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The current page is not worthy of a place on this site, and I ask people on both sides of the debate (as well as those in the middle) to consider splitting off the bulk of the [[Water fluoridation controversy|controversial section]], keeping some three to five paragraphs of summary. [[User:Pmj|pmj]] 22:37, 15 May 2006 (UTC)
The current page is not worthy of a place on this site, and I ask people on both sides of the debate (as well as those in the middle) to consider splitting off the bulk of the [[Water fluoridation controversy|controversial section]], keeping some three to five paragraphs of summary. [[User:Pmj|pmj]] 22:37, 15 May 2006 (UTC)


I would review other similar issues in Wikipedia. From what I see, they all have similar pro and con sections.

The health concerns and other concerns of fluoridation belong directly on this topic just as they included in other medication or supplements on Wikipedia.

One option could be that instead of having pro and con sections, the same discussion was put into sections such as different health concerns. However, there are studies which have found health risks and some that have not. In a NPOV, both studies can be cited and shortly discussed. However, the result is going to be nearly the same.

The areas of the United States and the world which are fluoridated and which are not are also directly on point of water fluoridation. People should be able to see which cities fluoridate and which do not.

--[[User:AceLT|AceLT]] 23:10, 15 May 2006 (UTC)

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Thank you for amending these 'fluoride' entries. Water fluoridation certainly is confusing. In my view the MAIN reason for the fluoridation controversy is found in your existing first page where you say that fluoridation is recommended by the WHO. In fact the WHO says that fluoridating governments "should" measure the daily fluoride intake of their community BEFORE adding more fluoride to water supplies. (They also say it the community should make the the choice to fluoridate and not the government). However by my research NO fluoridating government measures daily fluoride intake ... hence the controversy. Fluoride has been used as a thyroid-inhibiting drug and is found in many modern medicines and in air as pollution. The conservative (pre-1991) estimate of present daily fluoride intake (2.5-6.5+mgF/day) overlaps the dose that is known to lower thyroid function (2.3-4.5mgF/day) and therefore we are being overdosed with fluoride. If governments followed the WHO recommendations and measured daily fluoride intake then fluoridation would be stopped on the grounds of potential damage to hormonal systems - especially in the young and under-nourished and those with kidney disorders etc. There is also the question of fluoride as a carcinogen/mutagen etc and hoepfully these matters will be clarified in 2006. So could you please add a note to your first page to say that the WHO recommends the daily fluoride intake should be measured before setting fluoridation standards. Please contact me if you want that reference source. SECOND point - fluoride is added as industrial grade chemical (product of pollution "scrubbers") and contains measurable amounts of contaminants such as Arsenic Cadmium Lead etc. Objectors to fluoridation object to their communities (and children) being dosed with these otherwise dangerous chemicals. THIRD point - it is now thought that the early researchers were wrong about fluoride entirely. It was not the fluoride that was reducing tooth decay but the Calcium from calcium fluoride. Water fluoridation now mostly uses silicofluoride (H2SiF6 or Na2SiF6) - which is an industrial pollutant and has never been officially tested for effects on humans but some researcers (e.g. Masters 2001) have reported it is associated with higher levels of Lead in children's blood. The main reason for lack of evidence of harm from fluoridation is the lack of studies into harm. The pre-eminent study is the York Review (McDonagh 2000). Please see their press release 2003 - 'What the York Review of water fluoridation really found'. Basically they concluded that a "surprising lack of high quality studies" had been done in any country since 1944. Lack of evidence of harm does not equate to lack of harm. FOURTH point - early researchers e.g. Harold Hodge made MISTAKES in their calculations when converting kg to pd but e.g. Hodge corrected his 1953 mistake in a 1979 publication. Unfortunately fluoridation promoters ignore Hodge's correction and still quote his first calculations - which give the impression that fluoride is safe to consume. The same can be said of early claims that fluoride is a 'nutrient'. It is now well accepted that fluoride has no healthy biological function. However the old claim is often still quoted. By my view there would be no controversy about fluoridation if all the published facts were presented properly. Fluoride is a biological poison and should NOT be added to everyone's water. (The question of topical fluoride toothpaste is another matter entirely). PLEASE would you amend your first page on Water fluoridation to note that the WHO recommends that daily fluoride intake studies should be done before setting standards for water fluoridation. Thanks LisaChris 00:21, 7 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]


I'm seeking a way to add a large quote list so the user may search details not quite important enough to be covered in a wikipedia article.

However, every comprehensive document talks about the historical use of fluorides in the first atom bombs, the FDA approval is only for rat poison, Hitler and URSS using fluorides to dumb down prisonners, and other things I'd rather not see associated with a wikipedia article(even if I researched and more than half the controversial stuff is legit). I just don't want an edit war but I want most of the quotes available...

I will stop additions until I get some kind of anwser.

  • If you can't find the "quotes" on a page that doesn't also imply that fluoridation is a plot by Communists AND Nazis, what do you think that says about the quotes you are trying to add?

I started editing this document after looking at historical documents, not at anti-fluoride propaganda. I was looking for commonalities between the communist regime and the nazis. The fluoride connection was discovered accidentally. I thought it was interesting. Now I see it's only edit war food so how can I do without the nazis and the article? I can't. Maybe it goes under the nazi page (after peer review this time...)

Large amount of various other substances have been used by both regimes at that era; they were experimenting.

Aslo Hitler had no _proof_ it dumbed down prisonners at the dose he mandated for the camps; it was hopeful thinking( I still have to find better data on the toxic dose ). As I said he was experimentating.

  • And, in passing, "rat poison" is not a "medical use" of sodium fluoride, so the Wikipedia article shouldn't say it is. - Nunh-huh 04:15, 19 Sep 2004 (UTC)

Poor translation. I have found the original document I was copying from in english and reworded correctly. Sorry!

This is the original letter to and from the FDA( anwser more informative than my own letter ): http://www.suite101.com/article.cfm/fluoridation/107324

The has been to court and a judge commented on it. FDA didn't approve fluorides. http://emporium.turnpike.net/P/PDHA/fluoride/unappfda.htm

So I expect the non-FDA approved claim to stick. It was the most far-fetched thing on the link I added. The nazi and commie claims didn't surprise an historian; and it's not unique to dictatorships either; it was used in europe to treat hyperthyroidism and was (still is) a common murder weapon - especially in China.

Anyhow. Could you enlighten me on wikipedia usage? I thought I was on http://www.internet-encyclopedia.org for a long while, and I notice more policy difference than I can count as well as distinct unwritten 'laws' governing both.

I'm seeing anti-fluoridation stuff moved from fluorides to water fluoridation, leaving 'fluoride' to mention 'possible other health benefits' with no mention of potential ill effects. Could someone explain the unwritten policy behind this one??

I'm trying to keep Fluoride focused on the chemistry aspect of fluoride so that it stays somewhat consistant with the other "-ide" "-ite" and "-ate" articles. I am also the one that created Water fluoridation by moving the bulk of material out of Fluoride.
I would appreciate it if all parties involved would keep Fluoride as free from politics and debate as possible. If neccesary, a new article could be created to contain information which doesn't belong on either Fluoride of Water fluoridation. I would suggest using Fluoride controversy as the title if the need to create such a page arises.
Darrien 05:18, 2004 Sep 19 (UTC)


I'll put the traditional greeting on your talk page. The main difference between http://www.internet-encyclopedia.org and here is probably the NPOV policy, which you should look at. Basically Wikipedia should attribute all opinions and not take a position, articles shouldn't be one-sided or propagandistic. It's also helpful to discussion if you get log-in name and sign your comments with four tildes (~~~~)...they get converted to your user name when the page is saved.

As for "FDA approval", fluoride doesn't have it because it doesn't need it: its use is authorzed by law. See 21 CFD 170.45 for the current Federal policy: "170.45 Fluorine-containing compounds. The Commissioner of Food and Drugs has concluded that it is in the interest of the public health to limit the addition of fluorine compounds to foods (a) to that resulting from the fluoridation of public water supplies as stated in § 250.203 of this chapter, (b) to that resulting from the fluoridation of bottled water within the limitation established in § 103.35 (d) of this chapter, and (c) to that authorized by regulations (40 CFR part 180) under section 408 of the Act."

I suspect the principle, if any, behind the "moving" is to keep the propaganda on one page so that people looking for information on the element fluorine don't have to wade through it to find what they want. - Nunh-huh 05:26, 19 Sep 2004 (UTC)


Thanks. All those policies are reasonnable and accepted as such.


And as for FDA approval, this is FDA limitation and not an acceptance of the 'helps teeth at levels not too toxic' part; limitations are used when a substance isn't banned or approved yet but a known toxic dose has been noticed by the FDA (i.e. preliminary to making more research - may results in bans or more restrictions). A true FDA approval (i.e. Prozac approval) is much more complex, and explicitely states benefit and toxicity. Not to mention there are 100's of fluorine compounds and one prozac. The FDA didn't make it a nutrient either(it's wrongly presented as a nutrient in the 8 vitamin books I consulted - and it isn't a nutrient in Canada where I live either). All that is enough to raise an eyebrow and have a thesis chapter about. How come 8 different vitamin books all mention it as a nutriment???

This FDA document also comes after well over 3 decades of ignoring the issue altogether in the face of constant opposition to fluoridation. Regardless of current policy, this is interesting to historians, and has been the case of most things banned in the US today (i.e. lead in gasoline). It's however a first for a medication!

And by the way. The study about slower reaction to a peripherial light after taking fluorides. Where can I find a good link for that?


What about fluoridation in the rest of the world? There was a debate in the UK on the subject.


fluoridation is overwhelmingly an english-speaking country practice.

China, Japan, europe, countries/provinces of the old URSS, and many others don't fluoridate at all or only in one city as a test. Some european contries have altered their constitution(!) to ban fluoridation completely and forever. Many nobel prize winners(as well as some past american EPA leaders such as Robert Carton) consider fluoridation the fraud of the century. All cities that fluoridate have strong opposition to fluoridation.

Regardless of the merits or problems of fluoridation, one has to realize american influence correlates with the practice of fluoridation more than anything else I can think of.

India, for example, has an anti-fluoride program that removes natural fluorides from water at levels that would be considered "good for teeth" in the US. Scientific studies done by the India government, notably the Teotia study [1] has given results in direct contradiction of the early US studies or US claims.

In contrast the US government has solidly been behind fluoridation in every way since the very beginning(before the very first serious scientific study was made). Their commitment was infallible since day one and the marketing campaign(by Edward Bernays at the time) for the launching of all early fluoride products(fluoridation, toothpaste, but not fluoride drops) it is one of the most expensive in history.

All this discussion of scientific studies in the US being generally in contradiction with scientific studies from non-US influenced countries may be too large, complex, and edit-war-generating for the article. We need something anyone can check quickly or else we will have plenty of true statements removed because they are very contrary to opinions vehiculated by the US media and need more than one link click to verify.

What we can do that's NPOV is a map of where fluoridation is used or not(this is easily verified), and maybe a short note indicating why the government stopped or didn't accept it.

There is a partial map here [2] , but more work needs to be done. A small .GIF with fluoridated, non-fluoridated, and fluoridation-banned areas would be nice once ready.

Japan's comment from Japan's official letter on the subject says:

REJECTED: "...may cause health problems...." The 0.8 -1.5 mg regulated level is for calcium-fluoride, not the hazardous waste by-product which is added with artificial fluoridation.

A question about why calcium fluoride wasn't used in fluoridation was removed from the article just recently. Considering some modern, industrialized countries like Japan officially consider fluoridation a conspiracy to dump toxic waste in water at low cost, and back it with many credible scientific studies(in Japaneese) to boot, I don't see why the wikipedia article should exist without a comment that many countries banned or completely disagree with fluoridation on scientific grounds.

I assume CaF isn't used because it is not very soluble in water. The Ksp of CaF is 3.2 x 10-11, which means that for all intents and purposes, CaF is insoluble in water. For a comparison, the Ksp of marble (CaCO3) is 3.3 x 10-9, so CaF is less soluble in water than marble, whereas NaF would have a near infinite solubility in water when compared to CaF.
Darrien 04:08, 2004 Sep 21 (UTC)
Then fluoridation couldn't be discovered by natural calcium fluoride in municipal water like the pro-fluoridationists claim? Or was it somehow somewhat soluble in that town only? Obviously I'm expecting it's too costly, but I'd be astonished if it wasn't doable; at least in form of calcium fluoride pills(all fluoride supplement pills are now banned as untested by the FDA, and calcium fluoride pills were never made).
Even as insoluble as CaF is, (if my math is correct) it is still soluble to the order of about 0.2 mg per liter of water. If the water was acidic, it would increase the solubility somewhat.
Darrien 11:16, 2004 Sep 21 (UTC)

Once a fluoridation/ban fluoridation map is ready, no one will remove comments like "...but most of europe disagrees...". Because the comment will be "Most of europe does not practice fluoridation". Both statements are equally true but the first seems very POV in the POV of the average uninformed person while the second seems fact even to most pro-fluoridationists.

For the record the comment was not removed by an american so could you please take your sterotyping away please?Geni 07:03, 21 Sep 2004 (UTC)
SB: I removed the 'american' word from my own text. Sorry about the stereotyping. And I started signing as 'SB' so you can trace all my mistakes to me. (-;
You should consider getting a username. It's quick and it doesn't even require an email address.
Darrien 11:16, 2004 Sep 21 (UTC)

SB: Oh, why was the category medical ethics removed?

Because there isn't enough evidence that fluoridation is harmful, and people are not being forced to drink fluoridated water. They can buy bottled water or install filtration systems to remove the fluoride ions if they choose to.
Darrien 11:16, 2004 Sep 21 (UTC)
I don't know enough about all the scientific evidence to say something about that the possible risks, but I do know that it still is a controversial issue. The scientific debate over this isn't finished yet (just like the recent studies on vitamin intake effects show how little we know about the interaction of some chemicals with the human body). The scientific debate isn't the only thing about this issue. This is also about special government intervention into the health of nearly all people via trusted public goods. Should the government be allowed to put 'healthy' mechanisms into public services, perhaps to reduce obesity, prevent cancer, boost vitamin/mineral intake, etc.? This is why I think the issue belongs in the medical ethics section. Walden 11:40, 2004 Sep 21 (UTC)

Even if fluoridation was proved safe and effective, the issue of medicating an entire population without choice has been a medical ethics question for decades for a large number of substances and distribution systems. This one question is gonna stick around for centuries to come, probably without consensus. The question of going for either the safest, or lowest cost, or the most teeth-protection fluoridation system if we can't have all 3 at once will also come up. I humbly suggest you add back the category, Darrian. Or suggest an alternative page that would deserve a connection between ethics and some uses of fluorides and thus be listed under the category; I have the feeling I'm about to learn another wikipedia unwritten law!

SB: Anwsering Darrien:

You said fluorides aren't proven to be toxic. Here is one study. http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/entrez/query.fcgi?cmd=Retrieve&db=pubmed&dopt=Abstract&list_uids=11233755 1. They augment lead poisoning. But only with certain fluorides (which raises an ethical question).

flawed study becasue it did not acount for varations in economic statusGeni
Also, that link only shows the summary of the study.
Darrien 11:08, 2004 Sep 28 (UTC)

So what is the safe level for lead? There is no safe level. Each ug decreases IQ, among other effects. http://www.citizen.org/publications/release.cfm?ID=6711

you've linked to a letter by a campian group. Not the worlds most unbiased source. The apaer claimed as the source does support the claim that "Each ug decreases IQ"Geni

1. They are 177 conditions linked to fluorosis; and 177 conditions linked to hypothyroidism. (This isn't surprising since fluorides baths were historically used as a treatment for hyperthyroidism - at levels lower than standard fluoridation). [3]

Interesting. Now, can you show me someone that has gotten fluorosis by drinking fluoridated water?
Darrien 11:08, 2004 Sep 28 (UTC)

So that's another point for both toxicity (to people already having hypothyroidism or fluorosis) and ethics - mass medicating a population!


So is that mass medication avoidable?

"The study concluded that more than half of the juices have more fluoride than is recommended." [4] So not only must people with fluorosis buy bottled water, they must avoid most juices on the market too!

I could not find that text on the page you provided.


Darrien 11:08, 2004 Sep 28 (UTC)

"Around the same time (1932) Gorlitzer von Mundy, being aware that fluorides also get absorbed through the skin, began fluoride treatments of hyperthyroid patients in Austria by prescribing 20 minute baths containing 30ccm (0.03l) HF per 200 liters of water. He reported on his successful treatment spanning over 30 years and involving over 600 patients at a 1962 symposium on fluoride toxicity organized by Gordonoff in Bern, which was also attended by other world-leading experts including the great George Waldbott, Steyn, and others." http://www.digitalnaturopath.com/treat/T473193.html

So fluorosis patients as well as the hypothyroidic must avoid baths and showers, too. Not to mention washing of clothes with fluoridated water.

How do you come to this reasoning? The amount of fluoride present in those baths was far beyond the levels used in mass fluoridation.
Darrien 11:08, 2004 Sep 28 (UTC)

"...less chemical exposure from drinking contaminated water than using it to wash the clothes or take a shower (American Journal of Public Health, May 1984)." and no I don't have a link for that one. I checked the journal at the library.

Could you give me page numbers or the full name of the article? I would be interested in reading the whole thing.
"We conclude that skin absorption of contaminants in drinking water has been underestimated and that ingestion may not constitute the sole or even primary route of exposure." -American Journal of Public Health, May, 1984, Vol. 74, No. 5
Darrien 11:08, 2004 Sep 28 (UTC)

So here you have it. Flurides aren't easily avoidable by drinking fluoridated water, it takes an extreme lifestyle to really avoid it! Moving in a low fluoridation area however remains an option.

Which is why people aren't being forced to drink/bathe/wash/whatever in fluoridated water.

Poor people cannot afford those alternatives. Much milk formula being another example - most poor will use tap water with it no matter what you say to them.

Darrien 11:08, 2004 Sep 28 (UTC)

I'll be sticking the medical ethics thingy back when I figure out how it works again - grrrr!

Please don't, at least not until this discussion is finished.

OK.

Darrien 11:08, 2004 Sep 28 (UTC)

And then I'll add something to the article with 3 studies to back each point. (-;

Please make sure your sources are reputable and non-biased. Also, have you given any thought to getting a username?
Darrien 11:08, 2004 Sep 28 (UTC)


I'll be trying the 'argument from valid authority' technique. tell me if I'm making progress or if you're more into trusting a medical study you can read for yourself...

Nobel prize winners who oppose fluoridation:

Dr Arvid Carlsson, Nobel Laureate in Medicine (2000) [5] claims no proof of benefit and proof of harm to some.

He's a neurologist not a toxicologistGeni
In 1962 he is a member of the Collegium Internationale Neuro-Psychopharmacologicum (he was President 1978-1980). [6] As well as lots of societies with both "pharmacology" and "neurology" in the name (or "biological psychiatry" as some countries call it). 16 varied medical societies in all, with the focus seemingly the effects of substances on the brain (one of his acheivements: he proved Dopamine is a neurotransmitter and not a precursor). He's certainly qualified to comment on how a substance may affect the brain (fluoridation is neurotoxic according to many), and is professionally capable of recognizing the scientific method and validity (or lack thereof) used in medical studies relating to pharmacology even if they're not about the brain.

Albert Schatz (medicine nobel prize) [7] claims fluoridation is a huge fraud. He doesn't support toothpaste either if I recall (geez, where did I put that toothpaste article???)

Hugo Theorell (nobel prize for enzyme chemistry work) stated: "Even if the risks from the viewpoints of enzyme chemistry with water fluoridation up to 1ppm are not be exaggerated, the distance to toxic doses is so short that hesitation should be justified." [8]

William P. Murphy (medicine nobel prize) [9] He reported fluoride allergic-type reactions existed - and opposes fluoridation.

Marshall Nirenberg (nobel prize, worked for the EPA) says fluoridation causes thyroid cancer. Hitler's fluoridation experiments are also mentionned. (by the way. Hitler's experiments failed to cause 'mindcontrol' of any kind. It just made people sick. I don't want to be associated with references more that "Hitler was experimenting with fluorides".)

James B. Summer, nobel prize for enzyme chemistry work. Opposes fluoridation. Mentions the nobel institute as main cause of non-fluoridation in Sweden. [10]

I couldn't find a nobel prize in favor of fluoridation so far, but I'm still seeking.

(geez, I wish I could edit when online. Gotta buy myself a nice PC soooooon!)

I will anwser Darrien's question on my next login.

Moving of quotes

It's not really appropriate to have all those quotes that were at the beginning of the article, at least on wikipedia, so they've been moved to a new page - water fluoridation quotes where maybe some can be selected and uesd in the article, and that new article can hopefully be formatted into something more readable (remove the excess capital letters, for example), or alternatively that content may be removed from wikipedia. From here, I think we can work on the actual content of this article and achieve something more than an article full of quotes. --Brendanfox 12:49, 26 Apr 2005 (UTC)

Needs Work

This article is embarassing - while the intro paragraph gives some introductory scientific facts about water fluoridation, almost all of the rest of the article is spent discussing (and advocating) the controversy and supposed conspiracy. The tooth enamel article has a more thorough, scientific section on fluoridation, for goodness sake. While Wikipedia should make a place for a discussion of the controversy, the article in its current form goes too far. This article needs to either: 1) be moved to an article titled Water Fluoridation controversy or the like, or 2) be expanded to include some actual, scientific information instead/in addition to the conspirational ravings that currently fill it. - Jersyko 22:34, May 11, 2005 (UTC)

Still waiting on a response to the above. I'm inclined to move a lot of this article's content to Water Fluoridation controversy, leaving a much shorter and more scientific article (with a small discussion of the controversy and a link to the other article). Unless someone objects in good faith, I think this will be my weekend project. - Jersyko talk 03:45, May 28, 2005 (UTC)
I object to that article structure. It's not normal to segregate controversy. Mirror Vax 05:39, 28 May 2005 (UTC)[reply]
I disagree. See John F. Kennedy assassination and Kennedy assassination theories. - Jersyko talk 17:39, May 28, 2005 (UTC)
For starters, define what is "controversial" and what isn't. Are epidemiology studies controversial? They generally are. So what is left if you remove anything controversial? The effect of flouide on teeth is covered in other articles. Mirror Vax 19:46, 28 May 2005 (UTC)[reply]
Here's the way I think this article should look: 1) keep the introductory material (which could hopefully be expanded soon), 2) remove everything that follows to the new article (it all fits under the "fluoridation debate" heading, after all), and 3) add a section consisting of a paragraph or two summarizing the debate and linking to the other article. Why remove everything after the intro? Well, because everything after it references the controversy or is relevant solely to the controversy (even the information that is empirically verifiable). Additionally, much of this information is presented in a POV or biased manner and would need to be cleaned up at a later time, after it is moved to the new article. - Jersyko talk 20:01, May 28, 2005 (UTC)
I don't see any benefit to that. It seems like an attempt to "clean up" the article by moving the lower quality part into a new article, even though it logically belongs here. Or, maybe you really think it ought to be deleted, but don't want to start an edit war. Is that it? My suggestion is, confront the problem directly. Edit mercilessly, and see what happens. Mirror Vax 20:25, 28 May 2005 (UTC)[reply]
I would support it. If you need any help fact checking, leave a message on my talk page.
P.S. If/when you create a new article, remember that fluorine was named after the Latin word "fluere" and is spelled "Fluorine".
Darrien 16:32, 2005 May 28 (UTC)
Ahh, yes, thanks. - Jersyko talk 17:39, May 28, 2005 (UTC)

Proposal to remove water fluoridation quotes article

After three weeks of the quotes being posted to the new article, none of the editors who developed the quotes have been of assistance in sifting through/trimming down the quotes, or even reformatting to remove the excessive capital letters. I, and several others have agreed that the quotes that were previously part of this article and then moved to the new quotes page (see "Moving of quotes" section above) are useless and uninformative. If you disagree with this assertion wholly, or partially (eg: you might believe some of the quotes are worth saving) now is the time to have your say, by visiting the deletion page for Water fluoridation quotes, or the content will be permanently removed from Wikipedia. --Brendanfox 11:33, 12 May 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Section move

I moved most of this article to Water Fluoridation controversy as I originally suggested. Now, this article needs to be expanded to include more scientific information as well as a paragraph or two about the controversy. - Jersyko talk 00:05, Jun 5, 2005 (UTC)

This seems to be totally pointless. The article already had information about the controversy, and now you say it needs information because you moved it. Mirror Vax 02:16, 5 Jun 2005 (UTC)
I think that's an oversimplification. This article needs an unbiased summary of the controversy, which wasn't contained anywhere in the sections that I moved. Again, I point to John F. Kennedy assassination and Kennedy assassination theories as a template. - Jersyko talk 14:31, Jun 5, 2005 (UTC)
It makes perfect sense to me. This article could address and explain the current concensus among the scientific community, instead of addressing at length (and from a biased view) all the conspiracy theories. These theories, which are almost completely dismissed by dental health professionals and biochemical experts, can still be mentioned in full in their own article. What is needed in this article is more data and results found from research. By doing that, we would help improve the reliability of this article as a source. dozenist 13:29, 5 Jun 2005 (UTC)

If the purpose of Wikepedia is to inform people, why would you have two subjects - for the same topic - one "fluoridation" and the other "fluoridation controversy" I think "fluoridation controversy" must be removed Then proper links to fluoridationists sites (which the relentless fluoridation re-editor seems to favor) could be listed along side with pure water advocates. Let the reader decide which side of the fluoridation issue is controversial. Careful researchers will find fluoridationists view is very controversial because it is not supported by valid science.

  • "Let the reader decide which side of the fluoridation issue is controversial" - yet in the next sentence, you seem to decide for them, despite the fact that the most widely accepted medical science indicates otherwise. "Fluoridationists" vs. "pure water advocates"? Geez . . . - Jersyko talk 14:10, 17 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Let me remind you what a group of UK experts found when they actually looked at the scientific studies "supporting" fluoridation, "We were unable to discover any reliable good-quality evidence in the fluoridation literature world-wide." (The York Review)

So you see, there is no scientfic controversy existing with fluoridation because there is NO valid science that supports water fluoridation. The controversy exsits in the belief systems of people's minds who truly believe in fluoride - but science is unable to support their comfortable beliefs.

  • . . . but it's a long logical jump from a reputable health agency saying that there aren't many good quality studies regarding fluoride to "fluoride is evil." In any event, there are many reputable scientific agencies that do consider the available scientific evidence sufficient to encourage fluoridation. - Jersyko talk 16:36, 19 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

THIS SITE SHOULD BE RENAMED THE AMERICAN DENTAL ASSOCIATION'S (ADA) VIEW ON WATER FLUORIDATION BECAUSE THAT'S ALL IT IS. The ADA is simply a union organized to protect its member dentists not the public. This may be why today dentists make much more money than physicians while working fewer days and fewer hours - while they neglect those who need their help the most and lobby against those who want to treat teeth in places and mouths where dentists refuse to go.

  • C'mon, now, don't start making blanket attacks on a profession only tangentially related to the issue. Even if you're right about the ADA, that doesn't prove anything in re water fluoridation being evil. Additionally, what about other reputable health/science agencies that encourage fluoridation? - Jersyko talk 13:22, 20 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

"THIS SITE SHOULD BE RENAMED THE AMERICAN DENTAL ASSOCIATION'S... "

Yes, the site needs some work and much of the article is written heavily POV. However, with some thoughtful editing, both arguments can be presented here. Let's be patient.

--AceLT 20:45, 8 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Ok. Added section below so both of you folks can add your groups.

--Editmore 02:05, 9 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Most of the Fluoride page should end up here

The health effects of fuoride have a better place here than on the fuoride page which should be more concerned with the chemistry. Stone 23:03, 2 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I disagree. This article deals only with the aspect of water fluoridation. The health effects of fluoride occur whether it is ingested in water, in salt, in a pill, or taken with only topical effect. It would be best to keep the health effects of fluoride on the fluoride article, which should address the chemistry and the medicinal value. - Dozenist talk 00:49, 3 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]

This article is on "water fluoridation." Thus, both arguments pro and con on "water fluoridation" should be placed here in as neutral POV manner as possible. The page is getting better but still needs some work.

Poisoning from fluoride equipment malfunctions

I have placed the topic here as it has to do with water fluoridation issue, not theories one way or another whether fluoridation at normal levels is beneficial or not.

--AceLT 04:45, 5 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

ok, then put more balanced articles on it then,

Fluoridation

All county health departments will provide the recent standard for the most often used agent: Fluorosilicic Acid, supplied by American Water Works Association, which is:

AWWA Standard for Fluorosilicic Acid B703-06.
This 22 page standard notes in the Foreword the source and process 
evolving the agent, and notes concern for the contaminants in the
commercial/industrial grade byproduct of phosphate fertilizer pro-
duction.  The Contents page notes the entire page of contaminants,
starting with heavy metals; arsenic, lead, beryllium and more, then
"Radionuclides" as uranium and radium 226 and 228, alpha and beta
particles (page 8 and 13). 
 Anita 

12.77.219.175 04:15, 11 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Interesting

--Editmore 07:10, 11 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I have added some simple straightforward water fluoridation status info for different countries. Anyoneone that finds others can add them.


Added pro and con position on water fluoridation

I have beeing reviewing and editing the various fluoridation pages for a few days now.

After discussing the matter with others and reviewing the Wikipedia guidelines, it is clear to me that the pro and con arguments concerning "water fluoridation" belong indeed in the "Water Fluordation" article. If someone wishes to read the article on water fluoridation, they should be able to see both the pro and con arguments. This discussion is completely on topic.

After reviewing a number of other subjects, I see that the substantive pro and con discussion are indeed on the subject matter discussed. Moving the pro and con arguments to another article completely is a POV action in my view.

However, I have left the Water Fluoridation Controversy article as it was and have not deleted any of the text.

--Editmore 03:41, 12 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I have just reviewed two much more controversial topics: Ritalin and nuclear power

Although contested, both have the health risks discussion on the main page of the article.

In fact, I have not seen a topic yet where the health risks of a topic are relegated to another page.

--Editmore 04:04, 12 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Nice clean up. Thanks.

--Editmore 23:36, 14 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]


Jersyko said it a year ago, and I'll repeat it: this article is embarrassing. This is Wikipedia, not Everything2; readers shouldn't be bombarded with a debate they most likely have no interest in. Check out the Sodium page -- it's nasty stuff, and we eat it every day, yet there's no sodium controversy. A bad example? Of course, just like this page is a bad example of a Wikipedia page.

Since the controversy aspect now takes up the majority of the page, yet is peripheral to the subject, I am forced to disagree with Editmore's strategy of merging the Water fluoridation controversy page back in to this one. A "section consisting of a paragraph or two summarizing the debate and linking to the other article" is by far the more professional way of structuring this page. 50 years down the line, when the requisite research has finally been done and the controversy is settled, one side or other is going to look somewhat foolish. Being more of a centrist, I don't really mind so much, but we can all work towards decreasing the embarrassment by following sound Wiki practice and not throwing cream pies around where innocent bystanders might be hit.

Comments on this position are welcome. pmj 10:18, 15 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I completely agree that the controversy surrounding water fluoridation should be listed on a different page, especially since some of that debate lies in either misunderstanding of science or on pseudo-science. It is a large enough topic to stand on its own, and the water fluoridation article itself should stay relatively clean of the topic. Also, this discussion had gone on previously and with concensus. - Dozenist talk 10:44, 15 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Every topic I have read has a section critical of an issue whether it be a controversial figure, prescription drug or other issue.

There are certainly studies pro and con. Trying to make the page all pro fluoridation and removing the negative studies and ill effects to another page is a unallowable POV action.

As an example, both side of the debate aknowledge that water fluoridation causes dental fluorosis. This is a negative effect of water fluoridation and is rightfully on the page.

Dental fluorosis is an effect of water fluoridation and is something readers of the article are entitled to hear.

"I don't really mind so much, but we can all work towards decreasing the embarrassment"

I think the real issue is that everyone needs to work to cite their sources.

As noted, other articles handle the situation the same.

Here's some similar items treats this way:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prozak

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Scientology

Each has a criticism section.

As far as the issue being resolved, some cities have voted to enact fluoridation, some have not.

--AceLT 20:20, 15 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

By the way, Harvard University just published a peer reviewed article stating that

"Boys who drink water with levels of fluoride considered safe by federal guidelines are five times more likely to have a rare bone cancer than boys who drink unfluoridated water"

Yes, the study is directly on topic of "water fluoridation." Not exactly Dr. Stangelove.

This should go under health risks.

However, if you believe you have an article on the subject, concerning the health risks or benefits of water fluoridation, more editing would be beneficial.

--AceLT 20:27, 15 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]


Speaking of bad examples, controversy takes up a tiny portion of the Prozac page (about 1/8), and the Scientology page has exactly the kind of link to a separate controversy page that I'm advocating for Water fluoridation!

Fully half of the water fluoridation page is taken up by playground tussles arguing back and forth -- including the Status section, which looks like some kind of faddish public masturbation contest.

The state of this page is unprofessional. It blatantly violates good practice, aesthetics, and honesty.

The argument here is not whether the controversial issues surrounding water fluoridation should be discussed, but how it should be done to present a clean and consistent -- hence believable and trustworthy -- page. I know people who say that Wikipedia is a low-quality source and that they always need to cross-check its information with a web search. This is a scandalous state of affairs, and pages like this only server to make it worse.

The current page is not worthy of a place on this site, and I ask people on both sides of the debate (as well as those in the middle) to consider splitting off the bulk of the controversial section, keeping some three to five paragraphs of summary. pmj 22:37, 15 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]


I would review other similar issues in Wikipedia. From what I see, they all have similar pro and con sections.

The health concerns and other concerns of fluoridation belong directly on this topic just as they included in other medication or supplements on Wikipedia.

One option could be that instead of having pro and con sections, the same discussion was put into sections such as different health concerns. However, there are studies which have found health risks and some that have not. In a NPOV, both studies can be cited and shortly discussed. However, the result is going to be nearly the same.

The areas of the United States and the world which are fluoridated and which are not are also directly on point of water fluoridation. People should be able to see which cities fluoridate and which do not.

--AceLT 23:10, 15 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]