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Welcome!

Welcome to Wikipedia, Js7581! Thank you for your contributions. I am Iryna Harpy and I have been editing Wikipedia for some time, so if you have any questions, feel free to leave me a message on my talk page. You can also check out Wikipedia:Questions or type {{help me}} at the bottom of this page. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:

Also, when you post on talk pages you should sign your name using four tildes (~~~~); that will automatically produce your username and the date. I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Iryna Harpy (talk) 00:17, 10 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

This user is a student editor in Memorial_University/Animal_Behaviour_(Winter) .

Hello @Iryna Harpy: and thank you again for the warm welcome! I appreciate your offer of assistance and I will likely be contacting you as I work towards editing stub articles related to Animal Behaviour over the next semester. Cheers. Js7581 (talk) 01:02, 10 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

You're welcome. If you feel confident about changes to content, be WP:BOLD in making them. If you want to consult/converse on particular articles/stubs, you can WP:PING me directly from the talk page of the relevant article. You'll soon get a sense of whether other editors are still actively maintaining articles, or whether they've been left floating in cyberspace and are in need of some TLC. I can't recall any significant activity on behavioural sciences articles for a while, so renewed interest is greatly appreciated. Looking forward to lending a hand once you're on track for time. Happy New Year! --Iryna Harpy (talk) 18:58, 10 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Hello, Js7581, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:42, 16 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Nice work - interesting topic! The only major change I'd make is to the opening paragraph. Wikipedia articles are supposed to have lead sections that summarise the content of the article body. Right now, you mention that the hypothesis was proposed by Peter Ward and Amotz Zahavi in the lead, but you don't repeat this in the body. It's a small thing, but it might be helpful pretend that the article could be read without the lead, and make sure that everything important is also in the body. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:33, 11 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

   Thanks so much for the help and advice Ian (Wiki Ed)! I will definitely make those changes! Js7581 (talk) 16:09, 14 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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	Nice work - interesting topic! The only major change I'd make is to the opening paragraph. Wikipedia articles are supposed to have lead sections that summarise the content of the article body. Right now, you mention that the hypothesis was proposed by Peter Ward and Amotz Zahavi in the lead, but you don't repeat this in the body. It's a small thing, but it might be helpful pretend that the article could be read without the lead, and make sure that everything important is ''also'' in the body. [[User:Ian (Wiki Ed)\|Ian (Wiki Ed)]] ([[User talk:Ian (Wiki Ed)\|talk]]) 20:33, 11 March 2018 (UTC)		Nice work - interesting topic! The only major change I'd make is to the opening paragraph. Wikipedia articles are supposed to have lead sections that summarise the content of the article body. Right now, you mention that the hypothesis was proposed by Peter Ward and Amotz Zahavi in the lead, but you don't repeat this in the body. It's a small thing, but it might be helpful pretend that the article could be read without the lead, and make sure that everything important is ''also'' in the body. [[User:Ian (Wiki Ed)\|Ian (Wiki Ed)]] ([[User talk:Ian (Wiki Ed)\|talk]]) 20:33, 11 March 2018 (UTC)


			Thanks so much for the help and advice [[User:Ian (Wiki Ed)\|Ian (Wiki Ed)]]! I will definitely make those changes! [[User:Js7581\|Js7581]] ([[User talk:Js7581#top\|talk]]) 16:09, 14 March 2018 (UTC)