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Neutrality

I have no knowledge of the local politics involved here, but the way this is currently written does not seem neutral, including its summary of his education career, and the fact that the only information about his current election campaign is noting that he is partisan and that he has had to give back money. This way all well be true, but is there a more neutral way of wording it, and is there some other basic neutral content that can be added? Melcous (talk) 07:08, 11 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

neutrality

A denizen of Los Angeles, I find this article restrained and fair. No is mention made about the vicious charter school fights going on in California and the pro-charter position Tuck has taken. This article may be too neutral in light of that political atmosphere. Including the charter issue, however, would be problematic and 'over-informative.' This should be left as written.20:25, 13 March 2018 (UTC)Swapoo24 (talk)

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 I have no knowledge of the local politics involved here, but the way this is currently written does not seem [[WP:NPOV|neutral]], including its summary of his education career, and the fact that the only information about his current election campaign is noting that he is partisan and that he has had to give back money. This way all well be true, but is there a more neutral way of wording it, and is there some other basic neutral content that can be added? [[User:Melcous|Melcous]] ([[User talk:Melcous|talk]]) 07:08, 11 March 2018 (UTC)
+== neutrality ==
+A denizen of Los Angeles, I find this article restrained and fair.  No is mention made about the vicious charter school fights going on in California and the pro-charter position Tuck has taken.  This article may be too neutral in light of that political atmosphere.  Including the charter issue, however, would be problematic and 'over-informative.'  This should be left as written.20:25, 13 March 2018 (UTC)[[User:Swapoo24|Swapoo24]] ([[User talk:Swapoo24|talk]])