User contributions for 69.91.76.238

6 February 2012

• 01:4101:41, 6 February 2012 diff hist +242‎ Talk:Violence in cartoons ‎ →‎Not an article
• 01:3201:32, 6 February 2012 diff hist +256‎ User talk:Non-dropframe ‎No edit summary
• 01:3101:31, 6 February 2012 diff hist −1,571‎ Adolescence ‎ Undid revision 475320521 by Non-dropframe (talk) Hi, no not vandalizing, just trying to update and reorganize, if one edit was too much, just revert that and we can discuss, thanx! Tag: references removed
• 01:2901:29, 6 February 2012 diff hist +180‎ User talk:69.91.76.238 ‎No edit summary
• 01:2601:26, 6 February 2012 diff hist +583‎ Adolescence ‎ →‎Mass media effect on adolescent girl body image: adding balance, removing editorializing
• 01:2201:22, 6 February 2012 diff hist −104‎ Adolescence ‎ →‎Internet impact: removing some editorializing in the language
• 01:1901:19, 6 February 2012 diff hist −1,066‎ Adolescence ‎ →‎Deceiving media messages: removing this section which is redundant with above and sorta POV (media violence research now suggest there is little harmful effect) Tag: section blanking
• 01:1901:19, 6 February 2012 diff hist +405‎ Adolescence ‎ →‎Exposure to controversial media content: moved sentence on anti-smoking/drinking to be more logical
• 01:1701:17, 6 February 2012 diff hist −25‎ Adolescence ‎ →‎Exposure to controversial media content: updating references, adding balance
• 01:1301:13, 6 February 2012 diff hist −357‎ Adolescence ‎ →‎Exposure to controversial media content: updating with newer research Tag: references removed
• 01:0901:09, 6 February 2012 diff hist −528‎ Adolescence ‎ →‎Exposure to controversial media content: removing some language that is outdate "advocacy speak" rather than clearly scientific Tag: references removed

5 February 2012

• 14:5514:55, 5 February 2012 diff hist +182‎ Talk:APA style ‎ →‎APA Style and WP:NOT

2 February 2012

• 02:0302:03, 2 February 2012 diff hist −2‎ Video game addiction ‎ →‎Governmental concern: undoing bad edit

29 January 2012

• 16:1416:14, 29 January 2012 diff hist +582‎ Talk:Video game addiction ‎No edit summary
• 16:1216:12, 29 January 2012 diff hist −3,392‎ Video game addiction ‎ →‎Possible causes: removing outdated and poorly sourced material (no one takes seriously claims of physical addiction). Please do not return without discussing on discussion page

28 January 2012

• 15:1615:16, 28 January 2012 diff hist +619‎ Video game addiction ‎ →‎Public concern and formal study: add citation
• 15:1415:14, 28 January 2012 diff hist +543‎ Video game addiction ‎ →‎Possible causes: added citation and info
• 15:0315:03, 28 January 2012 diff hist +22‎ Video game addiction ‎ →‎Possible causes: m fixing language

20 January 2012

• 01:4601:46, 20 January 2012 diff hist +37‎ Effects of violence in mass media ‎ →‎Criticisms of media violence research: fixed tone in a few parts
• 01:4201:42, 20 January 2012 diff hist 0‎ Effects of violence in mass media ‎ →‎Researchers' response to criticisms: m
• 01:4201:42, 20 January 2012 diff hist −1,115‎ Effects of violence in mass media ‎ →‎Researchers' response to criticisms: trimmed a bit, removed one off-topic cite (belonged better in aggression topic), and some editorializing. Tag: references removed
• 01:3701:37, 20 January 2012 diff hist −97‎ Effects of violence in mass media ‎ →‎Researchers' response to criticisms: removing allusion to smoking and lung cancer, which most scholars now consider inappropriate

18 January 2012

• 01:1701:17, 18 January 2012 diff hist −2,883‎ Effects of violence in mass media ‎ →‎Relationship between media violence and minor aggressive behaviors: took out some stuff specific to video games (which have their own page, possibly link?) Gentile and Ferguson recently had a good debate on this topic on NPR...cite?
• 01:1401:14, 18 January 2012 diff hist −3,614‎ Effects of violence in mass media ‎ →‎Media effects theories: Tried to truncate and improve readability of theories section.
• 00:5600:56, 18 January 2012 diff hist −704‎ Effects of violence in mass media ‎ Removed paragraph that went off topic to improve readability. I'm going to try to slowly improve the readability of this article. Feel free to comment/suggest in discussion page

17 January 2012

• 00:5200:52, 17 January 2012 diff hist +1,248‎ Talk:Effects of violence in mass media ‎ →‎Intro and General Structure suggestions
• 00:4500:45, 17 January 2012 diff hist −1,283‎ Effects of violence in mass media ‎ Undid revision 471669830 by JamesGrimshaw (talk) Actually found it less balanced rather than more....let's talk about how to improve things on the discussion page.

9 January 2012

• 02:1702:17, 9 January 2012 diff hist +29‎ Aggression ‎ →‎Interpretations: my bad ByELF, just switching the heading to be more descriptive/specific

8 January 2012

• 15:4315:43, 8 January 2012 diff hist +7‎ Aggression ‎ →‎Aggression as a Positive Adaptation: m But please see discussion page
• 15:4115:41, 8 January 2012 diff hist +741‎ Talk:Aggression ‎No edit summary
• 15:2115:21, 8 January 2012 diff hist +2,615‎ Aggression ‎ Restoring section. Given general view agg in humans is neg, this is necessary. Please don't remove without discussing next time.
• 05:1405:14, 8 January 2012 diff hist −53‎ Prosocial behavior ‎ →‎Prosocial media programming and children: fixing a paragraph taht both got too long and went POV Tag: repeating characters
• 05:1205:12, 8 January 2012 diff hist −216‎ Prosocial behavior ‎ →‎Prosocial media programming and children: m fixing description that went off topic
• 05:0905:09, 8 January 2012 diff hist −17‎ Social aspects of television ‎ →‎Alleged dangers: m

7 January 2012

• 21:1021:10, 7 January 2012 diff hist +2,615‎ Aggression ‎ Adding new section on aggression as a positive adaptation
• 20:5220:52, 7 January 2012 diff hist +388‎ Talk:Aggression ‎ →‎Aggression is not always a bad thing

31 December 2011

• 15:4915:49, 31 December 2011 diff hist +507‎ Aggression ‎ returned peer-reviewed definition that had been removed