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Some of the phrasing in this needs to reflect a balanced view. "Mexican authorities felt compelled to provide protection"; "with accompaniment by human rights defenders for protection from police abuse"; "a cross-border coalition of social justice activists, community organizers, faith-based groups, and human rights advocates known as Pueblo Sin Fronteras" - it sounds like this was written by someone close to the organization. -ProhibitOnions ^(T) 06:21, 2 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

References for previous caravans

Caravans described as an “annual pilgrimage” dating back to 2010. Four citations are given, three of which are secondary sources published from late 2017 to this year. The only primary source, Pueblo Sin Fronteras’ website, has a list of previous caravans but the earliest entry is from 2017. Citation [6] and [8] claim caravans since 2010, but [5] says they’ve been doing it for 15 years. Please fix

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 Some of the phrasing in this needs to reflect a balanced view. "Mexican authorities felt compelled to provide protection"; "with accompaniment by human rights defenders for protection from police abuse"; "a cross-border coalition of social justice activists, community organizers, faith-based groups, and human rights advocates known as Pueblo Sin Fronteras" - it sounds like this was written by someone close to the organization. -[[User:ProhibitOnions|<span style="color:#800">Pro<span style="color:#a00">hib<span style="color:#b00">it'''<span style="color:#c00">O</span>ni'''</span>'''o'''</span>'''ns'''</span>]] <sup><font size="-2">[[User talk:ProhibitOnions|(T)]]</font></sup> 06:21, 2 May 2018 (UTC)
+== References for previous caravans ==
+ Caravans described as an “annual pilgrimage” dating back to 2010. Four citations are given, three of which are secondary sources published from late 2017 to this year. The only primary source, Pueblo Sin Fronteras’ website, has a list of previous caravans but the earliest entry is from 2017. Citation [6] and [8] claim caravans since 2010, but [5] says they’ve been doing it for 15 years. Please fix