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:All of your revisions are simply poorly written and leave the article in a worse state than before you touched them. Even the title of your message on my talk page demonstrates a poor grasp of the English language. "Please explain why did you revert my edits?" starts as an imperative sentence but suddenly becomes interrogative halfway through. The correct phrasing would be, "Please explain why you reverted my edits" with no question mark. [[User:LitanyOfBoredom|LitanyOfBoredom]] ([[User talk:LitanyOfBoredom#top|talk]]) 03:56, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
:All of your revisions are simply poorly written and leave the article in a worse state than before you touched them. Even the title of your message on my talk page demonstrates a poor grasp of the English language. "Please explain why did you revert my edits?" starts as an imperative sentence but suddenly becomes interrogative halfway through. The correct phrasing would be, "Please explain why you reverted my edits" with no question mark. [[User:LitanyOfBoredom|LitanyOfBoredom]] ([[User talk:LitanyOfBoredom#top|talk]]) 03:56, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
::So instead of ''correcting'' the grammatical error, you just went ahead and removed all content that I added? By the way I added citations too so maybe their was grammatical error but to remove every single change on that ground alone, do you think its justified? If their is a grammatical error then sure correct it but why remove every single change? [[User:Adityaverma8998|Adityaverma8998]] ([[User talk:Adityaverma8998|talk]]) 04:21, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
::So instead of ''correcting'' the grammatical error, you just went ahead and removed all content that I added? By the way I added citations too so maybe their was grammatical error but to remove every single change on that ground alone, do you think its justified? If their is a grammatical error then sure correct it but why remove every single change? [[User:Adityaverma8998|Adityaverma8998]] ([[User talk:Adityaverma8998|talk]]) 04:21, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
:::The entire edit has a net negative effect on the article. You removed the section on "false dichotomy" for no reason and replaced it with a sentence that essentially restates the previous sentence. Cleaning up some grammar errors would still not make the edit worthy of staying in the article. [[User:LitanyOfBoredom|LitanyOfBoredom]] ([[User talk:LitanyOfBoredom#top|talk]]) 05:30, 17 May 2024 (UTC)

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Happy editing! TJMSmith (talk) 01:45, 30 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Please explain why did you revert my edits?

You reverted my edits on the page Argument from ignorance. For the time being i have reverted it back and you claimed that my edits were imprecise and grammatically suspect and informal. And I would like to ask to justify each one of those charges. What was gramatically suspect according to you? What was imprecise? And what do you mean by "informal" and what was infromal? Adityaverma8998 (talk) 00:24, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sure.
Grammatically suspect:
"If some proposition has not yet been proved true,"
Past tense verbs in the passive voice should always use the past participle ("proven").
Informal:
"we are not entitled on that ground alone"
First-person pronouns ("we") are too informal for a technical article.
Imprecise:
"to conclude that it is false and vice versa"
"Vice versa" is too ambiguous for a technical article.
More examples from your other edits:
"in which a something" (from Questionable cause) is obviously grammatically incorrect
"that is not really the cause of something else" (from Questionable cause) "really" here is informal and unnecessary
"The two events may coincide, but have no causal connection." (from Questionable cause). "but have no causal connection" is not an independent clause and should not be offset by a comma
"Its a fallacy in which an event" (from Post hoc ergo propter hoc) "Its" is missing an apostrophe, and contractions generally should not be used in technical writing.
All of your revisions are simply poorly written and leave the article in a worse state than before you touched them. Even the title of your message on my talk page demonstrates a poor grasp of the English language. "Please explain why did you revert my edits?" starts as an imperative sentence but suddenly becomes interrogative halfway through. The correct phrasing would be, "Please explain why you reverted my edits" with no question mark. LitanyOfBoredom (talk) 03:56, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
So instead of correcting the grammatical error, you just went ahead and removed all content that I added? By the way I added citations too so maybe their was grammatical error but to remove every single change on that ground alone, do you think its justified? If their is a grammatical error then sure correct it but why remove every single change? Adityaverma8998 (talk) 04:21, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The entire edit has a net negative effect on the article. You removed the section on "false dichotomy" for no reason and replaced it with a sentence that essentially restates the previous sentence. Cleaning up some grammar errors would still not make the edit worthy of staying in the article. LitanyOfBoredom (talk) 05:30, 17 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]