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Wiki Education assignment: Foundations II

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 1 June 2024 and 17 August 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): A. Shahbazi1, Cbtrinh, Dphan2, Ybramos, Htran2026 (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Akaguhi, Vivle, Shahrin.islam.ucsf, J.pham, UCSF Future PharmD.

— Assignment last updated by Health Economics and Policy (talk) 19:26, 26 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Proposed Editing Plan:

1. Add more details/reformat wording to the signs and symptoms section

2. Cite sources for treatment and include more treatments

3. Cite more data for epidemiology

4. Add more information for the prognosis

5. Expand on history with more sources on how it was discovered / came to be

Proposed Editing Plan 2024

- add citations/references

- reword and add details (with a strong focus on the first 8 sections) the article

Cbtrinh (talk) 22:47, 25 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Foundations 2: Peer Review

Peer review comments:

Justin Pham: Question 1: The group’s edits substantially improved the article. Originally blank without much description, has now been edited into an article with sufficient information including but not limited to: Signs and Symptoms, Diagnosis, Treatment, etc. Question 2: They also achieved its overall goals for improvement. Initial goal was to develop a wikipedia page sufficient from the original to provide information in lay-mans terms to non medical professionals and it does well in this goal. Question 3: In regard to language that supports diversity, equity, and inclusion, it does meet this goal/guideline. It reflects a neutral tone that does not induce bias or persuasion towards one side of a story. And it includes supportive language that best support the article so no problems identified. Great job! — Preceding unsigned comment added by J.pham, UCSF Future PharmD (talk • contribs) 00:32, 30 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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	Justin Pham: Question 1: The group’s edits substantially improved the article. Originally blank without much description, has now been edited into an article with sufficient information including but not limited to: Signs and Symptoms, Diagnosis, Treatment, etc. Question 2: They also achieved its overall goals for improvement. Initial goal was to develop a wikipedia page sufficient from the original to provide information in lay-mans terms to non medical professionals and it does well in this goal. Question 3: In regard to language that supports diversity, equity, and inclusion, it does meet this goal/guideline. It reflects a neutral tone that does not induce bias or persuasion towards one side of a story. And it includes supportive language that best support the article so no problems identified. Great job!		Justin Pham: Question 1: The group’s edits substantially improved the article. Originally blank without much description, has now been edited into an article with sufficient information including but not limited to: Signs and Symptoms, Diagnosis, Treatment, etc. Question 2: They also achieved its overall goals for improvement. Initial goal was to develop a wikipedia page sufficient from the original to provide information in lay-mans terms to non medical professionals and it does well in this goal. Question 3: In regard to language that supports diversity, equity, and inclusion, it does meet this goal/guideline. It reflects a neutral tone that does not induce bias or persuasion towards one side of a story. And it includes supportive language that best support the article so no problems identified. Great job! <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures\|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:J.pham, UCSF Future PharmD\|J.pham, UCSF Future PharmD]] ([[User talk:J.pham, UCSF Future PharmD#top\|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/J.pham, UCSF Future PharmD\|contribs]]) 00:32, 30 July 2024 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->