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:Hi again. Sorry to disturb. Pls see my addition on SLS in the Indian inventions article. The refs may not be as great as the others but I believe for now it would suffice. Your input is welcomed there and in this [[Same language subtitling]] article I created. Enjoy! [[User:Exxoo|Exxoo]] ([[User talk:Exxoo|talk]]) 19:57, 9 February 2009 (UTC)
:Hi again. Sorry to disturb. Pls see my addition on SLS in the Indian inventions article. The refs may not be as great as the others but I believe for now it would suffice. Your input is welcomed there and in this [[Same language subtitling]] article I created. Enjoy! [[User:Exxoo|Exxoo]] ([[User talk:Exxoo|talk]]) 19:57, 9 February 2009 (UTC)


::What do u think about the SLS addition? Do they constitute reliable sources in your opinion? I have alsi just included [[Simputer]] to the list of inventions. Pls have a look to see if it's appropriate. [[User:Exxoo|Exxoo]] ([[User talk:Exxoo|talk]]) 19:42, 16 February 2009 (UTC)
::What do u think about the SLS addition? Do they constitute reliable sources in your opinion? I have also just included [[Simputer]] to the list of inventions. Pls have a look to see if it's appropriate. [[User:Exxoo|Exxoo]] ([[User talk:Exxoo|talk]]) 19:42, 16 February 2009 (UTC)


== [[Education in India]] ==
== [[Education in India]] ==

Revision as of 19:42, 16 February 2009

Great work. I noticed a reassessment request on WP India's Assessment dept page, the top grade the list can get from the WP India is "List". Nominate the article at WP:Featured list, the top grade a list can get in wikipedia. I suggest you initiate a WP:peer review, before the Featured List nomiantion. --Redtigerxyz Talk 13:16, 5 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Hi again. Sorry to disturb. Pls see my addition on SLS in the Indian inventions article. The refs may not be as great as the others but I believe for now it would suffice. Your input is welcomed there and in this Same language subtitling article I created. Enjoy! Exxoo (talk) 19:57, 9 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
What do u think about the SLS addition? Do they constitute reliable sources in your opinion? I have also just included Simputer to the list of inventions. Pls have a look to see if it's appropriate. Exxoo (talk) 19:42, 16 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Sure looking. In the meantime, some review adverts of my own. YellowMonkey (click here to vote for world cycling's #1 model!) 03:57, 7 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Random things, in case you forgot, but likely you just haven't gotten around to it
  • Girls and castes. You should explain the situation before telling people that they are targeted for extra assistance
  • Status of private schools, church schools etc
  • Need to explain whether IIT being "important -> more money? more research funding?
  • Literacy rates need discussion, initiatives, backwardness in Bihar/UP etc.
  • Business partnerships with universities?
  • Are there pay degrees in India -> ie can pay more money to get admittance if you fail entrance exams
  • Political interference issues? Historical revisionism of textbooks to appease certain groups or whatever...

Invincibles

Invincibles

Our future Featured topic:

  • RO - Refs in # order?
  • J - Jargon run?
Name Class Comments RO J
Australian cricket team in England in 1948 GA Dec 09
1948 Ashes series GA Mar 09 Yes
First Test, 1948 Ashes series GA Feb 2009 Yes
Second Test, 1948 Ashes series FA Feb 2009 Yes
Third Test, 1948 Ashes series FA Feb 2009 FA candidate
Fourth Test, 1948 Ashes series FA Dec 09 Yes
Fifth Test, 1948 Ashes series FA Oct 09 Yes
Keith Johnson FA Aug 09
Bill Brown FA Passed September 2008
Sid Barnes FA Jan 08
Arthur Morris FA Nov 07
Donald Bradman FA Jun 08
Neil Harvey GA Jun 07, Nov 08
Lindsay Hassett GA Nov 09
Ron Hamence GA Passed June 2008
Keith Miller A passed A-class review Feb 09
Colin McCool GA Passed April 2008
Sam Loxton FA Passed Nov 09
Don Tallon FA Passed April 2008
Ron Saggers GA Passed May 2008
Ray Lindwall GA Passed January 2008
Doug Ring GA Passed January 2009
Ian Johnson FA Passed July 2008
Bill Johnston GA Passed June 2007
Ernie Toshack FA Passed March 2008
Bill Brown with the Australian cricket team in England in 1948 GA Passed Feb 09 Yes
Sid Barnes with the Australian cricket team in England in 1948 GA Passed January 2009 Yes
Arthur Morris with the Australian cricket team in England in 1948 GA Feb 09 Yes
Donald Bradman with the Australian cricket team in England in 1948 FA passed FAC Yes Y
Neil Harvey with the Australian cricket team in England in 1948 FA Passed Feb 09 Yes
Lindsay Hassett with the Australian cricket team in England in 1948 FA Feb 09 Yes
Ron Hamence with the Australian cricket team in England in 1948 FA Feb 09 Yes
Keith Miller with the Australian cricket team in England in 1948 GA Jan 2009 Yes
Colin McCool with the Australian cricket team in England in 1948 GA Feb 09 Yes
Sam Loxton with the Australian cricket team in England in 1948 FA passed FAC Yes
Don Tallon with the Australian cricket team in England in 1948 GA Feb 09 Yes
Ron Saggers with the Australian cricket team in England in 1948 GA Feb 09 Yes
Ray Lindwall with the Australian cricket team in England in 1948 GA Feb 09 Yes
Doug Ring with the Australian cricket team in England in 1948 FA Feb 09 Yes
Ian Johnson with the Australian cricket team in England in 1948 GA Feb 2009 Yes
Bill Johnston with the Australian cricket team in England in 1948 GA Passed February 2009 Yes
Ernie Toshack with the Australian cricket team in England in 1948 FA Feb 2009 Yes Y


I read through it and it seems OK for a start. I'm really sorry I cannot help much with the facts because I'm not familiar with education in India; I've never studied there nor have I read much on the topic. However I made some minor changes which if you don't favour you can revert. By the way good job on the article overhaul... actually reconstruction :)!! Exxoo (talk) 13:20, 7 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
HAve a good trip. YellowMonkey (click here to vote for world cycling's #1 model!) 01:06, 9 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I went through and made a few correctons, tried to improve the text a little so the English is a little more international while still preserving most of the Indian English usage. There's a lot of over-treferencing here, with nearly every sentence having an in-text citation, but then again there are a lot of stats quoted and they do need to be directly referenced. I'd agree the leading paragrapgh needs to be imprved, with less nubers on the improved recent standards and more on the structure. Mdw0 (talk) 01:14, 12 February 2009 (UTC) [reply]
Thanks for your messages and for your edits everyone. I really appreciate it since I could not do as much as I should have since the last few days. Once again thank you :) JSR 0562 18:06, 15 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]