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5 member listed, 6 in the picture. Someone update. ([[User:68.249.143.152|68.249.143.152]] 16:10, 30 April 2007 (UTC)) |
5 member listed, 6 in the picture. Someone update. ([[User:68.249.143.152|68.249.143.152]] 16:10, 30 April 2007 (UTC)) |
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== POV == |
== POV == |
Revision as of 07:17, 2 June 2007
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This page really needs some work. None of the facts are cited or verified, the tone of the article needs improvement, and there is a complete overuse of parentheses.
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5 member listed, 6 in the picture. Someone update. (68.249.143.152 16:10, 30 April 2007 (UTC))
its been updated
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"Art Damage as an album was much heavier and darker than their debut; the band left behind the relative simplicity and, arguably, tiredness of the instrumental work of their debut in favor of the abrasiveness characterizing bands such as Converge and Every Time I Die."
"Simplicity" and "tiredness"? Could we explain the change without putting down the old material? Fiction Alchemist 08:00, 19 May 2007 (UTC)