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Will look at this. Looking forward to review it while educating myself in another vitamin, {{u|David notMD}}! [[User:HaEr48|HaEr48]] ([[User talk:HaEr48|talk]]) 21:51, 16 January 2021 (UTC) |
Will look at this. Looking forward to review it while educating myself in another vitamin, {{u|David notMD}}! [[User:HaEr48|HaEr48]] ([[User talk:HaEr48|talk]]) 21:51, 16 January 2021 (UTC) |
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Initial comments: |
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* Biotin is composed of a ureido ring … any link for ureido? |
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* Is biotin a single compound or a group of related ones like [[Vitamin B12]]? |
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* "The frequency of marginal biotin status is not known" I don't understand this, is it possible to have other wording or add links to improve understanding? |
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* The final part of "cofactor biochemistry" seems to be missing citation? |
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* The lead hints about genetic disorders that cause biotin deficiency, is this the same as the [[biotinidase deficiency]] described in #Deficiency? If yes, can you mention it? If not, what are the genetic disorders? |
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* "This enzyme is responsible...": How about "Biotinidase is an enzyme responsible ..." ? |
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* Biotinidase deficiency seems to be introduced twice, in #Deficiency and in #Metabolic disorders. Maybe better combine them? Or just describe fully in the first mention, and name it without intro in the second usage? |
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* the proteolytic degradation products of each holocarboxylase: Could you explain what ''each'' holocarboxylase refers to? |
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Per usage talk, will continue reviewing after the nominator finishes making other updates. Thank you! [[User:HaEr48|HaEr48]] ([[User talk:HaEr48|talk]]) 22:40, 16 January 2021 (UTC) |
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Reviewer: HaEr48 (talk · contribs) 21:51, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
Will look at this. Looking forward to review it while educating myself in another vitamin, David notMD! HaEr48 (talk) 21:51, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
Initial comments:
- Biotin is composed of a ureido ring … any link for ureido?
- Is biotin a single compound or a group of related ones like Vitamin B12?
- "The frequency of marginal biotin status is not known" I don't understand this, is it possible to have other wording or add links to improve understanding?
- The final part of "cofactor biochemistry" seems to be missing citation?
- The lead hints about genetic disorders that cause biotin deficiency, is this the same as the biotinidase deficiency described in #Deficiency? If yes, can you mention it? If not, what are the genetic disorders?
- "This enzyme is responsible...": How about "Biotinidase is an enzyme responsible ..." ?
- Biotinidase deficiency seems to be introduced twice, in #Deficiency and in #Metabolic disorders. Maybe better combine them? Or just describe fully in the first mention, and name it without intro in the second usage?
- the proteolytic degradation products of each holocarboxylase: Could you explain what each holocarboxylase refers to?
Per usage talk, will continue reviewing after the nominator finishes making other updates. Thank you! HaEr48 (talk) 22:40, 16 January 2021 (UTC)