Talk:2022 Northern Ireland Open/GA1
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Reviewer: HawkAussie (talk · contribs) 03:25, 21 January 2024 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
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- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
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I sure pick up this one to add
Lead
No issues with the lead there.
Format
- ...Eurosport in the United Kingdom, Europe, India, Bangladesh, Bhutan, Maldives, Nepal, Pakistan and Sri Lanka - Wouldn't this make sense to just go the Indian Subcontinent. Or something that mentions it being on Eurosport India like the reference states.
- Could remove the Superstar online and the Sports Cast red link like it has been done with the Indonesian channel.
Summary
Qualification
- ...recovered from 2–3 behind to defeat Graeme Dott 4–3 - Possibly reword that sentence.
- Having recently turned 60, Jimmy White made... - Do we need to include he had just turned 60 especially when it only mentioned the age and not how it was recently turn 60.
Early rounds
Quarter-finals
Semi-finals
Final
Main draw
No issues with this one.
Qualifying
- Why use a separate reference for the qualifying when the reference for the main draw would also be sufficient to fill in that void.
Century breaks
References
Final comments
Anything for this HawkAussie? Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:24, 2 March 2024 (UTC)
- sorry for another ping, is there anything else I'd need to look at here HawkAussie? Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 20:40, 8 June 2024 (UTC)