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23 August 2022
- 01:5501:55, 23 August 2022 diff hist +21 The Quiet Girl Update Rotten Tomatoes
- 01:5301:53, 23 August 2022 diff hist +494 Talk:The Quiet Girl No edit summary
- 01:2901:29, 23 August 2022 diff hist +20 A Normal Amount of Rage Copyedit. "not completed on board" -> not completely
22 August 2022
- 23:1123:11, 22 August 2022 diff hist −35 Cypher (film) Cast in the Cast section, do not repeat in Plot section. WP:MOSFILM
- 23:0923:09, 22 August 2022 diff hist −39 Cypher (film) WP:FILMLEAD If the nationality is not singular, cover the different national interests later
- 23:0823:08, 22 August 2022 diff hist −42 Cypher (film) I don't see why that random Hindi film is relevant either. Undid revision 1104668823 by Mako001 (talk) Tags: Undo section blanking
- 23:0423:04, 22 August 2022 diff hist +1,072 Talk:The Quiet Girl Page move. IPA fix needed.
- 22:5022:50, 22 August 2022 diff hist 0 The Quiet Girl Past tense
- 22:3822:38, 22 August 2022 diff hist −30 The Quiet Girl WP:MOSFILM Accolades. Column names for the table are typically Award, Category, Recipients, and Result.
- 22:3122:31, 22 August 2022 diff hist −41 Starship Troopers (film) WP:SD40 try to keep short description under 40 characters. Repeat edit after it was reverted without explanation.
- 22:2422:24, 22 August 2022 diff hist −8 Transformers: Rise of the Beasts Reverted too far. Repeat fixes.
- 22:1422:14, 22 August 2022 diff hist +750 Hustle (2022 film) WP:LEAD is supposed to summarize not supplant the article. Move reviews out of intro and expand Reception.
- 22:0622:06, 22 August 2022 diff hist +121 Hustle (2022 film) WP:ALT image description. Describe the style and contents of the poster
- 22:0422:04, 22 August 2022 diff hist +17 Hustle (2022 film) WP:SDDUPLICATE "avoid duplicating information that is already in the title" ie do not repeat the year when the page title already includes it.
- 21:5921:59, 22 August 2022 diff hist −11 Uncut Gems This is supposed to be an encyclopedia. Copyedit for brevity. The message is important not the medium. Leave out where he wrote it, the reference is the better place for that detail.
- 21:4821:48, 22 August 2022 diff hist +433 Talk:Day Shift (film) Plagiarism accusations require reliable sources.
- 21:4121:41, 22 August 2022 diff hist +11 Day Shift (film) Verify quote. I see the fragments in the main article "Foxx is cool to the max" and "You leave "Day Shift" feeling pummeled, beaten down by an avalanche of sound and fury signifying the usual nothing." but the exact quote only exists on the Metacritic/Rotten Tomatoes summary (but Travers or ABC News would have written it anyway.)
- 21:3621:36, 22 August 2022 diff hist −41 Metacritic →Criticism: avoid vague equivocating like "mixed to negative". avoid repeating the word launch twice in the same sentence.
- 21:1421:14, 22 August 2022 diff hist −18 A Normal Amount of Rage →Reception: Copyedit. The two reviews are separate. Don't forcibly add connections.
- 21:1021:10, 22 August 2022 diff hist +83 A Normal Amount of Rage →Plot: Add a little character detail. She takes her time and is careful and deliberate about it. Then she continues to present her closing arguments. (Defeating Titania is not as important as her getting on with being a lawyer.)
- 21:0021:00, 22 August 2022 diff hist 0 Pacific Rim (film) No edit summary
- 19:1919:19, 22 August 2022 diff hist +431 Mack & Rita Having more than one reference is not a bad thing. I would like to have context inline but I have not added it yet. D+ is "alarmingly" and readers should not be left with the possibility of thinking it is a passing grade. Undid revision 1105985434 by Indagate (talk) Tag: Undo
- 17:4317:43, 22 August 2022 diff hist −4 Precious Cargo (Star Trek: Enterprise) Fix date formatting
- 17:4317:43, 22 August 2022 diff hist +518 Precious Cargo (Star Trek: Enterprise) Review from Tor.com
- 16:0716:07, 22 August 2022 diff hist −187 Transformers (film) Revert good faith edit. Please do not add blogs as sources. Undid revision 1105757980 by Eddyinblu (talk) Tags: Undo Reverted
- 16:0516:05, 22 August 2022 diff hist −12 Transformers (film series) mixed to positive? Please don't equivocate like that. See past discussions: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Film/Archive_48#Mixed_to_positive_/_Mixed_to_negative Tag: Undo
- 16:0416:04, 22 August 2022 diff hist −5 Beast (2022 American film) WP:SDDUPLICATE "avoid duplicating information that is already in the title" ie do not repeat the year when the page title already includes it.
- 16:0016:00, 22 August 2022 diff hist +14 A League of Their Own (2022 TV series) →Premise: More plot needed. Arguably there are two main storylines following Shaw and Maxine.
- 15:5815:58, 22 August 2022 diff hist +508 A League of Their Own (2022 TV series) →Reception: Variety praise for the performances.
- 15:5515:55, 22 August 2022 diff hist +641 A League of Their Own (2022 TV series) →Reception: Peter Travers "refreshingly queer and diverse"
- 15:3115:31, 22 August 2022 diff hist 0 Wikipedia:Top 25 Report/August 14 to 20, 2022 Move image to the correct column
- 15:3115:31, 22 August 2022 diff hist +43 Wikipedia:Top 25 Report/August 14 to 20, 2022 Image of Darius
- 15:2715:27, 22 August 2022 diff hist +747 Talk:Saul Gone →Bad caption: How about Besty Brandt?
- 15:1615:16, 22 August 2022 diff hist −98 A League of Their Own WP:ELDUP already included as references. No need to repeat as external links.
- 15:1615:16, 22 August 2022 diff hist +1,514 A League of Their Own Reviews
- 15:0615:06, 22 August 2022 diff hist +586 A League of Their Own Budget source The New York Times
- 14:4214:42, 22 August 2022 diff hist +1 A League of Their Own →Accolades
- 14:4114:41, 22 August 2022 diff hist +431 Mack & Rita Additional source for Cinemascore. D+ grade is so bad it is "alarming" Tag: Reverted
- 14:3414:34, 22 August 2022 diff hist −1,520 A League of Their Own WP:FILMPLOT The plot section is for the plot. Speculation by fans and cast is not plot and does not belong in the plot section. If you can find a more appropriate place to add it then feel free but do not add to the Plot section. Tag: references removed
- 14:2714:27, 22 August 2022 diff hist +7 Talk:Saul Gone →Bad caption
- 14:2414:24, 22 August 2022 diff hist +1,618 Talk:Saul Gone →Bad caption: new section Tag: New topic
- 14:0914:09, 22 August 2022 diff hist +499 Saul Gone Fix reference erroneously deleted by User:Flowerkiller1692. Please preview your edits.
- 14:0014:00, 22 August 2022 diff hist +2 Saul Gone If there was "narrow acclaim" it wouldn't be worth mentioning. Widespread acclaim is an awkward way to phrase it.
- 13:5513:55, 22 August 2022 diff hist −9 Better Call Saul season 6 →Broadcast: Copyedit. Brevity.
- 13:5113:51, 22 August 2022 diff hist +9 Nippy (Better Call Saul) Minor formatting details.
- 13:4913:49, 22 August 2022 diff hist +978 Nippy (Better Call Saul) Quote came from Forbes magazine, the only negative review listed at Rotten Tomatoes for this episode. (Strangely the NYT negative review is missing from their listing.)
- 13:3813:38, 22 August 2022 diff hist +23 Nippy (Better Call Saul) →Reception: Failed verification. That last quote is not in the New York Times review
- 13:3313:33, 22 August 2022 diff hist +22 A League of Their Own (2022 TV series) Tidy lists. Format consistently. See Help:List
- 13:3013:30, 22 August 2022 diff hist +75 A League of Their Own (2022 TV series) →Development: Include more text from source. Remove the word "reportedly" that makes it sound like you MOS:DOUBT the claim.
- 13:2113:21, 22 August 2022 diff hist −12 Wikipedia:Top 25 Report/August 7 to 13, 2022 But Wikipedia is constantly a Work in Progress and the Report is not a WP:DRAFT Undid revision 1105771642 by SSSB (talk) Tag: Undo