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:Is this newly registered account, not related to several Wikipedia accounts – [[User:Sewnbegun]], [[User:Ringardiumleviossa]], [[User:Teedbunny]] that were banned for sockpupppetry? What a weird edit for someone with 3 edits especially that article is no longer page protected. The person behind those accounts might have returned perhaps through a new account. [[User:Hotwiki|Hotwiki]] ([[User talk:Hotwiki|talk]]) 10:57, 17 May 2024 (UTC) |
:Is this newly registered account, not related to several Wikipedia accounts – [[User:Sewnbegun]], [[User:Ringardiumleviossa]], [[User:Teedbunny]] that were banned for sockpupppetry? What a weird edit for someone with 3 edits especially that article is no longer page protected. The person behind those accounts might have returned perhaps through a new account. [[User:Hotwiki|Hotwiki]] ([[User talk:Hotwiki|talk]]) 10:57, 17 May 2024 (UTC) |
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::I apologize for late reply. @[[User:Hotwiki|Hotwiki]] Firstly, I am not related to those accounts; a [[checkuser]] can check my IP address and editing patterns. Secondly, it was almost 15 days since protection was removed when I requested peer review (though we can still participate in talk page even if it is protected). Thirdly, this is peer review so comment on ''content'', not on contributors. [[User:Squirrell2|Squirrell2]] ([[User talk:Squirrell2|talk]]) 09:37, 18 May 2024 (UTC) |
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List of X-Men members
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Even though this article is very good and stable, I've listed this article for peer review because of some issues that might need improvement or third party opinion:
- The article has cited too much primary sources. Most of the sources who are from Marvel's official website. Many characters listed here cite only these sources. As per WP:PSTS, primary sources need to be supported by reliable secondary sources.
- The word X-Men is repeated too many times even though it is clear from the article's title that this is list of X-Men members.
- For example in New Mutants graduates, the word X-Men is used 4 times (section heading, sub-heading, information in sub-section and table heading).
- This article is based on chronological order which is one of the format listed in Manual of Style/Comics. The order is decided by releasing date of comic issue in which the character joined X-Men. The order of some characters who had joined in the same issue can be in alphabetical order.
- An example: In 1990s section, Cecilia Reyes, Marrow and Maggott joined in the same issue (X-Men, vol. 2 #70) so here we may apply alphabetical order. The result will be Cecilia, Maggott and Marrow.
Thanks, Squirrell2 (talk) 10:16, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
- Is this newly registered account, not related to several Wikipedia accounts – User:Sewnbegun, User:Ringardiumleviossa, User:Teedbunny that were banned for sockpupppetry? What a weird edit for someone with 3 edits especially that article is no longer page protected. The person behind those accounts might have returned perhaps through a new account. Hotwiki (talk) 10:57, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
- I apologize for late reply. @Hotwiki Firstly, I am not related to those accounts; a checkuser can check my IP address and editing patterns. Secondly, it was almost 15 days since protection was removed when I requested peer review (though we can still participate in talk page even if it is protected). Thirdly, this is peer review so comment on content, not on contributors. Squirrell2 (talk) 09:37, 18 May 2024 (UTC)