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Your submission at Articles for creation: Lynching of Albert Easley (April 11)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Devonian Wombat was:

This is basically one big quotefarm, there is practically no prose.

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Devonian Wombat (talk) 05:56, 11 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Rjmjrjm! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Devonian Wombat (talk) 05:56, 11 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Lynching of Albert Easley (April 21)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Bilorv was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This is an improvement, but "The lynching of Albert Easley is a story buried by history" and "None of the accounts reveal why Albert Easley was immediately suspected. No eyewitness was reported. But his alleged confession had a powerful affect on the community" read as non-neutral, not attributable to a reliable source and like an essay. Wikipedia articles are dispassionate, straightforwardly presenting facts, and it must be clear which facts come from which references.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Lynching of Albert Easley and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Lynching of Albert Easley, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

— Bilorv (talk) 23:25, 21 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Lynching of Albert Easley

Hi, I wanted to say thanks for the continued work on the Albert Easley article. Are you working on a third draft? Would you like some help? I don't want to step on your toes, but would love to help get it accepted, if you're open to it. Ivey (talk) 21:47, 1 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]