Talk:Don't Say You Love Me (Fifth Harmony song)/GA1

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 02:40, 27 December 2018 (UTC)

Infobox

• No source for its genre. Please add the source and in the prose, composition section.

Genre in infobox is “tropical-pop” while genre given on iTunes is simply pop. Trillfendi (talk) 00:31, 10 January 2019 (UTC)

iTunes not a good source for genre. Source for its genre, please. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:12, 10 January 2019 (UTC)

Lead

• song recorded → remove recorded
• tropical music → source
• music critics → link to music journalism
• in the room that remains open as the last member leaves. → re-word this
• Total Request Live → year of when the show was rebooted in between brackets.

Background

• Add instrumentsation, recording, enginner and so on...

Composition and lyrics

• A midtempo song built on a moderate tropical, dembow rhythm,[3][4] "Don't Say You Love Me" is a torch song that finds the group asking for an honest relationship → "Don't Say You Love Me" is a midtempo song built on a moderate tropical, dembow rhythm. Lyrically, it is a torch song that finds the group asking for an honest relationship. Wath is dembow?

Critical reception

• The song received positive reviews from all the music critics. → add in the beginning with wikilink of music critics to music journalism.

Music video

• Why did you remove this subsections?

Background and synopsis

• Image on the top of the article.

Reception

• his written article published on Billboard website → , in her article published on the Billboard website,

Live performances

• Total Request Live → year of when the show was rebooted in between brackets.
• They also performed in February 2018 on Hollywood Boulevard to a small crowd of fans → this source is not the official channel on Youtube, find another source.
• they sang the song last out of all the others → awful. "Don't Say You Love Me" was the last song they performed/was on their setlist. + source
• The performance also included songs such as "Work from Home", "All in My Head (Flex)" and "Down" → what do you mean with this? The song was interpolated with these ones?

Credits and personnel

• Use only 2 collums
• Use {{spaced ndash}}

References

• Reference 7 needs work and the author needs to have last name in the first place and then first name
• Same for the reference 8, 9, 12, 14, 15...all the other until the end (regarding the author)
• Reference 28 no date or author?
• 23 no date
• Buzzfeed is dead and unreliable, so remove it.

Overall

• No lyrics on external links?

@Trillfendi: You seem to try to improve the article, however, you are making a mess of certain sections such as Credits and personnel, you can remove the "Management" subsection, but let everything else in there. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:14, 10 January 2019 (UTC)

• • I'm do, so, so sorry for my late response @MarioSoulTruthFan: I'm so freakin busy lately and barely see Wikipedia, I promise you that I'm going to edit everything until Tuesday. Okay? Urban (talk) 13:58, 12 January 2019 (UTC)