Talk:Pararia mass rape (1988)
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GOCE copyedit request
[edit]Hello Heba Aisha. After completing my preliminary copyedit I always ask questions about the article to ensure that my edit reflects the intended meaning and is clear in doing so. Please reply to each point by indenting below each one like you would a conversation; items will be struck out once they have been answered. Please ping me with {{U}}, {{ping}}, or {{re}} as I have a lot of items on my watchlist. My copyediting process can be found here. —Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 18:29, 6 April 2021 (UTC) |
Year in title: Was there another mass rape that occurred in Pararia in another year? Articles don't need disambiguation unless there's a similar article.—Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 18:29, 6 April 2021 (UTC)
- Not done. Not a copyedit issue. —Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 23:03, 7 April 2021 (UTC)
—Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 18:29, 6 April 2021 (UTC)The victims belonged to the backward Yadav caste.
Link removed, emphasis added. What does backward mean here?
- Done. Added link. —Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 23:03, 7 April 2021 (UTC)
—Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 18:29, 6 April 2021 (UTC)Over the case, the judge booked five police officers for "wrongful confinement" using force and 14 others for mass rape.
Already edited. What is meant exactly by book? They were charged, found guilty?
- Done. Changed word. —Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 23:03, 7 April 2021 (UTC)
—Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 )The village was facing the fear of migration after the construction of the Punasi dam. The inhabitants originally could not migrate, and they challenged the proposal to construct the dam firmly in court, but some of the women took part in judicial proceedings.
Tag removed. Two things: first, didn't some people believe the rapes to have occurred as retaliation as stated in §Incident (A few civilians stated that the rapes were in retaliation for the assault of a police constable a few days earlier.
)? Second, this seems better off in the previous section if dam construction was the instigating incident.
- Done. Reordered and reworded. —Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 23:03, 7 April 2021 (UTC)
Looking forward to your answers. —Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 18:29, 6 April 2021 (UTC)
- No, this is the only mass rape in pararia which is widely covered in various books.But, date should be in title as there are lot of incidents in bihar on which article are written and its for chronology purpose.
- Backward mean Other Backward Class a classification of communities based on socio-economic background by government of India.
- Booked used in the sense of Charge, they were released due to lack of evidence and judicial misconduct.
- Yes,some people think that the rape was retaliation but others thought that since they refused to migrate due to dam construction, it was official response. Heba Aisha (talk) 04:29, 7 April 2021 (UTC)
- @Heba Aisha: I think that's everything on my end and will consider the request complete. —Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 23:03, 7 April 2021 (UTC)
- Yes, thanks you have done a good work. Heba Aisha (talk) 04:00, 8 April 2021 (UTC)
Caste based violence
[edit]How was this a caste based violence , if the perpetrators were policemen? Please respond, else have to change accordingly. Lord 0f Avernus (talk) 04:28, 15 April 2022 (UTC)