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** Yes. The author may very well have innocently and faithfully accepted the company's [[native advertising]]. --[[User:SmokeyJoe|SmokeyJoe]] ([[User talk:SmokeyJoe|talk]]) 08:55, 29 June 2018 (UTC)
** Yes. The author may very well have innocently and faithfully accepted the company's [[native advertising]]. --[[User:SmokeyJoe|SmokeyJoe]] ([[User talk:SmokeyJoe|talk]]) 08:55, 29 June 2018 (UTC)
*'''Rename/Edit''' Respecting the fact that all articles will stand or fail on their own merits and acknowledging that this deletion is not primarily because of COI suspicions, the question is do these references withstand WP scrutiny as "significant coverage in multiple independent, reliable, secondary sources". In the WP guidelines New York Times is given as inherently "reliable, independent, and secondary". I would put the Wall Street Journal in that category as well, as I would The Guardian. Is it significant though? I would argue yes. Both of these articles situate naked as one of the important progenitors of green tourism in China. Neither of these are fancy hotel reviews, but instead researched pieces by credible authors. The Bloomberg article which references naked Hub, which is the other main business arm of the naked Group, also fulfill the criteria of "reliable, independent, and secondary". It is a significant piece reporting a major acquisition reported from multiple sources. I acknowledge that in the article it was not made clear the relationship between the "naked Group" and "naked Retreats" and "naked Hub". WP is clear in the policy of no inherited notability. I would therefore recommend that this piece be re-edited as just pertaining the resorts business, and allowed to stand on its own in that regard. [[User:Leeallenmack|Leeallenmack]] ([[User talk:Leeallenmack|talk]]) 08:37, 29 June 2018 (UTC)<small>— [[User:Leeallenmack|Leeallenmack]] ([[User talk:Leeallenmack|talk]]&#32;• [[Special:Contributions/Leeallenmack|contribs]]) has made [[Wikipedia:Single-purpose account|few or no other edits]] outside this topic. </small>
*'''Rename/Edit''' Respecting the fact that all articles will stand or fail on their own merits and acknowledging that this deletion is not primarily because of COI suspicions, the question is do these references withstand WP scrutiny as "significant coverage in multiple independent, reliable, secondary sources". In the WP guidelines New York Times is given as inherently "reliable, independent, and secondary". I would put the Wall Street Journal in that category as well, as I would The Guardian. Is it significant though? I would argue yes. Both of these articles situate naked as one of the important progenitors of green tourism in China. Neither of these are fancy hotel reviews, but instead researched pieces by credible authors. The Bloomberg article which references naked Hub, which is the other main business arm of the naked Group, also fulfill the criteria of "reliable, independent, and secondary". It is a significant piece reporting a major acquisition reported from multiple sources. I acknowledge that in the article it was not made clear the relationship between the "naked Group" and "naked Retreats" and "naked Hub". WP is clear in the policy of no inherited notability. I would therefore recommend that this piece be re-edited as just pertaining the resorts business, and allowed to stand on its own in that regard. [[User:Leeallenmack|Leeallenmack]] ([[User talk:Leeallenmack|talk]]) 08:37, 29 June 2018 (UTC)<small>— [[User:Leeallenmack|Leeallenmack]] ([[User talk:Leeallenmack|talk]]&#32;• [[Special:Contributions/Leeallenmack|contribs]]) has made [[Wikipedia:Single-purpose account|few or no other edits]] outside this topic. </small>
<small>[[User:Leeallenmack|Leeallenmack]] ([[User talk:Leeallenmack|talk]]&#32;• ::[[Special:Contributions/Leeallenmack|contribs]]) has made other edits and additions to WP outside this topic. </small>
:::{{Ping|Leeallenmack}} when you say {{tq|this deletion is not primarily because of COI suspicions}} does the use of the word '''suspicions''' mean that you are denying having a COI? [[User:Domdeparis|Dom from Paris]] ([[User talk:Domdeparis|talk]]) 10:27, 3 July 2018 (UTC)
:::{{Ping|Leeallenmack}} when you say {{tq|this deletion is not primarily because of COI suspicions}} does the use of the word '''suspicions''' mean that you are denying having a COI? [[User:Domdeparis|Dom from Paris]] ([[User talk:Domdeparis|talk]]) 10:27, 3 July 2018 (UTC)
::::The deletion discussion is already agreed to depend on whether the links fulfill the WP criteria for notability. Whether you believe there is COI is immaterial.
** There are nine references, and I have taken the view that the top three are the best references for attesting notability, and that if they fail, then all the rest fail too. Perhaps you can point out a different set of three references that are all of independent, secondary, reliable, and cover the topic in depth?
** There are nine references, and I have taken the view that the top three are the best references for attesting notability, and that if they fail, then all the rest fail too. Perhaps you can point out a different set of three references that are all of independent, secondary, reliable, and cover the topic in depth?
:: By independent, I expect that the information presented in the reference did not come straight from the company or its CEO or an employee. This rules out interviews.<br/>I also expect that the commentary is critical (which does not mean negative), and includes mentions of strengths and weaknesses, and non-condescending mentions of competitors. If the coverage is 100% positive push, with either silence or condescension on competitors, then I call it a secretly paid piece. See [[Wikipedia:Conflict_of_interest#Covert_advertising]]. This is very common, and I suspect this is exactly what we are looking at here, in the sources, even if you are not personally connected. "New York Times" and "Wall Street Journal" do not equate to "independent.
:: By independent, I expect that the information presented in the reference did not come straight from the company or its CEO or an employee. This rules out interviews.<br/>I also expect that the commentary is critical (which does not mean negative), and includes mentions of strengths and weaknesses, and non-condescending mentions of competitors. If the coverage is 100% positive push, with either silence or condescension on competitors, then I call it a secretly paid piece. See [[Wikipedia:Conflict_of_interest#Covert_advertising]]. This is very common, and I suspect this is exactly what we are looking at here, in the sources, even if you are not personally connected. "New York Times" and "Wall Street Journal" do not equate to "independent.
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:: Reliably. You seem to have that one OK, these are reputable publishers.
:: Reliably. You seem to have that one OK, these are reputable publishers.
:: Cover the topic in depth. I expect two running sentences speaking directly to the topic, not a mention of the topic in relation to a different focus of the paragraph. Your sources are lengthily dedicated to the topic, which is overkill for "in depth" and is typical of a paid promotional piece. --[[User:SmokeyJoe|SmokeyJoe]] ([[User talk:SmokeyJoe|talk]]) 08:53, 29 June 2018 (UTC)
:: Cover the topic in depth. I expect two running sentences speaking directly to the topic, not a mention of the topic in relation to a different focus of the paragraph. Your sources are lengthily dedicated to the topic, which is overkill for "in depth" and is typical of a paid promotional piece. --[[User:SmokeyJoe|SmokeyJoe]] ([[User talk:SmokeyJoe|talk]]) 08:53, 29 June 2018 (UTC)
Disagree with your assessment. WSJ and The Guardian have high editorial guidelines and anything paid is clearly marked as such. These articles are not hotel reviews and they are not interviews. I do agree that these articles do not mention naked Group, only naked Retreats and the relationship between the two is not clearly established.[[User:Leeallenmack|Leeallenmack]] ([[User talk:Leeallenmack|talk]]) 12:51, 3 July 2018 (UTC)

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Promotion based on non-independent promotional sources, Wikipedia:Conflict_of_interest#Covert_advertising, WP:UPE SmokeyJoe (talk) 07:10, 27 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Ref 1. No mention of "Naked Group".
Ref 2. No mention of "Naked Group.
Ref 3. Not independent, no prose, just a directory source.
Maybe Refs 1 and 2 are supposed to support "Naked Stables" or whatever the company created by Grant Horsfield (at Afd)? In any case, these references are advertorials featuring interview quotes of Grant Horsfield the company CEO, and are not independent.
Clearly, the company and CEO are actively engaged in covert advertising. See Wikipedia:Conflict_of_interest#Covert_advertising. Both Grant Horsfield and Naked Group are WP:CORP-failing covert advertising and, noting also WP:UPE, should be deleted with prejudice. --SmokeyJoe (talk) 07:11, 27 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Note: This discussion has been included in the list of Companies-related deletion discussions. TMGtalk 07:53, 27 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Note: This discussion has been included in the list of China-related deletion discussions. TMGtalk 07:53, 27 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • Delete as not meeting WP:NCORP but I am not sure that the article creator has been doing this covertly as I had no difficulty whatsoever in finding the COI. I think this is a case of good faith COI editing. Dom from Paris (talk) 09:07, 27 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • Rename/Edit Respecting the fact that all articles will stand or fail on their own merits and acknowledging that this deletion is not primarily because of COI suspicions, the question is do these references withstand WP scrutiny as "significant coverage in multiple independent, reliable, secondary sources". In the WP guidelines New York Times is given as inherently "reliable, independent, and secondary". I would put the Wall Street Journal in that category as well, as I would The Guardian. Is it significant though? I would argue yes. Both of these articles situate naked as one of the important progenitors of green tourism in China. Neither of these are fancy hotel reviews, but instead researched pieces by credible authors. The Bloomberg article which references naked Hub, which is the other main business arm of the naked Group, also fulfill the criteria of "reliable, independent, and secondary". It is a significant piece reporting a major acquisition reported from multiple sources. I acknowledge that in the article it was not made clear the relationship between the "naked Group" and "naked Retreats" and "naked Hub". WP is clear in the policy of no inherited notability. I would therefore recommend that this piece be re-edited as just pertaining the resorts business, and allowed to stand on its own in that regard. Leeallenmack (talk) 08:37, 29 June 2018 (UTC)Leeallenmack (talkcontribs) has made few or no other edits outside this topic. [reply]

Leeallenmack (talk • ::contribs) has made other edits and additions to WP outside this topic.

@Leeallenmack: when you say this deletion is not primarily because of COI suspicions does the use of the word suspicions mean that you are denying having a COI? Dom from Paris (talk) 10:27, 3 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
The deletion discussion is already agreed to depend on whether the links fulfill the WP criteria for notability. Whether you believe there is COI is immaterial.
    • There are nine references, and I have taken the view that the top three are the best references for attesting notability, and that if they fail, then all the rest fail too. Perhaps you can point out a different set of three references that are all of independent, secondary, reliable, and cover the topic in depth?
By independent, I expect that the information presented in the reference did not come straight from the company or its CEO or an employee. This rules out interviews.
I also expect that the commentary is critical (which does not mean negative), and includes mentions of strengths and weaknesses, and non-condescending mentions of competitors. If the coverage is 100% positive push, with either silence or condescension on competitors, then I call it a secretly paid piece. See Wikipedia:Conflict_of_interest#Covert_advertising. This is very common, and I suspect this is exactly what we are looking at here, in the sources, even if you are not personally connected. "New York Times" and "Wall Street Journal" do not equate to "independent.
Secondary source. It must make commentary, not just repeat facts. I look for adjectives that are clearly the opinion of the writer.
Reliably. You seem to have that one OK, these are reputable publishers.
Cover the topic in depth. I expect two running sentences speaking directly to the topic, not a mention of the topic in relation to a different focus of the paragraph. Your sources are lengthily dedicated to the topic, which is overkill for "in depth" and is typical of a paid promotional piece. --SmokeyJoe (talk) 08:53, 29 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Disagree with your assessment. WSJ and The Guardian have high editorial guidelines and anything paid is clearly marked as such. These articles are not hotel reviews and they are not interviews. I do agree that these articles do not mention naked Group, only naked Retreats and the relationship between the two is not clearly established.Leeallenmack (talk) 12:51, 3 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]