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Cleanup

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Good addition, but the article reads like a press release. It needs to be rewritten from a more NPOV standpoint, and there are some layout/grammar issues. I also think that adding the "-ji" suffix every time a name comes up is unnecessary, and might look like strange to someone who is unfamiliar with Indian culture or the Hindi language. Microtonal 21:48, 4 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]

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I put the intro paragraph at the temp article, since it didn't appear to be copied from the website. Not great, but better than nothing. Microtonal 21:41, 5 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Albums

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Where is list of albums. Also, there must be mention of the recent release Kahen

-- Ashu|(talk) 06:59, 15 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

WikiProject class rating

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This article was automatically assessed because at least one WikiProject had rated the article as start, and the rating on other projects was brought up to start class. BetacommandBot 19:45, 9 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

multiple issues template

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I think the maintenance notices on resume and peacockery are appropriate since the article is only sourced by the artist website and not at all WP:NPOV. Hekerui (talk) 09:42, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]