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This article is written as a howto, and misses the important information an encyclopedia should have on the sport and breathing apparatus. E.g., when/how/etc. was it invented, how did the apparatus develop, how popular is the sport (really), etc. [[User:Superm401|Superm401]] - [[User_talk:Superm401|Talk]] 08:42, 13 April 2008 (UTC) |
This article is written as a howto, and misses the important information an encyclopedia should have on the sport and breathing apparatus. E.g., when/how/etc. was it invented, how did the apparatus develop, how popular is the sport (really), etc. [[User:Superm401|Superm401]] - [[User_talk:Superm401|Talk]] 08:42, 13 April 2008 (UTC) |
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"Typically, the diving mask also serves to prevent breathing through the nose, so that one is forced to breathe through the snorkel. " I'm sorry, but this is all gibberish. The mask is for looking through. [[Special:Contributions/92.8.252.180|92.8.252.180]] ([[User talk:92.8.252.180|talk]]) 22:41, 8 October 2008 (UTC) |
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This article is written as a howto, and misses the important information an encyclopedia should have on the sport and breathing apparatus. E.g., when/how/etc. was it invented, how did the apparatus develop, how popular is the sport (really), etc. Superm401 - Talk 08:42, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
Nonsense
"Typically, the diving mask also serves to prevent breathing through the nose, so that one is forced to breathe through the snorkel. " I'm sorry, but this is all gibberish. The mask is for looking through. 92.8.252.180 (talk) 22:41, 8 October 2008 (UTC)