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Thelemic Personalities

It would help the NPOV if we could aseemble a verifiable list of Thelamites. Being an individualist-based philosphy we will have an ecclectic group, but this is the only way to give people a realistic and honest interpretation. The list on the O.T.O. page is a start, but they only seem to list Thelamites that are "accepted" and "respectable." This is a serious disservice to NPOV. People like Ebony Anpu, Timothy Leary, and Robert Anton Wilson should all be included. <3 Captain Barrett 21:00, 11 February 2007 (UTC)

Where is Aiwass?

Some information on Aiwass and Crowleys attitude to this entity is needed to put the reception of Liber AL into context? Also the magickal alter ego LAM is needed. Thoughts?--Redblossom 00:03, 27 February 2007 (UTC)

Greetings, Redblossom. Aiwass has his own article, which may cover the concerns about that; and the "Of course I wrote them, ink on paper" passage is quoted in the Book of the Law article. Justin Eiler 00:35, 27 February 2007 (UTC)

"Notable" authors?

Why has the list of authors who address Thelema been reduced to only those who are considered "notable"? This seems like vandalism especially since not all those remaining listed are "notable" by W'pedia standards. The list of all published authors on the topic of Thelema is not a long one. Why not keep the complete list? --Thiebes 20:16, 12 April 2007 (UTC)

"Re: Notable authors"

I think someone should add something about Heinlein. Many of his books follow this philosophy to a 't' (Time Enough for Love, I Will Fear No Evil), plus his book 'Job' describes Gnosticism like a textbook.

External links

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You've got that backwards

Also consider that, in general, organizations which have their own article should not be linked from other articles than their own. Add the organization to the see also section. Remember that Wikipedia is not a directory of links. Each link is supposed to provide, directly on the page linked, additional reliable information about the subject which is not in the Wikipedia article. That is, it is supposed to have & add useful content. A list of links to the splash pages of non-notable organizations does not do that. The notable organizations have their own article and we should encourage people to access that Wikipedia article before going on to access the external site.

Also, sites that are already linked from the notes or references should not be linked again from external links. The spirit of the external links policy is not described in the exclusions you have listed, but rather in the following statement about the restriction on what should be linked from the external linking policy. Only if it passes the policy to be included in the links section should one then consider whether it also has some reason why it must still be excluded. IPSOS (talk) 13:49, 21 July 2007 (UTC)

What should be linked

1. Articles about any organization, person, web site, or other entity should link to the official site if any.
2. An article about a book, a musical score, or some other media should link to a site hosting a copy of the work if none of the "Links normally to be avoided" criteria apply.
3. Sites that contain neutral and accurate material that cannot be integrated into the Wikipedia article due to copyright issues, amount of detail (such as professional athlete statistics, movie or television credits, interview transcripts, or online textbooks) or other reasons.
4. Sites with other meaningful, relevant content that is not suitable for inclusion in an article, such as reviews and interviews.

Removal of direct links to orgs

Since there is already a section titled "Thelemic organizations" which as far as I can tell has internal links to every article on a Thelemic organization currently present on Wikpedia, I've reverted the article to remove the direct external links to these organizations. If I have removed any external links which meet the "What should be linked" policy, aren't already linked from the Notes or References, and don't run afoul of the "Links normally to be avoided policy", then by all means add them back.

However, please note that links to social networking sites, forum, blogs, etc. are not permitted. That rules out thelema.nu in my opinion. If it is sufficiently notable (i.e. meets WP:WEB), an article could be written about the site and it could be linked from there. The normal way to provide access to such sites and other sites which don't meet the linking policy is to add a link to the Open Directory Project (DMOZ). This has been done. IPSOS (talk) 14:02, 21 July 2007 (UTC)

Definition

I'll copy this with expansion from Talk:List of Thelemites in case someone deletes the whole list now that I've drawn attention to the page: Now that 999 aka Hanuman Das aka User:Ekajati has gotten himself banned, perhaps we can discuss this again. Does anyone see a reason to put people who did not provably self-identify as Thelemites on this list? Crowley did indeed write an essay purporting to prove that Rabelais foresaw his whole religion. (Our banned friend called this an "admission" when defining Thelema.) But this understandably seems like a minority view among Rabelais scholars (in the sense that I haven't seen any credible scholar make this claim). In fact, it seems strikingly similar to claims that the 'Old Testament' clearly predicts the life of Jesus, and I don't think Crowley could fail to see this. You can't take anything the man says at face value. So how about we limit the name to people who verifiably called themselves Thelemites?

To extend 999's old analogy, Paul in Romans 13:8-10 says that Christians have exactly one commandment to follow on Earth. And plenty of people mentioned this brief Law before the alleged birth of Jesus. Some of them used the equivalent of the word "Christ". Nobody disputes that the word "Christian" comes from them. Yet we wouldn't call them Christians on Wikipedia, because they would not self-identify and indeed might take offense if they knew about it. So why call anyone before Crowley a Thelemite unless we can find them using the name for themselves? We can describe all the history in the article and mention attempts to draft Rabelais into the religion without asserting any disputed claim as fact. Dan 19:59, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

Cutting through the Jungle is out of context

This particular misuse of Crowley's writing has finally been explored in a polemic that traces the actual context and use of the paragraph. It is a blatant misrepresentation to continue to tangle words in such a manner. It would be wise to provide either a more appropriate context for the paragraph or remove it as not supporting the contention being made. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 204.57.103.2 (talk) 17:42, 21 November 2007 (UTC)

Shri Gurudev Mahendranath?

This person is cited throughout this article and I called his credibility as a source into question, and my "" tags were simply deleted with the comment that he was not self-published. This is not sufficient to establish him as a credible source on the subject, however. See Verifiability: Sources for more information. We should remove these citations and any claims dependent on them unless the source can be demonstrated as reliable. --Thiebes (talk) 16:45, 31 December 2007 (UTC)

So far as I know they are not reliable. There seems to be no references to this person in Crowley's diaries at the times he says that he interacted with AC. It looks, much like the Amado Crowley scam, that this person consulted the published diaries and inserted himself into Crowley's life at places he did not think could be checked. Al Billings and the late Tim Maroney did a great amount of research on the beginnings of the Nath movement and found most of the claims to be either completely unsupported or fabrications. Stealthepiscopalian (talk) 17:56, 2 January 2008 (UTC)Stealthepiscopalian

Hmm, looks like yet another attempt by a couple of OTO members to promote the opinions of their "King". How reliable is that? It certainly doesn't maintain NPOV to take out other's views of the matter. 86.67.207.41 (talk) 04:39, 13 January 2008 (UTC)

Motivation of editors is rather irrelevant even if it could be established. Simply demonstrate the reliability of sources brought into question. --Thiebes (talk) 20:58, 28 January 2008 (UTC)

What does this have to do with a NPV? There is no independent data in the Crowley diaries or anywhere else to support Dadja's claims to have known Crowley and a number of contradictions with known facts. That makes him unreliable as a source. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Stealthepiscopalian (talk • contribs) 22:37, 14 January 2008 (UTC)

Now I'm not sure what you're talking about. Other than his claims to have met Crowley, all the other information from this source has been corroborated by multiple independent sources. As for WP:NPOV, it say that no significant viewpoints should be excluded.... So... Since the claims to have met Crowley have been removed, what other problem do you have with the source, since it is in line with multiple other sources? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 206.248.171.69 (talk) 02:37, 15 January 2008 (UTC)

Aiwass seems like a better place for this dispute. Dan (talk) 00:18, 16 January 2008 (UTC)

Definition: comments?

Judging by the talk pages, we've reached consensus. Maybe respectable Rabelais scholars use the word "Thelema" to mean a real-world philosophy that comes from Rabelais, but I haven't seen a shred of evidence. It really seems like not one person unambiguously called themselves a Thelemite or professed Thelema by name before April 1904. And while I may have forgotten someone, I don't recall any self-described Thelemites who are not secretly User:Ekajati claiming they follow Rabelais with no influence from Uncle Al or Liber AL. (The reference that seems closest says, "Rabelais is a convenient name to show that Crowley borrowed his ideas and was just one thread in much wider fabric.") So I'll change the article to reflect this as soon as I have time.

I'll try to keep the claims of Mahendranath (and the historical material of course) unless somebody can give a better reason to remove them. (That's why it may take me time.) I also agree that we should talk about the essay Antecedents of Thelema. Except we should mention and take into account the parts that make it all sound like deliberate parody of Christians talking about "the Old Testament":

Was the mighty spirit of Alcofribas Nasier aware of the prophetic fire of his immortal book? He has fortunately left us in no doubt upon this point; for he did not content himself with having created in parable that Abbey of Thelema which his eager gaze foresaw from the black abyss of those Ages not yet thrilled by the Morning Star of the Renaissance, and dimly heralded by the Wolf's Tail of the Reformation. He proceeded to envelop himself in the mist of oracular speech, to fulminate his light through dark sayings, to clothe the naked beauty of his Time-piercing thought in the pontifical vestments of prophecy. The reader of today plunged from the limped waters of his allegory into the glooming gulfs of sibylline and subterranean song, is startled indeed when, after repeated efforts to penetrate the mystery of his versicles, he perceives the adumbration of dim forms--and recognizes them, with something of terror, for the images of the events of this very generation of mankind! (...) A great flame will spring up, he says, and put an end to this flood. What clearer reference could be desired to the Aeon of Horus?

Any non-sock-puppet objections? Dan (talk) 20:25, 15 January 2008 (UTC)

Done. See what you think of that quote's presentation. I found a source for one blindingly obvious point. Dan (talk) 07:12, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

Thst citation is not usable. It's from a forum or other discussion site. Not a reliable source. 81.9.61.227 (talk) 15:34, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

And so you revert the whole article? I assume you mean the forum quote pointing out the obvious, which I included as a courtesy. It is indeed reliable as an example of a human reaction, which is how I used it. You know I'll get checkuser to compare you with another Starwood Festival editor, right? Dan (talk) 17:26, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

Look, I tried to find someone calling themselves a Thelemite and claiming to follow Rabelais "instead" of Crowley (see the in the Contemporary section of the article). I found people citing this article, and in one case attacking it as a badly written misrepresentation of Thelema. Dan (talk) 18:24, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

I don't believe that it is necessary to show that there is anyone claiming to follow Rabelais rather than Crowley. It is sufficient to show that people make the distinction and discuss a difference between Crowleyan and pre-Crowleyan Thelema and that some reject Crowley and thus fall back on the earlier root, which are Rabelaisian. It seems that Aleisterian Thelema is the current term in use rather than Crowleyan Thelema... see the first three links below. The rest refer to Rabelaisian Thelema. 80.222.124.181 (talk) 20:58, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

• http://www.ashami.com/eidolons/Aleisterianism
• http://www.ashami.com/eidolons/Aleisterian_Addendum
• http://www.ashami.com/eidolons/A_Guide_to_the_Study_of_Aleisterian_Thelema

• http://inominandum.livejournal.com/164532.html
• http://www.thelema.nu/archives/215
• http://halayl.livejournal.com/
• http://www.behutetmagazine.com/backissues/issue23.htm
• http://answers.yahoo.com/question/?qid=20060827083703AAcxo9R
• http://www.sublevel9.co.za/site/node/323
• http://freespace.virgin.net/ecliptica.ww/book/hellfire.htm
• http://www.geocities.com/ararita418/contrariness.html
• http://www.thelemicknights.org/ootmc/rabelais/rabelais.html
• http://www.arcane-archive.org/religion/thelema/philosophy/thelemist-vs-thelemite-1.php
• http://www4.desales.edu/~salesian/resources/articles/english/rabelais.html
• http://www.solemnus.org/rbtheorg.htm
• http://tim-maroney.livejournal.com/40953.html?thread=332025
• http://tim.maroney.org/CrowleyIntro/Do_What_Thou_Wilt.html
• http://tim.maroney.org/CrowleyIntro/Sex_and_Gender.html

Massive changes

There are serious problems with the massive changes implemented by Dan. They make Crowleyan Thelema primary. This article as it was is very balanced and the intro given a chronological introduction to the subject. It is much more difficult to understand the history and development of Thelema by starting with Crowley. Crowley's use of the word was clearly derivative from earlier sources. No one but fundamentalist Crowleyites (or to use a more recent term Aleisterians) dispute this. While I am sure improvements could be made to the article, a massive restructuring and reordering is a step backwards. 84.147.98.77 (talk) 20:36, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

We've been over this. Your links give responses to a speech that from what I can tell, refers to the previous form of the Wikipedia article, making this them an exercise in circular reasoning. Dan (talk) 21:26, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

I said this before, but it bears repeating. The source that seems closest to your position actually says that Crowley took ideas from many other people. The current version of the article starts, "Thelema is a system put together or openly revealed by Aleister Crowley," emphasis added. Dan (talk) 21:31, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

I've added the actual quotes, so you can no longer pretend this. 130.237.152.213 (talk) 05:26, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

You are ignoring the fact that the term and the usage, including the term "Thelemite", preexisted Crowley. Presentation of this should be chronological. A small and vocal group, the OTO, falsely claims that Crowley originated the philosophy and the term. He did not. He did create a system of practice under the umbrella of the pre-existing term Thelema. That's it. Many of those links predate the speech and some predate the Wikipedia entry. You must not have looked at them very closed. And no "we" have not discussed this at all. 80.222.124.181 (talk) 21:49, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

See my pre-response at Talk:Thelema#Definition:_comments.3F Dan (talk) 22:04, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

That comment is pretty much content free, Dan. It is not a discussion and there you did not seem to garner support from other editors, which is not surprising since you did not go into any detail with respect to exactly what you intended. 85.5.22.108 (talk) 22:44, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

Hmm, I see you are now misrepresenting Sabazius' comment over at RFPP. His comment had absolutely nothing to do with Wikipedia and does not mention Wikipedia. It is an example of the ongoing differences of opinion between the two type of Thelemite described in the article. What in the world would make you think otherwise? 194.187.213.89 (talk) 23:35, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

As for no one calling themselves a "Rabelaisian Thelemite", that's easily disprovable. Tim Maroney, a well-known figure in Thelemic circles, called himself just that. [1]. 217.114.211.20 (talk) 23:44, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

Here's another example from the other side of this ongoing dispute: "Crowley's development of the Rabelaisian concept of 'Thelema', with its almost synonymous dictum "Do What Thou Wilt", did at least put forward a few suggestions, albeit that in the 87 years since the New Aeon was proclaimed, that doctrine's adherents have done precious little to follow them through. One of the contradictions which may have contributed to this lack of progress lies, in my view, in the superimposition of a rigid heirarchial quasi-masonic structure upon an essentially libertarian philosophy. The result, to all intents and purposes, is a contradictory, but unspoken, codicil to the Rabelaisian original which should now be interpreted by Thelemites as "Do What Thou Wilt - so long as it's approved in writing from Grand Lodge". The schismatic traumas which have afflicted the Thelemite corpus in recent decades can, in most cases, be traced back to difficulties arising in one way or another out of this fundamental philosophical contradiction." from [2]. 88.80.200.144 (talk) 23:54, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

Another example of the view that Crowley stole from Rabelais: "The occultist Aleister Crowley termed his system / religion "Thelema" which is Greek for Will. It is also suggested he 'stole' his idea in a large part of Francois Rabelais, whose book "Gargantua" talked about the Thelemites, in a not dissimilar fashion to Crowley. I believe Crowley claimed to have been Rabelais in an earlier life to get around this fact however..." from [3]. 88.80.200.144 (talk) 23:57, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

And another: "Sooner or later most Book of the Law-based Thelemites (for let us not forget that a Thelemite way of life was also described by Rabelais in the 16th century, which idea has resonated with at least some thinkers in most succeeding generations) are forced to recognize that a purely literal interpretation of their scripture is repugnant to the very law of love which it proclaims." from [4]. 88.80.200.144 (talk) 23:59, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

Another example of the use and the distinction: "I'm quite serious. true Thelemites are not part of any particular culture, may be completely ignorant of anything Crowleyan or even

Rabelaisian (upon whom Crowley based his 'Thelemic' notions). the true Thelemite is one who identifies hir will and abides it with consistency. that will tends not to (by my observation) include offense to the words of others unless there is something to be gained in the taking of the offense (as to instruct, to change the course of the medium of expression, or to express emotional feeling -- compared with merely parrotting some moral platitude or conforming to the social mores of the day, playing the victim)." from [5]. 88.80.200.144 (talk) 00:03, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

Another reference. This article was "banned" by the OTO, again part of the dispute between the Rabelaisian Thelemites who will not accept the restrictions put upon Thelema by OTO. "In a certain sense, the Law of "Do what thou wilt" is kind of a disappointment, in that it's been said and (in rare instances) done before. Crowley freely admitted that Rabelais constructed his (literary) Abbey of Thelema centuries before the Cairo Working, let alone Cefalu." from [6]. 88.80.200.144 (talk) 00:08, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

Original Research

The above presentation of supposed evidence of an ongoing dispute of ideas is seems to come from discussions on usenet and yahoogroups and a variety of personal opinions expressed online in various forums. It is not the place of Wikipedia editors to do original research and attempt to present the various opinions of all people who may have discussed or put forward an opinion. If this "dispute" has been documented in a reliable source that published by a third party, peer reviewed and fact-checked, then let this article simply make the claims as they are made in such reliable sources. Gathering the opinions of individuals and presenting those as reputable, authoritative, or even representative constitutes both original research and unreliable sourcing. --Thiebes (talk) 18:19, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

Well, gee, Joe, talk page standards are quite a bit more relaxed than article standards. These sources aren't in the article and nobody is proposing to put them there. They have simply been provided to refute Dan's incorrect inference that Sabazius was talking about this Wikipedia article in his address to NOTOCON. You and I both know that he wasn't. He doesn't say so, and the ongoing differences of opinion involving Thelema without Crowley aka Rabelaisian vs Crowleyan Thelema using those terms date back to at least 1990 on the Internet, longer than that in print. Dan has also claimed that the use of these terms was "social engineering" on the part of some banned Wikipedia user. But since the terms and the difference of views predate the introduction of the terms into this article by at least 15 years, that doesn't seem to be true. Can't have changes being made to the article on demonstrably false assumptions, can we? 212.227.82.218 (talk) 02:40, 24 January 2008 (UTC)

Well, hickory-sticks, Simone, forgive me for having trouble following this mess of a discussion page. I was referring to all the above cited materials used to support the contention that this is an ongoing dispute of ideas. Just because three people opine on usenet, and three more mention those opinions on websites, doesn't make it a relevant opinion in the real world. --Thiebes (talk) 00:27, 25 January 2008 (UTC)

Hmm? There's nothing about it in the article, and no plan to put it in the article, so I fail to see your point. My point is that the terms "Rabelaisian Thelema" and "Crowleyan Thelema" are not a previously unused distinction, and thus can not be "social engineering" as falsely claimed. If you have different labels to propose such as pre-Crowleyan Thelema or Aleisterianism, then please suggest them. 85.214.118.178 (talk) 00:42, 25 January 2008 (UTC)

Sources

Also, your claim that the source do not say what the article says is complete bunk. From Mahendranath:

"Many years later, Sir Francis Dashwood revived the Abbey and its delightful law in the grounds of his country residence not far from London. John Wilkes, a fiery radical parliamentarian, was one of his chief and most active members. This Abbey is now a local tourist attraction.

"In more recent history Saint Aleister Crowley, who did much to reform and revive the Western Occult Tradition, in reverence to the Rabelaisian masterpiece also revived the Thelemic Law; and even, for a short period, established an Abbey on an Italian island."

This source says specifically that Dashwood revived the Abbey and that Crowley revived and reformed Rabelais... The other sources cited do back up this view, that's why they were cited. 88.80.200.144 (talk) 00:13, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

Other terminology

Rabelaisian Thelema is also called pre-Crowley, pre-Crowleyan or pre-Crowlian or non-Crowley or non-Crowleyan. Here is an example of the usage of non-Crowleyan Thelema from 2000: [7]. 88.68.104.56 (talk) 00:41, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

You'll also find that many writers use the term "Rabelaisian philosophy" or "Rablalais' philosophy" rather than "Rabelaisian Thelema", for example, "Thelema is a 20th Century religion drawing from Rabelaisian philosophy ("Do what thou Wilt") and Kemetic aesthetics." from [8]. 88.80.200.138 (talk) 01:27, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

You realize that if you register you can create an article called "Rabelaisian philosophy", right? And that Ekajati's version of article Thelema uses quite a different name for the relevant section (which by the way doesn't cite anyone before Crowley clearly, verifiably saying they practice or hold this philosophy)? And that User:Dan/Thelema includes all the historical material plus an explicit statement, in the introduction, that many think the Book of the Law refers to Rabelais? Dan (talk) 21:22, 25 January 2008 (UTC)

Hmmm, well Rabelaisian philosophy would be a much broader topic. I don't see why you are so adamant that someone before Crowley had to say that they practiced Rabelaisian Thelema. Other people say that Dashwood was practicing what Rabelais described. Other people use the term "Rabelaisian Thelema" in current discourse about Thelema. It's just a descriptive term, you seem to be hung up on interpreting "Rabelaisian Thelema" as a proper noun. "Rabelaisian" is an adjective. It's in the dictionary and used in other phrases like "Rabelaisian wit" or "Rabelaisian morals". Does someone had to have said of themselves that they have Rabelaisian wit for someone else to use the phrase to describe that wit? Surely not! 84.25.14.91 (talk) 21:35, 25 January 2008 (UTC)

Again: as far as I can tell, the meaning of the word "Thelema" as a real-world philosophy starts with Crowley or the Book of the Law. Dan (talk) 21:39, 25 January 2008 (UTC)

But what does that have to do with anything? A philosophy exists from the moment it is proposed. Convenient terms for referring to that philosophy arise as the need comes up. Rabalaisian scholars do refer to Thelema as one of the philosophies proposed by Rabelais, noting that it differs significantly from the rest of Rabelais' philosophy. Rabelais' work on Thelema was based on the real world practice of the Brethren of the Free Spirit (who incidently had Aeons much as Crowley proposed, though they omitted the first, being Christian). H.G. Wells referred to "the Thelema of Rabelais" in A Modern Utopia. I really don't see why you are making such a bit deal about semantics. 218.220.248.160 (talk) 21:53, 25 January 2008 (UTC)

Here's another use of the term Thelema to refer to Rabelaisian religion, in French Studies, 1969; XXIII: 60 - 62, where M. A. Screech says, "The point where I disagree (questions of omissions apart) is over his tendency to dismiss Thelema as essentially a by-way of Rabelaisian religion." Clearly Thelema is used as a noun. The article isn't about Crowley. 80.143.34.179 (talk) 22:39, 25 January 2008 (UTC)

Another place where Thelema is used as noun referring to Rabelais' philosophy is the Thelema entry in A Brief Guide to Beliefs: Ideas, Theologies, Mysteries, and Movements by Linda Edwards. The entry starts "Thelema is a Greek word meaning 'will' or 'intention.' One of earliest mentions of this philosophy is in the writings for Francois Rabelais." The referent of "this philosophy" is clearly "Thelema". 131.173.32.97 (talk) 22:53, 25 January 2008 (UTC)

This is at least a recognizable response. It doesn't address the part about self-identification, or the fact that your chronological standard still seems to put the April 1904 meaning first. As for standard usage, one of your latest sources puts "Magick and Thelema" among "Pagan, Esoteric and Occult Thought" along with Rael and Wicca -- rather odd if it primarily talks about Rabelais -- and I can't tell what the other one means. But maybe this will sway somebody to your view of the article. Will you agree to stop reverting and focus on getting anyone else at Wikipedia to favor your version, for starters? Dan (talk) 23:42, 25 January 2008 (UTC)

As for why I'm making a fuss, User:Ekajati's sockpuppets created the current lead and shouted down discussion. More of his/her sockpuppets continued to flout the ban at least as recently as one month ago. Now, the whole point of sockpuppets is to help fake consensus, thereby subverting the workings of this site much as voter fraud and voter suppression subvert democracy. I think that when Ekajati's reign of terror definitively ends, we will see a real consensus that better fits the principles of Wikipedia. Dan (talk) 23:53, 25 January 2008 (UTC)

Well, I'm glad you think my response is recognizable. I'm afraid that I find your's rather less so. By chronology, I mean presenting the earlier formulation of the idea first. 1904 was not the date of the earliest formulation. So your suggestion that it is completely mystifies me. The same with the bit about self-identification. The article doesn't say a thing about people self-identifying as anything. It says that Dashwood used the ideas put forth by Rabelais. The sources agree that that is the case. I'm quite open to seeing how you might reword things, but I don't buy your arguments against terms that have been used by others. I've looked back over the history and apparently the section titled "Crowleyan Thelema" was once titled "Aleister Crowley's Thelema". Do you think that is any better? I just don't see "The Thelema of Rabelais" and "The Thelema of Crowley" to be any better. Do you? 85.214.118.178 (talk) 00:20, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

Please answer the question at hand. Dan (talk) 00:22, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

(You know how I would reword the article. I looked at that again, and I still think it follows NPOV. The opening line does not logically rule out the possibility that "Thelema" means a philosophy from Rabelais. It just says nobody before April 1904 verifiably used it as the name of their philosophy.) Dan (talk) 00:30, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

If you mean, am I going to roll over and let you rearrange the chronology, no, I won't. Clearly, you don't have consensus, as there aren't enough active editors here to form one. I suggested that if you were sincere, you'd work on getting more eyes here, but I've had to do it myself. While we wait for responses to the article RfC, as I said, I'd like to see what other improvements you could make without rearranging the chronology. You seem to be using the user conduct RfC to intimidate me, but with no outside views, it's meaningless. 213.239.207.90 (talk) 00:32, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

You haven't looked at it recently? Dan (talk) 00:38, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

Oh, and I've considered going to the most relevant project. What do you see at the top of that page? Dan (talk) 00:44, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

Looked at what recently? Your sandbox? The RfC? If the later, an "outside view" is where someone not involved really looks at the matter and gives an analysis. This hasn't happened. So the Thelema project is inactive. Why doesn't this surprise me? Nobody edits Thelemapedia anymore, either. 71.112.133.30 (talk) 00:54, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

Dan, I don't understand what you mean by this "question at hand" rubbish. You use of links to earlier discussion doesn't mean anything to me either. I don't get what you are saying or trying to say. I've asked you some very direct questions about specific language in the article, but you ignore those questions. Please answer them, and if you have statements or questions to make, please make or ask them here and now in text, not with links which simply confuse me as to what you mean. Thanks. 88.80.200.138 (talk) 03:59, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

P.S. In other words, you aren't making any sense to me. 88.80.200.138 (talk) 04:01, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

You have broken the rules of Wikipedia, certainly Wikipedia: Three Revert Rule and most likely others. Will you agree to stop doing that and focus on seeking consensus? Dan (talk) 18:15, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

Please try to stay focused on the content of the article, which I am trying to discuss with you. I believe it is also against the rules to use a user conduct RfC at the first apparent infraction of the rules (which has not been repeated) in order to attempt to intimidate another editor. I am not the only IP editor editing the article, though as far as I can tell, I am the only one discussing on the talk page. I will not accept making discussing the content dependent on my making some agreement with you. I beleive that as soon as I do so, you will simply overwrite the article with your own and try to force me into breaking the rules again by reverting multiple times like you have done in the past. You may not have broken this 3RR rule, but you came right up against it yourself without engaging in discussion. So, let's see the discussion. Let's here your answers to questions about content I asked. That's how I'll be able to tell that you are sincerely interested in compromise, which you have not yet convince me that you are... 88.80.200.138 (talk) 19:05, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

Okay, you can see the discussion whose existence you deny at #Definition: comments? And I cannot force you to break 3RR. I can't even make sure your version of the article doesn't return unless nobody else at Wikipedia agrees with you and several users agree with me, which admittedly seems true. Dan (talk) 19:23, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

Presumably you believe your RfC and other comments will bring in someone else who dislikes User:Dan/Thelema. Will you therefore agree to follow the rules of Wikipedia? Dan (talk) 19:48, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

Yes, I can see it. And I believe that I have repeatedly and in a detailed manner refuted it as a straw man argument. I don't believe that it is necessary that some before Crowley practiced Rabelaisian Thelema to use the term. It is simply necessary to show that the term is in use to refer to the expression of Thelema in Rabelais. I believe that I have shown that the term is actually used in that way. Repeatedly pointing to the same straw man argument does not progress the discussion whatsoever! 82.82.173.169 (talk) 19:50, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

Please stop reverting edits

Whoever is making repeated reverts, using multiple IPs, knock it off. If you disagree with a change, discuss it here and work toward consensus. Reverting edits which have been discussed in advance is not the way it is done. A single person does not gain dominance over Wikipedia articles by being the most intent and prolific reverter. It is not a race. Explain your point of view and cultivate consensus. Thiebes (talk) 08:03, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

Dan is making the article more POV and claiming that the sources provided do not support the article text. The latter is a bald-faced lie, as has been demonstrated by adding the actual quotes to the notes. The outline of the article is fully supported by multiple sources which agree! If Dan wishes to add an additional POV to the article, he should simply do so. Restructuring the whole article to present the OTO party line is not acceptable. Noting the the OTO rejects (or rather the King of OTO rejects) a clearly historical development of Thelema is quite sufficient. It has been noted, but the OTO position could certainly be expanded upon using simple insertion of additional text. Major restructuring requires much more detailed discussion and agreement in advance than has occurred. 77.181.142.198 (talk) 12:56, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

I don't know what you mean about an "OTO party line" -- is that what you call "reality"? Anyway it is clear that the POV being pushed here is this concept of any particularly noteworthy historical development of Thelema before Crowley. Many questionable sources have been used to push this POV. For example, the parenthetical "some say hijacked" comment is one guy, there's no explanation for why "hijacked" is an appropriate term...it's just a drive-by aspersion. If I wrote an article about Dashwood "hijacking" the concept from Rabelais and posted it online, then put the same parenthetical comment after the bit about Dashwood, would that fly? The "Diversity" section, in its over-egalitarianism also gives the impression that there are serious contenders with "Crowleyan" Thelema while not making clear that it's a very small minority (literally a vocal handful of people) who hold such ideas. If we are going to include every possible conception of Thelema then we should be indicating their actual relevance in the world (or lack thereof), not making them all seem of equal importance. --Thiebes (talk) 17:55, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

Do you have studies you can cite which give clear indications of proportions or "relevance"? It's funny that you say "a very small minority (literally a vocal handful of people)". From the POV of the major religions, that all the whole of Thelema is. Perhaps the article should simply be deleted as not relevant. Sure, Crowley is notable, but notability is not inherited, as they say on Wikipedia... 88.80.200.144 (talk) 02:45, 24 January 2008 (UTC)

First of all I'm not the one who is making implications in the article about the relevance of these supposed alternative types of Thelema. The burden of proof about the existence and relevance of these supposed Thelemas is yours, since you are the one making implications about these questions in the article. And by handful I mean, less than five, if any at all. --Thiebes (talk) 00:18, 25 January 2008 (UTC)

What was the question again? I'm simply arguing for keeping the structure of the article and the chronological order of the lead. What were you talking about again? 85.214.118.178 (talk) 00:38, 25 January 2008 (UTC)

Even older use of the term "Rabelaisian Thelema"

From Tim Maroney on USENET, 1990: [9]

From Bill Heidrick on USENET, 1995: [10]

From the latter: "Rabelaisian Thelema had entered the European literary milieu by the end of the 16th century. It is ubiquitous in many places, as untraceable in some as an molecule of water once imbibed and eliminated by Attila the Hun and now in a modern popsicle."

Clearly the term and the dialectic around it was not created by any Wikipedia editor. 212.224.71.3 (talk) 14:21, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

As User:Dan/Thelema reflects, Tim Maroney in another cited link says he uses part of Crowley's system. The Ekataji version asserts that he took no influence from Crowley (choosing to borrow instead from Rabelais), flatly contradicting the source. Dan (talk) 18:14, 23 January 2008 (UTC)

Yup, it's true that Rabelaisian Thelemites feel free to choose material and practices from Crowley as well as other sources. I'm sure you can find a way to integrate that into that section without completely rewriting the lead, which is well cited. 212.227.82.218 (talk) 02:42, 24 January 2008 (UTC)

None of those sources seem to address my criticisms. Whereas this does address the sources. I think it describes all cited points of view fairly. Dan (talk) 17:58, 24 January 2008 (UTC)

The criticism you point to seems moot. Nobody is being defined as a "Thelemite", the topic of discussion is the history of the development of Thelema. As for your POV edit putting Crowley first and essentially making him the primary subject of the article, it's POV. Let's keep it chronological, thanks. Using the historical sequence keeps the article honest. 80.141.89.211 (talk) 18:10, 24 January 2008 (UTC)

Actually, the article asserts that people both described and practiced Thelema before Crowley. But this seems beside the point. If other (non-sockpuppet) users agree with you, they can say so at any time. And they can easily prevent me from putting my compromise into effect. Will you then agree to stop reverting and focus on seeking consensus? (If you deny breaking the 3 Revert Rule, you should say so.) Dan (talk) 18:22, 24 January 2008 (UTC)

What the article asserts is fully supported by multiple source, which have been quoted since you have claimed otherwise. The sources include the well-known writer Robert Anton Wilson, well-known and respected O.T.O. member Bill Heidrick, and two articles published in Ashe journal. They all agree with Mahendranath on the essential points of who originated what, the order in which these things happen, and who borrowed from whom.

So why don't you leave the lead alone. Wikipedia editing guidelines say that you should make your least controversial edits first and most controversial last. If you ignore this and make them all at once or in the opposite order, it's your own fault that you get fully reverted. 212.227.82.218 (talk) 18:37, 24 January 2008 (UTC)

No denial then. I'll ask again; will you agree to stop reverting and try to get one or two other users to agree with you? (If so, please read User:Dan/Thelema closely and then spell out how it contradicts the sources you name.) Dan (talk) 18:48, 24 January 2008 (UTC)

I do not agree not to revert. In case you haven't noticed, it is mostly the restructuring of the article I object to. Despite delusions to the contrary by Aleisterians, Crowleyan or Crowleyites (whatever you prefer to call them), Rabelais is still more notable and known to more people than Al. He also was the originator of the whole concept of Thelema. Al's usage is derivative. All these points argue that the lead should present the development in chronological order. If you were sincere in your wish to resolve this, you would use the dispute resolution process, i.e. WP:THIRD and an article RfC to get outside, unbiased opinions. Are you afraid that they will agree with me? 129.15.80.187 (talk) 18:54, 24 January 2008 (UTC)

Request for comment

Dan (talk · contribs) wishes to rewrite the lead in non-chronological order. He infers a need from this from the fact that two single-purpose accounts have questioned one of the sources. In response, other supporting sources were found which agree with the history presented in the questioned source. None of the users involved has even acknowledged or discussed the additional sources presented, much less questioned them, yet Dan still proposes a non-chronological lead which makes Aleister Crowley out as the primary originator of something demonstrably originated by Rabelais.

The historical development of Thelema presented in the current lead is fully supported by multiple sources. It's widely known that Crowley derived his version of Thelema from pre-existing historical sources. Multiple independent sources acknowledge this. This attempt to make Crowley's made-up story that he "channelled" rather than simply wrote the Book of the Law primary by people who are believers in his "religion" is clearly POV based on conflict of interest. There are the supporting quotes:

• "One of the first serious attempts to realise Rabelais' Thelemic Utopia was made in England in 1751 by Sir Francis Dashwood during the decade before his appointment as Chancellor of the Exchequer." Frater Choronzon, THE HELLFIRE CLUB AND OTHER SWINGERS

• "Francis Dashwood, who revived the Rablelais 'Abbey of Thelema'..." Adams, Ron. Ecumenical Thelema in Ashé Journal, Vol. 3, No. 4, Spring Equinox 2004, pp. 71-78

• "Many years later, Sir Francis Dashwood revived the Abbey and its delightful law in the grounds of his country residence not far from London.", "In more recent history Saint Aleister Crowley, who did much to reform and revive the Western Occult Tradition, in reverence to the Rabelaisian masterpiece also revived the Thelemic Law; and even, for a short period, established an Abbey on an Italian island.", "It may be new to those who read this manuscript, but the identical rule or law has been held in the highest respect in India and neighboring countries for thousands of years. It has been the amoral philosophy of the Nathas, Tantriks, and Siddha saints and sadhus. It made possible the Parivrajaka or homeless wanderer saints, and eventually led to the highest grade of Indian spiritual attainment known as Avadhoota or emancipated one. Thus Rabelais, Dashwood, and Crowley must share the honor of perpetuating what has been such a high ideal in most of Asia." Mahendranath (1990).

• "Therefore, we can say, by this [Rabelais'] definition, a Thelemite is a person who is free, well-born, well-bred and capable of interacting in honest company. A Thelemite has an inherent sense of honour and a sense of proportion and discretion. ... Much of Crowley's work is an interpretation and extension of this simple summary." Alamantra, Frater. Looking Into the Word: Some Observations in Ashé Journal, Vol. 3, No. 4, Spring Equinox 2004, pp. 39-59

• "Crowley is misunderstood if he is seen primarily as the teacher of a new path to liberation, his sexual yoga and the abbey as a means of imparting this, with the theory behind it boiled down to the crude schematism of paths to enlightenment. He was part of a greater, far more intelligible tradition. Thelema itself is a rationally intelligible ideal that goes back to Rabelais, via Sir Francis Dashwood. Crowley gave this distinguished western tradition a new degree of development. The doctrine serves the man, not the man the doctrine. Not every practitioner of sex magic is a true disciple of Aleister Crowley." Moore, John S. Aleister Crowley as Guru in Chaos International, Issue No. 17.

• "It's widely known that Rabelais said "Do what thou wilt", used Thelema and employed an Abbey of Thelema in his Gargantua and Pantagruel four centuries before Liber AL. The old Hell Fire Clubs continued that tradition through variation into the late 18th century. For some, this becomes a question of Crowley faking it. For others, it is more a matter of observing a gradual development of Thelema through the half millennium preceding the Aeon of Horus." Heidrick, Bill in Thelema Lodge Calendar for January 1995 e.v. (note that Bill Heidrick is a respected Thelemite and member of Ordo Templi Orientis

• "The origin of 'Do what though wilt' is Rabelais' Abbey of Thelema in Gargantua and Pantagruel. The Hell Fire Club was deliberately copying Rabelais. Crowley, of course, had read Rabelais and undoubtedly knew about the Hell Fire Club (which is more correctly called the Abbey of Saint Francis, by the way), but he claimed to have received the Law of Thelema ... from a Higher Intelligence which contacted him in Cairo in 1904." Wilson, Robert Anton. The Illuminati Papers. Ronin Publishing, 1997. ISBN 1579510027

212.227.82.218 (talk) 17:07, 25 January 2008 (UTC)

Again I don't know if I understand. I don't see this on the linked RfC list. But anyway, as I hinted at Wikipedia:Requests for comment/81.9.61.227, I think that User:Dan/Thelema does include and address these sources. New visitors may wish to glance at #Definition. Dan (talk) 21:13, 25 January 2008 (UTC)

A bot is supposed to do it. Clearly it hasn't picked it up yet.

It's clear that you don't understand. As I've stated multiple times, I don't object to your making improvements. I object to changing the order of the lead away from a chronological development. You have yet to acknowledge that that is my specific objection or propose an improved version of the lead that maintains chronological order. 89.3.103.10 (talk) 21:24, 25 January 2008 (UTC)

I don't actually know what policy you mean -- I don't see it even in this style guideline -- but let's talk chronology anyway. See #Definition and #Definition: comments?. Dan (talk) 21:31, 25 January 2008 (UTC)

Now I'm lost. I don't believe I mentioned any policy. 84.25.14.91 (talk) 21:38, 25 January 2008 (UTC)

Last neutral outside view

I've been poking around the talk page archives, and found that the last outside opinion of the article was very positive and that the text of the article has hardly changed at all since then [11], except for the addition of more references and quotations within those references. That opinion read:

Hi. I like this article and believe it is well written and sourced. I did find some small argumentation which I removed. If there is any other such then it is in need of removal or alteration. Of course alteration is preferred. Judging by the standard of this article any unsourced argumentation will not stand very long. If there are any sources for the arguments that I removed please reinstate with citations. AlanBarnet 06:04, 24 November 2006 (UTC)

This seriously brings into question the burning need to "improve" it. 71.112.133.30 (talk) 00:48, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

Bizarrely, the "outside" user in question was also blocked as a sockpuppet and still seems blocked. S/he has not edited with that username since. Dan (talk) 00:53, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

That is weird. I didn't look at the talk page. But apparently not a sockpuppet of the editor you keep going on about. I checked the contributions, and the editor you mentioned doesn't appear to have edited the article at all, not a single edit, but I could have missed one... 69.121.76.210 (talk) 01:19, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

Oh, and by a startling coincidence, 71.112.133.30 seems like another address for anonymous user. Dan (talk) 00:59, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

Well, latest IP address, s/he did make minor edits to the article using that name. I haven't checked whether or not we can reasonably consider Alan another version of User:Ekajati/999/Hanuman_Das/TunnelsofSet, but it seems plausible on the face. Clearly neither has any respect for the rules of Wikipedia (rules like WP:3RR). Dan (talk) 01:27, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

But who knows? Perhaps the Ekataji version of the article has some mysterious appeal to people who flout the rules of Wikipedia, an appeal that has somehow failed to enlist anyone else here. Dan (talk) 01:30, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

Anyone else here? Seems that should be a question. As far as I can tell, there's only you and Choronzon. 217.162.87.31 (talk) 01:49, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

Wikipedia:Requests_for_comment/81.9.61.227#Users_certifying_the_basis_for_this_dispute (and following section). I started asking the question here at #Definition, three months ago. Dan (talk) 01:55, 26 January 2008 (UTC) edit: make that four. Dan (talk) 01:57, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

And this is supposed to mean what, exactly? 88.80.200.138 (talk) 04:03, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

First sentence and paragraph should focus on what and summarize who

I believe that the first sentence, perhaps the first few sentences, should focus on the "what is" of Thelema. We must reflect current discourse which allows of the possibility of people being thelemites w/o ever having heard of Crowley or even Rabelais. That is, the practice the maxim "Do what thou wilt."

The first sentence should contain "Do what thou wilt", this is more essential to Thelema than who dun it. The rest of the paragraph should explain why the word Thelema is related to the rule or law.

I propose the following first paragraph:

Thelema is a philosophy of life based on the rule "Do what thou wilt." The ideal of "Do what thou wilt" and its association with the word Thelema goes back to François Rabelais and Sir Francis Dashwood, but was more fully developed by Aleister Crowley, who founded a religion named Thelema based on this ideal. The word itself is the English transliteration of the Koine Greek noun θέλημα: "will", from the verb θέλω: to will, wish, purpose. Early Christian writings use the word to refer to the will of God, the human will, and even the will of God's opponent, the Devil.

What do others think of this proposal? 70.112.55.203 (talk) 19:42, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

allows of the possibility of people being thelemites w/o ever having heard of Crowley or even Rabelais -- see #Definition. I've heard talk of some old dictionary using the word to mean libertine. I haven't heard of any dictionary makers using the word for themselves, or indeed of anyone on Earth verifiably calling themselves a Thelemite, verifiably saying they believe/practice Thelema, or even verifiably saying they follow a philosophy drawn from Rabelais' account of the Abbey of Theleme before April 1904. Dan (talk) 19:52, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

Please discuss my paragraph, which does not say that there were. My reason for keeping the definition open is a valid one. Since you have stated elsewhere on Wikipedia that Thelema (I presume Crowlean Thelema) is your religion, it seems you may have a conflict of interest or at least a bias. That should not influence the neutrality of the article. 24.127.84.183 (talk) 19:58, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

Hmm, are you unaware that Rabelais used the term Thelemite in his work? and that that word was used after him and before Crowley? 24.127.84.183 (talk) 20:00, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

"There were" what? People who verifiably self-identified? Cite them. I'll change "system" in the first line of User:Dan/Thelema to "school of thought", which I think makes it more clear that Thelema could mean a philosophy drawn from Rabelais (by Crowley and people after him). Will you then agree to follow the rules of Wikipedia? Dan (talk) 20:07, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

That was a typo. The paragraph does not say that there were. You cannot fault a paragraph for saying something that it does not. You are not working in any spirit of cooperation or compromise. Please change your attitude and dump the straw man. Other people has described Dashwood's implementation of Rabeliais' ideal. He wrote "Do what thou wilt" in is Abbey. That is Thelema, whether he called himself a Thelemite or not. Don't be such a WP:DICK]. 212.227.82.218 (talk) 20:13, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

Anonymous user just added the word "not" without changing the timestamp. I think that by saying the ideal (and association with the name) goes back to Dashwood, the paragraph makes claims about what Dashwood believed. And a cited source in the article says we don't know what he believed or what went on in the Hellfire Club's inner sanctum. Dan (talk) 20:16, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

Perhaps this will help explain the issue. The source I just mentioned in my last comment explicitly denies Step 2. Dan (talk) 20:18, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

Oh, and on that note, the first line of my revision says that Crowley "openly revealed" Thelema (edit: or put it together. I slipped too. See end for new timestamp). This includes both the Aiwass view of Crowley and the Dashwood view of Ekajati. Dan (talk) 20:20, 26 January 2008 (UTC) edited by Dan (talk) 00:43, 27 January 2008 (UTC)

So, now that I've explained why I believe User:Dan/Thelema follows NPOV, thereby removing any reason you might have to restore a banned user's edits, will you agree to follow the 3RR? Dan (talk) 20:23, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

Can I take that as a no? Dan (talk) 17:32, 28 January 2008 (UTC)

Working with false premises

It seems some people are working under the false premise that only Crowley gets to define Thelema. That is simply not NPOV. Other people descriptions and definitions have to be taken into account, and the article can not be written in such a way that it implies that only the views of Crowley and his followers are the correct views. 212.227.82.218 (talk) 20:09, 26 January 2008 (UTC)

Multiple Sources in dispute

Please see Wikipedia:RS and demonstrate the reliability of the following sources:

• 4. Vere Chappell appears self-published and not peer-reviewed. Demonstrate reliability by e.g. showing that this author has been cited in academic publications as an expert on Thelema.

Removed.

• 5. Frater Choronzon appears self-published and not peer-reviewed. Demonstrate reliability by e.g. showing that this author has been cited in academic publications as an expert on Thelema.

Removed.

• 6. Ron Adams in Ashé Journal -- publication claims to be peer-reviewed but does not appear to adhere to scholarly standards. Demonstrate reliability by e.g. showing that this journal and/or author has been cited in academic publications.

In the realm of religious belief, there are many peer-reviewed publications edited by the followers of that religion or related traditions. I'd argue that these are perfectly acceptable sources for what writers within the tradition think and believe about their tradition. Many publications involving belief do not adhere to scholarly standards, and the beliefs themselves may not be rational or true. On Wikipedia, it is citability, not truth, which is required by WP:V, which is the actual policy (WP:RS is only a guideline). Many articles dealing with belief systems cite published writers within the belief system. Since this is not self-published, and the journal is considered respectable within its field based on the well-known writers who have submitted material and been published in it, I think you are going too far here.

In addition, the references from this journal are not being used as primary references, but simply as additional references for points which already have superior references. 88.80.200.138 (talk) 01:14, 29 January 2008 (UTC) 88.80.200.138 (talk) 01:14, 29 January 2008 (UTC)

• 7. IAO131 appears self-published and not peer-reviewed. Demonstrate reliability by e.g. showing that this author has been cited in academic publications as an expert on Thelema.

This appears to have been published in the Journal of Thelemic Studies. I'm not familiar with the publication, but point 6 above would appear to apply here as well. It only appears to be used as a secondary source for point already established by more reliable sources. 63.246.166.32 (talk) 01:26, 29 January 2008 (UTC)

• 8. Mahendranath does not appear to adhere to scholarly standards or to be widely recognized as an expert in the field. Demonstrate reliability by e.g. showing that this author has been cited in academic publications as an expert on Thelema.

Mahendranath was published in a number of Thelemic peer-reviewed sources in the mid to late '70s. For example, in a number of volumes of Sothis magazine, the widely respected "ground-breaking British occult journal" associated with Kenneth Grant's O.T.O. Specifically, The Londinium Temple Strain was published in Sothis, Vol. II, No. II (dated AN LXXIII) as the lead article. I believe his writings appeared in other issues, but can't find an index. He's been cited in articles in such places as O.T.O Scarlet Woman Lodge publication The Scarlet Letter, Volume II, Number 4 | May 1995 (in Lokanath's translation of The Yoni Tantra) and published posthumously in Ashé Journal and in Namarupa (Spring 2003), a journal about Hinduism similar to the Buddhist journal Tricycle. His opinions have been and still are respected by followers of a number of traditions, including Thelema. He was the source for many of the "left-hand path" tantra writings of Grant, is highly respected in Nema's Horus/Maat Lodge and has been published in the journal of that Lodge, Silver Star. He is not an unreliable source. In any case, his work is simply used as a secondary source for point already established by more definitively reliable sources. His summary is one of the better written ones. 67.85.71.214 (talk) 01:45, 29 January 2008 (UTC)

• 9. Frater Alamantra in Ashé Journal -- publication claims to be peer-reviewed but does not appear to adhere to scholarly standards. Demonstrate reliability by e.g. showing that this journal and/or author has been cited in academic publications.

See point 6 above. 63.246.166.32 (talk) 01:21, 29 January 2008 (UTC)

• 10. John S. Moore in Chaos International -- publication does not appear to be peer-reviewed or to adhere to scholarly standards. Demonstrate reliability by e.g. showing that this publication and/or author has been cited in academic publications.

See point 6 above. 63.246.166.32 (talk) 01:21, 29 January 2008 (UTC)

• 11. Bill Heidrick in Thelema Lodge Calendar -- publication does not appear to be peer-reviewed or to adhere to scholarly standards. Demonstrate reliability by e.g. showing that this publication and/or author has been cited in academic publications.

Removed, but I would argue that point 6 would apply to a publication of an O.T.O. Lodge if anyone wants to return it. 63.246.166.32 (talk) 01:21, 29 January 2008 (UTC)

• 13. John Jeffrey does not appear to be a Sanskrit scholar. Please provide full quotation demonstrating that source backs claim made in article.

Easily done. 63.246.166.32 (talk) 01:21, 29 January 2008 (UTC)

• 14. Singh, Kapur; Singh, Piar; Kaur, Madanjit do not appear to be experts on Thelema, and it is therefore doubtful they have made a statement related to Thelema. Please provide full quotation demonstrating that source backs claim made in article.

Easily done. 63.246.166.32 (talk) 01:21, 29 January 2008 (UTC)

• 15. Barbara G. Walker is a widely disputed source in academia. Reliability may be impossible to demonstrate. Recommend removal of this source and any claims which rely upon her work.

Easily done as there are many references for this grammatical fact. 63.246.166.32 (talk) 01:21, 29 January 2008 (UTC)

• 47, 48. Tim Maroney does not appear to adhere to scholarly standards or to be widely recognized as an expert in the field. Demonstrate reliability by e.g. showing that this author has been cited in academic publications as an expert on Thelema. While the citation is only being used to establish an example of the diversity of Thelemic thought, any such examples where the author is not widely recognized as an expert should be reported by reliable sources.

• 49. Ash Bowie does not appear to adhere to scholarly standards or to be widely recognized as an expert in the field. Demonstrate reliability by e.g. showing that this author has been cited in academic publications as an expert on Thelema. While the citation is only being used to establish an example of the diversity of Thelemic thought, any such examples where the author is not widely recognized as an expert should be reported by reliable sources.

• 52, 53, 54. Please provide full citation and demonstrate reliability.

• 56. Jason Miller in Silver Star: A Journal of New Magick -- publication does not appear to be peer-reviewed or to adhere to scholarly standards. Demonstrate reliability by e.g. showing that this publication and/or author has been cited in academic publications. While the citation is only being used to establish an example of the diversity of Thelemic thought, any such examples where the author is not widely recognized as an expert should be reported by reliable sources.

See point 6 above.

• 57. Please provide full citation and demonstrate reliability.

Hey, Thiebes. You're being an ass. One of the few things you are good at. 67.67.222.125 (talk) 23:02, 28 January 2008 (UTC)

Regardless of personal insults you might have to offer me, it appears that more reliable sources are being added and that is excellent. Please also remove unreliable sources or in the case of incomplete citations, please complete them. --Thiebes (talk) 23:26, 28 January 2008 (UTC)

Note that incomplete citations may refer to references listed in the references section. That is considered an acceptable form of citation and is mostly likely left over from older preferred forms of citation. They keep changing the rules here as well as the articles. 217.114.211.20 (talk) 00:04, 29 January 2008 (UTC)