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This version by Jay Walker himself

A user, Ohmcno, replaced the previous version of the article with this one. Based on the facts that it's uniformly gushing and discusses none of Walker's failings or mis-haps, and that it is this user's only contribution to Wikipedia, I can only conclude it was written by Jay Walker himself (Ohmcno's user page notwithstanding). I cleaned it up some, but it probably needs more balancing to be truly NPOV. — Frεcklεfσσt | Talk 13:40, 17 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I must say, the previous page didn't have much in it. The new one looks like it was written by a professional writer on Walker's behalf. Not a single negative word in it. It is quite well constructed, with a lot of citations. Although, the first paragraph baldly cites Walkerdigital.com, which is basically self-made and does not give any details. Misiu mp (talk) 19:55, 14 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Revision as of 13:40, 17 March 2011 edit Frecklefoot (talk \| contribs) Autopatrolled, Extended confirmed users, Pending changes reviewers 45,323 edits This version by Jay Walker himself ← Previous edit		Revision as of 19:55, 14 April 2011 edit undo Misiu mp (talk \| contribs) 150 edits few words Next edit →
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	A user, [[User:Ohmcno\|Ohmcno]], replaced the [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Jay_S._Walker&oldid=415381541 previous version of the article] with [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Jay_S._Walker&oldid=419231706 this one]. Based on the facts that it's uniformly gushing and discusses none of Walker's failings or mis-haps, and that it is this user's ''only'' contribution to Wikipedia, I can only conclude it was written by Jay Walker himself ([[User:Ohmcno\|Ohmcno's user page]] notwithstanding). I cleaned it up some, but it probably needs more balancing to be truly [[WP:NPOV\|NPOV]]. — [[User:Frecklefoot\|Frεcklεfσσt]] \| [[User talk:Frecklefoot\|Talk]] 13:40, 17 March 2011 (UTC)		A user, [[User:Ohmcno\|Ohmcno]], replaced the [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Jay_S._Walker&oldid=415381541 previous version of the article] with [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Jay_S._Walker&oldid=419231706 this one]. Based on the facts that it's uniformly gushing and discusses none of Walker's failings or mis-haps, and that it is this user's ''only'' contribution to Wikipedia, I can only conclude it was written by Jay Walker himself ([[User:Ohmcno\|Ohmcno's user page]] notwithstanding). I cleaned it up some, but it probably needs more balancing to be truly [[WP:NPOV\|NPOV]]. — [[User:Frecklefoot\|Frεcklεfσσt]] \| [[User talk:Frecklefoot\|Talk]] 13:40, 17 March 2011 (UTC)

			:I must say, the previous page didn't have much in it. The new one looks like it was written by a professional writer on Walker's behalf. Not a single negative word in it. It is quite well constructed, with a lot of citations. Although, the first paragraph baldly cites Walkerdigital.com, which is basically self-made and does not give any details. [[User:Misiu mp\|Misiu mp]] ([[User talk:Misiu mp\|talk]]) 19:55, 14 April 2011 (UTC)