User talk:Sallyfitzgibbons

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I have edited the article a few times and tried to group the sources into some logical order of Organisation, Newspapers, Online Magazines and then Sponsors. I have added more inline references as well. Can you be more specific with the part of the article that is concerning you? Martin Fitzgibbons

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Your submission at Articles for creation

Thank you for submitting an article to Wikipedia. Your submission has been reviewed and has been put on hold pending clarification or improvements from you or other editors. Please take a look and respond if possible. You can find it at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Sally Fitzgibbons. If there is no response within twenty-four hours the request may be declined; if this happens feel free to continue to work on the article. You can resubmit it (by adding the text {{subst:AFC submission/submit}} to the top of the article) when you believe the concerns have been addressed. Thank you.  Chzz  ►  22:01, 6 July 2010 (UTC)

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Sally Fitzgibbons

Hi, I've put the article submission on hold. I saw that there are quite a number of external links. External links should not exist in the article itself. You can convert them to citations or internal links(if they have a wikipedia article). You can also have a external links section but please make sure they comply to the guidelines here. Under the sources section I noticed that there are links under 'Surfing Organistions/Controlling Bodies', 'Newspapers', 'Online Surfing Publications', and 'Sponsors'. What are they for? Also, citations to Wikipedia articles are not reliable sources. It'll be great if you can change them. Bejinhan talks 13:05, 2 August 2010 (UTC)

I broke the sources into sections as the previous editor was telling me the sources were no good. What I was trying to do was reference that most of the information could be verified by by the surfing bodies ie the Professional Organisations that run the sport Sally Fitzgibbons is involved in, which in the case of results they are the originating source. Newspapers seemed to be the next best source as they verify facts before printing and the links to these were stories that verified some of the other info. Naturally Sponsors may be a biases source but they also had information on the subject. Should I remove all external links in the article?

I'm a bit confused by the sources but I guess I'll figure them out later. Do those sources in the sections already exist in the article? Wikipedia is not a reliable source, so you can remove it. No, you can leave all the external links in the External links section and I'll go through them. Also, please sign after leaving a message here by typing 4 tildes: ~~~~. Bejinhan talks 05:53, 4 August 2010 (UTC)

Maybe I have doubled up on them in a few places. When the previous editor was questioning the content I decided to reference everything that factual to an external reference. So pretty much everything I wrote can be proved following the link to a reliable source. Then referenced to her sponsors which is where I came unstuck as I had written the Bio for her at the etnies.com site. Which meant I had to get etnies to release the text to the public domain. Bit confusing I know but its my first try. What I did do was look at the Wiki for Stephanie Gilmore the Number 1 surfer in the world as a guide but now when I look at it again it doesn't seem to hardly any references. Ben, how do I get back to the article? Sallyfitzgibbons (talk) 06:05, 5 August 2010 (UTC)

You can click on the header topic above or here. Please make the changes as soon as possible so that I can review them. You can put them into citation form like what you did for the rest, instead of external links. Bejinhan talks 05:56, 7 August 2010 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation

Thank you for submitting an article to Wikipedia. Your submission has been reviewed and has been put on hold pending clarification or improvements from you or other editors. Please take a look and respond if possible. You can find it at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Sally Fitzgibbons. If there is no response within twenty-four hours the request may be declined; if this happens feel free to continue to work on the article. You can resubmit it (by adding the text {{subst:AFC submission/submit}} to the top of the article) when you believe the concerns have been addressed. Thank you. Bejinhan talks 10:59, 7 August 2010 (UTC)

I will be travelling to Europe the next week so it might take a few days to get back to it but I will make changes asap. Sallyfitzgibbons (talk) 13:44, 7 August 2010 (UTC)