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Cleanup

Good addition, but the article reads like a press release. It needs to be rewritten from a more NPOV standpoint, and there are some layout/grammar issues. I also think that adding the "-ji" suffix every time a name comes up is unnecessary, and might look like strange to someone who is unfamiliar with Indian culture or the Hindi language. Microtonal 21:48, 4 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Copyright

I put the intro paragraph at the temp article, since it didn't appear to be copied from the website. Not great, but better than nothing. Microtonal 21:41, 5 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Albums

Where is list of albums. Also, there must be mention of the recent release Kahen

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 ==Copyright==
 I put the intro paragraph at the temp article, since it didn't appear to be copied from the website. Not great, but better than nothing. [[User:Microtonal|Microtonal]] 21:41, 5 February 2006 (UTC)
+==Albums==
+Where is list of albums. Also, there must be mention of the recent release ''Kahen''
+-- <b>[[User:Ashay Arekar|<font color="green">Ashu</font>]]</b>|[[User talk:Ashay Arekar|(talk)]] 06:59, 15 March 2006 (UTC)