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== Reference Articles == |
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* [[Gary Moore]] |
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* [[John Early (educator)]] |
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* [[PETA satirical browser games]] |
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== Potential articles == |
== Potential articles == |
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Revision as of 08:40, 15 February 2021
Reference Articles
Potential articles
Reasons for Improvement
This article has a lot of room for expansion and is relatively unbalanced. Adding a bit more information on the history of CocaCola and its advertising efforts would help match the information provided by Pepsi. It also needs both past and current examples of competition as well as success rates.
This article has a lot of information, which means there's a lot to edit and reorganize. It is written more as a narrative rather than with an encyclopedic tone typical of Wikipedia. There is also a lot of content in the "Talk" section that could aid in guiding my editing.
I like this article because it has a lot of information but lacks organization. I could easily move things around for coherency. It also appears to need help in sounding less neutral.
This article needs help largely in choosing which content to include and writing style.
This article needs to be reorganized and split up better.
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