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Agriculturalism

... that the Chinese philosophy of Agriculturalism advocated that leaders should not be paid by the government, and should instead earn their wages from working in the fields with peasants?

5x expanded by Mathematicmajic (talk). Self nom at 04:33, 30 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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Length, format, content rules: --William S. Saturn (talk) 15:26, 30 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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Comments/discussion: Probably best to remove the 'should' from the hook, and replace the 'and should' with 'but'. Also you need to review an article.--William S. Saturn (talk) 15:26, 30 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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-{{*mp}}... that the [[Chinese philosophy]] of '''[[Agriculturalism]]''' advocated that leaders should not be paid by the government, and should instead earn their wages from working in the fields with peasants....?
+{{*mp}}... that the [[Chinese philosophy]] of '''[[Agriculturalism]]''' advocated that leaders should not be paid by the government, and should instead earn their wages from working in the fields with peasants?
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+*[[wp:dyk#Long enough|Length]]: [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] --[[User:William S. Saturn|William S. Saturn]] ([[User talk:William S. Saturn|talk]]) 15:26, 30 July 2011 (UTC)
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+*[[wp:npov|Neutrality]]: [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] --[[User:William S. Saturn|William S. Saturn]] ([[User talk:William S. Saturn|talk]]) 15:26, 30 July 2011 (UTC)
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+*[[wp:copyvio|Copyvio]]: [[File:Pictogram voting keep.svg|16px]]  --[[User:William S. Saturn|William S. Saturn]] ([[User talk:William S. Saturn|talk]]) 15:26, 30 July 2011 (UTC)
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+*Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting: [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] --[[User:William S. Saturn|William S. Saturn]] ([[User talk:William S. Saturn|talk]]) 15:26, 30 July 2011 (UTC)
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+Probably best to remove the 'should' from the hook, and replace the 'and should' with 'but'. Also you need to review an article.--[[User:William S. Saturn|William S. Saturn]] ([[User talk:William S. Saturn|talk]]) 15:26, 30 July 2011 (UTC)