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The Precision Medicine Initiative was renamed All of Us in 2016. What should we do about that?[[User:SylviaStanley|SylviaStanley]] ([[User talk:SylviaStanley|talk]]) 14:29, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
The Precision Medicine Initiative was renamed All of Us in 2016. What should we do about that?[[User:SylviaStanley|SylviaStanley]] ([[User talk:SylviaStanley|talk]]) 14:29, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
:{{ping|SylviaStanley}} I've moved this page to reflect the renaming, thanks for pointing this out! [[User:Amkilpatrick|Amkilpatrick]] ([[User talk:Amkilpatrick|talk]]) 18:38, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
:{{ping|SylviaStanley}} I've moved this page to reflect the renaming, thanks for pointing this out! [[User:Amkilpatrick|Amkilpatrick]] ([[User talk:Amkilpatrick|talk]]) 18:38, 20 January 2018 (UTC)

== Content Written Like Advertisement ==

The content in "Core Values" and "What Data is Collected" is copy-pasted from the project's website and the use of the second person suggests to me that it is written to attract participants to the program, not to objectively or neutrally state what the program's goals and policies are. I plan to revise the sections accordingly, but wanted to make a note ahead of time. [[User:Solobear89 | <span style="background-color:#45C4B0;color:#ffffff;padding:2px;border-radius:4px 4px 4px 4px">SoloBear</span>]] 17:22, 1 April 2023 (UTC)

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Precision Medicine Initiative renamed All of Us

The Precision Medicine Initiative was renamed All of Us in 2016. What should we do about that?SylviaStanley (talk) 14:29, 20 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@SylviaStanley: I've moved this page to reflect the renaming, thanks for pointing this out! Amkilpatrick (talk) 18:38, 20 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Content Written Like Advertisement

The content in "Core Values" and "What Data is Collected" is copy-pasted from the project's website and the use of the second person suggests to me that it is written to attract participants to the program, not to objectively or neutrally state what the program's goals and policies are. I plan to revise the sections accordingly, but wanted to make a note ahead of time. SoloBear 17:22, 1 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]