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Feral State
Feral State
	File:Feral State poster.png Theatrical release poster
Directed by	Jon Carlo
Written by	Jon Carlo
Produced by	Nicholas Tamposi; Marianne Tamposi; Jon Carlo;
Starring	AnnaLynne McCord; Ronnie Gene Blevins; Octavio Pisano; Sif Saga; Baldur Thor; Jaden Piner; Anthony Tamposi; Jasmine Tamposi;
Cinematography	Joel E. Schaeffer
Edited by	Charles Carter
Music by	Lionel Cohen

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Feral State is a 2020 American thriller written, co-produced, and directed by Jon Carlo in his directorial debut. It stars Ronnie Gene Blevins, AnnaLynne McCord, Octavio Pisano, Sif Saga, Baldur Thor, Anthony Tamposi, Jasmine Tamposi, and Jaden Piner. A misfit gang of runaways and orphans are taken in by a dark and charismatic father figure who together wreak havoc throughout swamps and trailer parks of central Florida.

Vertical Entertainment has acquired North American rights to Feral State, written and directed by Jon Carlo and starring AnnaLynne McCord.^[1] The indie thriller, which wrapped shooting late 2019, will now get a theatrical release on May 28 along with its digital bow.^[2]

Plot

Tucked far away from the white sandy beaches and amusement parks is a Florida that few outsiders ever see. Nestled alongside the gator-infested swamps and rundown trailer parks lives a charismatic yet dangerous grifter named Mack Monroe, portrayed by Ronnie Gene Blevins, who takes in orphans and runaways off the street. A self-proclaimed father to the forgotten, Mack gives these lost souls the only semblance of a home they've ever known - but at what cost? Mack trains his ragtag gang in the art of thievery and crime, filling their vulnerable minds with vigilante gospels and together wreak havoc by knocking off drug dealers and meth labs. Hot on their tail is Detective Ellis, portrayed by AnnaLynne McCord, an ass-kicking tough-as-nails cop who not only fights crime but is also forced to fight for respect in a patriarchal police force. Mack and the gang's world gets flipped upside down with the arrival of a mysterious young girl, who at first seems like the perfect new recruit but turns out to be something far more dangerous than anyone could have imagined.^[3]

Cast

AnnaLynne McCord as Police Detective Ellis
Ronnie Gene Blevins as Mack Monroe
Octavio Pisano as Cyrus
Sif Saga as Lexi
Baldur Thor as Kodi
Jaden Piner as Trey
Anthony Tamposi as Detective Harrison

Production

Directed by Jon Carlo, Feral State marks his notable contribution to the indie film genre.^[4] The film was produced by Dragonville Studios in association with Sunchaser Films, with cinematography by Joel E. Schaeffer and music composed by Lionel Cohen. Shot on location in Hernando, Florida, Feral State captures the raw and gritty essence of central Florida, contributing to the film's atmospheric tension and realism.^[5]

Reception

Critics have noted Feral State for its bold storytelling and the director's ability to weave complex character arcs within the tapestry of Florida's criminal underworld. The film's performances, particularly that of Ronnie Gene Blevins who portrayed Mack Monroe, received praise for his depth and authenticity.

References

^ "AnnaLynne McCord stars in "Feral State"". June 1, 2021.
^ "AnnaLynne McCord-Starrer 'Feral State' Lands at Vertical Entertainment; Teri Polo-Eric Dane Drama 'The Ravine' Gets Release Date; 'Lupe' to HBO Latino; Giant Deal for 'Black Holes' – Film Briefs". February 5, 2021.
^ "On the Scene: 'Feral State' Premiere". June 7, 2021.
^ "Vertical Entertainment to Release Director Jon Carlo's First Feature 'Feral State' on Digital, VOD and All Streaming Platforms". June 3, 2021.
^ "NEW FILM FERAL STATE TO RELEASE SOON". June 7, 2021.

External links

[1] "AnnaLynne McCord stars in "Feral State"". June 1, 2021.

[2] "AnnaLynne McCord-Starrer 'Feral State' Lands at Vertical Entertainment; Teri Polo-Eric Dane Drama 'The Ravine' Gets Release Date; 'Lupe' to HBO Latino; Giant Deal for 'Black Holes' – Film Briefs". February 5, 2021.

[3] "On the Scene: 'Feral State' Premiere". June 7, 2021.

[4] "Vertical Entertainment to Release Director Jon Carlo's First Feature 'Feral State' on Digital, VOD and All Streaming Platforms". June 3, 2021.

[5] "NEW FILM FERAL STATE TO RELEASE SOON". June 7, 2021.

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-* [[Nicholas Tamposi]]
+* Marianne Tamposi
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-* [[Jon Carlo]]
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-* [[AnnaLynne McCord]]
+* AnnaLynne McCord
-* [[Ronnie Gene Blevins]]
+* Ronnie Gene Blevins
-* [[Octavio Pisano]]
+* Octavio Pisano
-* [[Sif Saga]]
+* Sif Saga
-* [[Baldur Thor]]
+* Baldur Thor
-* [[Jaden Piner]]
+* Jaden Piner
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+* Anthony Tamposi
-* [[Jasmine Tamposi]]<!--- Per credit block. --->
+* Jasmine Tamposi
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-| music          = [[Lionel Cohen]]
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-'''''Feral State''''' is a 2020 American <!--The consensus is to list the main genre only in lead-->[[Thriller]] written, co-produced, and directed by [[Jon Carlo]] in his [[List of directorial debuts|directorial debut]]. It stars [[Ronnie Gene Blevins]], [[AnnaLynne McCord]], [[Octavio Pisano]], [[Sif Saga]], [[Baldur Thor]], [[Anthony Tamposi]], [[Jasmine Tamposi]], and [[Jaden Piner]]. A misfit gang of runaways and orphans are taken in by a dark and charismatic father figure who together wreak havoc throughout swamps and trailer parks of central Florida.
-[[Vertical Entertainment]] has acquired North American rights to Feral State, written and directed by [[Jon Carlo]] ([[First We Take Brooklyn]]) and starring [[AnnaLynne McCord]]{{cite web | url=https://www.wfla.com/daytime/annalynne-mccord-stars-in-feral-state/ | date=June 1, 2021 | title=AnnaLynne McCord stars in "Feral State" }}</ref> The indie thriller, which wrapped shooting late 2019, will now get a theatrical release May 28 along with its digital bow.<ref>{{cite web | url=https://deadline.com/2021/02/feral-state-the-ravine-release-dates-lupe-hbo-latino-black-holes-the-edge-of-all-we-know-1234685933/ | date=February 5, 2021 | title=AnnaLynne McCord-Starrer 'Feral State' Lands at Vertical Entertainment; Teri Polo-Eric Dane Drama 'The Ravine' Gets Release Date; 'Lupe' to HBO Latino; Giant Deal for 'Black Holes' – Film Briefs }}</ref>
+'''''Feral State''''' is a 2020 American thriller written, co-produced, and directed by Jon Carlo in his directorial debut. It stars Ronnie Gene Blevins, AnnaLynne McCord, Octavio Pisano, Sif Saga, Baldur Thor, Anthony Tamposi, Jasmine Tamposi, and Jaden Piner. A misfit gang of runaways and orphans are taken in by a dark and charismatic father figure who together wreak havoc throughout swamps and trailer parks of central Florida.
+Vertical Entertainment has acquired North American rights to ''Feral State'', written and directed by Jon Carlo and starring AnnaLynne McCord.<ref>{{cite web | url=https://www.wfla.com/daytime/annalynne-mccord-stars-in-feral-state/ | date=June 1, 2021 | title=AnnaLynne McCord stars in "Feral State"}}</ref> The indie thriller, which wrapped shooting late 2019, will now get a theatrical release on May 28 along with its digital bow.<ref>{{cite web | url=https://deadline.com/2021/02/feral-state-the-ravine-release-dates-lupe-hbo-latino-black-holes-the-edge-of-all-we-know-1234685933/ | date=February 5, 2021 | title=AnnaLynne McCord-Starrer 'Feral State' Lands at Vertical Entertainment; Teri Polo-Eric Dane Drama 'The Ravine' Gets Release Date; 'Lupe' to HBO Latino; Giant Deal for 'Black Holes' – Film Briefs}}</ref>
 ==Plot==
-Tucked far away from the white sandy beaches and amusement parks is a Florida that few outsiders ever see. Nestled alongside the gator infested swamps and rundown trailer parks lives a charismatic yet dangerous grifter named MACK MONROE portrayed by [[Ronnie Gene Blevins]] who takes in orphans and runaways off the street. A self proclaimed father to the forgotten, Mack gives these lost souls only semblance of a home they've ever known - but at what cost? Mack trains his ragtag gang in the art of thievery and crime, filling their vulnerable minds with vigilante gospels and together wreak havoc by knocking off drug dealers and meth labs. Hot on their tail is DETECTIVE ELLIS ([[AnnaLynne McCord]]), an ass-kicking tough as nails cop who not only fights crime, but is also forced to fight for respect in a patriarchal police force. Mack and the gang's world gets flipped upside down with the arrival of a mysterious young girl, who at first seems like the perfect new recruit but turns out to be something far more dangerous than anyone could have imagined.<ref>{{cite web | url=https://theknockturnal.com/on-the-scene-feral-state-premiere/ | date=June 7, 2021 | title=On the Scene: 'Feral State' Premiere }}</ref>
+Tucked far away from the white sandy beaches and amusement parks is a Florida that few outsiders ever see. Nestled alongside the gator-infested swamps and rundown trailer parks lives a charismatic yet dangerous grifter named Mack Monroe, portrayed by Ronnie Gene Blevins, who takes in orphans and runaways off the street. A self-proclaimed father to the forgotten, Mack gives these lost souls the only semblance of a home they've ever known - but at what cost? Mack trains his ragtag gang in the art of thievery and crime, filling their vulnerable minds with vigilante gospels and together wreak havoc by knocking off drug dealers and meth labs. Hot on their tail is Detective Ellis, portrayed by AnnaLynne McCord, an ass-kicking tough-as-nails cop who not only fights crime but is also forced to fight for respect in a patriarchal police force. Mack and the gang's world gets flipped upside down with the arrival of a mysterious young girl, who at first seems like the perfect new recruit but turns out to be something far more dangerous than anyone could have imagined.<ref>{{cite web | url=https://theknockturnal.com/on-the-scene-feral-state-premiere/ | date=June 7, 2021 | title=On the Scene: 'Feral State' Premiere}}</ref>
 ==Cast==
-* [[AnnaLynne McCord]] as Police Detective Ellis
+* AnnaLynne McCord as Police Detective Ellis
-* [[Ronnie Gene Blevins]] as Mack Monroe
+* Ronnie Gene Blevins as Mack Monroe
-* [[Octavio Pisano]] as Cyrus
+* Octavio Pisano as Cyrus
-* [[Sif Saga]] as Lexi
+* Sif Saga as Lexi
-* [[Baldur Thor]] as Kodi
+* Baldur Thor as Kodi
-* [[Jaden Piner]] as Trey
+* Jaden Piner as Trey
-* [[Anthony Tamposi]] as Detective Harrison
+* Anthony Tamposi as Detective Harrison
 ==Production==
-Directed by [[Jon Carlo]], "[[Feral State]]" marks his notable contribution to the indie film genre<ref>{{cite web | url=https://www.filmfestivals.com/blog/indieentertainmentmedia/vertical_entertainment_to_release_director_jon_carlo_s_first_feature_feral_state_on_digital_vod_and | date=June 3, 2021 | title=Vertical Entertainment to Release Director Jon Carlo's First Feature 'Feral State' on Digital, VOD and All Streaming Platforms }}</ref>
+Directed by Jon Carlo, ''Feral State'' marks his notable contribution to the indie film genre.<ref>{{cite web | url=https://www.filmfestivals.com/blog/indieentertainmentmedia/vertical_entertainment_to_release_director_jon_carlo_s_first_feature_feral_state_on_digital_vod_and | date=June 3, 2021 | title=Vertical Entertainment to Release Director Jon Carlo's First Feature 'Feral State' on Digital, VOD and All Streaming Platforms}}</ref> The film was produced by Dragonville Studios in association with Sunchaser Films, with cinematography by Joel E. Schaeffer and music composed by Lionel Cohen. Shot on location in Hernando, Florida, ''Feral State'' captures the raw and gritty essence of central Florida, contributing to the film's atmospheric tension and realism.<ref>{{cite web | url=https://www.the360mag.com/new-film-feral-state-to-release-soon/ | date=June 7, 2021 | title=NEW FILM FERAL STATE TO RELEASE SOON}}</ref>
-. The film was produced by [[Dragonville Studios]] in association with [[Sunchaser Films]], with cinematography by [[Joel E. Schaeffer]] and music composed by [[Lionel Cohen]]. Shot on location in Hernando, Florida, [[Feral State]] captures the raw and gritty essence of central Florida, contributing to the film's atmospheric tension and realism.<ref>{{cite web | url=https://www.the360mag.com/new-film-feral-state-to-release-soon/ | date=June 7, 2021 | title=NEW FILM FERAL STATE TO RELEASE SOON }}</ref>
 ==Reception==
-Critics have noted "[[Feral State]]" for its bold storytelling and the director's ability to weave complex character arcs within the tapestry of Florida's criminal underworld. The film's performances, particularly that of the actor Ronnie Gene Blevins who portrayed Mack Monroe, received praise for his depth and authenticity.
+Critics have noted ''Feral State'' for its bold storytelling and the director's ability to weave complex character arcs within the tapestry of Florida's criminal underworld. The film's performances, particularly that of Ronnie Gene Blevins who portrayed Mack Monroe, received praise for his depth and authenticity.
 == References ==
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 ==External links==
-* {{Official website|https://www.feralstatemovie.com/}}
+* [https://www.feralstatemovie.com/ Official website]
-* {{IMDb title|10283902|Feral State}}
+* [https://www.imdb.com/title/tt10283902/ Feral State on IMDb]