree is that they do not allow fair use images of a person on BLP articles. This is one of the reasons why I spend so much time taking original photos of people myself. I initially fought against the no-fair use images of people argument, but I lost that battle. So, I have spent an inordinate amount of time hunting down and contacting people to take original photos for the site, releasing my own copyright on those photos. Over 500 people. It sucks - but I fought against the policy and lost. The bright side? We have a lot of original content on our site that we, the community, own. Regardless, stop acting like a teenager, stamping your feet because you didn't get your way over a Lennon photo. It's not ''my'' doing, it's Wikipedia's. I simply raised the question about the problematic licensing and I was 100% correct to do so. Now continue on in this vein, and you will be blocked. --<font color="#0000C0">David</font> '''[[User:David Shankbone|<font color="#0000C0">Shankbone</font>]]''' 17:55, 15 December 2007 (UTC)


And did you issue that same warning to Arcayne? I don't accept the tone he has taken with me. And couldn't you find a friend with a straight cock? Thanks. [[User:Mister ricochet|Mister ricochet]] ([[User talk:Mister ricochet|talk]]) 18:31, 15 December 2007 (UTC)
:I have made a report to ANI regarding this situation or conduct on this page [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia%3AAdministrators%27_noticeboard%2FIncidents&diff=178146668&oldid=178139136 diff]. Consider this a notice. [[User:R. Baley|R. Baley]] ([[User talk:R. Baley|talk]]) 20:40, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

R. , I respect everything you do. But dammit, I thought you were an admin all the while! You have a way with words. [[User:Mister ricochet|Mister ricochet]] ([[User talk:Mister ricochet|talk]]) 23:18, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

== Citations Needed in Solo Career ==
Do we really need a citation that "Whatever Gets You Thru The Night" hit #1, or that John re-recorded Lucy In The Sky with Elton John? <small>—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Hotcop2|Hotcop2]] ([[User talk:Hotcop2|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Hotcop2|contribs]]) 23:50, 12 December 2007 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

:Nah, not really, I suppose. I got a bit trigger-happy throwing in "fact" - sorry. (Although something from a chart page would be nice?) --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 06:44, 13 December 2007 (UTC)

== Knock him into GA shape ==

Removed rec. drug use, was horribly worded, had to go. If anyone is losing sleep over the removal, write a new section, we'll discuss if it has any value. I suggest a quick mention in one of the other sections. That's it. I added citations, removed some, it appeared to be citation bombed which is a no-no (but we love Andreasegde so we'll let that pass) there's a few more cites to go. Let's get him where he should be. [[User:Mister ricochet|Mister ricochet]] ([[User talk:Mister ricochet|talk]]) 21:20, 14 December 2007 (UTC)

== I removed the Lennon NYC T-shirt photo ==

Although we had full permission to use it, someone decided to hassle me once again over the permission. I tried for a few hours to reason with the Wiki powers, but it ain't worth it. I have removed it. So this mediocre page can find a suitably mediocre photo to go with it. [[User:Hotcop2|Hotcop2]] ([[User talk:Hotcop2|talk]]) 00:02, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

:Don't get dispirited, [[User:Hotcop2|Hotcop2]], the Wiki photo zealots have been on the warpath on two or three articles I've worked on. Don't give up, because yer [[The Beatles|Fab]] yer are, and you're much valued. --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 00:13, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

::Awwww, thanks A. Nobody does anything "for the good of Wiki," just for the power play. so I had the power to remove the best photo of J.L. ;-) Hotcop2 (talk) 00:22, 15 December 2007 (UTC) <small>—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Hotcop2|Hotcop2]] ([[User talk:Hotcop2|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Hotcop2|contribs]]) {{{2|}}}</small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
:::Comee on, Hot, don't be that way. The article's images are going to be under a lot of scrutiny after Six's nonsense a few months ago. Once the image makes it through Commons, you are good to go. If you are encountering some difficulty, go to the editor who initially blocked Six and ask him for his personal assistance. He kinda struck me as someone one keen to help. the image is good enough to shoot for. - [[User:Arcayne|<span style="color:black">'''Arcayne'''</span>]] [[User talk:Arcayne|<small><span style="color:gray">(<sup>'''cast a spell'''</sup>)</span></small>]] 05:59, 15 December 2007 (UTC)
::::I agree with Arcayne and Andreasegde - and that photo is worth fighting for. <strong>[[User:Tvoz|Tvoz]] </strong>|<small>[[User talk:Tvoz|talk]]</small> 06:45, 15 December 2007 (UTC)
:::::And if you need the help, it's okay to ask for it. We all want the article to be better, bubelah. ;) - [[User:Arcayne|<span style="color:black">'''Arcayne'''</span>]] [[User talk:Arcayne|<small><span style="color:gray">(<sup>'''cast a spell'''</sup>)</span></small>]] 07:32, 15 December 2007 (UTC)
::::::I am working with HotCop2 to get this done, will update as events unfold. [[User:R. Baley|R. Baley]] ([[User talk:R. Baley|talk]]) 23:43, 15 December 2007 (UTC)
What's "bubelah"? Tvoz says she is occasionally confused by Brit expressions, but I'm non-plussed by this one. Please do tell... :) --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 09:53, 15 December 2007 (UTC)
:[http://www.asinine.com/essays/yiddish.html Bubelah] is a colloquialism from Yiddish referring to someone endearing. What, were you expecting some synonym for convex sheep lovery? :) - [[User:Arcayne|<span style="color:black">'''Arcayne'''</span>]] [[User talk:Arcayne|<small><span style="color:gray">(<sup>'''cast a spell'''</sup>)</span></small>]] 10:39, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

::How dare you insinuate that this bulvon was thinking about sheep and their [[genitals|wedding tackle]]? (''Bah-hah-ahhh...'' :) --[[User:Andreasegde|The wolf in sheep's clothing]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 11:59, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

BTW, another disputed photo is in (as if you hadn't noticed :) Why don't we put a new one in every single day? That would confuse the heck out of 'em... (Sound of manic laughing) I'm almost (almost I said) tempted to write, "The removal of this photo is disputed because my mother has it as a [[Refrigerator magnet|magnet]] photo on her [[fridge]]. She likes it, so why don't you?" (I'm being silly, and I profusely apologise.)

Another point: Why is the photo in the infobox always disputed, but other fair use photos in articles are not? Oh-oh; have I just shot myself in the foot? --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 11:10, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

Let's go back to the free image of him from the cropped image of him, Yoko and Trudeau. It's noted as "Image:Lennon69.jpg", It can serve until we have an image that is done jumping through all the hoops of Common-ism. - [[User:Arcayne|<span style="color:black">'''Arcayne'''</span>]] [[User talk:Arcayne|<small><span style="color:gray">(<sup>'''cast a spell'''</sup>)</span></small>]] 11:53, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

:(I didn't upload the "soon to be deleted" image. I just added the silly caption...) --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 11:56, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

I have moved the "Rehearsing Give Peace A Chance" photo to the infobox. It's from Commons, it's in colour, it shows Lennon playing guitar, and there is another photo of Lennon and the recording of the song further down. All we have to do is wait for Hotcop to cut through the [[red tape]] with a [[machete]], [[Katana]] or a pair of sturdy [[Loppers]], and we'll all be as [[Happy Birthday to You|happy as Larry]]. --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 12:05, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

==Political activism and the deportation battle==
Getting rid of the "citation needed" is going well, but the "Political activism and the deportation battle" section is full of them. Time to insert refs, or get the scissors out... --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 00:13, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

==Drug use==
I have put Lennon's drug use back in (with a copy-edit) as it is well-referenced by Barry Miles' book, and web pages. if anyone has a problem with that, I suggest they find book references stating that Lennon did not take drugs. McCartney's article has the same section - it went for an FA and none of the editors mentioned the drug section as being a problem.--[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 02:18, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

:Now that looks much better. The last version looked too choppy (sentence frags etc.) This will do. [[User:Mister ricochet|Mister ricochet]] ([[User talk:Mister ricochet|talk]]) 03:19, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

::I thank you, [[User:Mister ricochet|Mister ricochet]]. The rest of the article has stuff like the drugs section had, but we can work on those. --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 08:27, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

==Nutopia==
It is now referenced, but I think it's in the wrong place. Shouldn't there be a section for Lennon and Ono's art stuff? (Bagism, ''Fly'' film etc.) --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 09:58, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

No, I think it's fine where it is. This article needs time continuity for his story to make sense; there are too many "sections" that pull critical things out of context. It wasn't "art" it was Lennon's ploy to receive amnesty as an ambassador to a (conceptual) country (and a great April Fool's prank). [[User:Hotcop2|Hotcop2]] ([[User talk:Hotcop2|talk]]) 20:22, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

::Ahhh, Hotcop, that is where I used to agree with you, but Wikipedia does not. Have a look at the [[Paul McCartney]] article, because I was told that's how it should be, by no less than yer honorable Admin Kingboyk. We almost came to internet-blows about it a long time ago. I know it doesn't feel right, but any reviewer will complain his head off about lack of consistency.

::It's a bit like putting your eggs and tomatoes at the bottom of the basket, and cans and potatoes at the top. Every facet of Lennon's life has to be individually documented, otherwise you would have Cynthia, McCartney, Harrison, Ringo, Yoko and May popping up in all sorts of places throughout the article. It would be too confusing too read. Try this: read an article by a band you have never heard of, and then try to remember what you have read. When names pop up all over the place you easily get lost.

::(I'm doing these paragraphs 'cos it's easier on the eyes.) Last point (I promise) if you don't split the biography, you might as well have one long page that started with only three headers; Birth, Life, Death. (Sorry to go on like this) :) --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 20:51, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

== 1980 Starting over ==

There are two paragraphs that are not showing up in the article, but are there in the edit. I don't know how to fix this... anyone? [[User:Hotcop2|Hotcop2]] ([[User talk:Hotcop2|talk]]) 20:50, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

:I think I fixed it, because it was my fault (or maybe not? :) --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 21:53, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

== Househusband ==
Andreas, Can you move the "Househusband" section up to the end of the 1975 section, so it flows chronologically? [[User:Hotcop2|Hotcop2]] ([[User talk:Hotcop2|talk]]) 21:19, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

:You've got in one Hotcop! If we move House-husband up to the 1975s, then anyone reading it will not know who Yoko really is, as she comes later. I could move the whole Personal life section up, with Cynthia, Yoko and House-husband... but this is the problem - how do we make the sections seem ordered? --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 21:50, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

I think there should be a May Pang section after Yoko and before house-husband. She ws there during an important part of his recording career, as well as being his lover, so I think she deserves more than one or two sentences here and there. --[[User:Andreasegde|andreasegde]] ([[User talk:Andreasegde|talk]]) 23:52, 15 December 2007 (UTC)

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