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== Jpayan1488's Peer Review == |
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There's not much in your article to start with so any further changes you want to add to it would be a great addition. Maybe you can add the effects neolocal residences have on modern economies since you mentioned it in your draft. You can also clarify the different cultures neolocal residences take place in and how they differ from each other. The draft has an encyclopedic tone and is grammatically correct.[[User:Nguyenandrew|Nguyenandrew]] ([[User talk:Nguyenandrew|talk]]) 21:04, 30 March 2018 (UTC)Nguyenandrew |
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:52, 15 March 2018 (UTC)
Jpayan1488's Peer Review
[edit]There's not much in your article to start with so any further changes you want to add to it would be a great addition. Maybe you can add the effects neolocal residences have on modern economies since you mentioned it in your draft. You can also clarify the different cultures neolocal residences take place in and how they differ from each other. The draft has an encyclopedic tone and is grammatically correct.Nguyenandrew (talk) 21:04, 30 March 2018 (UTC)Nguyenandrew