User contributions for Sjkoblentz

18 May 2018

• 18:4618:46, 18 May 2018 diff hist +27 Francis Lederer →Later life and death

12 May 2018

• 19:0119:01, 12 May 2018 diff hist +264 Talk:Thomas McInerney →Semi-protected edit request on 11 May 2018
• 18:5818:58, 12 May 2018 diff hist +318 Talk:Thomas McInerney →Semi-protected edit request on 11 May 2018
• 18:5418:54, 12 May 2018 diff hist +400 Talk:Thomas McInerney →Political views
• 12:5612:56, 12 May 2018 diff hist +4 Jim Palmer →Early years
• 12:5512:55, 12 May 2018 diff hist +1 Max Palmer →Personal life
• 12:5412:54, 12 May 2018 diff hist +367 Max Palmer →Personal life: added connection to Jim Palmer, documented Washington Post, May 12, 2018

10 May 2018

• 14:0114:01, 10 May 2018 diff hist +45 Gerry Mulligan →Theatre and film

11 April 2018

• 00:3200:32, 11 April 2018 diff hist +1 Glenn Quinn →Death

8 April 2018

• 19:2319:23, 8 April 2018 diff hist +303 Talk:Secret Ceremony →"Some critics"?: new section

25 March 2018

• 22:1022:10, 25 March 2018 diff hist +9 Return to the Hiding Place →Background: replaced "her" with "the nation's"

16 March 2018

• 16:3216:32, 16 March 2018 diff hist +1 Simon vs. the Homo Sapiens Agenda He's in high school, not grade school. Male is more appropriate than boy. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

3 March 2018

• 22:3222:32, 3 March 2018 diff hist +485 Talk:Roy Moore →Personal life section in article twice, removed the first instance: new section
• 22:2922:29, 3 March 2018 diff hist −1,699 Roy Moore →Marriage and children: Removed section because it is EXACTLY word for word what appears in the PERSONAL LIFE section of the article. One section is quite enough, and there is no need to repeat the same words on the same topic twice one article.

20 February 2018

• 18:4918:49, 20 February 2018 diff hist −7 m Cadillac Sixty Special →1959–1960: The term "Zap" is not "memorable". They were "Jet Pod" tail lights, as marketed by Cadillac. Zap is POV.

18 February 2018

• 23:2523:25, 18 February 2018 diff hist 0 Variety, the Children's Charity No edit summary

15 February 2018

• 21:1521:15, 15 February 2018 diff hist +303 Amadeo Giannini →Bank of America: fixing an error from "The Birth of The Bank" which is a bit misleading.
• 21:0721:07, 15 February 2018 diff hist +226 Orra E. Monnette →Civic Life
• 21:0421:04, 15 February 2018 diff hist +268 Orra E. Monnette →Banking Business: Corrected the "history" in the Birth of a Bank by Gianinni, which is not wholly accurate.
• 12:4412:44, 15 February 2018 diff hist +243 Albert S. Porter →Controversy and downfall: Clark and Lee Freeways were purposly planned to wipe out the Shaker nature center.

11 February 2018

• 15:1215:12, 11 February 2018 diff hist +1 m Supermodel (You Better Work) →Background: removed prance, replace cavort; fewer negative connotations.

2 February 2018

• 13:5013:50, 2 February 2018 diff hist +964 Talk:Tony Tinderholt →Removed post divorce relationship inforce information: new section
• 13:4113:41, 2 February 2018 diff hist −193 Tony Tinderholt →Personal life: removed POV statement, along with footnote, which did not support the statement made, but was just an ibid entry to the Texas marriage index, non supportive of POV statement.

17 January 2018

• 16:1616:16, 17 January 2018 diff hist +24 John Tjaarda Tijaarda's "Sterkenberg" automobile design, invented independently of his time at Briggs became the basis for what would be modified into the Lincoln Zephyr. Edsel Ford discovered the Sterkenberg when Tjaarda was employed at Briggs.

14 January 2018

• 21:0721:07, 14 January 2018 diff hist +13 Wes Goodman Minor tweaks. He is no longer a politician holding no office or actively seeking one. His former relationship with his elected district needed to be clarified.

13 December 2017

• 17:2517:25, 13 December 2017 diff hist +2 Omarosa Manigault Newman No edit summary
• 17:2417:24, 13 December 2017 diff hist +1 Omarosa Manigault Newman She was "resigned" last night

8 September 2017

• 10:5110:51, 8 September 2017 diff hist +8 The Help (film) →Plot: hilly is too young to be a grand dame. She's controlling and dominate.
• 10:4110:41, 8 September 2017 diff hist +315 The Help (film) →Plot: clarified Hilly's modus operandi for ruining a maids reputation.

11 August 2017

• 23:3623:36, 11 August 2017 diff hist −13 Victor Willis →Village People: The wording was changed because in totality, CSTM is not a movie that is a biggest movie flops. Its a flop, but compared to other movies on the list of the cited source, CSTM only lost 18 million. In fact, CSTM music didn't even m... Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 23:2423:24, 11 August 2017 diff hist +19 Victor Willis →Village People: "Hit after hit" is POV, and jargon. Was every song a true "hit"? And what is the measure of a hit being stated here? Where is the foot note, citing the verifiable resource, showing that each song was infact an industry "hit"? Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

10 August 2017

• 00:4000:40, 10 August 2017 diff hist −12 m WVIZ →History: Removed red links. LINK after the article is written.

31 July 2017

• 16:0416:04, 31 July 2017 diff hist +6 The Battle of Shaker Heights →Plot
• 16:0216:02, 31 July 2017 diff hist +248 The Battle of Shaker Heights No footage was shot in Shaker Heights, proper or in Ohio.
• 15:5515:55, 31 July 2017 diff hist 0 m Shaker Heights, Ohio →History: Shaker Heights, as a proper named place was in 1909, not 1809.
• 15:5215:52, 31 July 2017 diff hist −276 User:Sjkoblentz No edit summary

17 July 2017

• 10:4510:45, 17 July 2017 diff hist −15 Jordan Sekulow →Personal life: Whether they live in a townhouse, a row house, an apartment or a house is non-relevant minutia. It would be relevant if the property were of an historical or famous nature. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14 May 2017

• 15:4515:45, 14 May 2017 diff hist −4 Gower Champion →Death: Fixed for readilbility. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

6 April 2017

• 21:1321:13, 6 April 2017 diff hist −12 Big Bear Stores →Former Locations: Formating Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 21:1221:12, 6 April 2017 diff hist +247 Big Bear Stores →Former Locations: Added marion stores. Need the street address for north main, and dates in the former Clyde Evans markets. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

30 March 2017

• 16:5116:51, 30 March 2017 diff hist +32 Remember the Night →Plot

22 March 2017

• 15:2815:28, 22 March 2017 diff hist +4,049 Radium Girls They may not be the most perfect changes, but having just finished Moore's book, it helps to tell the whole story, instead of just New Jersey's.

14 March 2017

• 22:5722:57, 14 March 2017 diff hist −1 Kathryn Kuhlman →Personal life: "they never had issues"? Trust me, they had a subscription. But the phrase is "They never had issue." Meaning no children.

6 February 2017

• 02:2702:27, 6 February 2017 diff hist +19 Jack Buck →Family life and death: if he fathered eight children, the wives deserve a mention.

25 January 2017

• 13:1113:11, 25 January 2017 diff hist +281 Talk:Minneapolis Steel & Machinery Company →Lacking in basic, core knowledge: new section

23 January 2017

• 22:2322:23, 23 January 2017 diff hist −2 m Scioto Ordnance Plant →Post-war problems: there are no streets, they are roads. Streets imply curbs, lighting and an urban or suburban environment. This is rural Marion Township, no curbs, no sidewalks.
• 22:1922:19, 23 January 2017 diff hist +136 Scioto Ordnance Plant →Post-war problems: i know this for a fact. My grandparents were farmers along Marseilles Galion Road. So repurchased, others did not.

25 December 2016

• 00:1400:14, 25 December 2016 diff hist 0 Joan Carroll →Later life: Fixed wording. Removed "with" amd replaced with "to". Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

13 December 2016

• 13:3213:32, 13 December 2016 diff hist −3 Lithuanian Metrica Replaced "nowadays" with Today. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

2 November 2016

• 12:2712:27, 2 November 2016 diff hist −74 Warren Beatty →Early life: this is unneeded, especially in the opening section. If Beatty's last name were Smith, would we list all of the people named Smith that he wasn't related to?