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== Order of sentences poorly sourced with poorly written additions detected by a robot ==

The order of the sentences was been changed eventually to improve article.

However, a robot has detected this new order is "poorly sourced", with "poorly written additions": https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Federal_Motor_Vehicle_Safety_Standards&diff=988184276&oldid=988123265

From those two sentences order, which one is preferable to ease reading?

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Order of sentences poorly sourced with poorly written additions detected by a robot

The order of the sentences was been changed eventually to improve article.

However, a robot has detected this new order is "poorly sourced", with "poorly written additions": https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Federal_Motor_Vehicle_Safety_Standards&diff=988184276&oldid=988123265

From those two sentences order, which one is preferable to ease reading?