Talk:Fear Before

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This page really needs some work. None of the facts are cited or verified, the tone of the article needs improvement, and there is a complete overuse of parentheses.

5-6

5 member listed, 6 in the picture. Someone update. (68.249.143.152 16:10, 30 April 2007 (UTC))[reply]

its been updated

POV

"Art Damage as an album was much heavier and darker than their debut; the band left behind the relative simplicity and, arguably, tiredness of the instrumental work of their debut in favor of the abrasiveness characterizing bands such as Converge and Every Time I Die."

"Simplicity" and "tiredness"? Could we explain the change without putting down the old material? Fiction Alchemist 08:00, 19 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]