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[[User:Vijeth|Vijeth]] 10:08, 4 October 2007 (UTC)
[[User:Vijeth|Vijeth]] 10:08, 4 October 2007 (UTC)


Yeah, so I corrected some sentences, although I haven't verified the factual accuracy of these claims, but at least now it is eaier to understand.
Yeah, so I corrected some sentences, although I haven't verified the factual accuracy of these claims, but at least now it is easier to understand.


before:
before:
This Town was the Capital of Tulu Kingdom Ullal and was ruled by Rani Abbakka Devi in the middle of 15th Century and fought for Independence against Portuguese. We can see the ruins of the fort she built around Somanatheshwar temple. This temple houses few things related to Rani Queen Abbakka. There is an old Jain temple (basadi) in the town which belongs to the queen. Ullal was one of the major ports of the western coast in the pre-colonial era.
This Town was the Capital of Tulu Kingdom Ullal and was ruled by Rani Abbakka Devi in the middle of 15th Century and fought for Independence against Portuguese. We can see the ruins of the fort she built around Somanatheshwar temple. This temple houses few things related to Rani Queen Abbakka. There is an old Jain temple (basadi) in the town which belongs to the queen. Ullal was one of the major ports of the western coast in the pre-colonial era.


After
After
This Town was the Capital of the Tulu Kingdom Ullal and was ruled by Rani Abbakka Devi in the middle of the 15th Century. It is claimed that she fought for Independence against the Portuguese. One can see the ruins of the fort she built around Somanatheshwara temple. This temple houses few things related to the Queen Rani Abbakka. There is an old Jain temple (basadi) in the town which belongs to the queen. Ullal was one of the major ports of the western coast in the pre-colonial era.
This Town was the Capital of the Tulu Kingdom Ullal and was ruled by Rani Abbakka Devi in the middle of the 15th Century. It is claimed that she fought for Independence against the Portuguese. One can see the ruins of the fort she built around Somanatheshwara temple. This temple houses few things related to the Queen Rani Abbakka. There is an old Jain temple (basadi) in the town which belongs to the queen. Ullal was one of the major ports of the western coast in the pre-colonial era.

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On April 23, 2005, this article was nominated for deletion. The result was keep. See Wikipedia:Votes for deletion/Ullal for a record of the discussion. Mindspillage (spill yours?) 21:17, 6 May 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Basics

It is imperative that the editor of even a single line, add a line or two on the talk page describing his\her changes. Sentences such as: "This Town was the Capital of Tulu Kingdom Ullal and was ruled by Rani Abbakka Devi in the middle of 15th Century and fought for Independence against Portuguese." should not be allowed on an encyclopedia article.

It is grammatically incorrect and is hard to follow. Please refrain from doing so. Vijeth 10:08, 4 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, so I corrected some sentences, although I haven't verified the factual accuracy of these claims, but at least now it is easier to understand.

before: This Town was the Capital of Tulu Kingdom Ullal and was ruled by Rani Abbakka Devi in the middle of 15th Century and fought for Independence against Portuguese. We can see the ruins of the fort she built around Somanatheshwar temple. This temple houses few things related to Rani Queen Abbakka. There is an old Jain temple (basadi) in the town which belongs to the queen. Ullal was one of the major ports of the western coast in the pre-colonial era.


After This Town was the Capital of the Tulu Kingdom Ullal and was ruled by Rani Abbakka Devi in the middle of the 15th Century. It is claimed that she fought for Independence against the Portuguese. One can see the ruins of the fort she built around Somanatheshwara temple. This temple houses few things related to the Queen Rani Abbakka. There is an old Jain temple (basadi) in the town which belongs to the queen. Ullal was one of the major ports of the western coast in the pre-colonial era.

SiegerKranzMeer 17:27, 6 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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