User talk:Cl;nintendods

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Good afternoon. it is me who created this article is you had been quite right to put a bandage to redo the summary. the thing is that the summary is detailed, but I made many mistakes (in my opinion) because I'm not English, I do not speak English fluently. I would like you correct mistakes if it does not bother you. thank you in advance, cordially. Cl;nintendods. go to contact me on my French talk page. do not you embarrassed express yourself in English. my talk. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Cl;nintendods (talk • contribs) 13:04, 8 July 2010 (UTC)

Hi. The English in the summary isn't bad but it's the way it is written that is the problem. Phrases like "The police will she realize it? Jan Falkowski will he go to prison for violating it did not commit? It's up to you ..." aren't very good for Wikipedia. It's the style of writing that would normally be used by the producers in a press kit to try to promote the film. Instead of saying something like "John Smith goes into the House of Terror. What will he find...?" you should write "John Smith goes into the House of Terror and finds fluffy bunnies having a picnic." "It's up to you..." doesn't tell a reader of the article anything (beyond implying that it is an interactive film where the audience decides the outcome -- which it isn't!). Bradley0110 (talk) 16:50, 8 July 2010 (UTC)

Foz Allan

hello, I hope you remember me. I calling your name because I only know you on Wikipedia english. I created the above article. you can to fix it? I thank you in advance, with friendship; Cl;nintendods (talk) 14:01, 20 August 2010 (UTC)

You're going to have to put a lot of work into this article as it currently doesn't meet notability guidelines. Has the writer received significant coverage in reliable published sources? Have they won or been nominated for any major awards? If they have, then you should write that in the article, otherwise it might be deleted. Bradley0110 (talk) 17:32, 20 August 2010 (UTC)

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Foz Allan

Hello, I'm Cl;nintendods. I saw that you were interested in the article Foz Allan, saw your contributions. We can improve it together, if you wish. I await your reply; Cordially, Cl;nintendods (talk) 13:11, 21 August 2010 (UTC)

I'd never heard of him/her, and just did the routine tidying-up I do on many stub articles! You need to find some "reliable sources", ie not just imbd, which can supply and support information about the person, and give more of their biography, not just a straight list of titles. Also make links to and from articles like Vital Signs (TV series). Good luck in improving the article, but I won't be helping with it. PamD (talk) 06:56, 22 August 2010 (UTC)

I could not improve the article alone. Sorry, Cordially. Cl;nintendods (talk) 11:57, 22 August 2010 (UTC)

Turn of the Screw

Hi. The plot summary reads fine to me and the cast list is standard in most TV/film articles. However, I've removed the section about it being unsuitable for under-10s; ratings aren't generally notable enough for inclusion in these sorts of articles unless there was some special reason for the rating given. Additionally, different organisations will give different ratings, so it's not always productive to have such a section as it can just turn into a great long list. If you ever need a wider audience to look at an article, you can always ask at WP:WikiProject Television. Thanks. Bradley0110 (talk) 18:18, 26 January 2011 (UTC)

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Proposed deletion of Joseph Kennedy (actor)

The article Joseph Kennedy (actor) has been proposed for deletion because, under Wikipedia policy, all newly created biographies of living persons must have at least one reference to a reliable source that directly supports material in the article.

If you created the article, please don't be offended. Instead, consider improving the article. For help on inserting references, see Referencing for beginners, or ask at the help desk. Once you have provided at least one reliable source, you may remove the {{prod blp}} tag. Please do not remove the tag unless the article is sourced. If you cannot provide such a source within ten days, the article may be deleted, but you can request that it be undeleted when you are ready to add one. Dori ☾Talk ⁘ Contribs☽ 01:34, 8 December 2011 (UTC)