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{{ WAP assignment | course = Wikipedia:Canada Education Program/Courses/Knowledge and Information in Society (Andrew Clement and Siobhan Stevenson) | university = University of Toronto | term = 2011 Q3 | project = WikiProject |
{{ WAP assignment | course = Wikipedia:Canada Education Program/Courses/Knowledge and Information in Society (Andrew Clement and Siobhan Stevenson) | university = University of Toronto | term = 2011 Q3 | project = WikiProject Wikipedia }} |
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::One suggestion. Section titles should not have every word capitalized. I think it's ok if the word is a proper noun though. See this for help: [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Capital letters]]. [[User:DaffyBridge|DaffyBridge]] ([[User talk:DaffyBridge|talk]]) 23:52, 24 October 2011 (UTC) |
::One suggestion. Section titles should not have every word capitalized. I think it's ok if the word is a proper noun though. See this for help: [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Capital letters]]. [[User:DaffyBridge|DaffyBridge]] ([[User talk:DaffyBridge|talk]]) 23:52, 24 October 2011 (UTC) |
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:::Thanks for both of these comments and suggestions, definitely helpful! [[User:Amfun|Amfun]] ([[User talk:Amfun|talk]]) 03:29, 25 October 2011 (UTC) |
:::Thanks for both of these comments and suggestions, definitely helpful! [[User:Amfun|Amfun]] ([[User talk:Amfun|talk]]) 03:29, 25 October 2011 (UTC) |
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== Class additions left a mess == |
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This article was the subject of a class exercise on 09/01/15, and it has been left in a horrendous state. If there are any editors out there willing to assist, I would love the help. For me, I have been known to take a hatchet rather than a scalpel to such jobs - so any and all contributions will be valued. Thanks! '''[[User:ScrapIronIV|<span style="color:#306b1e">Scr<span style="background:#0404B4;border-radius:7px;color:#FFFFFF">★</span>pIron</span>]]<sup>[[User talk:ScrapIronIV|<span style="color:#6E6E6E">IV</span>]]</sup>''' 14:07, 2 September 2015 (UTC) |
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: I'm not opposed to the idea of restoring the article to its state prior to the class assignment. I'm not at all convinced that any of the additional material has helped at all. A great deal of it is unreferenced (despite attempts to imply references using unformatted bracket syntax (e.g. this is a fact.[32]) but with numbers that don't correspond to anything) and much of it is essay-like and non-neutral. Before taking the hatchet, I'm going to see if I can get the class instructor engaged in the conversation. <font color="green">[[User:WikiDan61|WikiDan61]]</font><font color="green" size="5px"></font><sup>[[User talk:WikiDan61|ChatMe!]]</sup><sub>[[Special:Contributions/WikiDan61|ReadMe!!]]</sub> 14:30, 2 September 2015 (UTC) |
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Revision as of 00:30, 3 September 2015
Work in Progress
I am currently working on adding the information under each topic proposed for the page. This article is in it's very initial stages and any feedback or contributions are greatly welcomed! Amfun (talk) 23:41, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
- Your topic headings look good, and the lead was interesting, good luck with this article.Meatsgains (talk) 23:43, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
- One suggestion. Section titles should not have every word capitalized. I think it's ok if the word is a proper noun though. See this for help: Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Capital letters. DaffyBridge (talk) 23:52, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for both of these comments and suggestions, definitely helpful! Amfun (talk) 03:29, 25 October 2011 (UTC)
- One suggestion. Section titles should not have every word capitalized. I think it's ok if the word is a proper noun though. See this for help: Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Capital letters. DaffyBridge (talk) 23:52, 24 October 2011 (UTC)