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Some quick notes for me for a first pass (this is a very big article) |
Some quick notes for me for a first pass (this is a very big article) |
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In plot: |
In plot: |
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* "forgets his memories" - seems like a odd phasing... what else would he forget? |
* "forgets his memories" - seems like a odd phasing... what else would he forget? |
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:{{fixed}} Changed diction, hopefully it is more clear now -[[User:Dcdiehardfan|Dcdiehardfan]] ([[User talk:Dcdiehardfan|talk]]) 22:54, 22 April 2024 (UTC) |
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* "Thus, Barry enters the Speed Force," I don't think this is the correct usage of 'thus' |
* "Thus, Barry enters the Speed Force," I don't think this is the correct usage of 'thus' |
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:{{fixed}} Changed syntax -[[User:Dcdiehardfan|Dcdiehardfan]] ([[User talk:Dcdiehardfan|talk]]) 22:54, 22 April 2024 (UTC) |
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* Honestly seems like there is a lot more in the cast section than necessary - compare, say FA [[blade runner]]'s cast section... |
* Honestly seems like there is a lot more in the cast section than necessary - compare, say FA [[blade runner]]'s cast section... |
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:{{comment}} I trimmed the prose, let me know what you think. Do note I feel this is a bit of a [[WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS]] argument here, but I think it's good that the article does its best to try to cover as much casting credits as possible while still retaining good size. It's also a really big film (clocking it at around 4 hrs) so it does make sense the Cast section is a bit large. -[[User:Dcdiehardfan|Dcdiehardfan]] ([[User talk:Dcdiehardfan|talk]]) 22:54, 22 April 2024 (UTC) |
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* "WB also decided not to delay the film so that executives could keep their annual bonuses" isn't in the source (well, it's one of two conflicting anonmous statements and I don't think the source is weighty enough to cover it) |
* "WB also decided not to delay the film so that executives could keep their annual bonuses" isn't in the source (well, it's one of two conflicting anonmous statements and I don't think the source is weighty enough to cover it) |
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:{{removed}} Looked at TheWrap source, you're right, I kept the merger part -[[User:Dcdiehardfan|Dcdiehardfan]] ([[User talk:Dcdiehardfan|talk]]) 22:54, 22 April 2024 (UTC) |
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* I feel like I'm missing quite a lot of images. Surely some of the billboards? For an article of this size... |
* I feel like I'm missing quite a lot of images. Surely some of the billboards? For an article of this size... |
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:{{in progress}} I'll see if I can add in images of billboards on the #ReleaseTheSnyderCut section, is there anything else you potentially had in mind? Maybe the Vero picture of "ZSJL Director's Cut"? -[[User:Dcdiehardfan|Dcdiehardfan]] ([[User talk:Dcdiehardfan|talk]]) 22:54, 22 April 2024 (UTC) |
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Hey [[User:Joereddington|Joe]], I'm very thankful that you're taking the time to review this article and I look forward to working with you. Thank you for choosing to accept this GAN and I hope you enjoy reading it! :) -[[User:Dcdiehardfan|Dcdiehardfan]] ([[User talk:Dcdiehardfan|talk]]) 22:54, 22 April 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:Joereddington|Joe]] ([[User talk:Joereddington|talk]]) 16:55, 22 April 2024 (UTC) |
[[User:Joereddington|Joe]] ([[User talk:Joereddington|talk]]) 16:55, 22 April 2024 (UTC) |
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Nominator: Dcdiehardfan (talk · contribs) 22:31, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
Reviewer: Joereddington (talk · contribs) 16:55, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
Some quick notes for me for a first pass (this is a very big article)
In plot:
- "forgets his memories" - seems like a odd phasing... what else would he forget?
Fixed Changed diction, hopefully it is more clear now -Dcdiehardfan (talk) 22:54, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- "Thus, Barry enters the Speed Force," I don't think this is the correct usage of 'thus'
- Fixed Changed syntax -Dcdiehardfan (talk) 22:54, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- Honestly seems like there is a lot more in the cast section than necessary - compare, say FA blade runner's cast section...
Comment: I trimmed the prose, let me know what you think. Do note I feel this is a bit of a WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS argument here, but I think it's good that the article does its best to try to cover as much casting credits as possible while still retaining good size. It's also a really big film (clocking it at around 4 hrs) so it does make sense the Cast section is a bit large. -Dcdiehardfan (talk) 22:54, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
Later:
- "WB also decided not to delay the film so that executives could keep their annual bonuses" isn't in the source (well, it's one of two conflicting anonmous statements and I don't think the source is weighty enough to cover it)
Removed Looked at TheWrap source, you're right, I kept the merger part -Dcdiehardfan (talk) 22:54, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- I feel like I'm missing quite a lot of images. Surely some of the billboards? For an article of this size...
In progress I'll see if I can add in images of billboards on the #ReleaseTheSnyderCut section, is there anything else you potentially had in mind? Maybe the Vero picture of "ZSJL Director's Cut"? -Dcdiehardfan (talk) 22:54, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
Hey Joe, I'm very thankful that you're taking the time to review this article and I look forward to working with you. Thank you for choosing to accept this GAN and I hope you enjoy reading it! :) -Dcdiehardfan (talk) 22:54, 22 April 2024 (UTC)