Talk:Lucilia illustris
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This article is very good but your subheadings could use some improvement. Normally subheadings show up in the table of contents so its easier to navigate the page. I can see from the edit page that you used semi-colons but you should surround the subheading word with 3 equal signs on each side.--Angelina5288 (talk) 03:15, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
One thing I'm curious about is the current research section you have at the bottom of the page. Is there any way you can go into more depth in that? Just so it's longer than a couple sentences. I think it would be interesting to learn a little more about that. Laylou11 (talk) 16:30, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
- Thank you for your input. This article was a group effort, so I have forwarded your comment on to the member who was responsible for that area. We will try to get some more added to that section as soon as possible.--Annemarye (talk) 01:12, 26 March 2008 (UTC)
Nice job on the article. You may want to consider expanding the introduction so that it gives a general introduction to all aspects of the article. Motoliyat (talk) 05:32, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
You should adjust the subheading under medical importance to say only vector. When associated with medicine, vector means a transmitter or disease, so your subheading is redundant. Colstewart71639 (talk) 22:54, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
Good work
This article is very nicely done. Great work! – ClockworkSoul 02:18, 26 March 2008 (UTC)
Wikispecies
Hey guys! I just wanted to let you all know about the Wikispecies project [[1]]. Your article fits in with their project, so look into it. ABrundage, Texas A&M University (talk) 20:41, 31 March 2008 (UTC)