User talk:4u1e

Peer review for Jack Warner

Hi 4u1e, I saw your name on the list of volunteers for peer review. I just nominated a piece on movie mogul Jack Warner. The article includes a good deal of information, and it's reasonably engaging, but I know it can be improved. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated! Cheers, -- twelsht (talk) 15:37, 22 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the copy editing! If you feel there are any general weakenesses in the article, please don't hesitate to let me know. Cheers, -- twelsht (talk) 18:08, 22 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks 4ule, I just returned to my computer, and I haven't had a chance to give your comments the close reading they deserve. At a glance, they struck me as reasonable and constructive. I'll respond in detail ASAP. Thanks, again, for your time and consideration! Cheers, -- twelsht (talk) 04:05, 26 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Not at all! You're comments were just what was needed. By the way, another reviewer just recommended that I tone down references to Warner's personal life in the lead and slightly reorganize the sections on his professional life. If you have time, I'd appreciate any comments on these relatively minor changes. Either way, thanks, once again, for your thoughtful and thorough critique. Cheers, -- twelsht (talk) 20:18, 1 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Alan Kulwicki

I wrote: "Kulwicki was buried in his family plot at Saint Adalbert Cemetery in Milwaukee, consistent with other Polish Americans in the cemetery." Would you help me with wording this sentence? What I was trying to accomplish is saying where he was buried, and to add that he is buried in a family plot. These family plots were done by people with Polish ancestry. Twelsht has commented that more Polish American things probably should be added to the article, and this is a great place to add a comment to reinforce that thought.

I went to the cemetery to take the picture of his gravestone, and I found out that his family's stone has listed around 10 family members including his mother and brother. This portion of the cemetery is a Polish American portion, and has several family plots like his families. Any thoughts about how to reword this so its less confusing? Royalbroil 00:41, 24 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Peer review request - Lancia LC2

I was wondering if it might be possible for you to give a quick peer review of my Lancia LC2 article as I'm considering nominating it for GA. Mostly just looking for another pair of eyes to see anything I may have stupidly missed or anything that you think might make for a better read. I know it isn't the usual F1 stuff, but not all that different. Thanks in advance. The359 (talk) 23:19, 24 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

hey!

Well, I have only delivered the Newsletter to a few as a trial run, and I didn't have time to get a bot to do it. Well, I have two that are interested in helping in this project. These are Chubbinator and Diniz. Thank you for subscribing, could you sign your name on the sign list here -> Wikipedia:WikiProject Formula One/Newsletter

Thanks for your interest! LB22 (talk to me!)Email me! 18:25, 27 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

With appreciation

		The WikiProject Film Award
		I, twelsht (talk) 08:22, 28 February 2008 (UTC), hereby award 4u1e the WikiProject Film Award for their valued contributions to WikiProject Film. Thank you for your assistance on Jack Warner.[reply] Awarded 08:22, 28 February 2008 (UTC)

Issue 2

Welcome to Issue 2!

The WikiProject Formula One Newsletter Year I - Issue 2 - March 2008
"The running gag of the Grand Prix series is that whereas Murray, safe in the commentary box, sounds like a blindfolded man riding a unicycle on the rim of the pit of doom, the men actually facing the danger are all so taciturn that you might as well try interviewing the cars themselves." - Clive James
The 2008 Formula One season is almost underway in the relaxed atmosphere of Melbourne. There we will see what rivalries are in store, with everyone hoping that the championship will be just as close as last year. The controversies of 2007 are long gone, ready to be replaced by the sweet smell of good old sportsmanship. Chubbennaitor (talk)
News We are delighted to have a new user, NapHit, who joined on February 17 2008. Our current Improvement Drive is Juan Manuel Fangio. Wanted Articles include Roland Bruynseraede and Erich Zakowski. The Max Mosley article is currently being peer reviewed. Please leave some comments! Our newsletters are now collapsible.	Editor's Comment I am incredibly pleased that we have some backers of our new letter. So it is decided that we will go on and publish one for you every month. Don't forget to give us your ideas. I just thought that I should point out that this is our official first edition, as the last one was a pilot. However, we will keep with Issue II onwards! I would also like to thank Diniz and Chubbennaitor for helping me live out my newsletter idea. Happy Reading! - LB22 (talk to me!)Email me! 18:23, 29 February 2008 (UTC)[reply] We need a few users to help me with this newsletter. If you are interested, please leave me a message on my talk page or sign up on the "Contributors" list of the central newsletter page. Current contributors - LB22 (talk · contribs) Diniz (talk · contribs) Chubbennaitor (talk · contribs) Other areas where you can help - Keep up some of the great facts in the "Did You Know" section of the Formula One portal! Remember, yours may be put in next Wednesday! Help out with the articles in Category:Formula One stubs. Selected Image -
Recent Formula One news All of the F1 teams apart from Super Aguri have been taking part in the final full test of the off-season at the Circuit de Catalunya. Retired former champion Michael Schumacher was on hand to test the Ferrari F2008. [1] Super Aguri's future is hanging in the balance as talks continue with parent team Honda. [2] Ferrari's Italian court case against McLaren continues, with several of the British team's personnel being questioned. [3]

Copyright material - Arth.R2

Hello, 4u1e

Just to get things right this time, can I rewrite GrandPrix.com material in order to use it? Do you know any other good Internet references? I am really interested in improving the race reviews.

Thank you.

Arth.R2 (talk) 14:30, 3 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]