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Facilities

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Information to be added: Facilities Explanation of issue: The Club offers sports and recreational facilities, e.g. golf course, driving range, putting green, gym, spa, outdoor swimming pool, tennis courts, table-tennis room, badminton courts, squash courts, basketball court and football pitch, etc. It also put forth a wide range of dining venues, e.g. Oasis, Ocean View, Horizons, Poolside Café, BreeZes and The Wine Cellar. Other facilities provided in the Club include Pro Shop, Country Store, multi-function rooms, Oasis lawn children playroom and outdoor playground. References supporting change: https://web.archive.org/web/20160107035257/http://www.cwbgolf.org/fnb-oasis.aspx https://web.archive.org/web/20160106053846/http://www.cwbgolf.org/fnb-ocean-view.aspx https://web.archive.org/web/20160107091205/http://www.cwbgolf.org/fnb-Poolside-Cafe.aspx https://web.archive.org/web/20160107024743/http://www.cwbgolf.org/fnb-BreeZes.aspx https://web.archive.org/web/20160106213014/http://www.cwbgolf.org/fnb-wine-cellar.aspx https://web.archive.org/web/20160106053846/http://www.cwbgolf.org/fnb-ocean-view.aspx Source20 (talk) 08:08, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I have added a new section called "facilities". Per WP:NOTDIR, I have not listed the restaurants and retail shops individually. Citobun (talk) 13:00, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Promotion of Sports

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Information to be added: Promotion of Sports Explanation of issue: The Club is committed to promoting sports development in Hong Kong. It has hosted various local and internally events and tournaments, such as the PGA Tour China Clearwater Bay Open, the World Amateur Team Championships, Hong Kong Tennis Champions Cup and Sport for All Day. The Club also supports Hong Kong local athletes in developing their professional career. • Golf ambassadors: Jason Hak, Motin Yeung, Matthew Cheung and Isabella Leung • Tennis ambassador: Eudice Chong

References supporting change: http://www.tennishk.org/en/news-detail/hong-kong-tennis-champions-cup-2018/ https://www.lcsd.gov.hk/en/sfad/2019/supporting.html https://www.hkgolfer.com/around-hkga/jason-hak-signs-clearwater-bay-ambassador https://www.pressreader.com/hong-kong/hk-golfer/20180801/281492162116431 https://www.scmp.com/sport/tennis/article/3042320/hong-kongs-new-number-one-tennis-ace-eudice-chong-ready-take-reins-and Source20 (talk) 08:20, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I have added a new "Events" section that includes the tournaments you listed. The other content, and the suggested language, is promotional in tone and not encyclopedic. Citobun (talk) 13:02, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Information to be removed: External links Explanation of issue: It is requested to remove "Golf course review on golf007.com" external link because this link shows garbled text References supporting change: http://www.golf007.com/golf_course/reviewed/clearwaybaygc/clearwater_review.htm Source20 (talk) 08:24, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Thank you for following the policy for users with COI. Kind regards, Citobun (talk) 12:54, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Information to be removed: "Facilities Summary" external link Explanation of issue: It is suggested to remove "Facilities Summary" external link because this link is a private club membership company website, which is not appropriate to promote it References supporting change: https://www.mformembership.com/MoreDetail.aspx?id=125&clubname=Clearwater+Bay+Golf+%26+Country+Club&clubtype=Country%20Individual Source20 (talk) 06:56, 6 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Charity Events

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Information to be added: The Club has always been committed to demonstrating social responsibilities. Established in 2003, the Community Outreach Programme (COP) aims to serve the neighbourhood and give back to the community. The COP initiatives spin around three major areas, including family care, harmony of neighbourhood, and environmental preservation. Collaborating with its charity partners, the Club organises a spectrum of community and fundraising activities throughout the years, including but not limited to charity golf, run and walk; festive luncheons, wellness sessions, lucky bag and free use of Club facilities for the elderly and the underprivileged; reading scheme, child sponsorship, wellness and care programme for the less fortunate students; parent and child workshops and seminars; as well as emergency relief for neighbouring communities. Moreover, the Club has organised charity online concert and online wellness class, contributes the society through different channels. Charity partners of COP come from diverse backgrounds, covering a wide spectrum of services. They range from education-oriented and upholding the well-being of elders, to emergency relief as well as environmental preservation. Major charity partners include but not limited to, Christian Action, Haven of Hope Christian Service, St. James’ Settlement, Lifeline Express Foundation, Mother’s Choice, World Vision Hong Kong, Caritas HK and HK Federation of Youth Groups. Explanation of issue: The Club is a non-profit organisation, throughout the years, it has been working with a group of local and internationally recognized charities through its Community Outreach Programme(COP). Other Clubs such as Jockey Club and Hong Kong Golf Club also include this section. Therefore, to make the content more complete, it is suggested to include charity events and charity partners. References supporting change: https://www.cwbgolf.org/community-outreach-programme/ Source20 (talk) 06:59, 6 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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+== Charity Events ==
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+Information to be added: The Club has always been committed to demonstrating social responsibilities. Established in 2003, the Community Outreach Programme (COP) aims to serve the neighbourhood and give back to the community. The COP initiatives spin around three major areas, including family care, harmony of neighbourhood, and environmental preservation. Collaborating with its charity partners, the Club organises a spectrum of community and fundraising activities throughout the years, including but not limited to charity golf, run and walk; festive luncheons, wellness sessions, lucky bag and free use of Club facilities for the elderly and the underprivileged; reading scheme, child sponsorship, wellness and care programme for the less fortunate students; parent and child workshops and seminars; as well as emergency relief for neighbouring communities. Moreover, the Club has organised charity online concert and online wellness class, contributes the society through different channels. Charity partners of COP come from diverse backgrounds, covering a wide spectrum of services. They range from education-oriented and upholding the well-being of elders, to emergency relief as well as environmental preservation. Major charity partners include but not limited to, Christian Action, Haven of Hope Christian Service, St. James’ Settlement, Lifeline Express Foundation, Mother’s Choice, World Vision Hong Kong, Caritas HK and HK Federation of Youth Groups.
+Explanation of issue: The Club is a non-profit organisation, throughout the years, it has been working with a group of local and internationally recognized charities through its Community Outreach Programme(COP). Other Clubs such as Jockey Club and Hong Kong Golf Club also include this section. Therefore, to make the content more complete, it is suggested to include charity events and charity partners.
+References supporting change: https://www.cwbgolf.org/community-outreach-programme/
+[[User:Source20|Source20]] ([[User talk:Source20|talk]]) 06:59, 6 August 2020 (UTC)