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| None - new addition || On January 7, 2019, ParkWhiz announced that it had rebranded as Arrive Inc., capping its transformation into the leading provider of solutions for the last mile of connected mobility. Arrive helps companies and brands easily offer parking and other mobility-related services to drivers, fleets and connected vehicles. It powers hundreds of the company’s partner-branded experiences, in addition to the ParkWhiz and BestParking mobile apps. || https://www.americaninno.com/chicago/inno-news-chicago/parkwhiz-rebrands-as-it-grows-its-b2b-service/ https://www.businesswire.com/news/home/20190107005133/en/ParkWhiz-Rebrands-ArriveTM |
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| ParkWhiz was founded in 2006 by Aashish Dalal (current CEO) and Jon Thornton. || ParkWhiz was founded in 2006 by Aashish Dalal and Jon Thornton. Yona Shtern is the current CEO. || Aashish Dalal is no longer the CEO of the company, as noted in the “Key People” section of the Wikipedia page. https://www.americaninno.com/chicago/inno-news-chicago/parkwhiz-names-beyond-the-rack-founder-as-its-ceo/ |
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| By January 2016 ParkWhiz had over 50 employees in 4 states. || By March 2019, ParkWhiz employees more than 100 people in the U.S., Philippines and Israel. || https://www.americaninno.com/chicago/inno-news-chicago/parkwhiz-rebrands-as-it-grows-its-b2b-service/ |
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| None - new addition || ParkWhiz has partnered with Hyundai and Honda to allow drivers to find, book and pay for parking directly through the vehicle dashboard. || https://www.cnet.com/roadshow/news/hyundai-applebees-chevron-parkwhiz-payments/ https://mashable.com/article/honda-dream-drive-infotainment-ces-2019/#8qN15Co3U5q5 |
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| None - new addition || ParkWhiz received $25 million in Series D financing from Amazon Alexa Fund, NewSpring Capital, Alate Partners, Chaifetz Group and Purple Arch Ventures. || https://techcrunch.com/2018/11/13/amazons-alexa-fund-invests-in-on-demand-parking-service-parkwhiz/ |
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| Page headline: A major contributor to this article appears to have a close connection with its subject. It may require cleanup to comply with Wikipedia's content policies, particularly neutral point of view. Please discuss further on the talk page. (June 2017) || |
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[[User:ChrisMDooley|ChrisMDooley]] ([[User talk:ChrisMDooley|talk]]) 19:47, 19 March 2019 (UTC) |
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This article needs updating
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This article is out of date and needs to be updated and verified. Please see the below sources and let me know if you have questions.
http://www.parking-net.com/parking-news/codipark-and-parkwhiz/parkwhiz-acquires-tel-aviv-based-codipark https://www.bizjournals.com/chicago/news/2018/06/01/parkwhiz-buys-tel-aviv-parking-startup.html https://www.businesswire.com/news/home/20180122006212/en/Heading-Redeem-Groupon-New-Partnership-Lets-Groupon https://www.cnet.com/roadshow/news/hyundai-applebees-chevron-parkwhiz-payments/ https://www.prnewswire.com/news-releases/parkwhiz-named-official-parking-app-of-boston-red-sox-300619804.html
ChrisMDooley (talk) 20:49, 21 June 2018 (UTC)
Reply 21-JUN-2018
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Thank you! spintendo 23:01, 21 June 2018 (UTC)
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(ChrisMDooley (talk) 20:27, 12 July 2018 (UTC))
Reply to edit request 12-JUL-2018
Below you will see where proposals from your request have been quoted with reviewer decisions and feedback inserted underneath, either accepting, declining or otherwise commenting upon your proposal(s). Please read the enclosed notes for information on each request. Additional changes were made to the article.
- The History section was re-labeled Origins.
- The sections discussing the company partnerships were consolidated under one heading, Partnerships and Acquisitions.
- Authors were added to their citations in the references.
- The section discussing the company's charitable actions was omitted for two reasons:
- One paragraph was insufficiently paraphrased from the source material. (See WP:CLOSEPARAPHRASE.)
- A company's charitable actions may be laudable, but those laudits ought to be mentioned elsewhere. (See WP:NOBLECAUSE.)
- The article contained WP:TOOMANYREFS. Excess citations were omitted. Excess Wikilinks were also omitted. (See WP:LINKCRISIS.)
- Promotional tone and emphasis on the company's offerings and products were tightened and/or omitted.
spintendo 22:33, 12 July 2018 (UTC)
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