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Welcome to Wikipedia, Tempsperdue! I am Marek69 and have been editing Wikipedia for quite some time. I just wanted to say hi and welcome you to Wikipedia! If you have any questions, feel free to leave me a message on my talk page or by typing {{helpme}} at the bottom of this page. I love to help new users, so don't be afraid to leave a message! I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:

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Marek.69 ^talk 16:44, 10 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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Use references. This is an encyclopedia, so remember to include references listing websites, newspapers, articles, books and other sources you have used to write or expand articles. New articles and statements added to existing articles may be deleted if unreferenced or referenced poorly. See: Wikipedia:Citing sources and Wikipedia:Verifiability for more information.Moxy (talk) 18:29, 17 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hawker Typhoon

While I have no problems with some of your additions - although one or two examples of over-claiming are sufficient, not several - could you please make more of an effort to use the proper format for citations and add referenced books to the bibliography? Thanks ◆Min✪rhist✪rian◆MTalk 01:46, 8 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

well I think it is important that for every number of kills claimed that is in the article a verifiable source be used. And this is what I did for Goodwood and Mortain. I also added the overall numbers, as best as I could find, for the Normandy Campaign to put all the claimed kills in perspective.

Part of the problem with air attacks is that they simply weren't that effective in ww2 using fighter bombers and unguided munitions against armoured or dug in targets!

Your use of references also need to be improved as it causes a lot of additional cleanup. FWiW Bzuk (talk) 04:02, 8 July 2012 (UTC).[reply]

This is an article about the Hawker Typhoon, not a specialised opinion piece on the effectiveness of aerial GA during WW 2 - as Thomas notes there were two sides to the story; sure, the the Typhoon pilots overclaimed on the numbers of AFVs actually destroyed, but the effects of the GA sorties against "soft skins", open topped AP carriers and horse drawn vehicles used by the German armed forces was devastating, and was enough to halt the attack at Mortain with tanks and other AFVs being abandoned because of the attacks or because they ran out of fuel and ammunition. Fact is the Typhoon attacks were effective, as witnessed by all those who saw the battlefields afterwards. "A referenced discussion of the above is warranted for combat effectiveness." Not in an article such as this, because all that will happen is that it will become a long, tedious debate which will never end as other editors add their referenced opinions. One or two examples of AFV casualty figures v Typhoon claims is enough to make a point. Once again, when adding references could you please stick to the format used throughout the article and, when adding books to the Bibliography, as you should have done, please ensure you again follow the correct format, not forgettto add the ISBN No where applicable - why should others have to spend so much time cleaning up after you? ◆Min✪rhist✪rian◆MTalk 10:35, 8 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Firstly, apologies about the citations/references, I have tried to clean them up. Secondly, where possible in the data I referenced I specifically looked for tanks and or AFVS and stated such. I did not try to create further confusion regarding soft skinned vehicles, etc...I never said typhoons were NOT effective. I was merely countering the claims of tanks destroyed. And as such I believe that a section is needed on the difficulty of ANY FIGHT-BOMBER (FW 190, typhoon, P47, Il-2) to hit an armoured moving target with unguided munitions in ww2!Tempsperdue (talk) 14:28, 8 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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	:::This is an article about the Hawker Typhoon, not a specialised opinion piece on the effectiveness of aerial GA during WW 2 - as Thomas notes there were two sides to the story; sure, the the Typhoon pilots overclaimed on the numbers of AFVs actually destroyed, but the effects of the GA sorties against "soft skins", open topped AP carriers and horse drawn vehicles used by the German armed forces was devastating, and was enough to halt the attack at Mortain with tanks and other AFVs being abandoned because of the attacks or because they ran out of fuel and ammunition. Fact is the Typhoon attacks were effective, as witnessed by all those who saw the battlefields afterwards. "A referenced discussion of the above is warranted for combat effectiveness." Not in an article such as this, because all that will happen is that it will become a long, tedious debate which will never end as other editors add their referenced opinions. One or two examples of AFV casualty figures v Typhoon claims is enough to make a point. Once again, when adding references could you please stick to the format used throughout the article and, when adding books to the Bibliography, as you should have done, please ensure you again follow the correct format, not forgettto add the ISBN No where applicable - why should others have to spend so much time cleaning up after you? [[User:Minorhistorian\|<span style="background:white;color:red">◆</span><span style="background:white;color:blue">'''Min✪rhist✪rian</span><span style="background:white;color:red">◆</span>]][[User talk:Minorhistorian\|<font color="green">''MTalk''</font>]] 10:35, 8 July 2012 (UTC)		:::This is an article about the Hawker Typhoon, not a specialised opinion piece on the effectiveness of aerial GA during WW 2 - as Thomas notes there were two sides to the story; sure, the the Typhoon pilots overclaimed on the numbers of AFVs actually destroyed, but the effects of the GA sorties against "soft skins", open topped AP carriers and horse drawn vehicles used by the German armed forces was devastating, and was enough to halt the attack at Mortain with tanks and other AFVs being abandoned because of the attacks or because they ran out of fuel and ammunition. Fact is the Typhoon attacks were effective, as witnessed by all those who saw the battlefields afterwards. "A referenced discussion of the above is warranted for combat effectiveness." Not in an article such as this, because all that will happen is that it will become a long, tedious debate which will never end as other editors add their referenced opinions. One or two examples of AFV casualty figures v Typhoon claims is enough to make a point. Once again, when adding references could you please stick to the format used throughout the article and, when adding books to the Bibliography, as you should have done, please ensure you again follow the correct format, not forgettto add the ISBN No where applicable - why should others have to spend so much time cleaning up after you? [[User:Minorhistorian\|<span style="background:white;color:red">◆</span><span style="background:white;color:blue">'''Min✪rhist✪rian</span><span style="background:white;color:red">◆</span>]][[User talk:Minorhistorian\|<font color="green">''MTalk''</font>]] 10:35, 8 July 2012 (UTC)

	:::Firstly, apologies about the citations/references, I have tried to clean them up. Secondly, where possible in the data I referenced I specifically looked for tanks and or AFVS and stated such. I did not try to create further confusion regarding soft skinned vehicles, etc...I never said typhoons were NOT effective. I was merely countering the claims of tanks destroyed. And as such I believe that a section is needed on the difficulty of ANY FIGHT-BOMBER (FW 190, typhoon, P47, Il-2) to hit an armoured moving target with unguided munitions in ww2!		::::Firstly, apologies about the citations/references, I have tried to clean them up. Secondly, where possible in the data I referenced I specifically looked for tanks and or AFVS and stated such. I did not try to create further confusion regarding soft skinned vehicles, etc...I never said typhoons were NOT effective. I was merely countering the claims of tanks destroyed. And as such I believe that a section is needed on the difficulty of ANY FIGHT-BOMBER (FW 190, typhoon, P47, Il-2) to hit an armoured moving target with unguided munitions in ww2![[User:Tempsperdue\|Tempsperdue]] ([[User talk:Tempsperdue#top\|talk]]) 14:28, 8 July 2012 (UTC)