Wikipedia:Peer review/The Daily Show/archive2
This article was up for Featured a few months ago. I think I've responded to most of the criticism that brought it down in editing it. Please take a look and see what more it needs. Thanks guys!--Mark 2000 07:49, 12 April 2006 (UTC) Some comments:
- The TOCleft squeezes the text between the TOC and infobox which makes it uncomfortable to read.
- The TOC is lengthy, better organization could reduce the number of sections.
- The section "Notable guests" is not necessary, the link can go in the "See Also" section.
- The "Awards" does not need sub-headings for each year, and sections that comprise solely of lists are frowned upon.
- The sub-headings in "Editions for various markets" are also not necessary.
- "Other information" is trivia, integrate those points into the text.
- Some of the links in the "See Also" appear in the body so those should be removed from that section.
- Try: [1] [2] --maclean25 23:23, 13 April 2006 (UTC)
- Sorry to not respond. My wife gave birth on thursday. These are great crits and ill try to fix them!--Mark 2000 20:51, 16 April 2006 (UTC)